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Re: Animorphs Travels
« Reply #15 on: August 27, 2008, 10:11:32 PM »
CHAPTER 14: Escape from the Darkness

(MIKE’S POV)

Whoever said that the eyes are the windows to the soul definitely had the right idea. I decided that as soon as I saw Visser Three close up for the first time. He may have had an Andalite body, very similar to Elfangor’s, but there was an evil presence that emanated from him. You could see it in his eyes. A darkness.

One of the Taxxon Controllers next to Visser Three started talking in a bizarre insect language. It was complete gibberish to me of course, but clearly the Visser understood what he meant.

<This Taxxon fool says you are wild animals,> Visser Three explained. <He wants to know if he and his brothers can eat you.> He laughed. <But I know you are not animals. I know who and what you are. So, not all of you died when I burned your ship.>

That assumption will be your downfall Visser. I thought to myself. As long as he mistakenly believed us all to be Andalites, we would be safe… sort of.

As Visser Three began to morph, he said something about acquiring the beast he was becoming on the fourth moon of the second planet of a dying sun. I guess that was supposed to impress us all in some way. To be honest he could have morphed something he found on Pluto and I wouldn’t have cared. The only thing that I was worried about was the fact that the creature he was turning into would have eight arms, eight legs, eight heads and the ability to shoot fire at anything he didn’t like.

I was seeing a creature not found in most people’s darkest nightmares. It was so terrifying to look at that even his Hork-Bajir guards backed away fearfully, not wanting to get hit in the crossfire. The Taxxons were less concerned, or maybe they were scared too but their hunger was stronger. The ever hungry Taxxons knew that fresh meat would soon be available. Somehow I doubted they would be put off by barbequed flesh.

Man I wish I’d acquired something bigger, I thought nervously as I stared at Visser Three’s morphed body, which even managed to dwarf Rachel’s Elephant morph.

<Run!> Jake yelled. <Up the stairs!>

No arguments here. I raced for the stairs as fast as I could manage with my wounded shoulder. The Dracon burn still hurt, but it was only a superficial injury and (thankfully) didn’t hinder me much. I only hoped that I could make it out without suffering any further damage.

<Yes, run,> Visser Three sneered. <It makes a more challenging target.>Visser Three then, quite literally, opened fire.

“Ahhhhhhhhhh!” Visser Three hit one of the two people riding on Cassie’s back with a large fireball. With my enhanced Jaguar senses, I could even smell the flesh burning as the poor woman fell off Cassie’s back and landed in the murky Yeerk Pool. Cassie must have been scared, but she kept on going with just the one remaining rider.

<Target practice!> Visser Three laughed manically as he continued to hurl fireballs, filling the underground cavern with deadly flames wherever they struck. I felt like I was going to be deafened by the screams of terror. There were even cries of pain in my head whenever my fellow Animorphs were hit by Visser Three’s fireballs.

As we reached the stairs, I noticed that Rachel starting to demorph slightly in order to fit her massive Elephant body up the steps. That made me a little more grateful that I hadn’t morphed anything as large as an Elephant. Being a Jaguar certainly helped when it came to speed and agility. Sadly, the hosts we’d freed from the cages weren’t so lucky. Only a handful of Humans and a pair of Hork-Bajir were still with us, as the rest had been burned or re-captured.

<Burn Andalite filth!>

Visser Three unleashed another round of fireballs, taking out the last of the freed Hork-Bajir and hitting my left hind leg. I roared in pain and rage, and before I realised what I was doing I had turned round and pounced on one of the few Hork-Bajir Controllers who had been brave (or stupid) enough to put themselves in the Visser’s line of fire. Alien blood spurted from the Hork-Bajir’s chest as it fell back down the stairs.

However, this still wasn’t enough to stop some of the other Hork-Bajir and Human Controllers from pursuing us. I guess they assumed that Visser Three would kill them anyway if they let the Andalite bandits escape. Although they were probably right, they were in just as much danger of getting hit by the balls of flame that the Visser was still throwing at us, since the Visser was infamous for not caring about the deaths of his own troops.

I let loose another roar to make the Controllers behind us think twice and then continued the journey up the stairs. Looking ahead, I saw that Cassie had nearly made it to safety, but the rest of the Animorphs and the few rescued Humans who were still with us had a while to go yet before we were out of the Visser’s reach. Visser Three’s massive form wouldn’t be able to make it to the top of the stairs.

