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Offline Shenmue654

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To the Worthy
« on: January 08, 2014, 05:35:21 PM »
((Fair Warning About This One: It is honest, and it is deeply nasty and bitter. It doesn't relate to you guys, but you still might not want that kind of energy in your minds. So.....yeah. :3 Can't post this one on Facebook. XD)

For those that laugh at us beaten and bruised
Frustrated and tired, angry and used
Come over, yes come over and tell me
That you could walk a mile in our shoes.

Tell me you could stare into the haggard face of death
Tell me you could write treatises with a stranger in your house
Tell me you could stand your spouse’s plunge into Hell
Tell me you’d be happy and healthy and well

Show me the heart unbroken and bright
Show me the glory of your stoic insight
Show me the problems that vanish overnight
Show me the soul you’ve stowed out of sight

I’ll accept your complaints on that very day
I’ll believe it when you imply I’ve been led astray
I’ll let you breathe down my own father’s neck
I’ll let you throw mud and let the hens peck

But until the very moment that you understand
I will greet you with a dagger in hand.

redtailedsaffa

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Re: To the Worthy
« Reply #1 on: January 08, 2014, 09:34:48 PM »
I can see why you said it might give you a dose of certain kinds of emotions,  because I did get it :o But this is probably my favourite of the lot.

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Re: To the Worthy
« Reply #2 on: January 09, 2014, 09:58:27 AM »
*Grins* Really? Why this one?

I always appreciate feedback. <3

redtailedsaffa

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Re: To the Worthy
« Reply #3 on: January 09, 2014, 10:10:16 AM »
I dunno, probably because I was having a really annoying day and it kinda resonated with my mood. ;D But it does make you either want to flex your fingers... or punch a wall. The emotions are there. :)