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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2085 on: June 01, 2013, 06:14:35 PM »
Two more chapters to go, and I will try to post them today.

CHAPTER TWENTY-TWO:
No Holding Back

Cloak knew just what Estelore was alluding to. The time for restraint had passed. They were what the Techadons refer to as Level 10 creatures, their highest ranking (with Level 1 being reserved for wimpy, placid creatures like flobberworms -- ordinary humans were like Level 3). They had the power and capacitate the entire planet, even the entire realm.

"You little pests!" Cataclysm snarled, then his voice turned into a hoarse hiss, "I've had enough of you."

He fired a blast of energy at each. His overconfidence in his abilities were truly staggering. It was a wonder how he managed to survive for so long.

The two easily batted the energy balls aside. He really wasn't as he thought himself to be in his delusions of greatness. Such egos are soon punctured.

"Imposdible! What kind of trick is this?!" he said, rather Vegeta-like, refusing to believe or accept that his initial impression of the two.

"Hear us now, Cataclysm." Estelore said, addressing him formally, displaying her true power as much as she could encapsulated in her avatar. "Repent."

Cloak followed this with, "Repent and make reparations for all the damages your ambitions and machinations have caused. Redeem yourself."

"What is this?" he snarled disbelievingly. "Foolish Dweller! Stupid Decendant of Guardian! You haven't the power to stop me! I don't particularly care for your parlor tricks, clever though they may be."

"Cataclysm," Cloak said, keeping the plea from his voice, eyes golden-scarlet suns. "Don't do this. Don't force our hands. Don't challenge us."

Cloak paused to determine Cataclysm's body language under his beggar-like cloak.

"It won't end well." Cloak finished.

Cloak's subtle plea was not for Cataclysm but for himself. He did not want to kill. It was not in his nature, though his feline form would seem to imply otherwise.

"I don't take orders from you," Cataclysm snarled back obstinately.

Cloak felt Estelore give his shoulder a reassuring squeeze, but nothing could really reassure him.

If he could take solice in one thing, it was that it was quick and easy. Cloak had stabbed Cataclysm much the same way Malice to Abomination.

"And . . . yet . . . Malice still lives . . ." Cataclysm said with his last breath. Then only his cloak was left behind. Cloaked and and walked away.

"Cloak . . ."

"I don't want to talk about it, Esty. Not now. Not ever." Cloak said, voice quavering with regret on the last word.


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2086 on: June 01, 2013, 06:28:18 PM »
I like long books that deserve to be long.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2087 on: June 01, 2013, 07:31:58 PM »
Um . . . thanks, Underseen? I think?

Now the last chapter before Book . . . uh . . . uh, Book XL, which, ironically I suppose, won't be "extra large". Just the usual twenty chapters, unless I split on of them in two, which can and does happen -- just not very often.

CHAPTER TWENTY-THREE:
Something Better?

Cloak had holed himself up in his thread for days on end after this. Estelore made sure the other RAFians knew that he needed some time to himself, some time alone, to deal with this.

Eventually, the call of adventure in the deep recesses of space called to the sentient star. So, she made another sojourn into the inky black void.

Meanwhile, deep in thought inside his thread -- the name of the quarters given to RAFians who lived on-forum, dubbed such by the little seal RAFian -- and Cloak's mind kept coming back to one memory . . .

***

It was about five years ago, Dweller-Earth time, and Cloak was feeling thoroughly isolated. An involuntary shut-in, terrified of going against his mother (with good reason). But he found himself thinking to himself as he slaved over the dirty dishes.

I look around here
And I want to cry.
I feel like life
Is passing me by.
And I just can't help but wonder
"Am I doomed to wash and dry?"
And is it a curse I'm under
To do it 'til I die?
When I could be a realm explorer
Walking into different realm lands!
Instead of spending every day
Getting dishpan hands!
My future looks like nowhere I want to be.
There's gotta be something better,
Something better,
Something better for me. . . .
Would danger call my name?
I'd put my courage to the test!
There's gotta be something better than this.
I know there is so much more out there to see
And I know this life that I'm living
Can't be my destiny!
There's gotta be something better,
Something better,
Something better than this for me!

