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Title: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 16, 2013, 08:04:42 AM
Finally getting to post this after being positively squished for time by my infuriating coaching classes! I decided I’ll go with my story first, before going to all-out RAFfics (for which I already have my plans :) )

A bit of a time-check – the fic is set quite a while after the events of Enter RAF, as will become very clear. Okay, this prologue might be a little vague, but then again, that’s how most prologues are anyway. :P

:edit: Very Recent Post-Fic Edit: For folks who are interested in reading the whole story but are too lazy to scroll through pages, the PDF of the entire thing is available, attached with this message. :)

Prologue

The red-tailed hawk lay motionless against the newsreel desk, a wing broken, feathers everywhere; overall, torn with the wounds of battle. Wounds she knew she would die from, because the fatigue from it all just overwhelmed her. Too tired to morph to human, to have some chance of healing…

Why, why, why on earth had she gone after him? Why had she been her usual reckless Rachel-type nutter self and not called backup? Because she was relatively new and might not be taken seriously? In any case, no one at RAF knew she was here now, left for dead. No one could possibly know about this site and come look for her. No one could take her back now, not even…

The air shimmered behind her. Acute hawk hearing picked up the shuffling of feet across the office floor.

“You did say you enjoyed being a hawk, even fighting as one,” the old man said, coming from behind the tattered green-and-gold wall hangings.

Great. The Ellimist. Possibly the last person in the world – make that the universe – she wanted to see right then.

<What do you… want from me?> she choked out.

“Nothing from you personally,” the Ellimist said. “Though indeed, there are times when our games go too far. Deals that shouldn’t be made…”

<Look, I don’t know what in hell you’re talking about… but how does all that matter? I’m probably dead already.>

“True, but yet, not so much,” he quipped in his usual annoying enigmatic way. “Tampering with time to get the upper hand is never validated for. Yet at times, the results of such actions… the things they reveal...”

He regarded the office they stood in, the slashed panel, the smashed portrait lying by the hawk’s side. “Yes, the results… here you are, having sacrificed yourself for the reputation and the security of a country that was not even your own. From an outerworlder that went too far.”

<You should know. You… should understand. I needed…> The thought-speak voice faded.

The Ellimist regarded his surroundings with an air of… satisfaction? “I know the decision I have to make,” he said, before disappearing as the office began to brighten and pixelate, pausing only to have a word with a young girl who had arrived at the wrong time.

The decision had not been his alone, he knew. It was also that of a country coming of age, often fragile and hanging on the brink – and this young RAFian had just given her all defending it from someone who did plan on sending it over. His only role was to put the decision into effect.

Yes, with South Africa’s gift of thanks, she would go back… go back to RAF, her home.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 16, 2013, 08:06:49 AM
Since I have the time, why not got in for a little character introduction, then? First actual chapter!

Chapter One

‘Revision hour’ after school hours for the normal folks, those poor souls oblivious to the strange realities of the world around them, was a time to either bore themselves silly, or, in the absence of the teacher, catch up on normal scandals involving their fellow normal mates, actually consider opening a book to study something, or just let loose and play the general fool.

For Saffa, it was a chance to plan her next move, or take down mental notes on every new detail that she encountered in RAF and beyond, and the things that slipped from that world into this one and vice versa.

Like her and her sister, Rose.

Today, though, in her usual place at the far-right back corner of the classroom that always reeked of cats, she contented herself with the newspaper instead, which held nothing remotely interesting. Apart from an article about a plan to reintroduce tigers in the reserved forest part of the woods next to the school (like that would ever happen), there was the usual petrol-price hike, corruption, scams, murder, rape, protests, incomplete drainage work, and the Indian cricket team doing what they did best these days: losing. She put the boring paper down and looked around the class.

Guys were having a paper-ball war in the front of the class (maybe she could supply them some ammo?); various cliques of girls were hanging around exercising their tongues; her cousin Jason was looking for something under the cupboard; and Austin, in a suit and jacket, was sitting in the centre listening to the croons of two groupies.

Normal stuff. Stupid stuff. A bit of a refreshing change, really.

She looked at Austin again. He was in the suit for a wedding party he had to attend later. Saffa knew more about him than any of those attention-deficit groupies did, thanks to a secret weapon of hers they would never perfect: actual, sensible conversation with the man.

Austin was new, having been dropped two weeks late into boarding school, not least in the last school year – twelfth grade – by his extremely busy military-based parents. His background explained the standard-issue Army rifle and the 16mm Colt* Rose had found in his cupboard (completely by accident). And why he always walked around with an air of uncertainty, like the enemy was right behind him in a tank.

Yet otherwise, he was a nice, normal teenage boy. Nothing out of the ordinary whatsoever.

Jeez, you think you’re weird, huh, Austin? she thought. For a while, she let the feather patterns draw themselves on her skin, imagining herself fly through the clouds, riding a warm, plump thermal. Well, you ain’t seen nothing yet.

“Will you come to the party with me?” a soft voice said suddenly.

Saffa nearly fell off her chair, and the feather patterns schlooped back into her hand as she looked up to face the tall, well-built boy with soft, dark hair and serious brown eyes behind glasses, giving him an almost elfin appearance.

“Say whaa?

“The wedding party. It’s gonna be bloody boring, and I’ll need someone to talk to,” Austin said.

“What about Ashley and Payal?”

“Are you crazy? Those girls will drive me off the rocker if I’m with them for more than five minutes. Besides, you have much more interesting things to say.” He smiled.

“Uh-huh. If you say so,” Saffa said, smiling back. “I’ll go change then. See ya.”

“Okay, see you down at 7.” He left.

Saffa burst out laughing as she walked up the stairs to her dorm, as some girl stared at her.** Much more interesting things, he says! He doesn’t know the half of it… not about the whole other world that had been coexisting with his own normal one since the 1980s, and the strange folks that now kept it under control somewhat – the RAFians. He didn’t know the girl he was about to take on a date was a human-slash-red-tailed hawk morpher, the master of all things South African.

Poor boy.

She rummaged in her suitcase, looking for something that was at least point-nine-nine percent formal. “So? It should be nice, doing something normal for once,” she said to herself as she changed into jeans and a dress shirt of sorts.

“Normal? You? Really?” a voice laughed.

Saffa looked up. Rose had entered the room. “I didn’t see you come in.”

“No, duh, you didn’t see me come in.” Invisibility was Rose’s modus operandi: she could make herself, the clothes she wore, or an object she was holding disappear at will. And she was now, having silently slipped into her sister’s individual dorm-room away from the madness of the tenth-grade common one downstairs. “And where are you going to be normal? All dressed up?”

“Oh, Austin asked me to join him at the wedding party.”

Rose looked in wonder at the rather bland expression on her sister’s face as she mentioned this. “No kidding! I’d have thought you’d be more excited.”

“Yeah, well,” Saffa pulled on her Converse as she explained, “I’m a RAFian. I’m a warrior. Gotta keep my emotions in check.”

“Oh, please.” Rose sat down firmly on Saffa’s bed. She might have been two years her junior, but she was her intellectual equivalent, and partner in crime. “You are going out with a boy who, in a radical first, has actually paid you special attention, Jason excluded. Relax, girl. Let loose. Have fun.”

“Still, it would be nice if you could watch my back…”

“Eish. You’re seventeen and you still say these things. Anyway, I’m going to be s***-bored tonight, no midnight pranks or some such. We’ve actually decided to let the warden get some sleep today, so, what the heck.”

“Thanks, coz, you know, something always happens when I’m out on my own.”

“And how do you know this night won’t be different? Without distractions? Controllers? The Pootang, say?  Or creatures that are crosses between, I dunno, Pokémon and Inferi catalysed by Medusa?”

Saffa raised an eyebrow.

“What? I’m supplying examples.”

“And you have a truly wild imagination.”

“Hey, I’m exercising it. That way, I can expect anything terrifying. No surprises.”

“Okay, then, you can tell me that the next time we meet Visser Three,” Saffa said sarcastically. She ran her fingers through her shoulder-length dark hair. “But I have this funny feeling something will happen.”

“With your luck, you can count on that hunch,” Rose said dryly.

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* - Okay, I don’t actually know if they make that particular class, but I didn’t want to Google weapons just to find out. You know, Big Brother is watching and all that. :D
** - Reference to #27 – found it? ;)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Cloak on April 16, 2013, 08:13:23 AM
An origin book, right?

I haven't much time now, but I intend to read it more thoroughly a bit later.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 16, 2013, 08:14:51 AM
Yep. No problem, take your time. I'm probably gonna be posting chapters at odd intervals thanks to the Parent-Over-Shoulder problem. :P
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Cloak on April 16, 2013, 10:36:43 AM
Alright.

And . . . technically former mod Esplin (or has that changed again without my notice), also known as Russell, is Visser Three . . . but okay.

If this is the origin story . . . I may very well use this as a reference source.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 16, 2013, 10:42:00 AM
Lol, yeah I knew that. Of course I meant Visser Three from Animorphs. :)

Though in order to bring in the "normal" world into the stpry, I had to reference the living-Internet background of Enter RAF. My other fics will mostly deal with RAF on its own, awesome as it is :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on April 19, 2013, 07:13:46 AM
This is really good. I need to get off my butt and post my first full chapter on mine... *sigh* I should probably start soon with that...
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 19, 2013, 09:59:37 AM
Thanks! :) I'm right now on vacation and I don't have my laptop with me, so I'll be posting the next chapter on Mondaywhen I get back home (CANNOT do this from my phone). I was contemplating deleting the thread, but your comments are keeping me in! :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Cloak on April 19, 2013, 10:05:33 AM
I was contemplating deleting the thread, but your comments are keeping me in! :)

(Emphasis mine.)

Now you know what I felt when I posted the first chapter of "Memoirs" back in February '12. ;)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on April 19, 2013, 05:39:41 PM
I like Rose
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 20, 2013, 03:08:17 AM
I know. That's why I keep my sister around. ;D

EDIT: New chapter today, I'm back!

Chapter Two

“Will you stop,” Saffa hissed at the chocolate mousse, which was slowly diminishing in quantity. “It’s becoming rather obvious that someone’s flicking food. And I don’t want to get blamed!”

“Hey. Can’t help it, it’s so good,” Rose said, her invisible mouth full. “So. Now I know why you brought me here. Because the food is great.”

Saffa sighed. “You are not doing me any favours here. I mean, I already look like a nutter, talking to myself.”

“Then don’t talk to me and let me eat in peace. D’you know what this feels like after the school’s bulletproof rotis*?”

Saffa shook her head and went over to Austin, who had finished talking to one of his many overbearing, overdressed aunties. He smiled when he saw her. “You bored?” he asked.

“Not really. Been checking out the food,” she replied. “The chocolate mousse is amazing.”

“Well, anything’s bound to be amazing, after the school food,” Austin said, thinking of the less-than-impressive gravy and chicken they had served up on Christmas when he was one of the few who had to stay at school for the holidays.

“You’ve got that right.”

A song started up on the stereo, which Saffa recognized. R.E.M. Strange Currencies. It took her right back to the 90s somehow – ahh, them good old days. A lot of the adults took their respective partners and started dancing. Austin and Saffa regarded them rather awkwardly.

“I can’t dance to save my life,” Austin said.

“Me neither. I’d rather eat.”

“Then eat we shall do.” Austin looked at the dessert counter. “Hm. I’m pretty sure we had a lot more chocolate mousse.”

Saffa just kept quiet and filled her plate with salad, singing along to the song.
Fortunately, Rose had had her fill of dessert, and decided to head to the kitchen to try out some main course without making it obvious. She sidled along the wall, dodging fat aunties and waiters doing balancing acts with dozens of dirty plates, and walked through the kitchen doors without a care in the world.

The kitchen was a standard, industry-sized steam-pot cluttered with pots, pans and various odd utensils Rose didn’t even find on cookery shows. Waiters were rushing for service, pushing trolleys in every direction. Rose sidled along the floor lined with huge mobile shelves carrying plates and worktables, looking for grub.

Ah! Sticky chicken wings! By the gods, that looked sooo inviting, compared to the hacked-up rubbish they served occasionally at the school dining hall. This was the downside of living in a predominantly vegetarian nation like India: the little meat they cooked up in public establishments, they didn’t even do a good job of that.

Rose quietly stole a wing which then melted into nothingness on her touch. She leant against the wall and savoured the tender, flavourful meat, when she heard bits of conversation that floated from the trash area on the other side of the wall.

“… maybe even get back to RAF.”

Rose nearly dropped her wing. No, that couldn’t… maybe there was too much earwax in her ears. As far as she knew, RAF was a practically unheard-of domain here in India.

She peered over the edge of the wall. Two people were standing there: a man and a woman. They were having a rather intriguing conversation about… something.

She slowly moved along the edge of the wall, stepping lightly over a pan on the floor, and stood at about ten metres from the pair, holding her breath. Her eyes widened in shock as she recognized the lady who harangued students who came down to the school office, Mrs. Bennett. The man was quite a specimen, wearing a long black coat that only revealed the legs of his Levi’s. He had on a dull grey fedora which partially hid his face, betraying only a leering, thin-lipped smile. Basically, your typical wannabe-evil-villain look.

Mrs. Bennett went on. “I was surprised at first, but I got to her soon enough. The descriptions your colleague gave helped.”

Long Black Coat laughed dryly. “Yes, it seems rather unbelievable, doesn’t it? A RAFian here. Here! I mean, Animorphs wasn’t even officially released here. Maybe she had American relatives (which, incidentally, Rose thought, was true), I don’t know. Anyway, my colleague is imperative that I find her. The technology I already possess, the plan purely my own. But the agenda is his.”

“Couldn’t he do this on his own?”

“He’s not exactly in a position to, shall we say, move, at the moment. But he did warn you about her. She’s not completely helpless.”

“And what is this power that makes her so?” Mrs. Bennett asked.

“The morphing power, definitely. There can’t be any other explanation for the red-tailed hawk. Which is most certainly not a native Indian bird.”

Rose froze. They knew about Saffa! Which meant they knew about…

“Anything more?”

“How do I know? Maybe you’ll find out when you confront her.” He smiled. It was not a nice smile. “She’ll be forced to… it’ll definitely take more than a little bird to put you down, Alice.”

Mrs. Bennett grinned. It made Rose feel sick.

“That knowledge will be immaterial once I carry out the job my colleague has asked me to do. Once she is out of the way, the rest of RAF will be no problem – I’d have gotten there by then. He knows nothing of my own intentions, though, which is good,” he added smugly.

“I would suggest going back to the school. Wake her up,” Mrs. Bennett said, still grinning.

“Oh, there will be no need of that. She is right here, at the party on the invitation of her friend. I feel really sorry for that poor boy,” Long Black Coat said, and looked right in Rose’s direction.

