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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #15 on: June 15, 2008, 07:30:10 PM »
wow blue... thanks for the comment  :crazy2:
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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #16 on: June 15, 2008, 10:27:34 PM »
o my bad I was just wandering ;D I'll have to read the fanfic first before I comment though
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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #17 on: June 15, 2008, 10:32:16 PM »
so read it ;)
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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #18 on: June 15, 2008, 10:33:57 PM »
ok ok. Dam, stop rushing me it's like 11:30 pm I'm tired ;D
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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #19 on: June 15, 2008, 10:39:22 PM »
wow do I have to read allllllllllllllllll this(http://richardsani.conforums.com/index.cgi?board=animorphsroleplaying&num=1202781734&action=display&start=15) just t ounderstand ur fanfic? Cuz if so then I'll probably shoot myself before I finish(TOO MANY WORDS!!!!!!!!!! :explode:)
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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #20 on: June 15, 2008, 10:49:19 PM »
No you don't
thais just the RP its based on
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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #21 on: June 15, 2008, 11:01:28 PM »
Wow this si realy good. I've only read the first 23 chapters so far but this is awesome
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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #22 on: June 16, 2008, 06:59:36 PM »
Chapter 6

I was 19 years old. I had been training in the special ops team for a year and had excelled. I was the youngest person on the team by at least two years, and it showed. But I had learned to use all sorts of weapons. I traded in my 4 foot sword for a 9mm. Stern was an excellent sergeant and I had already blown past everyone in the unit. We had yet to hear about another alien encounter, but still we trained every day, for long hours, and with hard work. One morning, at 0600 I arrived to where we usually began our training but found nobody there. I looked around for any of the others, but found nobody. I looked over at the clock and waited until 0615 before I walked over to the mess hall. I walked in and everyone was huddled around the small television that was in the corner of the hall.
“Nabet!” I heard from behind me. I turned toward the voice. It was a general that I had seen only a few times. He had transferred from another base a few weeks before.
“Sir, yes sir!” I responded and saluted.
“I need to speak with you for a moment private!” I followed him to his quarters. “Have a seat soldier!” he gestured toward his bed. I took a seat and looked around the room. In one corner next to a bookshelf was a hot tub filled with brown sludgy water. “Nabet, I hear that you’re the best soldier that this base has!”
“Sir, I’m not so sure if that’s true. I do alright, but I’m not the best,” I responded still looking over at the hot tub. I had a weird feeling about it.
“Nabet, put your head in the hot tub!” the general said to me. I turned toward him and he was aiming the same kind of weapon that had been aimed at me the night Tyler was killed.
“Woah, calm down sir,” I said.
“Your head in the tub, now!” he ordered.
“So your one of them,” I said, thinking back on the conspiracy with the aliens.
“Ah, so you did see the news report. I thought that since I didn’t see you there you had missed it. Yes Nabet, I am a Yeerk,” he said. Yeerk? What the hell was he talking about? “Your head soldier!” he ordered again. I headed toward the pool of sludgy water and got down on my knees. Then with cat-like reflexes, I drew my M9 pistol and fired a bullet between his eyes before he had a chance to squeeze his trigger. I walked over to his body and picked up his weapon. I stepped outside and looked around for others. I saw Stern and ran over to him.
“Nabet! Did you hear what happened?” he asked me quickly.
“Sir, no I did not. But the new general just tried to kill me,” I replied.
“Damn it, he’s one of them.”
“One of who!” I shouted, irritated that I knew less than everyone else.
“A Yeerk. Come to L3, the rest of the team is there. I’ll explain everything.”
I followed him to building L3 and sat down at a table with the rest of the special ops team.
“Alright team,” Stern began, “General Doubleday will be here shortly, but I think that it is time that I debrief you. For over a year we have prepared for a war with aliens that we were not sure actually existed. Well guess what. They do. Many of you have seen the news reports on T.V. the aliens have declared full out war on us. They have better technology then us, and they seem to be able to be anyone. I have found out from a reliable source that these aliens are called Yeerks. In their natural forms, they are little slugs, you wouldn’t think twice about them if you saw one on the street. But these slugs, they enter your brain, and they control you. Completely. They read your minds and behave just like you would. A member of what is known as the ‘Yeerk Peace Movement’ explained all of this to me yesterday. Please give a warm welcome to Kyle Richmon and Iptu 763,” Kyle Richmon walked in and my eyes went wide. It was my friend from high school that I had seen the night Tyler died.