Then the sound of a tinkling bell was heard*, and Cloak felt thoroughly disgruntled. What now?!?! he thought angrily, but he dare not to show it in his face or body language -- his mother usually just misinterpreted this as him "just being serious".

***

Cloak remembered his mother often ringing that stupid bell at the most inopportune times . . . like when he had just sat down. How tempting it was just obliterate the damburst thing.

But had he found that something better? Would he ever find whatever it was that he truly sought?

Little did he know something would happen soon to drive all thoughts of Cayaclysm from his mind. . . .

A ship was slowly approaching the planet. . . .

---
*Yes, my mother actually had a little brass bell to ring when she wanted me. :dull:


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2088 on: June 01, 2013, 07:34:42 PM »
A bell to ring for you? You weren't her servant. Enough about her.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2089 on: June 01, 2013, 07:46:06 PM »
Enough about her.

Do you mean you're tired of hearing about her . . . because this is alluded to in future books. . . . "The Pain-Reliever", for instance . . . :-\


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2090 on: June 01, 2013, 07:52:57 PM »
No I just assumed that talking about her would be painful to remember.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2091 on: June 01, 2013, 07:58:54 PM »
Perhaps, if I didn't have "Memoirs" or a strong support system.

"Memoirs" is essentially an underlying outlet for my emotions and feelings. My way of "getting it out", while encapsulating it in a story.

Okay, so this book's gonna be more of a direct parody.

BOOK LX:
ROYAL PAINS IN THE NECK

CHAPTER ONE:
Illegal Aliens

Three boys, who couldn't be older than fifteen, were playing a makeshift game of baseball, one being the catcher, one being the pitcher, and one being the batter. The pitcher was a preppy, white-collar sort of guy, the catcher was a thickset with a babyish sort of face, while the batter had an everyman sort of feel to him with a hoodie and backwards baseball cap. The apparently referred to each other by their surnames.

"Hey," said the batter. "What was that?"

"Don't even, Lee." said the pitcher. "Just because you could hit the broadside of a barn --" the pitcher said.

"Wait a minute, Prichard." said the catcher, Ketchum. "I see something, too."

Then Prichard turned around, and saw the light streaking to a nearby forest. He wanted to be practical, although he was curious.

"It's just a meteor," he rationalized. "C'mon, let's get back to playin-- hey!"

But the other were already running to the forest, leaving Prichard to dash after them.

"This is a bad idea, you know," he told them.

"Cut the crap, Prichard," Lee said, "you want to see whatever it is just as much as we do."

***

"What the . . ." Yarin said, as he noted an alarm and an alert on the monitors. There was an atmospheric breach in an area a few miles from here. He also noted that a news studio was reporting to an apparent crash site. Yarin, despite having suspicions let it slide. The alarm sometime went off if a meteor managed to make it to the atmosphere.

He punched the intercom. "Alert -- atmospheric breach at coordinates," he gave them with the trajectory. "Request an investigation team."

Then he noticed that the news team was withdrawing with such suddenness that, frankly, was suspicious. Suspicious enough to be in RAF's realm of jurisdiction.

Yarin punched the intercom again, and said, "requesting a secondary team to investigate suspicious activity from a local media outlet."
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Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2092 on: June 01, 2013, 10:12:05 PM »
Direct parody to The Puppetmasters? This will strange considering the yeerks.
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2093 on: June 02, 2013, 12:29:06 AM »
Oh look, I just noticed, there's a guy called Ketchum. :P ;)

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2094 on: June 02, 2013, 05:58:44 AM »
Yeah . . . that isn't gonna come into play, Underseen, besides, perhaps, a passing mention.