<You won’t get away that easily Andalites!> Visser Three shouted before firing a barrage of fireballs at the stairs ahead of us, making them burn. We were trapped! Trapped between a wall of fire and a freak of nature.

“No you filthy creep, you aren’t going to win this time!” Tom yelled before charging at Visser Three. Alone and unarmed, Tom attacked a beast that was probably one of the most deadly creatures in the galaxy. It was the bravest thing I’d ever seen.

<Tom!> Jake cried out for his brother, but it was too late to save him. Visser Three lashed out with one of his giant arms and knocked Tom off the stairs. He was unconscious but clearly still breathing.

It was then that Jake went ballistic. He dived at the Visser, tearing at the alien body and ripping out the throat of one of its many heads. Desperate to shake him off, Visser Three started throwing fire everywhere again. Jake dodged the first few shots before his flank got badly burned. Some of the fireballs continued up the stairs, heading for the last remaining humans we’d freed from the cages! Blood curdling screams filled the air as their flesh burned and withered. Even if they survived, they would simply be re-infested. I couldn’t bear to watch it happen.

This is going to hurt! I thought as I jumped as high as I could into the path of the last fireball. It struck me hard in the back and I screamed in agony as I felt, heard and smelled my fur and skin scorching away. Ever accidentally burnt yourself on something hot? If you’re lucky it’s nothing serious and the pain soon passes. The pain I felt was so much worse, like somebody had stabbed me in the back with a red hot poker. However, as agonising as it was, seeing that I had saved a free human from one of Visser Three’s fireballs made the pain more than worth it. Even so, I had no intention of making a habit out of it; being set on fire is seriously not fun!

I started to run towards Jake to help him hurt Visser Three, until I realised that I was limping instead of running. My Jaguar body had taken a lot of damage and I wouldn’t be of much use to Jake in that state.

<Jake come on! We have to get out of here!> I shouted.

With a final angry roar at the Visser, Jake jumped clear and started to head back up the stairs, with me limping after him as fast as I could. The others had already made it out of the Visser’s line of sight, safe from any further fiery attacks. Only a few more seconds and Jake and I could join them and escape from this hell hole and out into the sanctuary of the school. How ironic...

It was in these last moments before we escaped that another surprise appeared. It was Erika. She had recovered faster than I expected from when I had attacked her earlier and was now charging up the stairs wielding a Dracon Beam and a furious expression on her face. Somehow I knew that she was gunning for me. That’s the worst thing about bad guys, they take the whole vengeance thing way too seriously. You’d think that she’d at least be grateful that I didn’t kill her when I had the chance.

“Die Andalite!” Erika screamed with a blood curdling rage. I could scarcely believe that this was a teenage girl talking and not her Yeerk (who was still in the pool).

Ignoring the searing pain in various parts of my body, I began to run up the stairs trying to distance myself from the deranged girl. I was fast, but still not fast enough. My Jaguar body had taken a beating and Erika was a good shot. A quick glance behind be showed her aiming the weapon, her fingers about to squeeze the trigger–

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” A fireball struck Erika square in the back and she plummeted into the murky depths of the Yeerk Pool. Even if she survived the wound, she would most likely drown in the pool before being rescued. She would just be another nameless victim of Visser Three’s arrogance and carelessness. Just another accidental friendly-fire statistic for the Yeerks.

In the times when I think back on that moment, I sometimes find it hard to remember how I felt when I saw Erika fall. Confused, angry, but mostly grief. Funny really, that only a few minutes earlier I had wanted her dead and now I was sad she was gone. Sure she was a traitorous piece of scum that had voluntarily accepted a Yeerk in her head, but she was still human and so was I. Besides, she may also have unintentionally saved my life. The fireball that had accidentally hit her could easily have finished me off. I guess I’ll never know for sure.

Finally, I reached the top of the stairs and was relieved to find my fellow Animorphs had already made it out. Jake, Rachel, Cassie and Marco, they were all there… except for Tobias.

Mentally kicking myself, I scanned the cavern and managed to spot a Red-tailed hawk hiding in the shadows. If it weren’t for my enhanced night vision I would never have spotted him.

<Tobias come on! We have to get out of here now!> I called out to him. I saw his hawk head nodding in reply. I saw him spread his wings, about to take off. I also saw half a dozen Human Controllers armed with Dracon Beams heading up the stairs after us. We had only a few seconds before they reached us and opened fire.