“Everything that Stern is telling you is true. This is a Yeerk,” he opened his palm and put it next to his ear. A large grey slug crawled out of his ear and into his palm. “I now have free will of my body. When I put Iptu back into my ear, he will control me again.” He put the slug back into his ear.
“Traitor!” yelled Felicia, the girl sitting next to me. Kyle lifted the same kind of weapon that I now had concealed in my pocket and fired it at her. She let out a soft scream and fell to the floor.
“I had it set on the lowest setting. She’ll be unconscious for a while, keep her in a safe place for 3 days and watch her. Make sure she goes nowhere near a Yeerk pool.” Kyle then explained what a Yeerk pool was and I just sat there in awe.
General Doubleday then walked through the door. Everyone saluted “At ease soldiers. Now, you men are going to be the first to join my new unit. Up until now, this special operations team had no name. Well guess what. You are all now ATF-1, Alien Task Force One. Congratulations soldiers, we meet in front of the base in one hour to relocate to our new base of operations. Gather your things and don’t be late, we will not be returning.” General Doubleday turned around and walked out of the building. We all left and gathered all of our things. We went over to the new base which was located in a pit carved in a mountain. Very strange looking. When we arrived there were more people there that the general had gathered from other units of other armies. For a few weeks we were trained in new forms of combat and strategy from Doubleday himself. About a month later, we were all in the conference room and Doubleday was showing us a large map of the city that the Yeerks had decided to use as their home. A dragonfly landed on the table. I don’t know why, but I was drawn to it, so I kept looking. Then the dragonfly started to get larger.
“What the…” I said.
“General!” Steve yelled from across the table.
“MP’s! MP’s, on the double,” Kerry shouted.
“Draw your weapons!” Ksenia said.
I looked as the dragonfly grew and changed, and the features that I could almost make out looked a lot like Jake Berenson. “Don’t shoot!” I shouted.
“General Doubleday,” Jake said when he changed completely from the dragonfly, “My name is Jake.”
“Get him!” the general yelled. Several MP’s grabbed him and dragged him off to a holding cell.
“General, this is a mistake!” I heard Jake yell as he was dragged off toward the cell. A few moments later, Jake reappeared as the dragonfly on the table again. Once again he was tackled to the floor and taken to the holding cell. Once again he appeared on the table in front of us.
“General, why don’t you stop being stupid and listen?” he asked. They took him back to the holding cell. For the fourth time in 10 minutes Jake reappeared in front of us.
“All right, Mr. Alien, what have you got to say to me?” General Doubleday asked Jake.
“First: I’m not an alien. I’m a human with alien technology…” Jake continued to speak about how he would hurt the Yeerks and possibly win the war. All he needed was us to provide a diversion.
“He can’t leave here alive!” Colonel Marks yelled. He then looked over at two more soldiers who levelled their weapons along with him. The general argued with them and a wolf jumped out of nowhere and attacked them. The meeting had turned into a battle. An explosion rocked the entire room and Jake had taken a hard hit. He was bleeding badly and a gorilla came and grabbed him. He dragged Jake and Doubleday to safety. Several people ran out of the building and I did as well. I escaped before I succumbed to any real damage. The next day Doubleday called us to a new Headquarters and held us for three days to make sure that we weren’t infested by Yeerks. Those of us that passed the test were brought to a new meeting. Doubleday then explained each of our missions in the coming battle.
Several days later, the battle began. Jake and his band of misfits who could transform into animals, the couple of hundred soldiers from ATF-1, a handful of reptilian aliens called Hork-Bajir that weren’t infested by the Yeerks, and one blue centaur with a long bladed tail called an Andalite against an army of advanced aliens, with countless soldiers, aliens, spaceships, and weapons. This was a suicide mission and we all knew it. We gathered into our divisions and braced ourselves for what would probably be certain death. The pilots all got into their planes and flew off. I lifted my M16 and ran out to battle with my fellow soldiers. Jake needed us to provide a distraction so that he could enter the Yeerk ship and take them out from the inside. It was a genius plan. Unfortunately it meant certain death for us. Several Hork-Bajir charged at us. We all fired our weapons at them as they advanced at us. Lasers fired all around and several soldiers fell. I just kept shooting despite the fact that all of my fellow soldiers were dropping like flies. Out of nowhere several large centipedes came out of the earth and attacked the advancing Yeerks. Now the battle was beginning to turn in our favour. The planes overhead were being destroyed by the Yeerk ships. A Hork-Bajir ran towards me and tackled me toward the ground before I could fire. I struggled to get free but couldn’t. Just one swipe and I was finished. ROAR!!!! A lion charged and knocked the Hork-Bajir off of me.