That was when Rose decided she had heard enough. She bolted for the kitchen door.

* - A very common Indian bread.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on April 21, 2013, 01:18:26 PM
That sounds really cool. I love your story
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Cloak on April 21, 2013, 01:37:53 PM
Intriguing . . . apparently Rose is to you, Saffa, what Shadow was (and still is) to me.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 22, 2013, 10:28:36 AM
You hit the nail right on the head there, Cloak! We've always been pretty thick, since the age difference is minimal and it's always been just the two of us - like I said, partners in crime. :)

New chapter!

Chapter Three

The fool might be my middle name
But I'd be foolish not to say
I'm going to make whatever it takes,
Ring you up, call you down, sign your name, secret love, make it rhyme,
Take you in, and make you mine.


Saffa stood with Austin somewhat near the dance floor, eating her dinner like it was her last meal, and taking in the general scene. It still seemed weird. Normally, at this time, she’d be in her dorm RAFing or checking the score, or reading Animorphs or something, or trying to study till she fell asleep on the book. If it was light out, she’d test her hawk eyes with Rose playing invisible hide-and-seek in the trees.

Anything but hanging around outside campus at a dinner party (with WAY better food) – and with Austin, no less, the guy who half the female population of her school was after only because he was “technically a man in uniform”. (Ye gads, it was probably better for him this way.) Yep. It was weird.

It was at this point that Rose decided to show up, turning off her invisibility so suddenly that the two of them jumped, nearly dropping their plates. “You. Are. In. Deep. S***,” Rose gasped.

Austin’s jaw dropped, as he took in the sudden appearance of the curly-haired, bespectacled girl in jeans and a T-shirt, her seemingly normal appearance marred by the presence of a weapon of sorts, somewhat like a ray gun, slung around her shoulder. “You – but you’re – Rose! Where – how did you – “

“Oh, good Lord, I hoped it wouldn’t come to this,” Saffa wailed. She pulled Austin to an alcove, away from the mass of whirling, bouncing bodies on the dance floor.

She took a deep breath. “Listen, what I’m telling you right now is real. Very real. And don’t freak out when I try to convince you.”

“Okay, I’m listening,” Austin said slowly, uncertainly. Rose stood above them on guard.

Saffa continued. “The world is weirder than you think. The Internet is… er… how should I put this… alive,” she managed to say. “There are lots of prominent-enough sites that exist as domains on their own, in a realm of their own.”

“Oookay. So what does this have to do with you?”

“Wait, wait. I’m getting there. You can go from one domain to another and from the Net to the real world. There’s a certain technology required for that, which I have…”

“You mean you live on the Internet?” Austin blurted.

Saffa barked out a laugh. “No, no, I was a nice and normal kid until about four months ago. You know that book series I always read?”

“Animorphs?”

Bless the boy’s good heart, he knows of its existence. “Yeah, I’ve been into it for years, which is how I found Richard’s Animorphs Forum, or, as we call it, RAF. Turns out it’s one of the most predominant domains. The most, actually. That’s where I perfected my RAFsona – my ‘alter-ego’ to you – and got the power to morph.”

Austin’s eyes widened. “By morph, you mean…”

“Turning into other animals, yes,” she said wearily. “I have only two morphs, actually: a fly and my neighbour’s Labrador. This is Andalite technology, not ours – “

“And a what?”

“I’ll tell you the story of the original Animorphs later.” Saffa paused. “There are lots of others like me, with their awesome powers. Man, you should see Seal, she totally OWNS the water! And Cloaky, the Realm Walker, master of the Six Elements… Underseen and Ash, my shapeshifting friends… I could go on and on. Anyway, the point is that all this kinda lands us into a lot of trouble.”

“Go figure.”

“RAF is not only like our second home, it also houses various creeps, monsters, and etceteras, half the time thought up by newbies who don’t know what they’re doing with the power to create a post, and the other half of the time by jobless banned users. Of course, I was also new and stupid once, and in some ways I still am, but it’s like noobishness increases over the generations – “

“I hear you!” Obviously, he’s also had trouble keeping juniors in line.

“Yeah, although I know quite a few newbies with a lot of good stuff in them, they’re just a bit confused, that’s all. I know that feeling. Anyway, we have to keep these accidents down, but most importantly, keep our existence a secret,” she said. “Or the whole world will want to grab hold of our technology and what we know. A total invasion of a good life.”

“So I’m guessing someone is after it now.”

Rose spoke up. “I’ll be more specific here,” and she told them every detail of the chilling conversation she had heard.

Saffa stiffened. An expression of anger, or determination, Rose couldn’t tell, spread across her face.

“But just where the hell did you come from?” Austin asked Rose.

Rose grinned. “I can turn invisible,” she said simply. “I’m not an actual RAFian, but I have some powers of my own, thanks to Saffa here.”

“They don’t stand a chance,” Saffa said suddenly. “We’re gonna fight them. They’re not taking me down so easily… but whoever they are, whatever they want, they are not taking RAF.” She looked up. “It’s the only place I’ve actually found good friends.”

“And you’ve just found one more,” Austin said, taking her hand. “I’ll help you.”

Saffa stared at him. She looked into his eyes. “You could die.”

“If it means helping you, I really don’t care.”

Saffa thought of trying again to convince the man that he was utterly insane, but decided against it. Instead, she took a deep breath. “Be careful. Follow my thought-speak. You’ll soon see what it is. And, for God’s sake, I repeat, be careful. Our work ain’t exactly all fun and games, though it seems to be.” The feather patterns slowly began to etch themselves on her skin.

“Well, if you’re coming, you might as well take this,” Rose said, tossing the Andalite shredder to Austin.

“How will I know to follow you?” Austin asked Saffa, whose arms, he noticed, were slowly turning reddish-brown.

Saffa watched as the feathers spread over her body. Her now-bare feet shrunk to sticks, which sprouted to form ripping talons. Her head bulged forward into a beak, and her arms changed to broad, sweeping wings, as all the while, she shrank to large bird-size.

Austin stared in awe at the red-tailed hawk in front of him where Saffa had just been.

<You’ll know.>
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on April 22, 2013, 06:05:34 PM
You and Austin are so cute together.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on April 22, 2013, 06:57:40 PM
That's really good. I like where this is going!!
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 22, 2013, 10:12:29 PM
Thanks, Abby!

And yes, Underseen, I know. ;)
[spoiler]It ain't over until the last ball is bowled, I always say.[/spoiler]

Can't post now, I'm doing this from my phone.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Cloak on April 23, 2013, 05:42:28 AM
Nice chapter. I like that you have a definite and unique writing style, Saffa.

And congratulations on getting to the second page!
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 23, 2013, 09:54:37 AM
Thanks, Cloaky! Coming from you that's awesome, since I'm the one who's been singing praises of Memoirs all this while. :)

New chapter! Bit of a parody on the opening of Percy Jackson and the Lightning Thief, really. :D And here's where my RAFsona really comes into play.

Chapter Four

Rose taught Austin how to use the shredder as they quietly made their way, unnoticed by the bopping, getting-totally-wasted crowd, to the back of the wedding hall. She also explained her other very handy power to him – altering her features, or her height, or her build, so she would look like someone else; a bit like the ingrained ability of the Morphamagi. She turned from a short, bespectacled brunette to a tall, willowy blonde as she talked.

“The only problem is that your clothes don’t adjust to your new fit. But hey, we were pretty weird to begin with,” she said.

“It doesn’t seem so weird, now that I see it happening,” Austin commented.

<Yeah, well, you’re pretty broadminded, which is good,> Saffa said from the air. <Ahh. There’s our lovely couple. Hawk eyes aren’t much use at night, but I can make them out from the kitchen lights.>

The back of the kitchen, and thus the trash area, opened out into the street behind the hall, a mostly residential one. Austin and Rose hid in the bushes of someone’s garden while Saffa ghosted over them, all of them watching the subjects with utmost attention.

“Okay, they look like they’re leaving. Time for me to spring into action,” Rose said. She slowly crept out from behind the bush, and walked calmly across the street, making it look like she had come from the house opposite.

She calmly stepped up to Mrs. Bennett, like Marco had done at Ocean World in #15: The Escape, flashing a big, toothy, airhead grin. “Hi. Do you know where I could find a phone booth around here? I’m new to the country, you see.”

Long Black Coat came up to her. “You shouldn’t really be walking around alone out here at this time of night.”

“Yeah, well, you see, that’s the thing, I’m lost,” Rose whined. “So I really, really need a phone…”

“Look here, young lady…” Mrs. Bennett began.

The silence of the night was suddenly pierced by the shriek of a raptor.

“Tseeeeer!”

Saffa glided out of the dark like a bat out of hell, and streaked across Long Black Coat at a speed she never knew she possessed.

“AAAAHH!” he yelled, clutching his face. He turned to Mrs. Bennett. “That’s her! GET THAT BIRD!”

Mrs. Bennett stared up at the sky. “I’m coming for you,” she said. “You think I can’t see you, do you, now…”

The three teenagers watched in horror as Mrs. Bennett’s long, dumpy dress began to stick to her skin and turn leathery. Her tortoiseshell specs froze to rings on her now-leathery face. She began to contort, elongate, and grow a thin tail with dozens of sharp spikes on the end.

“Okay. The lady always gave me the creeps. Now I know why,” Austin muttered to himself.

As if that wasn’t enough, two giant, pterodactyl-like wings unfurled from Mrs. Bennett’s back, half leather, half covered in thick feathers.

Saffa was right above the transforming Mrs. Bennett (couldn’t really call her that now), watching her new form grow and grow till she was the size of an advertisement hoarding. She had a rather ridiculous face, pointed like a bespectacled feline. <Whoever the noob is who dreamed this up, he’s been watching too many cat videos.>

The creature suddenly looked right up at her! The blood-red eyes could apparently see very well in the dark. It smiled a grotesque smile. “Gotcha.” Its voice was like someone choking on paper.

A long, vicious tongue shot out right in Saffa’s direction, who immediately banked left, taken completely by surprise. She angled her tail to soar behind the monster – but nearly got impaled by its tail.

“Watch it!” Rose yelled. And caught a movement in the distance. Long Black Coat was leaving… very slowly. Like he didn’t want to miss the entertainment. She’d take care of him later.

“Who’s there?” the paper voice shrieked. Its missile of a tongue shot out at thin air. “Show yourself!”

“Oh, yuck, that’s beyond gross,” Rose hissed. “Saffa! That tongue. It’s covered in extremely sticky gunk. Like Fevi-kwik sticky. And it burns, slowly.”

<What’ve you got there, a Pokedex?!>

“No! Got some on my hand – whoa!” Rose dived right and fell flat in the mud, narrowly missing the spiked tail.

The… thing… decided not to stay on the ground any longer, and flapped its giant wings and powered itself into the air, covering much more distance in a second than Saffa could in ten, even with only dead night air to work with.

Saffa realized that even though she was in bird mode, her hawk form would not be of much help then. She reverted to her human form – but controlled the demorph, keeping her wings. She had done this quite a few times before, keeping her bones hollow enough to enable the large wings to fly and get a fair bit of drift in the air. If Cassie could do it, why couldn’t she?

“Your puny human form is only going to hurt you!” the creature jeered. “Perhaps if you give me what I want, I can make your end less – AAAAAHH!” it shrieked as Saffa flung a diamond into its back.

Her best weapon, and certainly her strangest, on for show now. She fired another round of thick, pointed, needle-like stones which caught the thing in its right leg. Saffa was ready for another round – but a swipe of the thing’s tongue caught her in mid-flight.

“Oh, yuck!

“Good-girls-don’t-throw-rocks!” the creature chanted.

Saffa could feel the saliva sticking to her wings like superglue. She couldn’t flap them however hard she tried. So she did the only sensible thing she could think of: demorph.

“You’re gonna crash!” Rose cried. Aaargh – there must be something she could do!

Just before she crashed into it, Saffa grabbed a branch in a tree and held onto it for dear life, fully human now. The creature hovered close and flew toward her, swinging its tail.

“I have you, now.

Rose had run back to the trash area, looking for something useful. Trash, trash, more trash, broken plates…

She looked in the adjoining tool-shed and found garden tools, pipes, hoses, bottles of cleaning fluid plus two closed vats with taps attached, to pour the contents out or attach a tube. One was full of phenyl. The other contained a rather foul-smelling substance, with the words WARNING ACID FOR CLEANING USE ONLY printed on the front.

“This must be what they use to clean the floors and sinks and things with, I’ve seen Dad do it,” Rose mused. “Hm. I have an insane idea. Capable, maybe. But still insane.”

She began to push the acid vat outside the trash area – just as she saw Saffa shrinking in her tree.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Cloak on April 23, 2013, 10:04:50 AM
Nice work, and don't worry about things being a bit of a direct parody (I mean, I've been guilty of it more times than not).
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 23, 2013, 10:16:31 AM
Yeah, you are pretty much RAF's Parody Boss. :D

Will see if I can squeeze in another chapter... ah, why not. Short one for my standards. Probably be the last today, so that Abby and Underseen can catch up.

Chapter Five

Saffa felt the changes begin.

She began to shrink, ever so rapidly, as her body jointed into three sections: head, thorax and abdomen.

Legs sprouted in all directions, and two stick-like features protruded from her face – a proboscis.

Turning into a fly was gross. Turning into one covered in monster Fevicol spittle? It needed a new dictionary definition.

Saffa decided to concentrate on the fly instead. Her face bulged out to form two large compound eyes, and gossamer wings sprouted from her back. If Austin could see me now! She had to let go of the tree branch to be able to finish morphing, but by the time she hit the mud she was very small and three-quarters fly, so there wasn’t much impact.

Finally, the morph was complete. She was a half-inch-long fly – and it was the right morph, for her size meant the huge clumps of sticky saliva no longer clung to her.

<Waheyy! I’m free!>

“But how – WHERE ARE YOU?” the creature roared. “This is not a fair game, I tell you!”

Saffa ignored the whine and flew towards what she could make out as the faint light of the trash area. <Rose! Rose, I’m a fly right now. Where the heck are you?>

“Near the trash!” Rose called out softly. “I think the fly can get you there!”

A fly will be a fly, and its craving for sweet, wonderful trash got Saffa to Rose quick enough. She began to demorph. <Hawk or human?>

“Human. I need the wine thing you do, or this acid won’t fly.”

Saffa remembered a party trick she had done sometime back in RAF, holding a glass and filling it with sparkling white wine from Stellenbosch in South Africa. She didn’t see how it would hurt the creature – until Rose outlined her insane yet genius idea.

“The space up there is not exactly on rent, you know. I occupy it sometimes,” Rose said, pointing to her forehead.

Then – WHAP! A sudden swipe of the spiked tail!