<Go on without me,> Tobias told me. I got the feeling that it was in private thought speak. <I’ll wait until the coast is clear and sneak out. I can stay hidden until it’s safe.>

<No you can’t! You have to come now!> I yelled back. That was when Jake noticed I’d fallen behind.

<Mike, what are you doing? We have to get out of here!>

<You don’t understand! Tobias, he’s going to be trapped in morph and it’s all my fault!> I tried to head back towards the Controllers, but my injuries must have been worse than I thought because my hind legs suddenly stopped working and I fell to the ground helplessly.

So this is it for me, I thought with despair. I’m going to die in the most horrific place on Earth on my very first Animorph mission. I couldn’t even save Tobias.

Suddenly, a pair of very strong and very hairy arms grabbed me by the mid-section and lifted me off the ground.

<Hang in there man,> Marco said as he carried me towards the exit. <And don’t think I’m going to be making a habit of this, you need to stay away from the tuna little kitty!>

<Please, we have to go back.> I pleaded desperately.

Marco shook his head.

<Go back now and we’re road kill,> Marco said. <You saved my butt with those giant worms back there so now I’m returning the favour.>

I knew he was right. Going back there would be suicide even if I wasn’t currently paralysed from the waist down, but that didn’t make me feel any better about leaving Tobias behind. I could have saved him, I should have saved him and I didn’t.

Wait, was my vision blurry a second ago? And why is it so cold all of a sudden? I wondered as everything started to lose focus. This can’t be healthy, maybe I should demorph? It’s so hard to think with all those voices…

“Hey Mike, you can turn back now.”

“Is he okay?”

“Jake I think he’s going into shock from all these burns.”

“Is he going to make it?”

“Where’s Tobias?”

“Mike! Snap out of it!”

“Demorph now!”

Demorph? What a great idea. I thought idly. I focused on my human body and felt my body rearranging itself as my vision returned and my mind cleared slightly. My fellow Animorphs were standing around me with various concerned expressions on their faces.

“Are you alright?” Cassie asked. Of course Cassie would be the one to say that.

“I’ll probably have one hell of a headache in the morning,” I replied. “But besides that I’m fine.”

“Fine? Fine?!” Marco demanded. “You tried to take on an army of guys with ray guns by yourself and you expect us to believe you’re fine? Are you insane?!”

“You kept yelling something about Tobias,” Rachel said. “Is he alright? Did he make it out of there?”

“No he’s not alright!” I snapped at her. “He’s down there right now about to be trapped as a hawk forever and it’s all my fault!”

“It’s not your fault.” Cassie told me reassuringly. “There’s nothing you could have done.”

“Yes there is,” I sighed in despair. “I knew it was going to happen.”


Is Mike going to tell the Animorphs the truth? Would they believe him if he did? And is Tobias doomed to his original fate as a hawk? Find out in the next exciting chapter of: Animorphs Travels!   ;)
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Re: Animorphs Travels
« Reply #16 on: September 12, 2008, 11:18:19 AM »
How did I end up on the second page!  :o

Here's the penultimate chapter of part one of my fic, hope you guys like it! Post in the feedback thread or PM me with any comments.

CHAPTER 15: The Truth is Revealed

(MIKE’S POV)

“What do you mean?” Rachel asked me suspiciously. “How on Earth could you have known it was going to happen?”

“He knew that those Taxxons back there were cannibals.” Marco stated.

“Now that I think about it,” Jake said. “Just before the Andalite landed you said something. ‘He’s here.’ Like you knew he was coming.”

“And Tobias told me you found that Harris Hawk you acquired out in the woods, but they don’t even live in this state.” Cassie added.

“Not to mention that you don’t go to school and none of us know where you live.” Marco pointed out.

“Maybe he’s a Controller,” Jake suggested. “Like- like Tom.”

I laughed.

“Sorry, but if I was a Controller, then I’d probably be the worst double agent of all time. A Yeerk would have had the rest of you killed or infested by now.”

“Well then how can you possibly know about things before they happen?” Rachel demanded.

I guess it’s time to tell them, I thought. I knew I had to tell them sooner or later, I just hoped I’d have time to gain their trust first. They’re going to think I’m nuts…

“Okay, I admit I haven’t been entirely honest with you,” I sighed. “The truth is I’m actually from a parallel universe where this world is all part of a fictional book series that I’m a big fan of and I was brought here to help you guys.”

