(I think I have latest midnight then since I live in Utah so it is 9:20 right now or so here so about 5pm then in the game. I really think that it is hard to do good action going in real time and that the action times spend allot but then having a big break between the different action sequences that is 1-2 weeks in game time, how ever long it takes for any one to get a anew idea to start. I have a good ending to this sequence if it would be fine to bust it out and end this quick.)
The Ship:
"Beep, beep, beep, beep," the computer chimed progressively getting louder and faster, indicating Montana was closing in.
"This is the longest, it has ever taken him to get to us," Alex commented to Todd.
"Let's close in for a pickup," Todd replied to his little brother.
Montana:
The ship was moving, but Montana was running so hard that he couldn't think quite straight, and didn't notice it and ran right past it.
The Ship:
"WHATS HE DOING?" Alex yelled at Todd.
"I don't know," replied his brother, in a rather similar tone, "Let's just follow him."
Montana:
He was closing in on one of the people who had followed the his saviors. Swipe... In a burst of instinct he slashed at the person with his arm blade, that had just popped out, taking his head off in one clean move. The others ran away before he could get to doing any thing with them, scattering like ****roaches.
"WOLF MAN!" he called out, trying to see if they were okay.
The Ship:
Tseew, Tseew, Tseew. Three power full shot's blasted the Hope of Flossan, causing it to crashing into some of the few solitary trees near the waters edge.
"Ahhhhhhhhhaa," screamed Alex, as he tried desperately to correct the course. But utterly over calculating he caused them to fall in to the water shorting the exposed wiring and making the terminals explode knocking Alex out, and killing Todd.
(Feel free to explain what the ship firing on the the Hope of Flossan was, it could have been a good guy or a bad guy)