Hiya all. I'm still not dead as you can see and I am posting this forum up in hopes that I can get some help and feedback on a fanfic I'm writing...or revamping I guess.
You all know I'm writing a fic called the Alteration. The reason for this silly post is that I had written the same story in a different fanfic, which had a lot of reviews and that I had greatly appreciated. After some time though, I had to leave it as haitus because of school and life. After a long time, when I went back to the story, I deeply felt I could do better. A LOT BETTER. So I decided to discontinue my old version and completely revamp it as new in a different fic here.
However, my new one has reviews nearly 1/4 less than my old one...26 compared to over 80...and this has kinda discouraged me a little. It is not because I want reviews for the sake of it. I see reviews as not just something encouraging and a reminder that I want to give my readers the best in the next upcoming chapters but also and greatly feedback. And if more, I at least know I'm making my readers happy with a story I've written.
So I want to ask everyone what can I do or should do to improve my fic so that it's at least more catching to readers. Like is it my summary or some contents of the story that could go a different direction. I want to know if there's anything to get more feedback on my fic because the more I get, the more I know this story I'm writing is not something terrible (that isn't said on grammar mistakes...). My story isn't final and I do have some areas to improve or rewrite. I am constantly changing that not just for my readers but also for me that I'm writing the story how I visually and realistically see as.
I hope you guys can give me a direction or a light on this subject. Any feedback is great and even constructive criticism is great.
Thank you, everyone.
And now I look over this post, I feel this is like some desperate begging to you guys and you might shove this aside....daaaaamn..
.. someone help me....
Animorphs fanfic:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6308284/1/Alteramorphs_0_The_Alteration