“Well when you put it like that it all makes perfect sense!” Marco replied sarcastically.

“Right, he’s probably escaped from the local nut house or something.” Rachel said.

“Or he could have suffered brain damage from his injuries.” Cassie said worriedly.

“I appreciate the concern, but the morphing process heals all wounds suffered while morphed and I’m definitely not crazy. I really am from another universe.”

Marco laughed.

“Do you really expect us to–”

“Your mum went missing in a boating accident almost 2 years ago and your dad is an electrical engineer.” I told him.

“How did you know that?!”

“Jake, your dad is a doctor and Tom sometimes calls you midget. Rachel, you have two younger sisters, Jordan and Sara, your parents are divorced and your mum is a lawyer. Cassie, both your parents are vets, your mum is a great shot with a tranquiliser gun and your dad was once sprayed by a skunk.” I pointed to each of the Animorphs in turn as I revealed personal facts about them. “Do you want to hear more? I’m sure I can think of a few embarrassing details if you aren’t convinced yet…”

The others just stared at me in amazement. I didn’t blame them either, it took me a while to get used to the fact that I was living in a world I thought was completely fictional only a few days ago.

“If you really are who you say you are, then how did you get here?” Jake asked.

“Let’s just say a friend sent me, somebody who wants to help.” I explained. “I wish I could tell you more, but it’s against the rules.”

“Screw the rules, you’re supposed to be helping us and you can’t even tell us how you got here?” Rachel said angrily.

“If I give any of you direct information about the future, then I get sent home and all my time here will be erased.” I told her.

“Oh so that’s how it is? We all risk our lives but if something happens to you then you just get to click your shoes together and go home?” Marco sneered.

“Not exactly,” I admitted. “That’s another one of the rules in fact. If I die here, then that’s it, I’m dead.”

“So if you hadn’t demorphed in time earlier?” Cassie wondered aloud.

I nodded.

“I’d have ceased to exit in my universe as I died here in this one. I can’t go home unless I help you guys.”

“Well, I’m still not completely convinced you aren’t crazy, but you’ve helped us so far and if you were a Yeerk then you’d have killed us already. I guess we can trust you for now.” Jake said.

“Thanks Jake,” I replied gratefully. “Now I suggest we get moving. You guys have families to get home to. Tomorrow I can take you to my place and maybe show you enough to convince you.”

“It’ll have to be pretty impressive us to prove to us that you’re a traveller from another dimension.” Marco laughed.

“True, but I’ll try my best.” I smiled. “Meet me by the edge of the woods after school tomorrow. If you see Tobias, tell him to come with you.”

My fellow Animorphs didn’t seem to think they could entirely trust me yet, but I was sure they would be there. They knew I wasn’t a Controller and they could hardly deny the fact that I knew personal facts about each of them. With any luck, I would be able to persuade them soon enough.

It was only as Jake, Rachel, Marco and Cassie walked away that I suddenly thought to ask them something.

“By the way, how many people did we save tonight?” I asked.

Cassie turned to look at me with sadness in her eyes.

“Two people. One of the women I carried out and a man who managed to avoid the fire balls.” She told me solemnly.

Tom was still a Controller, Tobias was presumably trapped as a hawk again and I had barely made it out alive. All that effort only to rescue two people, it seemed unbearably unfair. I felt like screaming at the Ellimist for help, but I knew that even if he heard me, he would not do anything.

After all, I thought bitterly. He has the ‘rules of engagement’ to abide by…

         *

The next day…

“Hey guys, you took your time. I’ve been here for half an hour already.” I told the others as they finally arrived at the edge of the woods. Jake, Rachel, Cassie and Marco were here, but there was no sign of Tobias and I was afraid to ask. Maybe the others had asked him to fly overhead to keep an eye out?

“Don’t they have schools where you come from?” Rachel asked with annoyance.

“Sure they do, but one of the perks of being here is that I don’t have school until I go home.” I replied with a grin.

“Okay, now I’m jealous.” Marco muttered.

“Yeah it almost makes up for being stuck in another universe and the fact that it could a while before I get to taste proper English fish and chips again.” I pointed out.

“Wait, you’re English?” Marco asked.