“Aaargh!” Saffa looked at her left hand. It was gashed in several places – not too deep, but pretty bad. The girls ducked as the tail swung about them again.

“That tail!” Rose hissed. “If we could get it out the way, it’ll lose balance and possibly fall to the – “

TSEEEWW!!

“– ground?!”

Saffa looked up to see the thing’s tail on the ground, slashed clean off its body – and about twenty metres behind it was Austin, shredder positioned and ready to fire again.
The creature howled, a noise so loud and jarring it made all three of them buckle and cover their ears in pain. “You dare – ordinary mortal!” It turned straight on Austin.

“Austin! MOVE!” Saffa yelled.

WHAP! Out flicked the tongue.

TSEEEWW!!

He missed the tongue, but burned a hole in a wing. The creature crashed to the ground and bellowed again.

“I swear, more than its tongue or tail, it’s the vocal cords that do real damage,” Saffa grumbled.

In the meantime, Rose had attached a garden hose to the mouth of the tap affixed to the vat of acid. She handed it to Saffa. “I’m opening it on the count of three. One – “

Austin dived as the tongue swiped at him again – and this time it caught him on the right leg. “Aaaahh!”

“Oh, what the hell. THREE!” Rose yelled. She jerked open the tap and crossed her fingers. Saffa focused on green, sun-kissed vineyards instead.

WHOOOSH!

A torrent of wine, permeated by cleaning acid, exploded through the hose at such a force it threw Saffa backwards, but she got back up and aimed it at the creature.

“AAAAAHH!!” The caustic liquid was working! It began to eat into the leather skin. Austin seized the opportune moment to fire right into the creature’s face.

TSEEEWW!!

The creature howled its loudest howl, and then sank to the ground in a crumpled heap. The wine stopped. The three teenagers walked up to the mass that a long, long, time ago had been their office coordinator. Although seeing as she had just tried to kill them, they felt she had probably deserved it anyway. Besides, she wasn’t even really Mrs. Bennett.

“Is it…?” Rose whispered.

The creature stirred – but only briefly, as Saffa hurled a Kimberley special into its chest. It stopped, then dissolved, like water running down a sink. Like any other escaped manifestation from the virtual side. Unlike Saffa, who was flesh, blood and something more. She shrugged. “Gone.”

“What about the other guy?” Austin said.

“Oh, I know where he’s gone,” Rose said. “And I’m going after him. To get some answers. You two best be gone and pretend like nothing ever happened.”

“Well, okay, then. But watch yourself,” Saffa urged.

Rose took the shredder from Austin. “I will.”

She walked down the road, turned into a blind alley between two apartment buildings, and melted into the darkness.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on April 23, 2013, 12:51:52 PM
This is amazing. I love it!! You don't have to wait for me to catch up. I will, no matter how man chapters you have.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 24, 2013, 10:21:11 AM
Haha I was worried about that, seeing as my writing just flows and I end up with pretty long chapters.
So here's the latest chapter. Rose in the spotlight here, showing off her awesomeness. ;)

 
Chapter Six

Rose streaked silently down the dark alleyway, thinking of epic horror-movie scenes involving said dark alleyway to take her mind off things. Yes, she was invisible, but she didn’t know if the man she was tailing possessed some weapon, or technology, of his own. A portable force-field? A concealed Dracon beam/shredder? Another monstrous thing waiting in the alley?

Who knew? With RAF in the equation, just about the weirdest things were possible.*

She decided to risk it, with a distance of about ten metres separating them. “I know you are here. Do not attempt to escape, instead tell me why you are here,” she said in a soft whisper. “Tell me and I will not harm you.”

Long Black Coat spun around. He looked around in several directions before smiling and saying, “I wonder how you can harm me as an insect in the dark, Andalite.”

Andalite?! Rose rubbed her hands in glee. Well, we’re off to a great start. Might as well keep the act up.

“That is immaterial. I could demorph and then you will be in trouble, human.” If he thinks this is thought-speak, well, he’s a total idiot. “I heard your conversation with the human female earlier.”

“Ah, yes. Alice was extremely helpful. I found her on RAF, you see – “

“How do you know of RAF?”

“Oh, be patient, Andalite, and hear my story to the end. Anyway, she is the one who zeroed in on Saffa, at the school. She enrolled in a vacant post at the school, just to make sure it was the right girl, and she did. Tell your friend not to leave hawk feathers lying around near her locker.”

Rose stiffened. “That still does not explain your association with RAF.”

“Oh, my connection to RAF goes back longer than this. But I will stick to the present. I know the Internet’s power. I know of the existence of sites on their own as domains in the universe – “

“You know a lot for a human.”

“You are not the only highly intelligent beings around, you know,” he said impatiently. “Anyway, where was I? Ah, yes. Domains. Well, I know all this, so naturally I heard of the RAF anomaly. A most curious thing.”

“Go on.”

“How could a bunch of innocuous users create a domain more prominent than even Facebook or Twitter? I needed to know. So I hacked the account of one of the newer users and entered the domain, thanks to the virtual teleport technology they possess. I was what they call a ‘lurker’. I did quite some wandering, oh yes. That’s how I found Alice. That’s how I learned a lot, including facts about your race and several others. But I still could not put my finger on the reason behind the forum’s prominence.”

“And why do you desperately seek this information?”

“You Andalites will never understand humans completely, will you? These days, they depend on the Internet as much as they do on food and water. Any little thing said on a major global platform, a tweet, say, is taken as God’s word – “

“What is a tweet?” Oh, yeah, I’m enjoying this!

The man grunted. “They bring news to humans, simply put. From major world issues to mundane celebrity gossip. But the way they are relied upon – now that, I can use to my advantage.”

“As in – “

“By creating a super-powerful domain of my own, I can override others, glitch to them with considerable ease like the RAFians. Create innocent posts and tweets, bits of news here and there, and no one will be able to stop me, I’ll have blocked them by then. Just think.” He paused, possibly for effect. “One little change and the world will be thrown upside down. I can play around with it – there isn’t much action in the world these days.”

“So. You want to be the virtual Ellimist. And what makes you think this idiotic plan will succeed? RAF will get you first, and they are more powerful than you think.”
“Oh, I know how powerful they are, all right,” he snarled. “Including your little birdie friend.”

“That brings me to the question: why have you come here, after Saffa? You can get what you want from any RAFian.”

“That is true. But Saffa makes an easier target, isolated in India, at least while she is away from RAF. And besides, as far as she is concerned, our work with her is not over. Aah, you can get me – us – once, but not all the time…”

That startled Rose. “You’ve met her before?”

He smiled. “Yes and no,” he said enigmatically. “If you know anything about her life history, well, good for you. I suggest you leave it alone, no need to dwell on the past.”
“Oh, I am focusing on the present. And the present is finishing you.”

“Excellent dialogue, Andalite. Right out of a Hollywood pulp thriller – and I hope you know what Hollywood is, because I’ve got one of my own.” He paused for effect again.
“You’ll have to find me first. And then…”

He laughed, a rather mediocre attempt at an evil laugh, Rose noted. Tch tch.

“And then you’ll have to try and stop me.”

With that, he turned on his heel and vanished into the darkness.

Rose fled from the alley. She had heard quite enough.

* - ;)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on April 24, 2013, 12:46:27 PM
I love this. You hav such a unique writing style. ;)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on April 24, 2013, 04:55:29 PM
These are so satisfying. With the quirky humor and all.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 25, 2013, 10:34:07 AM
Jeez, thanks! You can tell that to the girls in my old class who think I'm nice yet bloody boring!  ::) Ah well, school's over now. No need to waste time thinking about them. And you don't need to bother with my rant... because here's the next chapter!

 
Chapter Seven

Austin washed the sticky creature yuck off his pant leg while Saffa changed back into her formals from her morphing outfit in the ladies’ room. She sighed. It was one thing, living a life as a part-hawk-part-human RAFian in a bizarrely normal world, but as awesome as it was, it had its fair share of danger, and it wasn’t fair to drag a completely innocent person into it all.

Still, Austin had accepted it all pretty readily. But could he be trusted? As much as her heart ached to think of him that way, she had learned from experience that trust was a fragile thing unless you were completely sure – and for those like her, trust was a matter of survival.

The drinks had flowed freely during and after the dance session, like in any Anglo-Indian party, so no one had really noticed the absence of two of the guests, or that Saffa’s arm was bandaged with tissue paper. It also helped that Austin’s parents were not attending, still on duty with the Indian Army up in Kashmir.

“It’s almost too coincidental,” Austin said when Saffa pointed it out.

Saffa couldn’t help thinking of the Ellimist. “Yeah, well, either it all worked out well or someone is pulling strings.”

They left shortly after, and caught up with Rose, who decided to tell them everything the next day, just before lunch at the school’s church. They made it back to school without any major hassles, not even arousing the suspicions of the watchman.

“And you said you’d get bored,” Saffa told Austin as they headed back towards the dorm blocks.

“My hunch has been strengthened. Nothing is ever boring with you around,” Austin said, laughing. He bid the girls good-night as he went over the hillock to the boys’ building.

“Suuure. Your exciting is our normal, bro,” Rose said as she dragged Saffa up the stairs. It wasn’t going to be a very long night.
                                                               
 
*             *              *

I pretty much look like I haven’t slept in weeks, Saffa thought, as she dragged herself to the dining hall with her Chemistry reference book and slumped in a random chair. She looked at her plate in disgust.

Idlis. Round, steamed rice dumplings. She detested them whether they were made right or wrong.

“These are so hard I could fight an alien army with them,” she muttered to herself.

“So go ahead and save the world, freak,” a malicious voice drawled. Saffa looked up. It was Ashley. “Why the hell are you sitting here, anyway?”

“The freak was so busy saving the world from aliens last night, she didn’t sleep and saw the wrong table,” Payal jeered. “Wow, I’m impressed. Those dark circles really complete the freaky look!” The girls at the table cackled and exchanged high-fives. Saffa opened her mouth to make a particularly witty comeback – as was her routine – but didn’t get there.

“Okay, okay, that’s enough,” Jason said from the far table. “Saffa, you take your rocks – “ he gestured at the idlis, “– and sit at our table. Payal, shut up. It’s not funny.”

The girls quietened down as Saffa changed seats. Trust Jason to cut the crap, he did it for her nearly every time, even if he was perfectly normal and had no idea what his cousin really was. He was what they considered the strong and silent type – when he spoke, people usually listened. Kinda like Jake.

“You know, I could’ve handled them myself,” she said, sitting down. “That’s usually the case when you guys aren’t around…”

“Yeah, well, it gets a bit annoying for us these days,” Jason said. “And to think I was actually considering Payal for a free Sunday…” He looked at his plate and made a face.
“Do I really have to eat this s***?”

“Skip it, man. I’ve got Oreos in my locker,” Abhay said.

Austin was at the far end of the table. He caught Saffa’s eye and gave her a knowing look. She smiled.

Everyone poked and prodded at their breakfasts until the bell rang and they all headed to English class. Saffa caught up with Austin on the stairs. “Thought you’d want this,” she said, handing him the Chemistry guide. It was bulging unnaturally.

Austin opened it to find a smaller book inside. Animorphs #1: The Invasion. “This is how it all began,” she said and hurried up the stairs.

“Ah, Saffa. There you are. Take your seat and turn to page 132,” Mr. Patil told her as she entered. “A most remarkable oration. Peter, you may begin.”

After Peter, famous around the school for his ridiculous height of six-foot-four, was done throwing his heart and soul into Mark Antony’s speech, Mr. Patil addressed the class.
“By the way, students, I have to inform you that Mrs. Bennett, the office coordinator? Well, she had a family emergency in America and had to return immediately, so her husband informs me. So I’ll be in charge until we find someone else.”

Peter, sitting in the back row next to Saffa, elbowed her. “Now you can break all the stuff you want in the Chem lab. He won’t know what to do!” Saffa grinned.

Austin was in front of her. He leaned backward to say, “Her husband?”

“Shush. But yeah, I’m thinking that’s our guy,” Saffa whispered. “I don’t recall seeing one at the PTA meeting last month.”

“No talking, now,” Mr. Patil warned.

The period before lunch was free, and the twelfth- and eleventh-graders were together in the twelfths’ common-room doing their own stuff. Austin waited patiently. He needed a distraction.

As if on cue, Saffa, head hidden by a notebook, inconspicuously dropped a tiny diamond in the middle of the room. Abhay saw it first. He launched his portly frame towards the chair it had rolled under. “Oh! Look over there!”

Once the girls saw it, it was a mad dash for the shiny rock, and in the mela that followed, Austin and Saffa slipped out of the room.

“I think it rolled outside!” someone yelled.

To satisfy the masses, Saffa flung a pea-sized diamond into the corridor, and they headed for the church, taking the back staircase to avoid stray teachers.

Rose was waiting for them when they arrived. “Ah, welcome, boys and girls,” she said. “Sit down. It’s storytelling time. And one helluva story it is…”

Rose watched as the expressions on her audience’s faces morphed from confusion to shock to outrage as she gave them the dirt. It was actually quite amusing. Man, I should be taping this.

“So. Let me get this straight,” Saffa said once Rose had finished. “You threatened him with your non-existent tail blade and got this whole mental plan out of him – but you didn’t get his name?!
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on April 25, 2013, 11:50:57 AM
Haha. That's awesome.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 27, 2013, 09:53:09 AM
I know. Rose and I have awesomeness battles. ;) 8)

New chapter!

 
Chapter Eight

Rose grinned sheepishly. “It didn’t seem important at the time.”

“This is so sick,” Austin said. “I mean, we are risking our asses, and your secrets, ‘coz some psycho wants to play with the world like it’s his personal beach ball.”

“We get all the characters,” Saffa sighed. She turned to Rose. “Did he say whether he had a site yet?”

“Not really,” Rose admitted. “Though we could just Google it – “

“Ahem. We don’t have a name to Google,” Austin pointed out.

Rose looked guilty. “Okay, so maybe I got carried away and screwed up some,” she confessed. “But don’t hate on me yet. There’s got to be some other way. For a start, we know what he looks like.” She produced a folded piece of paper from her pocket – and unfolded it to reveal a highly accurate sketch of the man in the long black coat.

Saffa couldn’t help smiling. Rose’s drawing skills had always been exemplary, unlike her own – her most sophisticated work of art so far being a stick figure doing the Gangnam Style.

They studied the sketch. The man had short, close-cropped, straight hair with a slight tuft in front, and he was clean-shaven and thin-lipped, with two sharp gashes across his left cheek and nose – the handiwork of Saffa’s talons.

“Now that’s just great,” Austin groaned. “I know nearly fifteen guys at a time who look like that. Though maybe without the scars.”

“There are details beyond the sketch,” Rose said. “The man had a British accent. So you can rule out all the Indians, Americans, Australians and etceteras you know.”

