Idea I need feedback on

[HkRevan]

I approve as well.

Also, will it be realistic? People's reaction to war?

Sometimes people write it in a way that it very unrealistic, they're...very pro fighting and it doesn't seem that killing other people affects them. There are too many stories like that.

As I recall from what Alloran said (fictional he may be) "Then be quiet, fool. Those who have been to war understand. Those who have not have no opinion worth hearing. Even those who return from war may never really come home."

The gist of it, is that if you were to put this into the real world, the kids she chooses must have reactions that reflect how real human beings react.

I know a lot of people here would say, in bravado, they would fight and they wouldn't have a problem. Or they would be like Rachel and kill them all.....

Anyways, good luck.

[Slushie Man]

Just letting people know that I've started the rough version of the first story. However, before I even finished the first page, I got stumped cause I realize I don't know very many people's first names. I know some, but not nearly as many as I should, lol.

So, if you want to be a apart of it, just leave your first name's in the thread. No guarantee you'll be a main character, or even in the first story (After all, I need characters for later-on in the series), but I promise you'll make it in at some point, in some capacity. Also, there are some I already know the names of, so those will also be included as characters, even if they don't post in here. However, I'm far too lazy to list who';s names I know, so to be on the safe side, just list them here anyway, lol. Also, no need for last names (You can if you want, but last names won't be included in the fic).