“Of course he is, can’t you tell by the accent?” Rachel said.

“What accent?” I wondered aloud. “Never mind. Anyway, we better get going, my place is still a decent walk away.” I turned and walked off into the forest, with the others following close behind.

“You live in the woods?” Jake asked.

“Yeah he’s Tarzan.” Marco rolled his eyes.

“Hey, I’m not the one with the Gorilla morph.” I protested.

“But Jaguars do live in forests.” Cassie stated.

“Amazonian Rainforests perhaps, not the woods of North America.” I said. “There’s not enough heat or humidity here for the average wild Jaguar, not to mention the lack of sufficient prey animals.”

“You know your zoology.” Cassie acknowledged with a nod.

“I’m no expert,” I replied modestly. “But I know a few things. Interestingly, the Animorphs books in my universe are what first got me into learning about animals.”

“So we’re really just a book series where you come from?” Rachel asked.

“I wouldn’t say just a book series,” I answered. “You guys have a big fan base and a bunch of active online forums, one of which I’m a member of. Also, you had a TV show for a while.”

“We have a TV show? Cool!” Marco grinned.

“Either way we’re just a few fictional characters to you.” Rachel said.

“Maybe to some people, but not to me.” I insisted. “Especially now that I’ve actually met all of you! It’s almost a dream come true… except for the brain stealing alien slugs of course.”

“Yeah, they’re a pain in the butt aren’t they?” Marco agreed.

“How much further is it to wherever we’re going?” Jake asked.

“We’re going to my home, which my friend kindly set up for me.” I answered. “As for how much further it is well–” I stopped in mid-sentence. My eyes had started drifting away from the direction I was heading towards. “It’s not too far now. Keep following me no matter what. Your eyes will start to move away from where we’re heading, but it’s just a trick set up to stop the wrong people finding me.”

“What is it, a Jedi mind trick?” Marco commented sarcastically. “Wouldn’t a cloaking device have been better?”

I laughed.

“That would’ve been cool, but my friend tends to be more subtle than that.” I replied.

“What could be more subtle than being invisible?” Marco muttered quietly.

I didn’t really know what to say to that. He did kind of have a point there.

         *

About ten minutes or so later, we finally came to my new forest home. Good thing the Ellimist had warned me about the trick protecting my house, otherwise I’d never have found my way back to it again!

“Nice place.” Marco nodded approvingly.

“Seems kinda big for just one person to be living here.” Jake commented.

“Ah, well it’s not that big really. Most of the space comes from the extra guest rooms my friend provided in case I needed them.” I explained.

“Why, you planning a party?” Marco of course.

“Yeah I thought I’d invite Visser Three and his gang over for tea and crumpets.” I rolled my eyes.

“Okay, now you sound English.” Marco admitted.

“I told you.” Rachel said smugly.

“Well I’m sorry to destroy your image of the British stereotype, but I don’t actually like tea or crumpets.” I told them with a smile.

“My vision of England is shattered!” Marco exclaimed. “Next you’ll be telling me your secret agents don’t really have cool gadget spy cars!”

“What is it that you wanted to show us then?” Jake interrupted my response to Marco’s joke.

“So the perception filter didn’t convince you I’m not from around here?” I asked.

“Perception filter?” Jake raised an eyebrow.

“That’s what I call it. I think it was in an episode of Doctor Who.” I explained. “Anyway, since you obviously need more persuading, let’s go inside.”

“You might want to hire a decorator.” Rachel said as she looked at my mostly empty and undecorated home.

“If you’re offering, I’d really appreciate some help. It’s going to take me ages to paint the walls by myself!”

“I’ll pass.” She replied.

“Worth a try,” I shrugged. “In any case, the cool stuff is in my room.” I led them into my bedroom and over to the wall with a framed picture of a Tiger attached to it.

“It’s a beautiful picture.” Cassie said.

“It was a gift from my mum,” I told her, forcing back a tear as I wondered about my parents for a moment. “And it’s one of the only things my friend let me bring here.”

“Yeah it’s a nice picture, but is there a point to all this?” Marco asked.

“Yes actually, the best part is behind the picture.” I explained as I lifted it off the wall and placed it gently on a nearby desk.

“But there’s nothing here!” Rachel snapped.

“Not yet there isn’t,” I replied, ignoring her angry comment. “Just you watch. You guys are going to love this.” I placed my hands on the wall. “Animorph.” I stated clearly.

