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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #525 on: June 01, 2010, 06:15:54 AM »
Zorish takes a deep, heaving breath, as a man who is on the verge of tears might do in an effort to quell them, and looks at Myitt with distrust.

"D-Derrel," he says in a stuttering, quavering voice, maintaining his hunched position against the wall. "I want to go home."

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Tamora winces as the door to the medbay opens, but quickly gets her expression to fall back to neutral. It isn't too hard, since she is so out of practice with controlling her own facial expressions. Neutral seems to be the default. She remains silent as Myitt speaks, listening for cues from Zorish and deciding that it is best not to speak unless spoken to.

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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #526 on: June 01, 2010, 05:03:28 PM »
Myitt sneers briefly at Sukohn but doesn't indulge him with a reply.  She looks back at Derrel and nods.

"Alright, Derrel," she says earnestly.  "We'll try and get you home, okay?  Just sit tight, it's going to take a while."  She glances back at Alic, then walks over to Tamora, smiling down at her.

"It was really quite clever, you know, fooling that Andalite child to set you free," she says conversationally.  "I think we're all aware he's our weakest link.  No matter.  Throwing me across the room, though--was that really necessary?  Honestly.  I mean, I assume it was you, unless some other bipedal creature thought I should go for a roller coaster ride."



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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #527 on: June 01, 2010, 06:06:22 PM »
Tamora stares up at Myitt, her features frozen as she works through the context of what she is saying. She recalls those panicky moments when Zorish was making his escape, and those split seconds when he decided to spill the tupperware that contained Myitt.

"You're right," Tamora says at last, through cracked lips, "it may have been...unnecessary. I thought it would slow -," she pauses, faltering on Claxter's name. Her tongue feels thick and strange within her own mouth, "-the Andalite down. I thought he might stop to save a fallen comrade, even if it was a Yeerk. I guess I was wrong."

She stutters to a stop, rather proud with her performance. It wasn't perfect, but she imagined that she had delivered something roughly similar to what Zorish would have said. Over in the corner, Zorish looks at the ground, still playing the part of the cowering human.

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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #528 on: June 02, 2010, 03:23:09 AM »
Alic tilted her head just slightly as if to say "whatever." She really was just bored being stuck in this room with two yeerks and an innocent human. <<Yeah. Try.>> She rolled all four of her eyes at her response to Myitt. She decided it best not to respond to Zorish. She knew Claxter was the weakest person on their side and would have done the exact same thing in the captives' situation. Yes, definitely better to keep that part private.

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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #529 on: June 02, 2010, 08:06:32 AM »
<I can't believe he can actually sleep at a time like this. How can he be so calm?> Derrel said to Zorish. <Or maybe he's just really tired. Who knows?>

<Are you really going to go to sleep here?> Cody asked Sukohn.

<You think of anything better to do? Maybe play cards with the babysitters? Charades? Truth or Dare?>

<Fine. Whatever man.>


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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #530 on: June 02, 2010, 09:50:49 AM »
Myitt watches Tamora for an uncomfortable moment.  "I was at your mercy," she says finally.  "So I'm glad at least all I got was a roller coaster ride."

Without another word she paces away from the gurney.  As she passes Ossanlin and Alic she lays a hand on Alic's shoulder and whispers, "Hang on, I'll be right back."

She steps briefly into the cabin to retrieve her backpack, eyeing Claxter as she does so.  The bottom of the pack is soaked in pool liquid, but otherwise its contents are unharmed.  She fishes around until she finds the used Kandrona generator.  One side of the semi-spherical device is already flat, and it hardly resembles the neural disruption cylinders the Empire used to quickly--and sometimes publicly--dispose of troublesome hosts and their Yeerks, but it would have to do.  Myitt cups the dead generator in the palm of her hand, so that only the flat end, reminiscent of the deadly silver cylinder, is visible. 

She walks back into the med bay, glancing wordlessly at Ossanlin, and steps up to Tamora's gurney. 

