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My Name Is...
« on: September 11, 2008, 04:02:52 PM »
My name is irrelevant.

I am a common American citizen, native to Los Angeles, of which the population is vast and diverse. I do not stand out among said population. I am not famous nor well known. I am not wealthy, although I am not exactly poor. I have few friends, and many acquaintances. I live in a one room apartment, with my pet dog, and no one else. I have a car. It's black.

I am not special in any way, shape or form. But that doesn't matter because the story I am here to tell you about does not concern me. So I will tell you again, just so you don't feel the urge to ask... MY NAME DOES NOT MATTER.

To be honest, I wish I could tell you my name is Jake. Or Tobias. Or Marco. If I had been born with breasts, maybe I could call myself Cassie or Rachel. If I was the younger brother of an extremely heroic but now dead alien prince, I would gladly say my name is Aximili-Esgarrouth-Isthill. These are the names of those who truly matter.

I hate you...

Long ago, almost a decade now, these five teenagers decided to take a shortcut through an abandoned construction site, and just like that there lives where changed forever. They crossed paths with an Andalite prince named Elfangor whose battle ship had taken serious damage and fallen from the sky. He too was injured with little time to live. Before he was devoured by the tyrant Visser 3, leader of the Yeerk invasion on Earth, he gave these children a gift. A gift that was forbidden to be given by any of his kind. The power to morph.

With this act, he placed not only power in the hands of these children but also fear, pressure, pain, despair and enormous responsibility. It was the biggest one-sided battle in history. Six against thousands. NO ONE could expect to survive, let alone succeed.

Upsets make the game of fate interesting.

**** You!

It's the same for me. I told you my life was not interesting and that much is true. But life is full of twists and turns. Until now the river has flowed steady, but I feel the rapids approaching. I hear the thunder of a waterfall in the distance. And I'm real ****ing excited.

I got off the bus at my usual stop on a street corner that had seen better days. The cracked sidewalk and broken street lamps told me the direction fate had chosen to take this miserable neighborhood. A homeless man sat among the flies near a dumpster. As I walked by, I dropped a one hundred dollar bill in his can. He grunted a thank you, not caring to look at what he figured was probably a common single.

I smiled as I stepped to the rusted door hidden in the shade of an alleyway. I like to play games too fate.

I reached for the doorbell and pressed.

DIE!

My hand lurched violently and I doubled over. ****! This was the wrong time for this to be happening.

Die...please die... you filthy, dirty Y-

Suddenly the door cracked open. A lone eye shone in the dark.

"Your late."

I shrugged trying to regain my composure. "Aren't I always?"

The door opened and I walked in a little unsteadily. It had been a while since I had last visited the pool and my host was getting feisty.
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Re: My Name Is...
« Reply #1 on: September 11, 2008, 07:04:45 PM »
omg, this is awesome, KEEP WRITING!
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Re: My Name Is...
« Reply #2 on: September 14, 2008, 10:59:10 PM »

I followed the burly bodyguard down a shadowed hallway lined with miniscule lamps that looked like fireflies.  On the way we passed by several windowless doors, most of which I had never been through. I always wondered what happened behind those doors. Sometimes, if you strained your ears, you could catch small fragments of conversation. Sometimes you even heard screams. Heh.

"Here we go."

We reached our door and the bodyguard placed his hand on a blank panel where the knob should have been. Like always, the door first illuminated itself, and then vanished as if it were never there in the first place. Now there was only a hole in the wall with a stairway leading downward into a dark abyss.

"After you." I smiled but he roughly pushed me in and turned away.

"Only you this time." he grunted and I watched him fade as the door re-solidified itself.

Down I went feeling as if I was diving deep into the bottom of a lake. The darkness enveloped me and I walked on with only the sounds of my footsteps and the angry cries of my host to keep me company.

No! No, no, no, no, no! Why don't you just die. Please die.

"I'll die when fate wants me to," I spoke out loud to him.  "Just as you will get your freedom when fate decides it's time."  His rants had began to become annoying, like the constant buzzing of a mosquito.

