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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #2850 on: July 06, 2009, 09:50:25 PM »
"Please," Kara urges in her quiet voice, "tell me." She shivers a little and scoots closer to Mar, glad for his arm over her shoulders. Equally glad that he hadn't asked her to go into detail on how everything had ended. She looks up at the sky that Mar had called lovely. It only looked evil to her.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #2851 on: July 06, 2009, 09:59:48 PM »
Mar closes his eyes, deep in thought. Might as well. I have no one to talk to and the girl is utterly harmless. Ossanlin might've been more of a problem, but this should be interesting.

"My home was a place of gloriously bright light and the wonder of creation. I was there when all universes were young, as the firstborn son of my Father. Reality was bursting with possibilities, and anything was possible as there was nothing but us. My Father had many more children, and I led them along with the oldest of my younger siblings. I can't quite understand much of my own home any longer, but I can still remember what it felt like, and how much I still miss it. .............I loved Him, you know. I would have done anything for Him. And I thought it was the same with Him."

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« Reply #2852 on: July 06, 2009, 10:16:23 PM »
Kara listens, fascinated but dubious. She is curious as to what happened to end everything, and cannot help herself from asking even though he did that favor to her, "How did it end?"

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #2853 on: July 06, 2009, 10:30:06 PM »
Mar glances off tiredly. This is obviously something that bothers him, but he decides to go through with it anyway. The girl's request is utterly innocent. Besides, when he's sober he can kick himself later.

"We found out once that He was making a new type of creature, creatures that I found to be short-lived, short-sighted, and stupid. He was making..." Mar gestures irritably as if to imply a vast space. "...this whole reality for his new pets. And we had gotten nothing. Worse, I found out that we were to be the servants and babysitters of these infuriating little brats. We, who were created first, had been turned into little more than slaves. I confronted him about it..." *Mar's tone has turned quite bitter. "...and He spoke to me like I was second-rate disoedient trash. It was the last straw. Later...when I found out the worst of it...I tried to steal something and take control of the situation myself. I was, for this action, kicked out of my own home and stripped of my very essence, so that I'm nothing more than a bloody shell of myself. Fun life, that."

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« Reply #2854 on: July 06, 2009, 10:38:40 PM »
"Oh," Kara seems unsure how to react to this rant. Nothing seems quite appropriate.

"I'm sorry..." she settles for, falling back into silence and pondering Mar's story. Could he be telling the truth? All this banter about souls and immortality? Could it be true? Was it really any more farfetched than believing in aliens, when you got down to it?

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #2855 on: July 06, 2009, 10:44:24 PM »
Zoshonel leaped up, and speread his wings wide. He didn't fly, but he hovered in midair just above Gaz. he made a dive for her shoulders as she lunged at him, while trying to keep the blades at bay with his gauntlets. His hide was tough, but he would still preffer to block with the gauntlets, as that was the whole point of them. And that steel talons are sharper than regular talons.


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #2856 on: July 06, 2009, 11:03:56 PM »
Gaz had grabbed a second cutlass from the ground and was using it to block the talons while the second blade was swung around. She was trying to decide how long she waited before she truly went into the pirate style.

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« Reply #2857 on: July 06, 2009, 11:11:05 PM »
Mar blinks. "First time anyone has said that in response to what happened to me. I suppose it doesn't excuse my current behavior but I have hardly given up. I still believe mortals to be a race that needs to be controlled in some way by higher creatures. Although...through my actions I have found potential in their tendency to survive in adversity."

Mar glances at Kara, smiling. ".....few people have asked me without hostile intent for that story, you know."

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #2858 on: July 06, 2009, 11:14:38 PM »
"Grrr." Zoshonel growled. Gaz had blocked his attack, and was moving to strike. Hanging in midair, he would have to give up his position to prevent the attack. He flapped his large wings, which to gaz may have been pretty strong, and fell back. He considered using his breath for a moment, but a Draksar doesn't normally use their breath attack liberally. Still, a small tuft of smoke escaped his lips. He began circling Gaz, looking for the next place to strike.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #2859 on: July 06, 2009, 11:29:45 PM »
Gaz watched her opponent, keeping her cutlasses up and ready.

"I'm surprised she hasn't tried to cheat," Fletcher said.