"Since you were merciful to me, I'd like to return the favor and be merciful to you," says Myitt, constricting her voice to sound both grim and resolute.  "We've learned all that we can learn from your mind, and surely you realize we cannot return you to the Empire, or harbor you forever as a prisoner of war.  Even your voluntary host is a security risk, as much of a pity it is to destroy an innocent human.  But I won't make you suffer."  She heaves a heavy sigh.  "I am sorry, to both of you."

With a trembling hand, Myitt slowly moves to press the flash of silver metal against the back of Tamora's neck while Tamora hangs, suspended and immobile, in the gurney's energy field. 



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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #531 on: June 02, 2010, 10:49:47 AM »
(Nah. I don't want it to feel like any of my characters know more than they should. I need to avoid anything Sue-ish, if you know what I mean.)


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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #532 on: June 02, 2010, 04:15:47 PM »
"No!" Tamora cries, her eyes wide with fear as she sees the bright flash of silver and realizes what it means. She tries desperately to worm her way out of her bonds, but the energy ropes provide no give whatsoever. Letting out a sob of fear, Tamora squeezes her eyes shut, waiting for the end.

Zorish's head snaps up at Tamora's cry, her fear pulling him from the act. As he registers the device in Myitt's hand he feels his stomach drop. This isn't right at all, he thinks, knowing that he has a decision to make. Save himself and leave Tamora to die, or reveal himself and they both might die. The smart thing to do would be to sacrifice his former host. He was the only free Imperial in a room filled with rebels and Andalites.

Zorish presses his lips into a thin line, turning his head away from the gurney and towards the wall, not wanting to watch his host perish because he did not act, but knowing that action would be useless.

<This is not how I intended events to play out,> he says internally.
« Last Edit: June 02, 2010, 04:43:00 PM by Terenia [Teach] »

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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #533 on: June 02, 2010, 04:23:24 PM »
<What's going on? What's happening?> Derrel asked as Zorish turned his head away and said things weren't going as planned. <What's not happening as intended?>

Sukohn jerked from his spot when Tamora shouted. "What now? What are you doing, Myitt? You don't strike me as that kind of Yeerk." He said, meaning a tormentor of prisoners.
« Last Edit: June 02, 2010, 04:48:20 PM by Chad28 »


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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #534 on: June 02, 2010, 04:34:11 PM »
((Hmm...okay, quick poll. I realize that having Zorish break his cover that quickly might be a little out of character for a Sub-Visser. Should I edit it so that he doesn't break his cover but Tamora still freaks out? What do you think?))

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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #535 on: June 02, 2010, 04:36:25 PM »
(That probably is odd for a Sub-Visser, and I'm not sure if they're really so close that she'd lose it that fast. Seems like she'd at least try to use Derrel to object to it, especially since he is a nice guy. He'd totally be against killing prisoners. Maybe edit it so she tries that first?)


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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #536 on: June 02, 2010, 04:38:32 PM »
((Hmm, I dunno if there's enough time to make a debate out of it, but I'll make a few changes to keep it more Sub-Vissery. If nothing else it could be a good basis for argument between Zorish and Tamora later. If either lasts long enough :P Give me a minute to edit))

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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #537 on: June 02, 2010, 04:39:52 PM »
((Out of character for a Sub-Visser, but perhaps not for one who is reluctantly attached to his host x3  Hmmmm....I can work with either scenario, leaving Zorish in Derrel will create further tension--but I think if he doesn't act then Myitt has another trick up her sleeve.  She is suspicious, otherwise she wouldn't be faking this execution :P))


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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #538 on: June 02, 2010, 04:42:22 PM »
(Oh, that's what this is? Myitt's suspicious, and wants to see if Derrel is infested. I'm wearing my dense cap, and didn't see that.)


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Re: GESB: Operation Time-Cops
« Reply #539 on: June 02, 2010, 04:43:42 PM »
((Edited. :) ))

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