Oh look, I just noticed, there's a guy called Ketchum. :P ;)

Catcher, Ketchum. Ash Ketchum was surnamed such for a similar reason, I believe.

I dunno how many chapters I can post, but probably not as many as yesterday.

This chapter is very probably gonna be brief.

CHAPTER TWO:
Team Select

Richard and the mods heard the request. They granted it, dispatching Gaz, Saffa, and Noelle to investigate the mysterious goings-on at the studio I-K-E-E-L-U* and dispatch Parker, Demos, and Cloak to investigate the presumed crash site.

"Cloak is still locked-up in his thread." SuperNate pointed out. "He's still dealing with the Cataclysm thing."

<He should get over it,> Esplin said. <He killed. So what? Move on.>

"As crass as that summary is, Esplin," Phoenix said, "it's very different slaying one of your own species. Very different --and difficult -- indeed. Especially for someone who dislikes killing like Cloak."

Esplin scoffed, <I've killed Yeerks before in the name of the mission.>

"Yeerk sensibilities do not equate to Realm Walker sensibilities, then." Goom said.

"I think Myitt would take issue with that generalization, Goom." SuperNate pointed out pragmatically. "Everyone is different, individual, and each one deals with slaying another in his or her or its own way."

<Wallowing in self-pity for an entire feeding cycle is not a constructive use of time.> Esplin said. <Cloak needs to come to grips with his actions. The past is immutable, as it should be. Nothing he does or says will change what happened. Dwelling on it is pointless.>

They were all good points.

During all this, Richard remained silent throughout this discussion, rubbing his chin thoughtfully, pensively. Who knew what he was thinking? Remembering? Considering?

When he spoke, it had the tone of finality to it. "Abby will go instead."

***

Cloak, however was not wallowing in self-pity, but seeking reassurance with his grandfather and with Guardian.

"You burden yourself so, young Master," the swan-form Realm Walker had told him. "Cataclysm left you no choice. He would ravage this innocent world. It was like your beloved grandfather told you, he left you no choice."

Cloak still had his doubts. "But you didn't Guardian."

"This is true," Guardian admitted openly. "But the Nexus is far from an innocent world, and Cataclysm had ran away before I could do anything. I never found him again."

Cloak said nothing, but still seemed conflicted. Guardian placed a hand on Cloak's shoulder -- quite a feat because Cloak was taller, though Guardian's neck gave the illusion otherwise. "Young Master Cloak, I know you are a gentle soul, but you needn't burden yourself so. Cataclysm forced your hand. You gave him a chance of redemption, but he rejected it. It was his choice, not yours."

Then Cloak awoke from his meditative slumber.

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Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2095 on: June 02, 2013, 08:12:21 AM »
Another chapter.

CHAPTER THREE:
On-Site Investigation

Parker, Demos and Saffa headed out for the supposed crash site. Saffa went hawk and provided aerial reconnaissance. Parker personally thought it was unnecessary, they were on pretty flat ground, exceoti g the hills they were hiding for. Demos kept fiddling with his ID mask -- which were modified to basically resemble a Green Lantern's mask. It projected a human image over its wearer.

"Stop fiddling with that thing." Parker scolded.

"Why do I have to wear this thing?" Demos demanded.

"We don't want to start a panic." Parker answered easily.

"Then why are you still wearing your armor?"

"We need the sensor readings," Parker answered quickly, then adding after a moment's thought, "besides, there aren't religious zealots out for my blood."

"A demon joke." Demos said, snippily. "You proud of yourself for that one?"

"I was serious." Parker said, when Saffa landed in front of them taking on human form. Parker replied wearily, "What's the good word, Saffa?"

"It's just beyond those to hills." she said. "You're not gonna believe what a mess it is."

It was a mess. There were people strewn about. A man taking and selling tickets. There was something peculiar about him. His head seemed to be heavily bandaged. Parker's scans showed that he recently undergone some head trauma and his body was hotter than the people milling around her. Parker relayed this to the others.