"For a pirate, you sure don't act like one!" Gaz retorted.

"Yo ho ho," Fletcher replied. "Better?"

Gaz wasn't listening as she swung one of the cutlasses at her opponent's back.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #2860 on: July 06, 2009, 11:38:46 PM »
He lashed out with his tail, attempting to strike her hand. If he could remove her weapon, she would be less dangerous. at the very least, an injured hand is less helpful in a fight.

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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #2861 on: July 07, 2009, 12:20:27 AM »
((Yes totally join us Blue!  You can be whatever you want and you don't even really have to worry about reading a kajillion pages, just jump right in as if you were walking into a bar of people you didn't know, all of whom may or may not want to destroy you, depending on how good you are with words :D ))

"Ardiss is going to need Kandrona if she's going to wait five days for a host," says Corliss.  "I have a spare but I can't afford to give her all of my supply.  It looks like the portable generator in that little makeshift pool has run out of juice, so she should be okay for two and a half-ish days.  Besides, Myitt's gone to see if she can stay with us.  She should be back within a day or so.

"But Ardiss,"  he continues, addressing the computerized pool Ardiss is in, "you should know that if you stay with us you probably won't receive a new host.  At least not right away."  He watches most of the bar leave to participate in some kind of sparring match, and he grins at the bartender.  "I'll have another pint, please."

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Deep underground, not terribly far from the Space Bar, there's an efficiently run hive of Yeerk separatists.

Grey tunnels of rock, partly blasted, partly dug by Taxxon, partly revived from an old mining operation that had already existed--the whole complex took a long time to build and stock and takes a lot of energy to run.  

It takes even more energy and forethought to move such an operation elsewhere.

Rocky hallways hum with the energy of the force fields that are occasionally required to keep such a structure intact.  People, mostly human but Hork-Bajir, Taxxon, Gedd and even a few other creatures far stranger, walk or scuttle through the base, going about their business.  Their lives.

There's a room off of one of the hallways, near one of the metal dropshafts.  The door is unremarkable; black, standard Yeerkish living metal, but older--almost laughably like one of the sliding doors out of a 1960s human science fiction drama.

Behind it is the war room.  At least, one of several.

In this room there are only two people.  One is Myitt, who appears to have actually taken a shower--if her noticeably cleaner hair is any evidence.  Her jacket is still just as messy, sewn and patched, and her injured arm has had actual medical treatment, sitting in a sling.

The other is a boy no older than 15, very Irish, pale with freckles and red hair.  His name is James O'Reilly, and he's pretty smart for 15.  But the person talking is Reven Five-Nine-Nine.  He is wearing an unassuming faded black uniform, and he is the closest thing to an official leader that this very cooperative operation has.

"I don't think you understand the gravity of the situation," says Reven, looking up at Myitt from his seat at the side of a black metal table.  "As I've said, even if this Ardiss creature has had her memories altered, even if all of her memories were erased, there is always the very small--"

"Infinitesimally small," Myitt interjects.

"--but very real risk of a relapse.  And as it stands, she is sitting at an irreputable bar filled with anyone who could've been watching and might want to extract what fragments of Tara's memory she has left."

"Rev, I get that it's dangerous, that's why I'm here," says Myitt, irritated.  "She's in good hands right now.  Corliss is there.  My friends are there.  Besides, if she's taken here as quickly as possible we can keep her under observation before she's allowed to receive a new host.  I'm pretty sure that's what Temrash will want to do, judging from his opinion of us keeping her imprisoned here."

"And you expect me to devote our resources to keeping a security threat alive within the walls of this facility?" Reven demands.

Myitt paces, frustrated.  "No.  But none of us can bring ourselves to kill a helpless prisoner.  Isn't that one of our tenets that makes us, you know, different from the Empire?"

"Yes, Myitt, but I think it's clear that she can't be allowed to live.  Unless you can ensure that her memories are entirely wiped, and that she still doesn't receive a host."  Reven crosses his arms.  "I can't allow Ardiss to remain here.  Myitt, we've grown up together.  I trust your judgement.  But do not let that creature leave that forsaken place if there is any chance she knows where we're located."

Myitt considers this.  Temrash did supposedly wipe all of Tara's memories from Ardiss' mind...

"What about the host?  The human girl, Kara?"