I reached the bottom. It was so pitch black that couldn't see my own hand in front of my face. I never really got used to that, no matter how many times I came here.

Out of the darkness came the quiet but firm voice of our mysterious leader.

"You're late."

"He's always late." Another voice, female, easily recognizable.

"I apologize."

A snort.

"I'm sorry too."  A man, younger. "Sorry you made it here at all." There was a definite anger in his voice. I couldn't blame him. He had spent three years under the control of one of my own.

"Let's put past prejudices behind us." The leader.

"Why should we not worry about the past?" I wondered out loud. "If we plan to travel there, that is?"

Although blind, I could still sense the grin on our leader's face.

"Your eager. I was too when it was my first time. But take it easy. Before you know it, you'll regret it."
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Re: My Name Is...
« Reply #3 on: November 16, 2008, 08:33:50 PM »
That night I sat looking out of the window of my one room apartment. I lived on the top floor, so I sometimes enjoyed going up to the rooftop to scan the sky for stars. I never had much luck – one of the misfortunes of living in the city. Tonight, looked no different from the other nights, I could see that from my window, so I didn’t bother taking the trip.
Besides, it was cold out.

I sighed, lounging back in my chair, and switched on the television screen. I figured I would get some time to rest my head before the mission. My host was being unusually quiet, although the trip to the pool two hours ago would have been enough to demoralize him. To tell the truth, I admired his fighting spirit – but hearing somebody constantly screaming insults at you and being unable to block them out, well, that would drive anybody crazy.

“Oh!” I had forgotten about the special.

“His name was Jake Berenson.” The female narrator on the television spoke his name with awe and aspiration. “He was the leader of the resistance, the only hope for mankind on this earth. He was a soldier, a rebel, a captain and a hero. And he was only sixteen. But how much do we really know about this young freedom fighter? What made this teen so different from the rest that he could bear the harsh burden of fighting an almost impossible war for three years and eventually arise as the savior of our planet Earth? In the 2 years before his departure we sought Jake Berenson out to ask him this question…”

I watched a video of a tall, broad-shouldered young man walking quickly as a crowd of reporters worse than Britney Spear’s paparazzi chased behind him, hailing a multitude of questions:
“Where have you been all this time Mr.Berneson?”
“Is it true that you that have reestablished your relationship with Cassie Roundtree?”
“When will you be ready to do a public interview?”
“Can I get your autograph!?”
“Can you tell us your story?”

Mr. Berenson turned around swiftly, his brown hair whipping in the wind. He stared at the crowd with dark, emotionless eyes.
“My story? The only stories I have to tell, I already told. There are certain things I can never speak of. You want more? Go find Marco.”
He turned away leaving the crowd to pursue him once again.

I cracked up open a Coke and sipped. “Is that all Jake?” I said out loud to myself. “We’ll see.”

<You certainly will.>

I jumped, spilling soda all over my jeans. A creature similar to a centaur with blue fur, four eyes and a bladed tail stood in the middle of my kitchen. An Andalite.

“Jesus.” I sighed. “You’re early.”

< Really? I must have lost track of the time.>

“How long have you been spying on me?” I asked casually, as I walked over and grabbed the paper towels off the counter.

<Excuse me?> His stalk eyes swiveled into an angry arch.

I smirked. “Andalites have a annoyingly accurate time frame. It’s speculated that’s how the Animorphs were able to track their time in morph during missions. Soda?” I offered him the can.

His stalk eyes drooped slightly. <You’ve done some research human. But my love of human sweets won’t tempt me into abandoning my present form, lest I leave myself defenseless. And yes, I find it necessary to examine my clients before transactions. Trust is an issue among all beings, Andalite and human.>

Yeerk as well, I thought. But if you knew my true identity your tail would have slit my throat by now.

“So?” I said cheerfully. “Am I still worthy of the deal?”

<I don’t deem anybody truly worthy of what I’m about to give you. But your leader has convinced me that the cause is for the greater good.>

“Oh?” I laughed, sipping my Coke again. “Here I thought you were just in it for the money.”