“He told Mrs. Bennett that his colleague knew all about me,” Saffa pointed out. “So this is someone I know.”

“Yeah, but he kept saying ‘we’. So there are two people here who are after your little hawk butt.”

“So there must be someone in the background, maybe giving our guy instructions. I wonder why? He looks capable enough of being badass on his own,” Austin mused.

“Maybe he ate too much Indian food and he’s been getting gas,” Rose said, grinning. They all laughed.

“Okay, okay, focus, people,” Saffa said, clearing her throat. “For now let’s try and think of whom our coat guy, this ‘colleague’, could be, ‘coz at least we can reach him.”

“A RAFian?” Rose suggested.

“Bull,” Austin said. “Why would a RAFian want to know a RAF secret, which he obviously already knows?”

“Point taken. A banned user?”

“I’ve been on RAF a relatively short time, and there haven’t been any significant bans in that time. None caused by me, anyway,” Saffa said. “Heck, I can’t even do that.”

“Then it must be some outerworlder – that’s the term we use for people outside the Internet,” Rose concluded. “I can’t think of anything else. Obviously someone’s had access to this technology – “

“Lewis Miller?”

“Nah. We weeded him out, remember? And he doesn’t even have his computer anymore – of course, he could use someone else’s – “

“Whoa, whoa, whoa. Rewind,” Austin said. “Who’s Lewis Miller?”

“Lewis Miller was this nutjob sports fanatic from London who managed to get hold of the Internet teleporting technology while it was still running loose. It’s in our hands now and bloody well controlled, but it wasn’t back then,” Saffa explained. “His actual aim was just to get onto betting sites, fix matches and such, maybe get rich – “

“He even hacked a few email accounts. One of them belonged to Underseen, a friend of mine at RAF. And that’s how Lewis came upon RAF. Naturally, he was fascinated.”

“The potential for simple, harmless insanity to breed into psychopath levels,” Rose spat out. “He didn’t understand what made the forum so powerful. If he did, he could use that power for his own ridiculous gains. Naturally, this pissed everyone off, so the mods shooed him out with simple threats and such. But then he comes back all guns blazing – literally. He grabs a bunch of Dracons and starts terrorizing newbies.”

“How’d you stop him?”

“We – oh – I don’t know,” Saffa said suddenly. “I feel like I should remember something here…”

Rose looked at her warily, then went on, “Chased him off to Google, which is pretty much no man’s land. We lost track of him, but that was because he had logged off. That was a bit of a foolish move – the next day Underseen, with a bit of help from the Britain-based RAFians got him arrested by the London police for hacking into his email and stealing personal info.”

“I remember a pretty bad blackout, when I went after him,” Saffa said slowly. “But anyway, just because our guy is a Brit it does not make him Lewis Miller. I mean, Miller was one nerdy blond kid. That happened months ago – surely he couldn’t have aged that fast.”

“Anyway, we know what we need to know, we just need a name,” Austin said. He looked at Saffa. “And you still have loads more to tell me.”

“We have revision hour for that,” she said, smiling.

The bell for lunch went off in the distance. “Gotta run,” Rose said, getting up and fading. “Have to meet the Shawarma on some bloody assignment. Catch you later.”

Saffa and Austin made their way back to the common-room to come upon a crazy scene – someone had found the tiny diamond, and Peter was now ‘auctioning’ it to the class.
“Two hundred, going twice!”

“I should’ve just splattered Ashley with my cranberry juice or something,” Saffa sighed. Austin laughed, and went to the centre yelling, “Three hundred rupees!”

“Three hundred, going once!” Peter yelled.

Saffa shook her head and went back to her chair. That diamond is easily worth a few thousands no matter what the size is. She opened her Physics book, looked at lenses and mirrors for a few seconds, and shut it. She just couldn’t concentrate now – there was something about bringing up Lewis Miller again that made her head spin. Some nagging, important detail that had been forgotten.

The man had said he knew her. Had he actually known Miller? Was he out to finish what Miller had started? Or more?

She sighed. Thinking of questions never brought answers; it only brought more puzzling questions.

It was time to cross over to RAF again.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on April 27, 2013, 11:52:22 AM
Maybe Google stunts your age.

Maybe because all I know about the middle east comes from Pakistan and that isn't truncated much of an great country, but isn't 300 Pakistan Rupees like a bit over 1 US dollar? It is probably different in India.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 28, 2013, 02:20:12 AM
Yeah, it is. I think at the moment 1 dollar comes to 55 Indian rupees. Of course, the guys are only bidding so low 'coz that's all the pocket money they have at the moment. ;D
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on April 28, 2013, 10:21:49 PM
Well, ya. I doubt anyone would have a thousand rupees on hand during school... ;D
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on April 29, 2013, 10:39:54 AM
Yep. Unless, of course, they've smuggled it in their shoes. :P
Right, let's get a chapter down! Again, short for my standards. Which is why I'm gonna stick to one per day I get. :P

Chapter Nine

Rose came out of the staff room, frowning at her geography assignment. She had put all her sweat, tears, and 120 Crayola crayons into this, and that kanjoos, that miser, Mr. Sharma – not-so-fondly referred to as the Shawarma in student circles – had given her an A. An A! Didn’t it deserve an A+ at the least?

She thought back to the meeting in the church. Sooner or later Saffa would have to know the distorted version of what really happened that night, when she chased Lewis Miller through the Internet. Sure, she could know it any time, but it was something Rose easily forgot about. Most of RAF knew that the blackout wasn’t the end of the deal. Rose did know a lot more, yes, but not the whole truth.

Heck, she didn’t even understand what the Ellimist had told her when she reached the site of the final battle, all too late. She remembered it like it had been yesterday, now that she thought about it. Stupid background tab. White, blinding light where she had expected something else. “There is a timeline being erased here… you might want to leave lest you wish to be erased with it,” he had said in his big, head-filling voice. What in the name of Beelzebub was all that about?

Well, when you deal with the Ellimist often, you know to listen to him. So she left anyway. The man talked sense.

The very mention of timelines could confuse her. Even after reading The Andalite Chronicles and #11: The Forgotten twice she still hadn’t understood the concept properly, so now that Lewis Miller was being resurrected and these memories came back to her, she was confused twice over. Man, Saffa had a weird history.

She decided to let it go, and headed to the dining hall, where two big bowls of curd rice and a creation made of chopped vegetables and stew greeted her. Why, why, why do you do this to us, you evil lunch lady.

The rest of the day passed like any normal, boring school day, and at revision hour, the twelfth-graders went out to the grounds to study. The final exams were just a few months away now, and they were starting to feel the heat, what with every other teacher who entered the class reminding them of it.

Saffa was sitting under a tree by the basketball court with wave optics when Austin came up to her, handing her the Chemistry guide. “Finished it in English class. It’s awesome!”

“I know,” Saffa said, smiling. “Sit down, I’ll tell you more.”

And that was that, as she went on, telling a fascinated Austin of The Sharing, Ax and the Andalites, the Ellimist and the games he played, the Pemalites and the Chee, the free Hork-Bajir, Elfangor’s story… She could’ve gone on, but there was too little time.
“Tomorrow’s Sunday. How ‘bout meeting me at the Café Coffee Day in town for lunch – anything to escape the school food – and we’ll continue then?” Austin said.

“It’s a date. But I might be late. I have a Computer project I need to finish.”

“No problem, I can wait.” He paused. “I have a question.”

“Fire away.”

“How’d you get the morphing power? Is it a RAF thing?”

“Oh, no, that was my own brilliance,” Saffa replied dryly. “Steph was taking me on a tour of RAF as a newbie, and while she was showing me the armory, I crashed into a shelf, and a morphing cube fell down. You know, the blue box?” Austin nodded. “Well, I have to show off my fielding, and I caught it. One good touch and the morphing power is yours – so I decided, what the heck, let’s go get us some morphs.”

“Cool.”

“It is, actually. My first one was a female red-tailed hawk – which I took as my other true form, something I knew would happen. Morph from either of them, return to either.” She shrugged. “We can decide these things – that’s how Rose found her invisibility when she visited RAF, personally, once. It’s RAFsense. Everyone that’s, well, weird and wonderful, so to speak, we find our place here. Us and every stray thing that’s out there, and, yes,” she said when Austin raised an eyebrow, “there is something out there.”*

“Right. That’s, uh, good to know. So. What other morphs do you have?”

“Like I said, my neighbour’s Lab. The books say being a dog is real fun, so I tried it out – and man, they were right! It’s amazing. You’re just so… happy!” She laughed. “Fly was no issue. Caught it down at the swimming pool ‘coz I figured it would be useful. Turns out it was.”

“So you decided your other powers as well? The whole South African thing?”

“Er, no, actually,” Saffa said, looking guilty. “That was never my idea – it just came to me after the Lewis Miller episode. I figured that was just a RAF thing, but lately I’ve been thinking that doesn’t make sense. I mean, one moment I’m flying after our boy Miller, then a complete blackout, and the next thing I wake up in my profile thread shooting diamonds at the wall.”

“Maybe someone did it to you on purpose,” Austin said. “Or it’s all a cover-up for something else.”

Saffa raised an eyebrow. “Have you guys been watching Wolverine in the Computer lab again?”

“Er, no, but…”

“The point is, my powers have something to do with the Miller episode. Your cover-up theory is pretty good, actually, but, pray, why?”

“But how do you cover up an entire section of your memory?”

“Who knows? I mean, the Ellimist is definitely capable of doing those things, but I’m pretty sure I didn’t do anything to infuriate him. No. Not a cover-up. Something else.” She paused. “Something stranger, ‘coz I can’t think of anything else. I’ll find out.”

“And how exactly do you plan to do that?”

“I have no idea,” Saffa admitted. She looked into the distance. She swore she could feel her brain’s gears overheating. “But I have a feeling it’ll all come to me soon.”

* - I have definitely been watching too much X-Files. ;D
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on April 29, 2013, 05:48:14 PM
Haha. Again (must I repeat? I think yes. XD ) terrific writing. :) ;)

P.S. you have. Haha. ;D
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 01, 2013, 10:42:08 AM
Thanks a lot! :) Was an interesting episode today, Mulder having this super-stalker was one of the plots. Hmm. Interesting. Might make a good angle for my next, hm? ;)
Now, let's go to RAF in the next chapter.

 
Chapter Ten

The next day was Sunday, and after church, Saffa headed to the Computer lab, ready to haggle with their good-for-nothing teacher about stacks and queues; Austin rounded up Jason, Abhay and Peter to explain where exactly he was going for lunch and to come as backup in case any teachers arrived; and Rose, with nothing to do, decided to give her sketch of Long Black Coat a little more substance.

At 11:00 AM, Austin stood outside CCD, his wingmen inside posted on duty, and his 16mm Colt handgun tucked inside his shirt, seeing what he was going to be dealing with now that he was seeing a girl like Saffa.

<Oy. You down below. Look sharp, soldier!>

Austin jumped, startled at the command being sounded in his head, then regained his composure and looked up – to see a large bird of prey with a ruddy-brown tail, silhouetted against the afternoon sun. Not a local bird.

<Man, I almost hate to have to land, thermals today are amazing,> Saffa said to herself as she plummeted into a dive, aiming for the large trash can behind CCD. She flared her wings and killed her speed at the last second and came to land, and began to demorph.

Austin watched the demorph with an expression of pure rapture on his face. “It’s not nearly as weird as it’s described.”

“Yeah, well, that’s because I make morphing awesome.” She grinned ****ily.

“I thought you could only morph skintight clothing,” Austin said, looking at Saffa’s skinny jeans and green-and-gold South Africa cricket jersey.

“They learnt to morph better stuff later on, and so did we,” Saffa explained.

The date went on well, with Saffa telling Austin the story of the Hork-Bajir planet and about the Helmacrons. Only once did Jason spot Mr. Patil heading that way, and Saffa vanished into the ladies’ room while the four boys talked at the top of their voices about the English Premier League until their class teacher had gone.

“We’ll need more of these dates if I have to finish telling you everything,” Saffa pointed out.

“Oh, we can fix those. And I’m looking forward to them,” Austin said, smiling.

“So am I, mate. So am I.”

That night, while the rest of the school snored, Saffa locked the door of her dorm from the inside and turned on her laptop. Thank goodness for individual dorms for twelfth-graders – sure, they were small and totally cramped, but they served the purpose. Laptops were allowed in the school for research purposes, and you had to get permission from the office to use the school’s protected Wi-Fi. They had thought of everything… except portable broadband USB dongles. What a joke. Saffa had managed to smuggle hers in the suitcase which carried her clothes – they never checked the girls’.

She inserted the USB and logged on to RAF. Then she hit Alt+L* and waited.

All at once, the laptop began to glow, and she could feel herself being sucked into the keyboard. She hated this part. The room around her pixelated and vanished – till she dropped through, fully flesh and blood, onto an open ground covered with grass in places. There were a number of long, narrow, blue-and-white buildings in the distance.

Saffa smiled to herself. I’m back, RAF.

She headed for the Social Board, knowing there was only one person who could help clear the doubts she had. She went to her own profile thread – her own small room. She loved her room – it made her feel at home more than she ever did at her real house.
The room was the size of a typical living room, with squashy beanbags and a worn-out easy chair facing a big screen connected to the set top box, placed on a bookcase (no prizes for guessing the books inside). Ah, TV. The wall behind the chairs was papered with posters of her favourite cricketers. There was a kitchenette and drawers by the side of the chairs, filled with popcorn, crackers, chocolate, and various odd foods Saffa occasionally cooked with.

At the far end of the room, however, away from the friendly, lazy-student-at-home setting, there was a more sinister area. A boxing dummy hung from the ceiling along with a pair of gloves, facing a cabinet that held two standard-issue Andalite shredders and Dracon beams. Papering the wall facing the cabinet were target-practice sheets, the humanoid outlines peppered with largish holes where now-disintegrated diamonds had pierced them through.

It definitely looked like she needed more practice – but then again, you’re always a lot different in battle. That’s when the fear gets to you.

Once she was done straightening a few things here and there, she walked back out and started for Underseen’s profile thread when the man himself turned the corner. He realized she was standing there and waved.

“You look like you could use a drink,” he said, smiling.

“I guess I do need one, it’s been a mental week,” Saffa replied. “And you’re just the person I wanted to see.”

“Really? Oh – good Lord – that reminds me. I had something important to inform you of. We’ll talk about it at the GESB – the drinks are on me,” he said.

The two of them headed to the Galaxy’s Edge Space Bar, where they ordered two Coke floats and took a table in the back. “So how come you’re online?” Saffa asked Underseen.

“Oh, I got bored. Nothing, absolutely nothing, to do. How come you are? Isn’t it like the middle of the night in India?”

