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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4380 on: October 14, 2009, 04:41:11 AM »
(Mar-Jo Komus)

"Clones?" He said surprised "I haven't heard of any clones since the great Jedi purge and Order 66." Pausing for a breath, he continued "No, I haven't been here long either. The Imperials are after me for something I didn't do, so I have to lay low for a while." He said with a chuckle.

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Attempting to prop himself up with his shoulders, John failed and decided to just lay there on his back. "I feel fine, I'm just confused as to what happened, is all. Can you tell me how I ended up here?" As he finished saying that, he opened his eyes and saw the doctor that called herself Asda.

Deciding that the extra set of arms were a side effect of the knock-out drugs, he said "All I remember is flying wingman for a Lancaster over the Bermuda Triangle, then blacking out, then waking up and 'landing' my Mustang."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4381 on: October 14, 2009, 04:43:08 AM »
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4382 on: October 14, 2009, 08:21:01 AM »
(Sorry, still picking up the pacing of it all.  I'll tone it down a bit in the future.  Regardless, the attacks were  more to bind than to damage, and for something as large as it is it could likely pull free fairly easily.  As for names and who is who... still working on that one >.>)

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4383 on: October 14, 2009, 08:30:44 AM »
"Lay still," Asda said firmly, but gently. "You had surgery. There was some minor damage to a kidney, but you were bleeding internally."

Asda thought for a moment and muttered, "Bermuda Triangle...where's that? Oh yes...it's on Earth."

Then she said, "I don't know where you think you are, but I'm pretty sure I can tell you that's where you're not."

At that moment a deep voice came over the comm. "Doctor, how's the patient?"

Asda walked over to the comm and replied, "He's awake, Captain."

Outside Morgan said, "That man Cutter's awake."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4384 on: October 14, 2009, 11:56:27 AM »
((Well, I'm not going to post an action until Zombs signs off on the post. Personally I think it should be amended, but I think it's Zombie's call.))
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4385 on: October 14, 2009, 02:40:07 PM »
Celebrin looks up at Mar-Jo again.  "Purge...?"  Celebrin says the word wth some distaste.  "Then...it was deliberate.  This is unbelievable..."  Celebrin steps back a bit, closing his eyes.  He runs through a few padawan exercises feeling only the Force, comforting in its embrace and purity.  "Have you noticed, the Force around this place seems twisted in an odd way.  I cannot feel beyond it.  Either you and I are from different places, or something else is going on here.  I suppose names might remain the same.  I am originally from Corellia, though I spent most of my childhood on Coruscant in the Temple of course.  Are those names familiar to you?  At least we can find out if we're from the same galaxy..."
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4386 on: October 14, 2009, 03:28:11 PM »
Name: Drake
Age: 23
Sex: Male
Rank: Lance Corporal For the S.A.S
Appearance: [spoiler][/spoiler]
Weapons:[spoiler]M4 Carbine: The M4 Carbine is a family of firearms tracing its lineage back to earlier carbine versions of the M16, all based on the original AR-15 made by ArmaLite. It is a shorter and lighter version of the M16A2 assault rifle, achieving 80% parts commonality with the M16A2. The M4 has selective fire options including semi-automatic and three-round burst (like the M16A2), while the M4A1 has a "full auto" option in place of the three-round burst.[/spoiler]

