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Re: Fanfiction Comments and Feedback
« Reply #90 on: September 12, 2008, 05:44:30 PM »
That's because I have a mind reading spy in your class who detected your wish and relayed it to me...  ;)

Glad you liked it, I had some trouble trying to guess the Animorphs reactions, but I think I did okay.
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Re: Fanfiction Comments and Feedback
« Reply #91 on: September 12, 2008, 07:57:57 PM »
I told you on msn, Mike, but great post!

I really wanna find out what happens to Tobias!
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Re: Fanfiction Comments and Feedback
« Reply #92 on: September 13, 2008, 07:25:26 AM »
mike, dude, i loved it! plz keep the fan fic coming!


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« Reply #93 on: September 13, 2008, 07:21:00 PM »
Thanks guys! I'm trying to put off posting the final chapter for a few days until I can figure out my plan for part 2. I'm almost definitely going to skip #2 and #3, as I can't really think of anything significant for Mike to change. I have to do #4 of course since that's when we meet Ax (and it's a cool book), but I'm still lacking a few ideas on how to proceed.

I am considering taking a break from Animorphs Travels for a while so I can work on other things, but it depends on how I feel in the next couple of days.
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« Reply #94 on: September 18, 2008, 11:23:48 AM »
hurry up! i need my fix
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Re: Fanfiction Comments and Feedback
« Reply #95 on: September 18, 2008, 06:33:59 PM »
Sorry the next part of Animorphs Enter the Beast Wars is taking sooo long. Homework has been keeping me busy. (speaking of which, I should be doing some right now)

Will do my best to maybe get a part up this weekend.

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Re: Fanfiction Comments and Feedback
« Reply #96 on: September 19, 2008, 11:16:10 AM »
Yays! You posted, Mike! I'm surprised it took that long to realize that they saved two people. I knew it right away. Can't wait for part two!

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Re: Fanfiction Comments and Feedback
« Reply #97 on: September 19, 2008, 12:58:14 PM »
 :'( Tobias is still a hawk.  :'( :'( Even though I knew that couldn't be changed still  :'( :'(. But other than that little detail :'( :'( GREAT STORY!!!!
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Re: Fanfiction Comments and Feedback
« Reply #98 on: September 19, 2008, 05:07:25 PM »
Wow. Love the story Phoenix, have any plans for another one?
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Re: Fanfiction Comments and Feedback
« Reply #99 on: September 19, 2008, 06:13:27 PM »
Sorry to all Tobias fans, but I have two perfectly good reasons for keeping him trapped. Firstly, I didn't want Mike to be too perfect. He's only human after all and we all make mistakes. I wanted to keep it as realistic as possible, not have him swoop in to save the day all the time. I wanted his first big mission not to be a complete success so that he wouldn't get over confident. Secondly, think of all the key moments in the series that would be completely screwed up by Tobias remaining human. It's a major part of the plot of the series and something that I didn't really think I could change even if I wanted to.

Wow. Love the story Phoenix, have any plans for another one?

If you'd read some of the comments I'd made previously, then you'd know that I have always been planning to make a series out of this. I've had some trouble figuring out exactly what I'm doing for Part Two, but I will almost certainly be doing one. However, I am going to be quite busy over the weekend and I have work Monday so I probably won't get a chance to seriously work on it until Tuesday. I'm still considering taking a break from Animorphs Travels for a while, but I'm not sure yet.

Thanks for the comments everyone!  :)
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« Reply #100 on: September 19, 2008, 06:39:13 PM »
That was great! Short but sweet. haha.

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« Reply #101 on: September 19, 2008, 08:04:46 PM »
Grr, I need to read the last three or four chapters. But I will. I will, now that it's finished.
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Re: Fanfiction Comments and Feedback
« Reply #102 on: September 21, 2008, 11:03:12 AM »
Thanks to everyone who commented on my story. I can hardly believe I actually finished it!  ;D It's now all posted in fanfiction.net too.

I'm not sure when I will be posting Part Two, but keep an eye out for it. If anyone has any ideas for future plotlines, feel free to let me know and I'll consider them.

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Re: Fanfiction Comments and Feedback
« Reply #103 on: September 30, 2008, 09:50:34 PM »
I don't want to be rude, but...Can I have some feedback for the ELF?
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Re: Fanfiction Comments and Feedback
« Reply #104 on: October 30, 2008, 04:22:34 AM »
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i really like what u have started with on the two new fan-fics u have started... i really like where the Morphs of the Old Republic one is going, and i wanna see where the other one is gonna head as well... plz keep 'em coming!


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