“That’s the only time I can come here in peace,” Saffa said. “I still go to school, remember? I can’t log on whenever I feel like it. That’s when you get the ‘irresponsible student’ tag. So what was that you were saying? About something important…”

“Yeah, well, I remembered the important thing I was supposed to tell you only when I saw you. Sorry, I should’ve told you earlier – “

“Hey, no problem, mate. You don’t know how bad my memory is. Anyway, now that I’m here, spill it.”

“Okay. You know Lewis Miller, right?”

Saffa stiffened. “Yes,” she said carefully.

“Well, he was released from prison on bail a month ago.”

* - Reason for this combination will be revealed later!
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on May 01, 2013, 06:22:26 PM
This sounds really good. Continue. ;)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on May 01, 2013, 09:46:43 PM
This gets better and better. Does Austin exist (probably under a different name)? If so are you and him an item?
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 02, 2013, 10:07:54 AM
Well, he's very loosely based on a very nice guy I had the good fortune to befriend when he joined in 12th grade. (I've posted a picture of us in the "Post pictures of yourself" thread.) There's a lot of mutual love and understanding (we're both idiots), and even though school's over and we hardly see each other we still keep in touch and are very close (also helped by the fact we both love cricket to bits and support the same club ;) ).

Now, new chapter. A bit long. Gawd, I need to keep tabs on that.

 
Chapter Eleven

“After only a few months in?!” Saffa blurted.

Underseen shrugged. “Guess our boy has some pretty rich friends, ‘coz they actually put up quite a high bail,” he said. “Aquilai saw it in the paper when it came out. Quite a tiny headline, actually, but we know the man too well – “

“So it is him.”

“What is who?”

Saffa proceeded to explain the events of the past few days, and the appearance of the man in the long black coat with an agenda for her. Underseen listened quietly, then said,

“Highly unlikely.”

“What makes you say that?”

“Well, for starters, Miller doesn’t have a computer anymore, as far as I know. So I don’t see how he could’ve enabled Mrs. Bennett to cross over. Plus, he had to surrender his passport when he was arrested. So he couldn’t have come all the way to India – “

“Not legally, anyway.”

“Even then, what can he do? Hijack a plane? He’s on parole, you know. They’ll be monitoring him for a while now.”

“Who’s hijacking a plane?” a voice said, coming over to the table. The two of them looked up to regard a man in a dark suit and blue tie.

“Oh, hey, Aquilai,” Saffa said. “We were just talking about our old friend Lewis Miller.”

“Yeah, he was released on bail. I doubt he can do much after that.”

“Oh, you’ll wanna hear this. Take a seat,” Underseen said.

He sat down and Saffa repeated her story, this time including her suspicions about Lewis Miller.

“But he is on parole, right?” Underseen said.

“You’re asking me?”

“You’re the guy in London, so, yes, I’m asking you.”

“Well, he was on parole when he was released, but that was nearly a month ago,” Aquilai admitted. “For all you know, he could’ve been a shining example of a model citizen all this while – “ he coughed as he said this, “– and the parole could’ve been lifted. I don’t know. They don’t put these things in the paper. Or on the Net.”

“Do you know where he lives?”

“Somewhere in Bristol. Hey, I’m not going to spy on him or whatever. I have a lot of work, you know.”

“A lot of work, he says, and here he is on RAF,” Underseen said, laughing.

Aquilai ignored him and turned to Saffa. “Anyway, your problem is pretty serious. Anything we can do to help?”

“I don’t know if you can, unless the chase passes in through the Internet,” Saffa said gloomily.

“She’s right, you know,” Underseen said. “You can’t teleport to the Internet through one computer, and come out through some other computer. We made sure of that, thanks to the IP address fix.” He paused. “Another reason why Lewis Miller couldn’t have made it to India even if he still had the technology.”

“Which I incidentally destroyed when I got to him,” Aquilai confirmed. “But anyway, you better keep us posted, Saffa. If we can figure out anything it’s best we be in touch.”

“I will,” Saffa said. Then a smile slowly spread across her face. “Although, if I do manage to lure this colleague guy over to the Internet…”

Underseen caught hold of the idea at once. “…we can come into the picture, and then he won’t stand a chance!” he finished her sentence for her. “The question is, how are you gonna do that?”

“No clue. Rose and I have a lot of thinking to do,” Saffa said. “It is a brilliant idea, though. Oh, and there’s one other thing…”

“Go on.”

“That night, when Lewis Miller came back and stole the Dracon beams,” Saffa paused, noticing that four eyes were focused intently on her. “What happened? What did I do? You guys might remember something. Because I don’t. I sorta blacked out.”

Aquilai and Underseen looked at each other, puzzled expressions on both their faces.

“Oookay. That’s weird, that you don’t remember anything,” Underseen said slowly. “’Coz you actually did quite a lot. You went hawk when he started shooting – “

“Smart move,” Aquilai said.

“– and then he glitched to Google, so the mods went after him,” Underseen continued.

“That’s when he logged out. I was tracking his activity at the time, via a little modification I made in the computer in my profile thread. When he completely disappeared off the radar, we figured out what happened. So we got his location from his Facebook feed – what a blithering idiot – and Underseen here took care of the rest,” Aquilai put in.

“Yeah, but – “ Underseen said suddenly. “Since you don’t remember, Saffa, I’ll tell you what you told me. You said he might be somewhere else, somewhere that’s not tracked by RAF.”

“I did?”

“Yeah – your exact words were ‘a domain in another continent’. You told me all that. Then you told me you’re going after him and you took off.”

“Another continent?” Saffa said in disbelief. “But how did I know where to look?”

Underseen suddenly banged his fist on the table. “Aquilai! Were you monitoring Asia and Africa?”

Aquilai suddenly looked guilty. “I only track movements in and out of RAF, to make sure the right people come visiting. Don’t want any incidents… but yeah, that said, I only looked at places where RAF is a known commodity. Saffa and Ash, in Dubai, are the only Asians on my list.”

“So you landed up in an Asian or African domain. Wherever he was. But where?”

“Why are you asking me?” Saffa said. “I’m the one who can’t even remember anything. But you’re helping a lot. Thanks, guys.”

“I should be thanking you. I’m putting Asia and Africa on watch now, just in case your guy tries anything,” Aquilai said. “New lesson in life: never, never again be that complacent.”

“We learn ‘em every day, bro,” Saffa sighed wearily.

“But wait, there’s something else. Why didn’t you tell anyone else about this? We could’ve helped you take him down.”

Saffa wanted to say, she had felt so unsure, doubtful if anyone would take her seriously – after all, she had been barely a full member when the incident happened, just over one month into her RAFlife, and newbies were not usually given much concern. Yes, she wanted to say all that…

“I don’t know,” she ended up saying. “I really don’t know.”
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on May 02, 2013, 04:51:54 PM
Great chapter. Seems like action will happen soon.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on May 02, 2013, 05:38:37 PM
Yep, it seems like there will be a LOT of action soon... :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 03, 2013, 10:44:44 AM
Not soon enough, not today at least, sorry. Got caught up watching the X-Files and inventing pasta recipes for Sunday lunch at the same time. New chapter will be coming tomorrow, though! (At least, tomorrow in terms of Indian Standard Time. It's 9:14 PM as I type this.)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on May 03, 2013, 08:06:42 PM
Fun!! Can't wait. Oh... Wait. That's in a couple hours for us huh?
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 04, 2013, 10:37:56 AM
Uh, I dunno. I've never really been that great at math. Or time zones. :P Anyway, here's the next chapter. Oh, and I'd tell you in advance - next chapter will be Tuesday night. I don't have the computer on Sundays for Internet, only my phone, and Monday night my cricket club is plying a crucial match which I wouldn't miss for the world. So. Ahem. Next chapter. Short one. No, really.

Chapter Twelve

After saying her goodbyes to Underseen and Aquilai, and promising to keep them posted, Saffa walked outside to the open ground and gave the thought-command – <Log off>. It took a while, but she was returned to her dorm all the same. RAF was still experimenting with Andalite technology as a means to improve Internet teleporting, and it was in its nascent stages, but at least it worked.

She logged out of RAF, shut down and put away her laptop and put the USB dongle in her bag. She always kept it on her person, just in case the cleaning ladies decided to do an infamous surprise dorm cleanup. There were a million thoughts swirling in her head, but the sleep eventually came, and with it the usual scrambled dreams of getting lost online, flames erupting from the Chemistry lab – fire was the only thing that scared Saffa – and a red-tailed hawk dive-bombing on men in trenchcoats.

She caught up with Rose at breakfast the next day, a decent spread of burnt toast-and-butter and cornflakes with milk. “I was on RAF last night,” she began.

“No surprises there. Hey, I’ve always wondered,” Rose said, her mouth full with toast.
“Why Alt+L?”

“Because it doesn’t do anything else on a normal browser? I dunno. That’s what Richard said, anyway.”

“Uh-huh. So? What’s the latest?”

“The latest is that Lewis Miller was apparently released from prison a month ago.”

Rose nearly choked on her toast. “What?!

“Shush, you’ll bring the whole damn school here,” Saffa hissed.

Rose swallowed and whispered, “What!”

“Yeah, he was released on parole. Guess he’s got a darn good backup man – who knows, might be our guy here.”

“And we know who ‘our guy’ is?”

“Far from it,” Saffa admitted, going on to outline the reasons discussed that ruled out Lewis Miller. “We seem to have too many odds against him. And even then…”

“Even then, I can’t finalize anything until I have a name. Yes, yes, you can glare at me all you like, that’s my pure, unadulterated fault,” Rose added.

“What’s in a name? I don’t even use my real name on Twitter. For all you know it, if he gives you a name, it might not be a real one,” Saffa objected.

Rose looked at her skeptically. “Are you seriously suggesting that our wannabe Bruce Wayne cape-coat guy here is actually Lewis Miller?!”

“Oh, come on. It all plays out. This is so Castle, at least how it was in Season 2. The police – that’s us – round up a bucketload of suspects until the guy they finally arrest is the one they checked out first and wrote off simply because his alibi was too good to be true.”

Rose stared at her. “Oookay. You definitely had too much to drink at the GESB last night.”

“Fifty bucks to me it’s Miller.”

Rose grinned. “You’re on.”
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on May 04, 2013, 12:39:55 PM
Good chapters. I like where this is headed. :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 07, 2013, 10:28:21 AM
I'm back... with a new chapter! And my usual long standard. I've got time, so I might squeeze a second in to make up.

Chapter Thirteen

When she caught up with Austin in math class, Saffa told him of their discussion – but also included the part she had left out from Rose, that about her plan to tackle Lewis Miller on that fateful night many months ago.

Austin smiled sadly when he heard about it. “You were always pretty damn smart.”

“I’ve known that, but thanks,” Saffa said warmly.

“And what happened after that? Where did you go?”

“Well, only I know that bit, and incidentally, I don’t remember a twit.”

“I don’t think – “ Austin began, but stopped, grabbed a Math book, and enunciated, “ – and at that step, you integrate by parts.” He looked around, then put the book away. “Sorry. Old lady Andrews had her eye on me. Anyway, I don’t think it’s Lewis Miller. There’s too much stacked against him. It must be someone working with him, someone equally interested in the Internet universe. And someone willing to finish off his dirty work,” he added darkly.

“Of course. Hey, your theory is pretty plausible. There’s another point I have to think of.”

“Why don’t you let go of this for now? We have a workload – “ he pointed to the Math worksheets they had just received, “ – you can deal with that instead. Get some rest. Sleep well.”

“I’m glad to know someone is concerned about my health,” Saffa said, grinning.

And she would have slept on it, had the dream not decided to haunt her. A dream she would remember more vividly than her other scrambled-up visions.

In the dream, she was in her hawk form, flying lazily over the woods at the edge of the school. Riding the thermals on a warm, sunny day – basically, chilling out and enjoying life.

Until her mom showed up, coming from the girls’ dorms and onto the football ground.

“Saffa, get down from there,” she said, in a sinister tone. It made Saffa’s blood run cold. Eh?! She doesn’t know! She doesn’t know of my hawk form. Or my morphing. Or anything. How…

That’s it, she realized. This must be a dream. I’m dreaming!

The sunshine ceased, the thermals died and the wind began to blow and Saffa’s mom grew angrier as she yelled, “Come down from there! You shouldn’t be up there. Go back to your dorm. You’re distracted! You’re going down! I won’t allow it!” she screeched.

<Go away. You’re not real,> Saffa shot back.

NO! I won’t allow this!” Saffa’s mom’s scream was ear-splitting now – almost like the howl of the cat-faced monster she had destroyed a few days earlier. Then, without warning, she grabbed a Dracon beam from her side and fired into the air. “Die, Andalite!

<Not quite.> This was a dream, after all… Saffa folded her wings and pulled into a dive. Inches from the Controller’s face, she flared her wings, outstretched her talons and prepared to strike…

And the scene changed. She suddenly found herself back in her human form, and landed on her knees. The new location of her lucid dream was, apparently, inside a TV. A really bad black-and-white TV with persisting noise all around. There was faint sound coming from somewhere.

“… you going to do here?” a high-pitched male voice was saying. “… perfectly infamous country… racism… what I’m going to do! And you… stop me…” and he uttered a word that was certainly never used in civilized context.

Saffa was shocked. She hated racism in any kind of form, and was about to make a disparaging remark when another voice filled the room.

<… and stones… my bones… your words will never hurt me.>

Thought-speak! It stunned Saffa so much that she nearly fell over. She was hearing thought-speak… there were very few people she knew capable of that. And the voice sounded familiar. Very familiar.

She strained her eyes, trying to get a clear image. She could vaguely make out a tall figure – possibly the man – throwing an object, a box of sorts, at something in the distance.

“I hope that hurts you!” he screamed. And drew a long object – a gun?

TSEEEWWW!!

Not a gun!

Something fell in the distance with a CRASH! And the thought-speak voice sounded again.

<Fire… you like,> it said. <But I … kill you anyway.>

TSEEEWWW!!

“I’d like to … that as a bird!” the man sneered.

Saffa felt like she’d been slapped in the face. Her voice! She was the one doing the thought-speaking!

“What the hell is this!” she yelled.

The image warped and changed, like the channel was being changed. She was hawk again – and flying at top speed through the woods, dodging trees. “Go back! You will die, Andalite!” the screeching voice sounded from beyond.

<This is a dream!> Saffa raged. And the channel changed again. She was back as a human in the TV. There was firing everywhere, and the man was hopping mad. The sound suddenly cleared up.

“You’ll die! You’ll die! You dare defy me! As a bird!”

<Oh, shut up,> Saffa the hawk said. <Ahhhh!>

And in the distance, there came a clear, shrill, grating voice. “Oh, the joy of a deal well done! Really, you’re too clever for your own good, Saffa!”