“Thanks,” I said getting up and putting a bullet in the alien’s head.
<No problem,> the lion responded and we kept fighting.
“Retreat! The kids are on the ship. I repeat, the kids are on the ship, retreat!” I heard from my radio. I ran away and watched the ship fly into the air. It then began firing lasers at all of the animals in the battle. Incinerating the poor kids that only wanted to help the fight. It was disgusting to watch so I headed back into the base. I fell down, and fell asleep. By the time I woke up, the war was over. The kids had succeeded, losing only one of the six that snuck into the ship.
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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #23 on: June 17, 2008, 08:15:02 PM »
.....Wow!
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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #24 on: June 24, 2008, 03:33:37 PM »
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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #25 on: July 06, 2008, 09:54:23 AM »
So....When's the next chapter coming?
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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #26 on: July 18, 2008, 02:08:57 PM »
Mid august when I get back
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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #27 on: August 16, 2008, 12:28:00 PM »
ok, so, this is the first chapter that im writing since i got back from camp... and it sucks. im sorry that the first thing you have to read from me is so bad, but i really dont know how to write a chapter like this, and I needed to get it out of the way. I promise that the next chapter will be better.

Chapter 7

I was 21 years old. The war had been over for two years and everyone was finally used to the idea of aliens all around Earth. There were barely any places you could go anymore without seeing an Andalite or a Hork-Bajir. The morphing technology had been distributed only to a select few soldiers, hand picked by Jake Berenson, I was not one of them. ATF-1 was still around but we now dealt mostly with precautionary training. For the first time in as long as anybody could remember, planet Earth was completely at peace. There were no wars between planets or countries. The Yeerks had done us a favour and brought peace on Earth. Which brings me to where I was, sitting in the mess hall eating breakfast at 0800; we were given a sleep in. Stern approached me and sat across the table. He had a huge smile on his face that gave me a bit of an uneasy feeling.
“Nabet, it’s time for you to go,” he said to me. Go? What did that mean? Was he going to kill me for something? Was I getting discharged?
“Sir?” I asked.
“Nabet, as you can obviously see there are no wars going on now. None. There is also no tension between any countries. It has been decided to send some of our soldiers off to do some good for the world. Nabet, you’re going to a little facility outside of a small town in eastern Canada. You will be there among volunteers and other soldiers who are going to be educating children aged 8 to 16 in basic math, politics and English. This educational facility is experimental and uses a less formal approach to education. You will be in charge of teaching children aged 10 and 11. You have one partner who has been teaching there for several years. You leave in an hour, get your things ready.” He got up and left before I had a chance to say anything. I walked back to my room and pulled all of my things into a suitcase. I walked over to the front of the base and waited for my vehicle. The Hummer arrived and I stepped inside. I stared out the window at the base that had been my home for 3 years as it grew smaller and smaller and eventually vanished from my view completely. Stern kept trying to make conversation in the ride, but I just wasn’t in the mood to talk. The Hummer stopped at an airstrip and I got onto a jet, saluting Stern as he turned around and walked back into the car. I drew in a deep breath and sat down on my seat. After a few hours I arrived in Toronto. Another car, this time a simple Honda, took me to a large building where several people between the ages of 20 and 30 were standing around with bags.
“There will be a bus to pick you up here and take you to the facility with the rest of the teachers,” the driver said as he motioned to the others standing around, “try to find your partner.”
I drew in another deep breath and stepped out of the car. I looked around for the most grumpy looking man I could find, assuming that he would be my partner. I wandered over to a man who looked about 24, he was 6’6’’ and very skinny.
“Hi I’m Daniel Nabet,” I said to him and held out my hand.
“Oh my god! It’s so nice to meet you, I’m Jacob,” he held out his hand, and I shook it.
“I have the 11 year olds, are you partner?” I asked politely.
“No, I’m in charge of the 16s, I think the 11s are Amanda,” he said pointing at a girl sitting by a bag with a few other girls laughing.
