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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #60 on: August 15, 2008, 09:01:20 PM »
Thanks, Anna! ;D
I just hope that Shanker and Richard like them, too.

I know Shanker likes Adams (so do I, in a big way), and Miltonian concepts started popping into it (with ME writing it, how could they NOT?!), so it came out a bit like Milton's-Lucifer-meets-a-very-p***ed-off-but-self-satisfied-Arthur Dent-with-a-little-Ford Prefect-thrown-into-the-mix.

As for Richard...I'm fairly satisfied with it, but I won't be sure of how much farther to take that particular segment until I have some feedback, good or otherwise, from the man himself.
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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #61 on: August 15, 2008, 09:10:15 PM »
omg, that was amazing. its like exactly how i think too
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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #62 on: August 15, 2008, 09:11:54 PM »
REALLY?!?!

*explodes with astonished glee*

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AWESOME!!! Thanks, Shanker!!
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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #63 on: August 15, 2008, 09:29:48 PM »
This may not get finished tonight.
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PhoenixEsplin
An acrostic contrast of two voices.
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Perhaps you haven't earned my complete trust yet;
However, you might just have my respect.
Only time will tell, but we have all the time in the world.
Eternity is right now; infinity is right here.
Nothing is impossible, just improbable.
I burn with a different kind of fire, and I will NOT be
Xtinguished.


Everyone has a dark, cold, and dangerous side, a bright and sun-lit side, and
Some grey shadows in the space between them, a place that isn't day or night.
People in general aren't entirely or even mostly one way, I've decided.
Lots of you spend your time walking in shadow, unable to choose, unwilling to change.
I refuse to conform to your stereotypes. I make my own choices, and
Nothing can hold me back or keep me down
.
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See if you can spot the hidden words!
« Last Edit: August 16, 2008, 01:02:25 PM by Estelore »
The universe is, instant by instant, re-created anew. There is, in truth, no Past, only a memory of the Past. Blink your eyes, and the world you see next did not exist when you closed them. The only appropriate state of the mind is surprise. The only appropriate state of the heart is joy. The sky you see now, you have never seen before. The perfect moment is now. Be glad of it.

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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #64 on: August 16, 2008, 01:29:16 PM »
Blue---
Blue is the sea and the sky,
the centre of a storm cloud,
true-blue, navy blue, eggshell blue,
the star-studded blue field of Heaven.

Blue velvet, a midnight horizon,
blue violets, firmly rooted to the Earth,
eager blue eyes, ready for any challenge,
all blue is alike, and all is utterly different.

If I could,
I'd gather up all the blue in the world,
and I'd pour it all into a great glass bottle of blue.

Then, when someone feels sad, I'd give them a little blue
to tell how they felt.

When someone felt so happy that they could fly,
I'd fold up some paper wings for them and give them blue feathers,
and they would hit the skies without a second thought.

Every once in awhile, I'd give everyone a blue moon,
to remind them that anything can happen.

I'd remind them, too, not to take their rainbows for granted.

Most of all, though, I'd like
for just one whole day,
to make EVERYONE turn blue.
Then, they'd all be the same,
but still stay themselves,
and nobody would ever
fight or hate,
and no one would ever
have to be alone again.

Then, when someone says, "I'm feeling blue",
they'd mean that they feel like Heaven.
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The universe is, instant by instant, re-created anew. There is, in truth, no Past, only a memory of the Past. Blink your eyes, and the world you see next did not exist when you closed them. The only appropriate state of the mind is surprise. The only appropriate state of the heart is joy. The sky you see now, you have never seen before. The perfect moment is now. Be glad of it.

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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #65 on: August 16, 2008, 03:14:43 PM »
Ah I loved them Estemoolore!! The Mike/Esplin ones seemed to fit real well.
And the Blue one was beautiful, Estemoolore. Awesome writing as usual.

Anna is gonna start a Estelore's Poetry fan club, mmk? Chyeah.

Hehe I spotted thee hidden words. Go Anna.

I can still remember the words and what they meant.
As we etched them with our fingers, In years of wet cement.
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And I feel tonight that I let you die, but you could've lived forever it's the smiles that keep you alive.

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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #66 on: August 16, 2008, 04:38:16 PM »
Awww, thanks!
Go Anna, indeed.  ;)

Fan club? Well, if you INSTIST.... ::)
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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #67 on: August 16, 2008, 04:40:40 PM »
Eh, only as long as Anna gets to be president of it...

I can still remember the words and what they meant.
As we etched them with our fingers, In years of wet cement.
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And I feel tonight that I let you die, but you could've lived forever it's the smiles that keep you alive.

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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #68 on: August 16, 2008, 04:42:34 PM »
Of course. ;)
The universe is, instant by instant, re-created anew. There is, in truth, no Past, only a memory of the Past. Blink your eyes, and the world you see next did not exist when you closed them. The only appropriate state of the mind is surprise. The only appropriate state of the heart is joy. The sky you see now, you have never seen before. The perfect moment is now. Be glad of it.

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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #69 on: August 16, 2008, 07:53:32 PM »
Now I shall refresh the list, so I don't need to go back to page 4 every time I wish to check it.

Jayne
Phoenix
Duff
Anna
Shanker
Tyler
Toomin
John
Ken
Morfowt
Blue
Richard
Estelore
Claire
Touquie
Dameg
Jen
Esplin
Charlie
Mr.Guy
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The universe is, instant by instant, re-created anew. There is, in truth, no Past, only a memory of the Past. Blink your eyes, and the world you see next did not exist when you closed them. The only appropriate state of the mind is surprise. The only appropriate state of the heart is joy. The sky you see now, you have never seen before. The perfect moment is now. Be glad of it.