“Stop it!” Saffa the human screamed in fury. “Let me wake up!”

With that, Saffa’s eyes snapped open and she shot bolt upright in her bed.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 07, 2013, 10:33:45 AM
Okay, here is the second chapter. Apologies for the length... I dunno, when I write I've found it just flows and I can't really find a definite point to stop. Hopefully you guys can catch up.

Chapter Fourteen

Saffa looked around nervously, as if expecting someone to be in the room with her. The only thing she saw were the glowing numbers on her digital clock, reading 12:47 AM. She groaned, feeling slightly queasy. Of all her nightmares – they were quite frequent even before life as a RAFian – this was definitely the most disturbing so far. And, incidentally, the one that made the most sense.

Okay, maybe not the part about her screaming mother turning into a Controller. Perhaps it was symbolic, given that her mother screamed all the same things she had in the dream every time she came back for the holidays these days, and Saffa had begun to hate those holiday visits. 12th grade was hard to start with – but she had been putting in all her best efforts, and had rapidly improved with a top ranking four exams in a row, yet that hadn’t seem to hit home. Maybe it was the fact that the rest of the class was actually rubbish. She’d never know.

As for the other parts, the ones staged in the broken TV set – it hadn’t been very clear, but Saffa was dead certain it had been moments from her attack on Lewis Miller in the Asian/African website she had chased him to, the parts she couldn’t remember otherwise. Well, she’d never forget them now – holy crap, had Miller really called her that?

She smiled to herself. Miller had definitely not known the damage a hawk’s talons could do, and he had paid for it. But she had taken some considerable damage too – could that be the reason why…? Nah, she thought. Unless I landed really, really badly on my head. But that still didn’t explain why the hell she had woken up in her profile thread!

Saffa shook her head and decided to go back to sleep. There were too many things on her mind – keeping them bottled up wouldn’t do any good. She’d talk to Austin and Rose tomorrow.

*                  *                  *

As expected, both parties had rather bewildered looks on their faces when Saffa told them about the dream over lunch, but agreed that neither of them had any answers. So Saffa ate her sour-as-hell curd rice in record time and ran to her dorm to log on to RAF, where she found a PM waiting. It was from Aquilai.

             Saffa – I visited the website of the software firm where Lewis Miller works. You know, personally. Looking in the employee files I found a guy who looks very similar to the one you described. His name is Adrian Price and he works in the hardware department, with Miller. I’ll try looking for more; you keep me posted on what you’re up to.

This was a good start; it also meant Saffa owed Rose a fifty. At least, not until Price was taken down. In her reply, Saffa told Aquilai about the dream and sent a CC to Underseen, then, hearing noises behind the locked door, shut down quickly and slipped back to the dining hall.

The weather was so good during revision hour, with clear skies and a calm breeze, that Mr. Patil himself felt it a crime to keep everyone inside studying – so he banished his class to the grounds and took off to tend to his garden.

The class was more than happy to let loose. The guys ran off to get various sports equipment while the girls preferred to gossip in the shade, except a sportive few. Saffa joined the usual gang of boys at cricket, which was always fun, since they usually turned the game into an RPG of sorts.

“The great James Anderson marks his run-up with pinpoint precision,” Peter announced, tossing the ball in the air. “He strides with all the grace of the Englishman he is – at the same time, sending a signal to the poor chap batting that he is here to be feared.” He then put on an appropriately menacing expression.

“But the bowler’s ****y demeanour does not sway the stable mind of the master of improvisation, AB de Villiers,” Saffa declared, taking her stance at the batting crease, emulating the revered South African captain. “He marks his ground, straightens his stance and looks Anderson straight in the eye, unafraid, ready.”

The cricket ground was right next to the woods, so a fair few balls had gotten hopelessly lost in the confusing brambles every time someone hit the ball long, straight and hard – which was exactly what Saffa did after Peter pitched the ball too full and she strode down the pitch with ease. “Six!” Abhay yelled from point. “Great shot, AB!”

“You mean bad ball, Jimmy,” Saffa said, grinning. “Hey, where’s the ball?”

“Dunno. Must’ve gotten lost again,” Peter said. All of them turned to look at Austin, fielding in the outfield.

Austin saw the eyes fixed on him. “What? What do I do?”

“You’re the one closest to the woods, dude. Go fetch,” Peter ordered.

“Fine,” Austin grumbled. He headed to the woods to look for the missing ball.

It was still daylight, but the woods were thick with trees and blocked out most of the light. Of course, there were no real threats in here, since the reserved forest part of the woods was barricaded from the school by an electric fence. Last year there were rumours about the woods housing wolves, and a few howls were heard – but that turned out to be a ninth-grade Halloween stunt with two guys howling their butts off, who later got the monikers ‘The Failwolves’.

All this didn’t deter Austin from wandering inside, searching for red against green and brown. He found the ball soon enough, close to the entrance and covered in mud, and was just about to leave when he caught a movement in the corner of his eye. He whipped his head around immediately, picking up a stick just in case.

Nothing. Was it just a bird? Austin went a little deeper inside, scanning the array of deciduous trees for something mobile. He could hear Abhay yelling faintly, “Hey, dude, where are you? It won’t be that far in!”

The movement again! Austin turned right, where he could see the electric fence some fifty metres ahead. Saffa’s hawk eyes would be extremely useful here… But there was no need for that, he realized, when he finally caught sight of the hulking shape heading towards the fence.

He ducked behind a tree, but the nearly-seven-foot-tall thing seemed to take no interest in him and went along its way, disappearing through the trees. That was Austin’s cue to run out of the woods. He was unarmed and didn’t stand a chance if it saw him…

“Where the hell were you, man?” Jason said. “Observing the wildlife?”

“Kinda. Found a snake,” Austin lied, while giving Saffa an I’ll-tell-you-later look. The boys seemed to buy it, and they went on with the game.

Austin took a great catch in the outfield, but kept glancing over his shoulder, just in case. He had to be right. He had read enough of the books to figure out what the creature was.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on May 07, 2013, 05:12:42 PM
Oh crap!! I think I know what it is!! I won't post it though so that I don't ruin it for everyone else. :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 08, 2013, 10:51:18 AM
No duh, it's very obvious. :P And just to prove the point, here's the next chapter.

Chapter Fifteen

“Hork-Bajir in the forest?” Saffa spluttered.

It was dinner, rotis – the school’s signature bulletproof version – with two insipid curries (spinach and chicken), and Saffa, Rose and Austin were sitting aside at a table in the far back. Rose was invisible, having finished her dinner early, so as not to make the gathering look suspicious. And as for Saffa and Austin, a good proportion of the school had figured they were an ‘item’ now – which meant Saffa got even more dirty looks from the groupies. But hey, what could they do other than soak, wallow, and do the backstroke in jealousy?

“Oh, come on. You couldn’t miss it. Seven feet tall? Blades all over the place? Dinosaur head? You’d know immediately if you’ve read the books,” Austin argued.

 “Except you wouldn’t possibly expect to see one in the real world,” Saffa said. “But then, I live in the crazy one. What the devil were they doing in our woods anyway?”

“Sampling the bark?” Rose offered. Saffa stared at her. “Seriously speaking? I have no idea. Dunno why you’re asking me. But are these free Hork-Bajir or Controllers? You said you’ve found both on RAF.”

“We’ll know only if we get up close to them,” Saffa said. “But I think it’s been established that these guys are from RAF. Of course, there’s nowhere else they can come from,” she added as an afterthought.

“So then what? We go after them?” Austin asked.

“I’m not coming,” Rose said. “I have a Civics paper to do. Basically, pure fiction slathered with the right amount of bull.”

“Fine, then, don’t come, because we are going,” Saffa declared. She turned to Austin. “Are you sure you’re up for this? They can do real bad damage.”

“Hey, I’m an army man. If there’s a fight, I’m there,” Austin said, grinning. “I’ll get my shredder.”

Saffa went back to her dorm after dinner again and checked her PMs to find that Underseen had replied:
     Hey, just saw your PM. I hope you’re okay, don’t let those dreams bug you out too much. They must be trying to say something. BTW, Aquilai told me to tell you that he reported two unknown signatures leaving RAF somewhere in Asia, close to where your school is. Best be on the lookout for trouble.

Saffa quickly replied:
     That would be a couple of Hork-Bajir, we saw them in the woods today. Probably Price’s handiwork. I’m going after them, will catch up soon.

If I manage to make it back, that is, she thought.

Later, at around ten in the night, as agreed, she stole out of the girls’ block through the back staircase in her morphing outfit – a dark green leotard. Thank goodness for a camouflaging colour.

Austin was already waiting for her at the edge of the woods, shredder slung over his shoulder. “Nice outfit,” he said.

Saffa laughed. “It was the only thing I could find that blended in. Come on, let’s get this done with.”

They crossed over into the thick forest cover, squinting to try and see something – a flashlight would’ve attracted too much attention, including that of the nosy warden of the boys’ block, so they had decided not to bring one. The little light came from cracks made by gaps in the tree cover and from a weird kind of moss that grew on trees here and there and glowed in the dark.

Austin frowned. “I don’t see – “ He stopped. “Oh. Holy. Crap.”

They had reached the electric fence – which had been ripped up in an area, one of the poles lying on the ground and the fence torn, leaving a gaping hole safe enough for a grown man to pass over.

“Wonder how Price is gonna explain that?” Saffa wondered. “’Coz a student, even a teacher, cannot possibly do that much damage.”

“That’s his headache – anyway, it means they’ve gone this way.” Austin took a look beyond the broken fence and gulped. “Into the reserved forest.”

Saffa smirked. “Are you telling me you’re scared of going in there?”

That was not the face Austin wanted to put in front of a lady. “Of course not,” he said firmly. “Chalo. Let’s go.”

They gingerly stepped over the fence – thankful that nothing happened – and ventured deeper inside, into parts of the wood that they hadn’t seen before. Saffa went over towards the left of a huge teak and looked around. “I can’t find them, Austin,” she said.

No answer.

“Uh, Austin?” she called. “Where did you disappear?”

Still no answer.

She turned to her right to find no one behind her – that is, until she spotted Austin
crouching about ten metres away, behind a tree. He had a look of absolute horror on his face.

“What is with you?” she said impatiently. “You found the Hork-Bajir or what?”

“N-no,” Austin stammered. “S-something else found you.”

Saffa turned – and froze. She stared right back into cold, calculating yellow eyes. Right at the almost glowing orange fur with black stripes.

Large as life, right out of the newspaper article she had read just a few days ago (and happily chose to ignore), was a Royal Bengal tiger. It was clearly rather pissed at having its habitat breached. And having been woken up.

Okay, she thought. Stay calm. It can sense your fear. And no sudden movements.

Saffa slowly took a step backward. Her foot cracked a twig. And with a graceful, liquid leap into the air, the tiger charged.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on May 08, 2013, 05:16:17 PM
Oh crap!! And again, I'm left with a cliff hanger.... You and Cloak have a really bad habit of doing that.... ;)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on May 08, 2013, 09:34:25 PM
You know what they say about Cliff Hangers, cuz I don't.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 09, 2013, 10:47:47 AM
Why thank you, Abby. 8)

No, I don't, Underseen, which is probably why I like writing them. ;) Okay, Abby, you can pull yourself off that cliff now, because here's the next chapter.

 
Chapter Sixteen

Saffa ducked at the last second, purely out of instinct, and rolled over as the tiger arced over her and landed between her and Austin. It looked positively enraged now, and Saffa was lying in the dirt, scared s***less.

What could she do? She couldn’t kill the tiger (she didn’t want to anyway), or the Forest Department would be after her. Even wounding it would cause some suspicion. The fear was blocking her ability to think, and now the tiger was circling her, perhaps as a signal that this new, helpless prey was his…

“Saffa! MORPH!” Austin yelled from behind the tree. It caused a distraction: the tiger ****ed his head upwards, looking for the source of the disturbance. And now Austin was in trouble – the tiger might recognize him as another predator.

But it gave Saffa the time she needed. Feathers began to sprout from her skin.

The tiger approached the tree, slowly, cautiously. Austin decided to try something stupid – a well-known battle tactic in the face of fear. “OwwoooOOOOoo!” he howled.

<What the hell, man?!> Saffa said, fully hawk now. She rose up in the air, flapping hard to get altitude in the dead night air.

“Ggggggrrrrraaaawwwrrrr!” the tiger roared back. It was an unbelievable noise that made Austin nearly sink to the ground and drop his shredder and threw Saffa backwards in the air.

<Oh, brilliant, Bear Grylls. Now you’ve made him think you’re a threat!>

But Austin was just standing there behind the tree, completely paralyzed, as the tiger bared its teeth and strode towards him.

Saffa would’ve frowned if she had a forehead. Good Lord, she had to do something! And then an idea came to her. It was insane, reckless, and totally out of Rachel’s handbook. But it was the only thing she could think of.

She pulled into a dive and hurtled towards the tiger. “Tseeeeeer!” she screamed.

The tiger whipped its head around just as Saffa landed, talons outstretched, on the tiger’s back. The tiger let out a discontented roar – but began to quieten down and droop.

“What are you doing?!” Austin hollered.

<Acquiring the tiger. Now GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE!> she ordered. Austin happily obliged. Saffa followed him into the forest once she was done, leaving the tiger to try and figure out what happened.

She went ahead to find Austin crouched behind another tree. <What now?>

“Like the tiger wasn’t enough,” Austin whispered and pointed into the thicket. He was right – you couldn’t miss it. Standing there were two tall, intimidating Hork-Bajir. Right out of the books. The trees next to them had a layer of bark missing.

<So they must’ve gotten hungry. Could these be normal Hork-Bajir, then?> Saffa wondered.

She got her answer, for, at that moment, Austin chose to sneeze.

The Hork-Bajir jerked at the sound of the noise. It was only then that Saffa noticed the Blue Bands on their forearms. “Who’s there?” one said, in perfect English and a raspy voice.

“Controllers, all right,” Austin said. “What do we do now – oh. Whoa. That is beyond weird.”

He was looking at the sight of a red-tailed hawk with its feathers melting into orange fur, growing larger all the time. The beak softened and flattened to form a snout. Talons grew outwards and turned to legs, and two more appeared just as the stripes drew themselves on the fur. The long tail came last.

“This is like Life of Pi,” Austin muttered. “Now all I need is a boat and some water.”

The tiger growled at him, baring its teeth. One of the Hork-Bajir registered the noise. “I know you’re in there, Andalite!”

Austin looked nervously at the tiger. “Saffa. Saffa, control the morph! We are in a situation here. Take control. It’s me. Austin.”