“Alright, thanks. I’ll talk to you later Jacob,” I said and headed over to the group of girls. I walked up to the one he had pointed to, she was about 5’8’’ with long dark hair.
“Hi, I’m Daniel,” I said to her.
“Hi Daniel, I’m Amanda. Daniel Nabet, right? I guess we’ll be working together,” she said with a sweet smile. She was devastatingly beautiful, and I couldn’t keep my eyes off of her.
“Humbida” I mumbled.
“What?” she asked politely.
“I said looking forward to it,” I answered and wandered away. I sat down on the stairs outside of the building and waited for the bus. After about 20 minutes the bus arrived and I helped to pack all of the things onto it. I sat at the back, four seats behind Amanda, next to somebody named Mitchell who was the teacher for the 8-9 year olds. Mitchell would try to make small talk, and I feigned interest but the time I was just looking over at Amanda, reading a book a just a few seats in front of me. After a four hour bus ride, we passed through a set of blue gates and arrived at the facility. The place was not at all what I was expecting. I expected something along the lines of a school building, but instead there were three large fields with cabins lining the sides of them, a nice lake, a large mess hall, one small office and a small building behind a basketball court.
“The students sleep in the cabins along the sides there,” Mitchell pointed to one of the fields, “we sleep in those,” he pointed to the cabins in another field, “those cabins are open use for teaching, or you can teach outside. Every night there are plays or games held in there,” he pointed to the building beside the basketball court. The bus stopped and we all unloaded our things and prepared to bring them to our cabins.
“Alright guys, you’ll be in the same cabin as your partner,” Karen, the 23 year old ‘principal’ said to us “Mitchell and Hila, you’re in cabin 12. Ariel and Max, you’re in cabin 13. Daniel and Amanda, you’re in cabin 14,” my heart skipped a beat. I was in the same cabin as Amanda, I was both happy and terrified at the same time. Karen finished reading off the names and people began to bring their bags to their cabins.
“Let me get that for you,” I said to Amanda, and grabbed her bags along with my own.
“Thanks Daniel,” she replied with a smile. I felt my heart jump up into my throat. We brought the bags into cabin 14 and sat and talked for a little while about what we would be teaching the children.
A week later, all of the students arrived on a bus and piled into their cabins. All of the boys from one age group were in one cabin and the girls from one age group were in another. That afternoon, Amanda and I started our first lesson. When Stern said that it was an alternative style to education, he wasn’t lying. Our lesson was on different types of economy. We sat them all in a circle and put a pile of candy in the middle. We then told them to different things to get the candy, all symbolizing different types of economy. Then we had a discussion afterwards. After it was done, Amanda and I went back to the cabin to talk about the results of the lesson.
Four weeks later after all of the kids were in bed, Amanda and I were in our cabin together.
“Daniel, I’m glad that you came here, I feel like we’ve really become good friends,” Amanda said, sitting on my bed beside me.
“Yea, it’s great, I feel like you’re my first real friend since...” I trailed off. I still hadn’t told anybody about Tyler.
“Since what?” she asked.
“Since I watched my best friend get killed,” I said, a single tear running down my face.
“What happened?” she asked me.
I explained everything that happened with Visser Three and the Sharing and Tyler. When I finished Amanda sat closer, and she kissed me. My heart beat faster and I kissed her back, feeling her lips press against mine.
For three months we dated at the educational facility before we both decided to quit. I sent in my letter of resignation to the military, and they accepted allowing me to leave. A week after I quit, Amanda and I got married. Amanda lived in Toronto, so we decided to hold the wedding there. Stern was my best man and gave me the biggest smile I’d ever seen on his face when I said “I do”. My parents were sitting in the front row, and I saw them for the first time in almost 3 years. They were in tears because they were so proud of me. Amanda and I decided to move to California and we bought a house near where I had lived when I was a kid. Nine months later, Amanda had a child, we named her Karen after the principal from the educational facility we had worked at. Finally Amanda and I had a family, we could be happy. Our happy life would finally begin... or so we thought.
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Re: Daniel Nabet, the child and the soldier
« Reply #28 on: August 16, 2008, 03:21:29 PM »
Nice chapter Daniel! Your not so bad at loveyness ;).

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« Reply #29 on: August 16, 2008, 04:44:20 PM »
Well done, Shanker! This is really good stuff! ;D
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