"She can stay here, if that's what she really wants," says Reven.

"She doesn't have a home, otherwise," Myitt says flatly.

"Then see what she says, if she agrees, we can try to find someplace for her to sleep."

Myitt nods faintly.  "Thank you, Reven.  I'll see what I can do."

Reven smiles a little, looking much older than 15.  "Just be careful out there.  I don't understand why you like that place so much."

His sibling grins and nods, stepping back out and along the hallways toward the docking bays.  

As she climbs into her ship, a mechanic friend of hers grabs her attention.  "Myitt, your ship checks out okay, but there's a weird heat signal coming from the lower hull," says Geltran, a male Hork-Bajir Controller.  His Galard is quite good after years of practice.  "You should check out your ship's logs, I ran a diagnostic on it.  Hope it's not space mites."

"I'll take a look," Myitt says, taking some of her tools back from Geltran and wiping grease onto her blue jeans.  "Thanks for helping me keep this hunk of junk flying."

"Anytime," says Geltran with a Hork-Bajir grin that would scare even the most hardy of teenage horror movie fans.

Myitt checks her systems and lifts off, reading the ship's logs carefully as the ship rises vertically through a black cylindrical tunnel, out into the thin atmosphere of their moon.



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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #2862 on: July 07, 2009, 12:39:18 AM »
"This container I have her in has a Kandrona energy cell that should last another few weeks. Then I have more. She'll last as long as it takes. And I thought you didn't want to take her back to your hideout? Or did I misunderstand? Well, there's still time to decide which direction to take her, but the Human that's coming will be willing to take anyone, as long as they don't treat her like complete trash. From what I hear, she has some self esteem issues, but her first Yeerk found her cooperative as long as she believed she was valued by someone."


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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #2863 on: July 07, 2009, 04:16:13 AM »
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Re: Galaxy's Edge Space Bar
« Reply #2864 on: July 07, 2009, 04:50:04 AM »
Ossanlin looks around the bar and watches the dragon-like creature leave with the pirate.  Strange, the creature resembled the beings from Draconiss, but was different in some small fashions.  He didn't think he knew which particular species this was, or if he'd ever encountered it before.  But then the galaxy was nearly infinite in life and he couldn't expect to know even a thousandth of it.  He notices that the humans in the drinking competition have seemed to zone out, or were possibly drunk to the point of passing out.  He did not know, but decided to do something unethical.  Alic had made him feel a bit of a rebel, he was afraid some of her attitude was rubbing off on him.  He managed to find some exposed skin on each man around the neck-joint of their strange armor and acquired all three in turn, mixing their DNA to create one unique human with mixed traits of each.

<Well Aliciania, I suppose I have a human morph now, but I don't have any clothing.  I'm afraid it wouldn't pass to be a naked human here.  It might be looked down upon.>  He chuckles a bit and joins Alic by the bar.  <The human mouth seems quite enjoyable, I'd love to try it out.>



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Seran continues to recover in his partially-wrecked ship on his way to the nearest Yeerkish repair facility, still some hours away with the current configuration of Z-Space.  He's entered his host again and sits at a console in the med-bay, still the only chamber secured with atmosphere.  His O2 generators were starting to give out, he might indeed have to put his host into a stasis-pod and enter the pool again.  But at the moment, his only concern is on a small holographic blip heading away from the acursed Space Bar...Myitt's ship.

Seran grins to himself, a truly scary thing given his hork-bajir host.  It had been but a faint hope...she had not scanned her hull.  His chuckle turns into an open laugh that fills his med-bay.  The blip disappears...a signal-dampening field most-likely, or matter thick enough in heavy minerals to muffle or shroud a z-space transmission.

"So little bird, this is your roost..."  Seran slides his clawed hands over the holographic display above the console and saves the location in his computer's memory. 

After some time, and just as Seran starts to move to place his host in a stasis pod, the blip returns in the same location on his holographic star-chart.  "A few calculations will narrow it down, and you'll be mine.  I won't need to kill any superior Vissers if I hand them your entire rebellion on a platter!  Oh Myitt, Myitt, Myitt...your little star-base will soon be the site of a new story...The Empire Strikes Back."  Seran's bellowing laugh drowns out every other sound in the med-bay.
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