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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #70 on: August 17, 2008, 08:56:01 PM »
Touquie
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I stand here alone
on the borderland of dreaming,
watching my memories burning.
Page by page,
one piece at a time,
words and images
fall into the fire.

Every memory pales
against that last memory of you.
Everything else is burnt away,
next to a memory that never happened...
could never be allowed to happen.

I wait here alone
at the end of memory,
watching my dreams fade.
One by one,
each new idea,
each picture and each epic thought
dissolves and vanishes.

No dream can stand against
the dream that I will see you again,
happy and whole...
even if it means being happy...
being whole...
 
without me.

I sit here alone,
surrounded by the world,
watching you
as you wait for your dreams to come true.
I'd build those dreams for you, if I could,
if you'd let me,
but right now,
the most that I can do
is hope that you never have to learn
of my decision...

my sacrifice.
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The universe is, instant by instant, re-created anew. There is, in truth, no Past, only a memory of the Past. Blink your eyes, and the world you see next did not exist when you closed them. The only appropriate state of the mind is surprise. The only appropriate state of the heart is joy. The sky you see now, you have never seen before. The perfect moment is now. Be glad of it.

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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #71 on: August 17, 2008, 09:33:33 PM »
Wow...I didn't think that you could capture what I was going through but you have.

I'm not sure how to describe how I feel.  This catapults me back to when I was most emotional about the situation.  Things have changed and I've begun to move on but it still stings.

Today I came across a picture of her and her boyfriend.  They look happy together.  I'm trying to be supportive of them but...

Thank-you for writing this.  It's beautiful.  But it hurts.
I'm RAFmarried to my Pookie, Charlie ;D

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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #72 on: August 17, 2008, 11:31:27 PM »
That's really pretty Estemoolore.

I can still remember the words and what they meant.
As we etched them with our fingers, In years of wet cement.
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And I feel tonight that I let you die, but you could've lived forever it's the smiles that keep you alive.

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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #73 on: August 18, 2008, 07:17:45 AM »
Thanks, Anna.

Touquie, thank YOU for being such a brave, strong, and all-around good person.
As for the writing...if I knew a way to take "you're welcome" and "thank you" and "I'm sorry; please forgive me", and roll them all into one sentiment...y'know? :-\
If you ever need someone to listen, I'm here, and I can understand your situation as well (or maybe better) as anyone here. :hug2:

Anyway, thanks for the comments, folks. I appreciate it. :)
The universe is, instant by instant, re-created anew. There is, in truth, no Past, only a memory of the Past. Blink your eyes, and the world you see next did not exist when you closed them. The only appropriate state of the mind is surprise. The only appropriate state of the heart is joy. The sky you see now, you have never seen before. The perfect moment is now. Be glad of it.

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Re: Estelore's Poetry
« Reply #74 on: August 19, 2008, 02:17:34 PM »
DamegCharlie
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You are always so happy to see me,
and sometimes I wonder why you should feel that way.
If you could see inside my head,
I think that the darkness would frighten you away.

For me, darkness is warm and welcoming,
a calm and gentle night that ends too soon.


Daylight burns, and the world flies,
hot and fast past my window.

I watch the world rushing by me,
throught the streets that run
like a labyrinth below me.


I will watch for you tonight, by the river at midnight.

When night falls again,
time breaks down into little pieces,
and I can watch each second as it passes,
glistening and perfect in the moonlight.

I will wait here by the river,
where the street lights don't touch me,
and I'll watch that silver road flow through the night,
carrying dreams and silence into the sleeping city.
There, on the river, I will see you walking the dream-road,
and I will join you in dreaming.



I will walk with you tonight, during the blue time.
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Okay, this poem needs a little bit of explanation, I think.
At first, this poem was ONLY about Dameg...and then suddenly the words 'blue time' popped up at the end, and I re-read it. I realised that I had written it in two voices, which had disguised themselves as the same voice. Upon the second reading, I KNEW that the second voice just HAD to be Charlie.

See, I LOVE Scott Westerfeld's Midnighters trilogy, and I know that Charlie does, too. If you search for "midnighters" in this site, all but three hits in the first set of results are from Charlie's posts.
So, Charlie, I think that you will understand what I mean when I say that I wrote Dameg as a Jessica-figure in this piece, and I wrote you, Charlie, as a Beth/Dess/Jonathan figure, visiting her in the Blue Time every chance that you get.
Dameg and Charlie always seemed like precise opposites to me: Charlie is quite young, but Dameg is one of the older RAFians; Charlie is equal parts cheerful and fierce, but Dameg is always either totally friendly OR totally ferocious in defending her opinions, and never both at the same time. Dameg says that she is a sad and quiet person in the Real World, but she is always pleasant and lively here. Charlie, on the other hand, seems to treat RAFians exactly the way she'd treat people in the Real World.

I couldn't help myself from playing off of those contrasts.
I hope that you like it. :)
The universe is, instant by instant, re-created anew. There is, in truth, no Past, only a memory of the Past. Blink your eyes, and the world you see next did not exist when you closed them. The only appropriate state of the mind is surprise. The only appropriate state of the heart is joy. The sky you see now, you have never seen before. The perfect moment is now. Be glad of it.

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