<Finger print scan and vocal analysis: complete.>

“Who said that?” Jake asked.

“Technically, the wall did.” I informed him.

“What?!”

“It’s complicated.” I said simply as large camera lens emerged from the wall and I looked into it with both eyes.

<Retinal scan: complete.>

“So is like a super advanced security system I’m guessing?” Marco guessed.

“Pretty much.” I replied while punching an eight-digit code into the keypad that had now appeared.

<Input of correct security code: complete.>

“Seems very high-tech,” Rachel said. “Why do you need so much security?”

“Because the contents hidden here are incredibly dangerous in the wrong hands. If the Yeerks got hold of them, we’d all be dead. With all this security, I’m the only one who can open it.” I placed my right index finger against the small screen that came out of the wall.

<DNA scan: complete. Access granted.> The wall opened up to reveal the most well protected safe on the planet, if not the entire galaxy. Blocking the contents from view, I quickly grabbed the book I was after and closed the safe.

“I’m sure by now you’ve realised that the technology in this safe is way ahead of anything on Earth. Even the Yeerks probably couldn’t build a safe like this. However, if you still don’t believe me, then maybe this will convince you.” I held up Animorphs #1: The Invasion.

The others gasped in surprise as they saw the title.

“That guy on the front looks a lot like you Jake.” Marco said.

“And that thing he’s turning into looks a bit like the Green Anole lizard he morphed the other day.” Cassie pointed out.

“They should,” I agreed. “This is the first book of the Animorphs series, published in my universe and brought here with me. It details you all meeting Elfangor and the events that followed, up until the end of our mission in the Yeerk Pool. I’m not in it obviously, but besides that it’s all in there, everything from the last few days.”

“Can we read it?” Jake requested.

“I’m afraid not,” I shook my head. “One of the rules.”

“Again with the rules.” Rachel growled.

“Believe me Rachel, if it were up to me, I’d tell you everything that’s going to happen, but if I do then I get sent home and everything I’ve done here will be erased from existence. I came here to help you guys, so I don’t plan on leaving just yet. Please trust me.”

The others all glanced at each other and nodded.

“Thanks guys,” I said gratefully. “I’d have told you all of this sooner, but I figured you’d all think I was crazy.”

“Really? What gave you that idea?” Marco rolled his eyes.

“I guess after the last few days, nothing seems impossible anymore.” Jake said.

“Not even Marco being able to stay awake though class?” Rachel teased.

“I told you I was only closing my eyes so I could concentrate on my algebra test!” Marco insisted.

Everyone laughed.

“So Mike, what’s the world like where you’re from?” Cassie asked.

“Well food comes in pills, we’ve colonised Mars and the world is ruled by giant space ants from Planet Zargon.” I told them calmly. I tried to keep a straight face, but seeing their reactions I burst out laughing and the others soon joined me. 

“You almost had me going for a second there!” Marco laughed.

“Sorry, I couldn’t resist!” I said. “Actually my world is pretty much the same as yours, except we don’t have alien slugs invading the Earth. Not that I know of anyway!”

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Re: Animorphs Travels
« Reply #17 on: September 13, 2008, 10:11:13 AM »
Ohhhhhhh, cliff-hanger! Can't wair for next chap. post it soon pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaase!
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Re: Animorphs Travels
« Reply #18 on: September 13, 2008, 07:23:41 PM »
It wasn't exactly intended as a cliffhanger, but as long as you liked it then I'm not complaining! Thanks JSF16, but could you try to post comments in the feedback thread in future? (Or just PM me) It stops the story getting broken up by comments.
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Re: Animorphs Travels
« Reply #19 on: September 19, 2008, 08:17:36 AM »
So here we are, the final chapter of Animorphs Travels Part One: The Invasion. It only took me 6 years!  ;D (To be fair I abandoned the story for a long time before coming back to finish it). This isn't a long chapter as it is intended as basically an epilogue to wrap up a couple of things, such as the final fate of Tobias...

I've had this last chapter written for a while now, but I was hoping to post it once I had started on Part Two. Since it's now been a week and I haven't really got anywhere with Part Two, I figured I should just post it. I still haven't decided if I'll go straight into Part Two or take a break for a while first. Either way, you probably won't be seeing more of the story right away. I'm going to be kinda busy the next 3 days, but on Tuesday I should be able to get started on Part Two (if I've thought of an idea by then).