"Oh, I have a bad feeling about this," Saffa said concernedly.

"Oh, don't be such a pessimist!" Demos said cheerily. "This looks to be great fun!"

"Fun. Right." Saffa said.

When the trio tried to bypass the ticket vendor, he tried to stop them, but they flashed their Marks like police badges, with Parker saying, "RAF business."

It was true that RAF was given such jurisdiction over extraterrestrial and supernatural events. The ticket vendor, as well as every layman in the country, knew this. He reluctantly let them by.

They walked until they reached the supposed site and saw the average Joe taking photos and posing next to a ship that looked like a cross between a Skrit Na freighter, a classical UFO and a mop bucket.

"It's tourist trap," Demos noted. "We came all this way for a tourist trap?"

"A tourist trap wouldn't have alerted Yarin's sensors," Saffa said confidently. "It was an atmospheric breach, remember?"

Parker could tell right away from his experience, both as a SPARTAN and a RAFian, that this thing they saw was NOT the thing that crashed here. He told the other so.

"So . . . what, the aliens or whatever fabricated a false UFO and put it on this spot? Why?"

"They must be an invasive species," Demos postulated.

"Want to have a look inside?" said a voice. It was Prichard. "Just a buck more."

Saffa decided to turn on the ol' feminine charm, though Prichard was a couple years younger.

"How much have yoy made so far?" she asked, not quite flirtly, but not so indifferent either. Prichard didn't react, didn't respond at all to how this was said, and just answered, "Three hundred dollars, miss."

"Parker -- may I suggest switching to thermal view superimposed upon real imaging?" Tyr suggested.

"Do it," Parker instructed, and he could suddenly see the heat signatures of every one. He noticed as two adults (one male, female) and boy of about nine went inside with normal heat signatures, but came out with slightly higher body temperatures. Clearly, this ship was like a Yeerk Pool. Something was either marking or inhabiting the people leaving.

"No, I don't think we will," Parker said, knowing that while they had the jurisdiction to inspect place, they didn't have the authority to shut down things without more substantial proof. "I think we've got all we need here. Good day to you."

A little way away, they began talking about what they should do. Parker suddenly hushed them, noting that they were being followed. Saffa easily knocks out the guy -- who turned out to be Lee, Victor Lee. He was out cold.

But yet his back twitched, and seemed to move of its own accord. Then something black and wet tire through Victor's shirt and tried to attack them, as Saffa reflectively began to morph a Tyrannopede.

But, with three swift movements, Demos had captured the alien back-rider in an orb rather like the one the Omnitrix was found in.

"Demos, that was a little too easy," Parker said suspiciously.

"Pract-- er, I mean, I was just . . . lucky! That's it!"

Parker facepalmed, "Please don't tell me you're continuing your genetic experiments."

"Alright -- I won't tell you."

"Demos, don't remember what happened with the poisonous duck?"

"That was my bad, I'll admit."

"Now you've gone and create whatever this --"

"I didn't create this!"

"Atmospheric breach, remember," Saffa poined out.

"Touche," Parker conceded. "But we're no done with this Demos."


Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2096 on: June 02, 2013, 08:17:57 AM »
Yeah, I can't flirt to save my life. ;D

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2097 on: June 02, 2013, 08:26:28 AM »
Where did I go? I didn't say a thing the whole time? Or was I just being quiet?
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2098 on: June 02, 2013, 08:31:30 AM »
*facepalms until forehead is red*

Crap, I got mixed up, I guess. Abby -- you're on the studio team now.

Let's just say that you and Saffa swapped duties at the last minute because -- because Saffa thought the crash investigation team was more interesting? More fun? Abby always wanted to see a television studio?

Ugh . . .
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Book 189: "Shenecron's Pets"
Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
(January 7, 2020)

RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2099 on: June 02, 2013, 08:32:40 AM »
Lol. Hey, what's a world-saving group without a little chaos, eh? ;)