<What the – oh, man! Hate it when that happens.> Saffa shook her tiger head, a very human gesture. <Hey, these tiger eyes can see. I see the Hork-Bajir clearly now. Very cool. I’ve always wanted a battle morph.>

Saffa was indeed enjoying the morph. She could feel the strength running through every inch of her body, like liquid steel. Her muscles felt like springs that could lift her effortlessly any time she wanted. Right now, her focus was on the Hork-Bajir. She could feel the killing instinct – They’re invading my space. Kill. Remove.

She leapt for the nearest Hork-Bajir, who had clearly not seen it coming and was thrown to the ground at once. His Dracon beam clattered to the ground as she made an almighty slash across his flank. “RrrraaawwrrRR!” she roared in warning.

TSEEEWW!! The other Hork-Bajir fired. She dodged nimbly out of the way. Missed!

TSEEEWW!! Shredder fire this time! “Aaaargh!” the Hork-Bajir yelled. A stump was where his right hand should’ve been.

The second Hork-Bajir scrambled to his feet and slashed through the air. Austin hit the ground. His elbow was bleeding.

<Are you all right?>

“I’m fine!” Austin yelled and fired again. He fried a bunch of leaves.

The Hork-Bajir slashed again, this time making a gash dangerously close to Saffa’s neck. <Ahhh!!>

“Die, Andalite!” he yelled. The other Hork-Bajir looked at him. “You idiot! Don’t kill her. Kill the human if you want. But she is the visser’s responsibility.”

That made Saffa stop for a second. <Visser? What visser?>

“Visser Twenty-One. He is on Earth and he wishes to destroy you,” the Hork-Bajir replied calmly. “He offered us promotions in exchange for bringing him the Andalite bandit. Which is you.”

Saffa thought for a while. <Hey, Yeerk. Answer me. Is your visser’s host body a human by the name of Adrian Price?>

The Hork-Bajir stumbled backward in shock. “How do you know all this!”

Saffa took advantage of the distraction to leap at the Hork-Bajir, teeth bared, and ripped a chunk out of his flank. <You’ll believe anything for a promotion, won’t you?> she said as he dissolved.

“Saffa! Behind you! Duck!” Austin yelled suddenly. She ducked just as an arm blade swept within inches of her head. <Oh, crap! Thanks, Austin!>

“Watch it!” Austin yelled in reply. The Hork-Bajir came back for another swipe. He got her in the chest. <Oh, God!>

“No!” Austin yelled. Saffa’s head was spinning. All she could see was her own blood around her… Demorph! she urged herself. Come on! Slowly, but surely, she could see pink flesh appearing in place of the bloody fur.

The Hork-Bajir hovered over Austin, who fired – and missed. He was just about to say a final prayer when –

“AAUUGH!” the Hork-Bajir yelled suddenly. A hole appeared in his chest, and then, an iron rod materialized in the hole. Austin stood flabbergasted. “Huh?”

The Hork-Bajir staggered and swiped at thin air. “What is this!” he yelled hoarsely.

Saffa got up just as her tiger snout withered and reformed to form her human face. She watched the scene in equal amazement – then ducked as the Hork-Bajir swung his bladed tail towards her.

From somewhere behind her, a voice cackled, “You’re never gonna catch me! You’re never gonna catch me! I-killed-Sirius-Black! Ah-ha-ha-haa!”

Saffa turned round and stared at a tree in disbelief. “Rose?!”

“Aw, damn. I was hoping to go with Bellatrix Lestrange,” Rose said. “But yes, it is I, here in the flesh – not that you can see it – and here to save the day. Whoa!” she added as the Hork-Bajir swung at the tree she was standing next to. But its back faced Saffa – who, quick as a machine gun, swept a round of diamonds into its back. “Take that!” she crowed. The Hork-Bajir slid to the ground.

“Hey, don’t leave me out,” Austin said, coming up with shredder aimed. TSEEEWW!!

The Hork-Bajir dissolved into nothingness, leaving behind a couple of burned branches, a broken electric fence and three tired, battle-worn teenagers.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on May 09, 2013, 12:59:42 PM
Uh oh.  A visser?
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 10, 2013, 09:47:12 AM
Nope, no visser. That was just a false identity to lure those guys over, as it slipped out. Well, I'm posting now, but there's a match on, very important one... I'll see if I can squeeze a chapter into the 2-minute "strategic timeout" (which is really just another window to get a load of annoying commercials in).

EDIT: Got caught during the timeout chatting with this annoying classmate of mine, but here's the chapter anyway.

Chapter Seventeen
   
“Hey, listen to this,” Jason said as he read the newspaper at the breakfast table. A few days had gone by since their skirmish in the woods with the Hork-Bajir, but Saffa, Rose and Austin hadn’t encountered anything out of the ordinary in that time. Now, on a breezy Sunday morning, with the Board Practical Exams a few days off, they were sure they could afford to take some time off from looking, at least for that day.

Jason continued reading the article he was looking at out loud to his little audience. “A portion of the electric fence, you know, the one that cuts off the reserved forest from the school grounds? Well, they found it damaged. Like, really damaged. A freakin’ pole was ripped clean out of the ground!”

Abhay gave a low whistle. Austin stuffed his mouth with idli – which had made a grand comeback – so as not to give his voice away as he said, “Wonder who could’ve done that?”

“They could’ve used a machine,” Peter suggested.

“Bull, man. How do you get a JCB or something into that forest without knocking half of it down?”

“Maybe it’s killer aliens who’ve taken over Godzilla,” Abhay said with a grin. Saffa and Austin, sitting next to each other, gave each other the slightest wink.

“Just tell me they’re putting the fence back up,” Saffa said. “I mean, there’s supposed to be a tiger in there.” She said this with considerable ease, having practiced lying on a much more regular basis than Austin.

“Oh, they’re putting it back up, all right,” Jason said. “Although they’ll have a much harder time figuring out who or what did it.”

“Knowing how Indian systems work, they’ll put it back up within a month. I mean, they took this long to notice the pole’s actually been ripped up,” Saffa told Austin as they left the dining hall together. “So what are you up to today?”

Austin groaned. “Don’t remind me. I have to sit the whole morning with Mrs. Andrews for extra revision because of that 20 percent on the last pre-board exam.” He groaned again. “A whole damn day of math!”

“Wow, I pity you,” Saffa said soothingly. “I have absolutely nothing to do. Guess I’ll roam around a bit. If you know what I mean.”

“I know exactly what you mean,” Austin said, winking, as he left her to head to the classroom for his Math drill.

Saffa went to her dorm, locked it from the inside, and plugged in her dongle. Her Chemistry study partner, Sonal, was supposed to have sent her a bunch of sample question papers to her by email, so she logged into Yahoo! and opened her email account.

The question papers were there all right, but also, amid the advertisements and mail notifications from Facebook, Twitter and RAF, was a mail from a certain Adrian Price.

Saffa froze. She didn’t know if she should open the mail – what if it had a Trojan or something embedded that had flummoxed Norton and gotten through? The title of the mail, though, was ‘This is not spam’. It looked like the guy had a twisted sense of humour. Saffa decided to risk it and clicked on the mail anyway.

The mail was rather long. It read:

        Didn’t take me very long to find your email ID – creating a website of my own and glitching to Yahoo! certainly helped. If you’re reading this, it means you outsmarted my Controller friends. Very good indeed. Oh, but it’s not over yet; I’m looking forward to meeting you in person. Perhaps on my website – but for that, you’ll have to find out what it is. And I don’t give details that easily.
       That was Lewis’s problem, which is clearly why he wants me to do his work. After all, we’re both after the technology. You RAFians don’t realize the things you can do with it. Lewis wants you to know that he still hates you and England deserves to be number one no matter what the sport. Maybe he can meet you at CSA again. That would be too good to be true.


Saffa stared at the screen for a few seconds and then closed the tab showing the mail. It did give away three things: a) he had his own site, and therefore had to be stopped from accessing teleporting technology at all costs; b) he was right when he said ‘not giving details easily’; and c) the man did not know how to write a proper email, even working in a computer firm.

“So, he thinks this is funny,” Saffa muttered to herself as she shut down the laptop.

“Oh, it’s not funny. It’s hilarious, at least when you look at it right,” a shrill voice said suddenly.

Saffa stiffened. She recognized the voice from her dream – one which was a regular occurrence these days.

She turned round slowly to regard the thing standing in front of her closed door. It had a vaguely humanoid shape; two legs and a stubby tail, with dark, wrinkled flesh, a narrow lower jaw and wide, laughing eyes, all rimmed green.

Saffa’s expression darkened as she recognized the owner of the voice. “Get out of my room,” she told the Drode in a low, threatening tone.

“Oh, no, that won’t be necessary. And neither will that,” it said, gesturing at the large, sharp diamond in Saffa’s hand.

“Oh, you think? I’ll tell you what I – " Saffa stopped. She watched the Drode, who was still looking at the diamond. Then it began to laugh – a cackle, almost. Saffa could only wish that her doors were soundproof.

“Oh, it’s truly hilarious!” the Drode gasped in between laughs. “You plan to hit me with that? The very product of the work of a meddling fool!”

“It hurts, you know. And you are pissing me off,” Saffa said coldly.

“Oh, I know it hurts. In ways you will come to know. That should never have happened,” the Drode said. It looked at Saffa, eyes wide. “Poor birdie. Don’t you remember anything?”

“As a matter of fact, I don’t,” Saffa said. “But that’s not the point. What do you want?”

“Ask Lewis Miller,” the Drode said. “He knew what he wanted. And I offered it to him. He’s such a good boy, you know. Unlike you.”

You told him to go after RAF?!” Saffa spluttered.

“Well, he wanted it. So I told him to go get it,” the Drode said simply. “It would’ve worked out. He had a brainwave. But you came along and spoilt it all. Bad little hawk,” it taunted, wagging a finger at Saffa. “Some things should never be erased.”

She smiled smugly. “I’m going to spoil it this time, too. Wait and watch.”

“How do you know? As far as I’m concerned one of you is going to end up dead if you take that route,” the Drode said warningly.

“You can’t predict anything.”

The Drode grinned a half-evil-half-mischievous grin at Saffa. “Can’t I?”

“No, you can’t,” Saffa said firmly. She gripped her diamond harder.

“I can help you avoid that, though,” it said. “Just do my good master Crayak a favour. He’s not really amused with the rise of RAF. It poses a threat.”

“So what, you want me to kill Richard or something?” Saffa’s eyes blazed.

“Any of the most powerful members would be enough. Come on, you know how big they’ve become. They are the new Big Jakes. And you’re an unimportant little newbie,” it said ****ily. It looked at Saffa with expectation in its big eyes. “That’s all you need, to stay alive. Miller is a greater adversary than you think.”

“One life for nearly hundreds?” Saffa spat. “Over my dead body.”

“It’s even more hilarious that you should say that,” the Drode cackled, before vanishing into thin air.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on May 10, 2013, 02:58:54 PM
India seems so fun according to this story.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on May 10, 2013, 07:04:50 PM
yep^^

Stupid Drode.... Making everything difficult.....
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 11, 2013, 03:32:07 AM
India seems so fun according to this story.

Everyone does what they like, the law is thrown out the window, the politicians are so incompetent it drives you crackers and my state gets its revenue from alcohol stores - but if you look beyond all that and take life with your mates, you can have some real fun in this country. :) (It's only when you grow up and become an independent adult that all those factors come into play - but hey. I'm still young. It's all good. 8) )
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 13, 2013, 10:31:52 AM
Okay, we've had too long a break. New chapter - and things are getting serious.

 
Chapter Eighteen

It was a few days after Saffa’s untimely visit from the Drode, the only unwanted event in an increasingly normal time, as January turned into February and the twelfth-graders soon found themselves preparing in a frenzy for their practical exam part of their finals. While Austin pored and fretted over his lab records, Saffa, who had a much quicker brain, mostly helped him out learning and prayed she wouldn’t break anything on the day.

It was right in the middle of the Chemistry practical that the call came. The class was busy staring at their burettes filled with potassium permanganate as it drip-drip-dropped into the stuff in the conical flask below, impatiently waiting for the stuff to turn pink, when Mr. Patil interrupted them by barging into the lab unannounced.

“Austin, could you come down to the principal’s office, please,” he said.

Austin froze. What on earth had he done now? But Mr. Patil’s face didn’t really betray any sign that he was in trouble; rather, it looked somewhat worried. He walked to the doorway, feet suddenly feeling like they were made of lead. Mr. Patil whispered something to the Chemistry teacher, Mrs. Agarwal, and left with Austin. “Good luck, son,” he whispered to the boy as he left. That made Austin feel even more terrified.

In the lab, everyone was discussing in hushed tones what Austin could have possibly done, when Mrs. Agarwal called out in her clear tone, “Quiet, please. This is an exam hall.” Her face looked grave. Everyone shut up.

“Would you please turn off your burettes for a while,” she continued, “and take a minute’s silence to pray for Austin. His father passed away yesterday.”

*                  *                    *

Austin didn’t return for the exam, or lunch, or even past revision hour, so Abhay went to the principal to obtain the necessary details, which he did soon enough, and related to the grim bunch of Saffa, Jason and Peter after dinner in the common-room.

Austin’s dad had been going about his usual patrol duty along the Line of Actual Control (LOC) in Kashmir when a stray bullet brought him down, he said. All it took was that one bullet right in the chest. No one knew who fired it – militant or soldier, Indian or Pakistani; but all that didn’t matter to his wife, posted further inland as a radio officer with the same unit. She’d got an Army-sponsored airlift all the way down south so she could inform her only son.

The funeral was to be tomorrow, he said, and Austin would be at his hometown – the same as Saffa’s – for the next two days. He’d take the Chemistry practical after he returned, and would finish everything just in time for the first Board exam, English, on March 1st.

The four of them listened to all this in solemn silence. They had all known how much Austin had idolized his dad, who was the reason behind Austin’s own ambition to serve in the Army someday. His life would never be the same.

They soon got over it through the next two days, going about their exam preparations albeit with a still, hanging air – partly due to the tension of the finals and partly due to Austin’s plight.

Saffa found herself facing a new problem – that of having nothing to do. Sure, she had to study, but the first exam was English and that was a joke. Rose was busy with her own exams, and if Austin were here, she could at least discuss the issue and plot further moves – no one else knew her secret. But he wasn’t. And it was annoying.

She decided to take her mind off it, and knew just the way to do so. After she locked her dorm door, she looked up, down, in all directions to make sure she wasn’t being watched, then logged into RAF. A PM from Seal greeted her:

        Hope you’re doing all right, Saffa. Say, that monster you described to Aquilai? I think I’ve seen a similar sort somewhere in the Bannedlands. And we reported a signature missing from there today, so you better be ready for anything. I really wish we could help, but there’s no way yet for us to get over there. Take care!