Anyway, enjoy the chapter! And, as always, please post comments in the feedback thread or PM me!  :)


CHAPTER 16: The End of the Beginning

(MIKE’S POV)

We talked a little longer before the others realised that they should be heading home. Jake in particular couldn’t afford to raise suspicions at home. As they left, I was both relieved and surprised that nobody had mentioned what had happened to Tobias the night before. Rachel has started to ask about him but Jake had simply said that he had already heard from Tobias, before Cassie quickly changed the subject. I was dying to know if Tobias had made it out in time, but at that moment I really didn’t want to face the others when I found out.

As I looked out of my bedroom window into the trees surrounding my home, I spotted a Red-tailed Hawk perched on a branch. I opened the window and let the hawk fly in and land on my desk.

“How long have you been out there?” I asked.

<Pretty much the whole time,> Tobias replied. <Jake told me when you guys were meeting and I decided to fly overhead for a while to make sure we weren’t followed. Had a little trouble with that ‘perception filter’ you mentioned, but I still heard everything you told them, even though it was hard to believe at first.>

“I’m just full of surprises aren’t I?” I grinned.

<Remember when we first met at the mall before this whole thing started?> Tobias said. <The first thing you said to me was about science fiction. The next thing I know, my life is full of brain stealing slugs, people turning into animals and befriending a guy from another dimension.>

“A friend of mine once said: if God exists, then he’s got an ironic sense of humour.” I told him.

Tobias laughed.

<He’s probably right.>

“Jake seemed pretty vague about what happened to you last night.” I said.

<Don’t you already know?> He nodded at my copy of Animorphs #1: The Invasion that I had left on the desk.

“I know what was supposed to happen. I’m hoping it didn’t turn out that way, for your sake.” I said hopefully.

<I managed to stay hidden until I had the chance to escape, but it took too long Mike. More than two hours.>

“No… I’m so sorry…”

<It’s not your fault Mike.>

“Of course it bloody is! I knew it was going to happen!” I yelled furiously. “I was brought here to save people, to make a difference. How useless am I?”

<Like you said,> Tobias started. <It would have happened whether you were here or not, so you can’t blame yourself. Maybe it was just meant to happen.>

“But I could have stopped it!” I insisted. “Why aren’t you mad at me?”

<Because I know that you would have saved me if you could have. And I know that you can still help us make a difference.>

“I’ve been such a great help so far.” I replied sarcastically.

<We rescued two people last night, I’d say we made a big difference to their lives.> Tobias pointed out.

“Wait a second… two people?” I couldn’t believe I hadn’t realised it sooner. I quickly grabbed Animorphs #1: The Invasion and flicked to the end of the book, skimming the last few pages until I found what I was looking for. I laughed out loud with pure joy.

<What is it?> Tobias asked, startled by my sudden reaction.

“In the book, you guys only saved one person last night, the woman that was riding on Cassie’s back. Which means that the man we saved last night…”

<Is now free of the Yeerks because of what you did.> Tobias finished. <Still think you can’t make a difference?>

“I know that I can damn well try!” I shouted enthusiastically. “I’m going to keep on fighting, we are going to keep on fighting, and together we’ll make the Yeerks sorry they ever left home!”

<That’s more like it.> I could almost ‘hear’ a smile in his voice. Like Elfangor, the brave soul who had given his life so that Earth could have a fighting chance against the Yeerks, Tobias had also made a supreme sacrifice. I wasn’t going to let all that be for nothing.

It wasn’t dark yet, but I looked up at the sky through my window, looking out at where I knew the stars would be that night. Somewhere out there, the Andalites were battling the Yeerk forces.

Don’t worry guys, I thought with a smile. We’ve got this planet covered!

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Re: Animorphs Travels #1: The Invasion
« Reply #20 on: October 11, 2008, 10:51:41 AM »
Just letting you all know that I although I have started working on Part Two, I won't be posting it until after Nano Wrimo ends at the end of November. Sorry to keep you all waiting but I didn't want to start posting it and then make you all wait a month to hear more, so I figured I'd take a small break and come back to it after Nano Wrimo.

Since I've now finished Part One, I'm going to lock this thread, so if you want to post comments you can post them in the feedback thread or just PM me. Thanks to all my readers and reviwers!  :)

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