[spoiler]Skorpion: The Scorpion submachine gun is an interesting little weapon which is somewhat hard to classify - is it a machine pistol (a full-automatic weapon for single-hand fire) or a submachine gun (also an automatic weapon, but for shoulder fire). Either way, there are pros and cons. Nevertheless, this weapon deserved its place in history of firearms. Its development was initiated in late 1950s, with intent to provide various non-infantry units with lightweight personal defense weapon that is more effective than a pistol, but is no more obtrusive. Another niche for Scorpion was use by various special forces, because the selected cartridge, known as 7,65x17 Browning / .32 ACP can be easily silenced. First prototypes of a new weapon were built in 1959, and official adoption followed in 1961, under designation of "Samopal Vzor 1961" (submachine gun model of 1961), or SA Vz.61 in short. This weapon was issued to various units in Czechoslovak army, and also widely exported. Licensed version of the Scorpion was produced in Yugoslavia, where it was widely issued as an military officer's sidearm. At least few Scorpions found its way to the hands of various terrorist groups, which favored it for its small size and ease of silencing. It also can be easily fired singe-handedly, like most pistols.
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Bio:Lance Cpl Drake was part of the 22nd S.A.S Regiment and was in the squad Badger 3. The men Of Badger 3 were helping the USMC (United States Marine Corps) Find and Capture Someone named Al Asad As his S.A.S Forces and the USMC approached the Capitol of the city Al asad was in something happened..... with confirmed presence of Nuclear Weapons The USMC had orders to fall back.... Drakes squad was in charge of finding the Nuke and disarming it.....

Just before they got to the building.... it happened.... the Nuke went off.... killing many men and women that didn't  get the safe distance away..... Drake thought he was dead..... he knew he was dead from the explosion..... But something happened when that nuke went off..... Knocking Drake Unconsious from the blast...... after about... God knows how long drake awoken.... in a unknown place...





Wellllll here is my Char hope you guys like it and yes Both of my guns are silenced
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4387 on: October 14, 2009, 04:40:51 PM »
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4388 on: October 14, 2009, 04:47:56 PM »
((Frank try to word attacks with stuff like "he shoots at ____" and "he throws restraints at ____ with the intent to restrain ___."  It just makes it easier for the attackee to choose whether the attack hits or not, even if it isn't deadly.  And on the flipside, someone who keeps shrugging off attacks is also kind of powergaming.  It takes a little while to get used to....but didn't you do something like this on your boards?  fwuh?))

The noise of the battle going on outside shakes the bar, making the lights flicker.  There seems to be an awful lot of yelling, telepathic and otherwise, going on behind the bar.

Myitt looks glumly down first at one arm, then the other.  Both are bandaged under her jacket.  "I don't think I want to go out there," she reiterates.

"But you won't stop talking about it," Corliss interjects.

"That's because I really, really don't want to go out there."

"Uh huh.  Okay, whatever you say," Corliss says, smirking and shaking his head.


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4389 on: October 14, 2009, 04:55:27 PM »
(Aye, I get the style a bit more now.  The other ones run a tad differently is all.  In any case i'll tone it back from here on out.)

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4390 on: October 14, 2009, 05:17:20 PM »
((I dont know if I'll reply to your post, Zarris, until it has been revised, or I'll see what I can do with it))
((Working on stuff, will update dis here space in a bit))
((EDIT: I think I may roll with this one, lets see what I can whip up))
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4391 on: October 14, 2009, 05:39:19 PM »
lance Corporal Drake 22nd S.A.S Regiment ..... scanning the battlefield....... scanning....... scanning......... ..Failed failed Person Not found on the battlefield... presume KIA -Computer system trying to locate Drake-



lance Corporal Drake 22nd S.A.S Regiment Area Unknown.....

His eyes would be blurry as he groans in pain "Bloody... hell... where am i?..." Lance Corporal Drake looked around his vision slowly coming back to him as he tries to figure out .... WTF happened to him... he would place a hand on his ear piece

"Baseplate come in..... Hello??? anyone there? this is Lance Corporal Drake can anyone hear me?...... Badger four come in.... Hello???"

Drake would get up slowly as he scans the area with his eyes as he would reach for his SkorpionSD pulling it out quickly holding it like a normal SMG even though the gun is really a Machine pistol as he would move out looking around this strange place

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4392 on: October 14, 2009, 05:42:43 PM »
(If you want something changed just say.  Otherwise if you need something negated you can have him break free or something, I'll leave Zar in the position he landed at unless otherwise needed.)

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4393 on: October 14, 2009, 05:49:18 PM »
((Nah, its k, I've already got a reply ready, Zarris will soon be a target of a Hound))
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #4394 on: October 14, 2009, 05:50:30 PM »
((wait..... what???????? O_o i dun wanna ork <_< it might be ugly and i dont do ugly e-e))