The Andalite smiled in that strange way that they do with their eyes.

<Money, like trust, speaks a universal language.>

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Re: My Name Is...
« Reply #4 on: November 17, 2008, 10:43:25 AM »
wow this is really good, great job so far, its still pretty early to tell exactly what its about lol but i love the angle and your writing is really entertaining, keep it up

Aximili-Esgarrouth-Isthill lol sorry, had to

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Re: My Name Is...
« Reply #5 on: November 17, 2008, 11:00:42 AM »
lol thanks man, yea i was too lazy to look up the correct spelling of the name and forgot to change it later.

Thanks for the feedback tho :)
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Re: My Name Is...
« Reply #6 on: November 18, 2008, 05:28:35 PM »
“So this is it?”

“Yes.”

On my coffee table sat a yellow square chip, slightly larger than a poppy seed. “Smaller than I thought it would be.” I said bringing my eyes closer.

“Power does not always come in big sizes.” I heard the sound of my own voice reply. “Thank you for allowing me to borrow your DNA.”

I looked over to find myself—or rather a copy of myself—counting a thick wad of green bills. “Didn’t really have much choice did I?” I said somewhat begrudgingly. It was the price to pay for this gift. “Feel free to use my apartment while I’m gone.”

The newly morphed Andalite took a sweeping glance around the room. “Don’t think me rude if I pass on the offer.”

I shrugged. “Suit yourself.”

“I may, however, take you up again on the drink.”

“I knew an Andalite could not resist the sweet flavor of Coca-Cola.” I said as I picked up the chip with a pair of tweezers and placed in a zip-lock bag. “Want a shot of whiskey with that?”

“Whiskey? I believe I have heard of it….doesn’t it poison the mind?” He eyed me suspiciously.

“Doesn’t everything? One shot of whiskey with Coke coming up.”

The Andalite enjoyed the taste on his tongue more so than the buzz of the alcohol I thought in the hour to past. Either way, after a few drinks his mood had lightened. It was strange to see an image of myself smiling content on the sofa… like staring into a mirror of my own past.

When I was free.

Wait…not me. My host’s past. The life that was not mine. My past was in a pool beneath the earth.

My life! Mine! You stole it!

My fingers writhed uncontrollably. My glass tipped over, slipping Coke and whiskey onto the coffee table. The Andalite sat up.

“Something wrong?” His supsicions had arisen again.

“The alcohol.” I lied quickly. “It sometimes has this effect.”

“It’s an interesting drink. Coke tastes better though.”

I forced a laugh and changed the subject. “I’m curious. How does this time travel work?”

His—my—my host’s—brow furrowed at the question. “I’m not entirely sure. Science was never my strong field. But I believe it has something to do the transferring of matter to Z-space.”

“Isn’t that how morphing works?” I asked intrigued.

“Yes. When morphing a smaller organism the excess matter is sent to Z-space. Seems that the creators of the Experiment discovered a way to completely transfer all of a being’s matter to Z-space…and have it return at a different timeline.”

“But how does…” I began.

“I do not know.” The Andalite suddenly grew very serious. “It is not my field. I should be going. My time in morph is running out and I plan to use the front door this time. Thank you for the delicious drink.”

I let him out the front door and watched as he made his way down the stairwell.

“What are you afraid of?” I called to him.

The Andalite stopped on the bottom stair and turned to face me. He stared directly into my eyes.

< There is a myth among my people about a race of beings known as the Ellimists. They were told to have had the power to shift time and space itself. They created a object, known as the Time Matrix, and it was not meant for the hands of those who could not understand the consequences. Now I don’t understand. I don’t pretend to. And I don’t believe in legends either. But your leader seems to think himself a Ellimist. His purpose is to defeat evil, but he can’t transcend what he is. He is a human. He does not control time. What you and leader purpose to do is well-meaning, but I fear what the consequences will be if you fail. And I don’t want a hand in that. Good bye.>

And he left.