The Bannedlands? Jeez, where else could this guy get to? And HOW was he getting new horrors to get out of there? Saffa decided to find out for herself. She hit Alt+L.

Once she was in RAF, and could see the familiar blue-and-white buildings looming in the distance, she spotted Nate and Underseen playing cards under a tree, in the shade from Estelore’s bright-as-ever sun. They looked up to see who had arrived, and grinned.

“Well, if it isn’t Saffa the Hork-Bajir Slayer,” Nate said. “Sheesh, you’ve been doing a lot and we’ve just been sitting around useless!”

“You won’t be anymore, that’s for sure,” Saffa said as she approached them. “Because Sir Price already has his own site.”

The two of them stood up and dropped their cards. “How come you didn’t tell us this before?” Underseen asked.

“Because I heard about it only like two days ago. The man sent me an email. And then, you’ll never guess who decided to visit me,” Saffa said, all in one breath.

“He sent you an email?” Underseen said.

“Who visited you?” Nate said at about the same time.

“Whoa, whoa, whoa. One at a time,” Saffa said. Then she thought for a while. “How about we call a meeting of whoever’s here right now? They can tell everyone who’s offline later. At best, they need to be aware of the situation. Because it’s not really a good one.”
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on May 13, 2013, 08:55:34 PM
I can't wait to see more action from Austin.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on May 14, 2013, 04:43:56 AM
:( Poor Austin... *sits in corner to wait while Saffa posts next chapter*
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 14, 2013, 10:54:20 AM
Wait no longer, for I have the next. Needed to consult Rose a bit on this one, since I am essentially criticizing myself.

Chapter Nineteen

Everyone who was around – a bare fraction, really, of RAF’s total population – brought a chair and gathered in the central grassy area. Saffa looked around. Apart from Nate and Underseen, the usual crowd was around – Phoenix, Aquilai, Steph, Seal, Cloaky, Goom, Blaze, Estelore, Dino, Gaz, Blue, Parker, Tony, and a few others Saffa knew from here and there, all in their usual RAFian forms.

“The more the merrier,” Saffa said to herself. She hesitated a little, before finally speaking.

“Ahem. As you all are probably aware of by new, Lewis Miller is back on the scene with plans to take over the forum, and he’s doing this through his colleague, Adrian Price, since he can’t come to India. And pretty much the only reason he’s taking me out first, is because I’m just a bit isolated. Oh, and there’s also the very trivial matter of him wanting to kill me,” she added sarcastically.

<Why, exactly?> Dino asked.

“Because I busted him out when he first came here, so it seems. But we’ll get to that part later. Right now, what you need to know is that Price has his own site and is already using it to go places. That’s how he found out my email ID, but was gracious enough not to hack into it. He couldn’t have even if he wanted to, though,” she added as an afterthought.

“So how do we know which site he’s operating from if he won’t tell us himself?” Parker this time.

“Very good question. Unfortunately we don’t have an answer to that as yet,” Saffa replied glumly. “I guess we’ll just have to intercept him on our own. Aquilai is tracking his online movements, though.”

“Once he gets online I’ll know the site he’s on and hopefully be able to take it down,” Aquilai said, taking Saffa’s cue. “Goom, you’re with me on this, right?”

The goomba ****ed his head at the Time Lord. “Why wouldn’t I be?”

“Moving along, now,” Phoenix called out.

“Yeah. Okay. So I’ll tell you the Lewis Miller story now. Two days ago I had a little surprise gatecrashing in my dorm courtesy the Drode – “

There was an outbreak of excited murmuring at this, until Phoenix rapped on the back of his chair and called for order. “Go on, Saf.”

“Yeah. So, according to the Drode, he was the one who prompted Miller to get back to RAF, steal the Dracon beams… and you know the rest.”

“Why on earth…?” Steph began.

“Simple. Because he wanted RAF. And that’s what Crayak wants, too. We’re not exactly his favourite bunch of people, that’s rather obvious. So he finds a tool for the job, perfectly suited for his intentions, he’ll use it, all right.”

“Oh, great!” Blue complained. “Like we didn’t have enough crap to deal with. Now Crayak, too?”

“Actually, you should’ve seen that coming,” Cloaky said matter-of-factly.

“And as far as I’m concerned, he’s not the real problem. You know he works in the background unless really necessary. It’s the foreground things he does, like Lewis Miller, you’ve got to worry about,” Saffa supplied.

“Saffa has a point,” Underseen said, speaking up for the first time. “Now we need to hear why he’s after you.”

“Ah. That.” Saffa hesitated, uncertain. “Why don’t you take it from there? I’m gonna
sound like I’m bragging.”

“Sure,” Underseen said, then went on to explain what really happened when a bunch of the mods chased Miller to Google. No one said anything as he spoke, just listened intently.

Saffa stood silently behind Underseen. She had dreaded this moment. It was her once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to look like a complete idiot, a total noob, and here it was. Ta-daa. Drumroll, please.

After he was done, the same awkward silence persisted, making Saffa feel seriously uncomfortable. She noticed a feather tattoo start drawing itself on her left hand. Then Seal waddled up to her.

“Good going, girl,” she said. “You know it’s actually useful to have a brain around?”

“Hey, don’t diss my superior intelligence,” Blaze protested. Everyone laughed, Saffa included. She felt infinitely relieved.

“Uh, no one’s mad at me, right? If you are, come on out. I can take it,” Saffa said, smiling in spite of herself.

No one is mad at you,” Phoenix said, putting his arm on Saffa’s shoulder and making her recoil from the heat. “In fact, what you did was pretty brave, going after him yourself when none on us was around.”

“Really?”

<Really. Though, next time, it would be nice to drop us a hint,> Dino said with a slight grin in her thought-speak voice.

Saffa laughed. “Oh, I definitely will. Seeing as next time is probably gonna be very soon,” she added darkly.

Everyone got up and milled around, letting the laughter ease the tension. Which was probably the best thing to do.

“Okay, everyone, to the GESB. Drinks are on me!” Tony yelled.

Yes, there was an encounter with a dangerous, demented enemy up ahead, but it wasn’t anytime now; now, being all together, was just a time to regroup not just as RAFians, but as friends. It was this bond, Saffa noticed, that always brought them together in the face of fire, and made them formidable. And no one, not even Lewis Miller, could try and break that apart.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on May 14, 2013, 05:02:37 PM
I smell character defilement coming up.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 16, 2013, 09:27:17 AM
Well, every superhero has their flaws, Underseen. ;)
 
Sorry for the lack of chapter last night... my parents came home very late from a work party and so I didn't get any online time. (I still live at home - these events therefore influence my RAFing.) Anyway, I'll try and stick two chapters in today to make up.

Chapter Twenty

The first thing that Saffa saw as she entered the dining hall on the day of the English Board exam was a miniature Yeerk pool. No, wait… it was a bain-marie full of grey, rather diluted and purely-puke-inducing oatmeal. Good Lord, now they’ve hit a new low! Saffa felt infinitely grateful for the spiced shortbread stashed in her locker.

The second thing she saw, though, brought a lot more cheer. Austin stood at the back of the hall, in conversation with Mrs. Agarwal, probably about the Chemistry practical. When he finished speaking, he walked past his usual table where Saffa and his friends were sitting, gave them a curt nod, and strode out of the hall.

Everyone around the table stared at each other, half hurt and half in disbelief. “What the hell was that for?!” Abhay began.

“Shh, quiet, bro. Don’t make a scene,” Jason said softly. “I have no idea. Either he just wants to skip breakfast – “

“And I don’t blame him,” Saffa interjected.

“ – yeah, or he just wants to be alone,” Jason finished. “I think we should talk to him,” he said in his usual blunt way.

“Uh – I think I better do that. This sort of thing needs a woman’s touch,” Saffa interjected, receiving coughs from her fellow mates.

The exam was easy (what else do you expect when you’re the boss of Indian English papers) and Saffa finished it with nearly an hour to go, so she asked the invigilator for permission to leave the room and found Austin waiting outside the next hall, stuffing things into his bag. She came up to him.

“Easy paper, huh?”

“Rubbish,” Austin agreed, before slinging his bag carelessly over his shoulder and giving her a sad smile. “Sorry about all that in the morning… would you apologize to the guys too? I wasn’t particularly friendly this morning. Had a lot on my mind, so…”

“I understand.” She raised an eyebrow. “You are okay, right?”

“Getting there,” Austin replied. He sat down on a step in the nearby staircase. “Mom was hysterical, those three days. I mean, she’s always prepared for something like this happening, what with being in the Army and all, but yet on the day, I dunno… something just sorta snapped in her.” Saffa nodded. “She was always a strong woman, I looked up to her that way. Kinda like you, I guess.” He grinned.

“Uh-huh. I won’t take the butter, thanks. Go on.”

“Anyway, it all kinda calmed down a little towards the end, after the funeral and all. Though it’s rather annoying when everyone in the neighbourhood looks at me and goes ‘oh, look, that’s Lieutenant-Colonel Connor’s beta. You know, the one who died?’ I guess they would talk about me like that. My dad was pretty darn decorated.”

“That’s an amazing dad to have.”

“I know.” Austin’s eyes shone with a radiance Saffa was seeing for the first time that day. “I’m gonna take over from where he left off. Finish school and then go on to defend the country – because from what we’re seeing in the papers these days, we’re looking at war pretty soon.”

“And things will get ugly if someone doesn’t step in soon,” Saffa said grimly. She beamed at Austin. “I know you’ll make a fine soldier.”

“Hey, I’m already having a bit of training, thanks to you.”

“What do you…? Oh. That. I – “ Saffa began, but was interrupted by a steady stream of students walking out of the two rooms, followed by the invigilator of one room. “Gotta run,” she said, and joined Sonal in the corridor.

Later, at lunchtime, Austin approached her, saying, “This is getting annoying… The whispers are following me here, too. I’m the specimen, the Army beta. I need to escape somehow. Get right on outta here.”

Saffa thought for a while, then said, “Meet me at revision hour in the woods. I know a good site.”

At revision hour, Austin made an excuse to study his Computer Science in his dorm where it was ‘quieter’, and made off to the woods where he found Saffa waiting with a laptop and a broadband USB dongle. “I did say ‘a good site’,” she said, grinning.

“Oh. Wow. Are you – are you actually taking me in?” Austin said nervously.

Saffa said nothing, just smiled as she typed in the address of a cookery website in the address bar. “Hold on tight,” she said, taking Austin’s hand. “And do not, I repeat do not freak out, or you’ll bring everyone within a ten-metre radius over here.”

Austin closed his eyes, for good measure. Saffa hit Alt+L. And the shrubbery and forest around them dissolved in an explosion of pixels and white light.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 16, 2013, 09:34:24 AM
Second chapter! Very long one, sorry. And with this, I shall retreat to the X-Files. :)

Chapter Twenty-one

When the light subsided and Austin opened his eyes, he was no longer in the woods, but in a large room with cream-coloured walls and pale blue curtains. The décor was nice, but what was even more inviting were several long banquet tables filled with food! Each table had about thirty samples of a given dish in different sections, with its recipe on a big plaque behind the section. And the smells! Chicken, risotto, shrimp, chocolate, apple pie, various aromatic spices… they were everywhere. If Ax were here, he would’ve gone completely, totally insane.

Austin just stared open-mouthed. “Oh my word… Can you actually eat any of this?”

“Sure, go ahead,” Saffa encouraged him. “That’s why I came here in the first place, because I skipped breakfast and had a measly lunch. You go on ahead. I’m gonna check out the seafood.”

The two ate like they had never seen a morsel of food in all their years at school (which was partially true). From the standard Indian, Italian and Chinese to the more exotic Lebanese and Vietnamese, they sampled everything, including dessert, till they were too stuffed for words.

“I don’t think I’ll need dinner after this,” Austin said. “Man – you live in an awesome world. Where to next?”

“Well, South Africa’s playing Pakistan today, so I want to check the score,” Saffa said. “Okay, now take my hand. I’m going to glitch, and you don’t wanna get left behind.”

Saffa shut her eyes, and saw the address bar glowing in the nothingness. She focused as hard as she could on the URL, watched it type out, and then felt the sucking sensation and the blinding light resume.

Saffa opened her eyes – to find herself standing in vast, open grassland, very wild, very African, with a fence bordering a circular area of about a twenty-metre radius from where they stood. At the edge of the fence, straight ahead, was a log cabin of sorts, somewhat like a forest ranger’s bunker. The large sign next to it said Phalaborwa Wildlife Reserve – Guided Tours Available in twelve different languages, of which Saffa could recognize only English and Afrikaans.

“What the – this isn’t where I wanted to go!” Saffa said, utterly baffled. “How come I goofed up? It’s never happened before – is that an elephant?!”

“Either that or it’s Rachel,” Austin said, with an equally baffled stare at the huge African elephant walking the periphery of the bunker. “Oookay. I don’t think you can check the score here.”

“It’s certainly a South African website, though. Phalaborwa is famous for its savannahs and wildlife,” Saffa explained. “Maybe I wasn’t concentrating hard enough. But… hey. I feel… stronger, somehow.”

“Maybe the elephant is intimidating you?” Austin suggested.

“No. That’s not it. I dunno, it’s like I… Like this place is giving me energy. Like it’s feeding my powers,” Saffa said as a diamond popped up from the earth below her. Austin stared at it in wonder. “Either way, we’ve gotta leave. Take my hand,” and this time, Saffa shut her eyes and made sure every letter of the URL was firmly in place: ‘www.cricket.co.za.’

This time, she found herself in a large, airy office-type room with green-and-gold wall hangings and matching curtains. The large panelled desk near one of the walls had an iPad of some sort placed upright, which one swiped to see news articles on South African cricket. Behind the desk were team photographs of great South African series wins across the years – no World Cup wins, of course – flanked by portraits of the current captains. There were signboards pointing to various areas of the site – ‘Player Profiles’, ‘Fan Zone’, ‘Women’s Cricket’, etc. Facing the newsreel desk was a huge LCD screen, about half the size of the wall, showing the Pakistan game live. Or, at least, what was supposed to be the Pakistan game live.

“What the… it’s raining and they haven’t played a ball!” Saffa groaned, turning her attention to the big screen. “How long is this gonna last… wonder if I can watch some highlights…”

But Austin merely stared at Saffa like she had suddenly grown an extra pair of arms. Saffa felt the stare, and whipped around. “What? Whaddaya staring at?”

“Uh, Saffa? You’re kinda glowing. Are you glitching or something?”

Saffa looked herself up and down before replying, “No, I’m certainly not. But this… is weird… hey, remember that thing I mentioned earlier at the Phalaborwa website? About me feeling stronger?”

“Yeah.”

“Well, now I’m feeling positively pumped. Like there’s diamonds or charcoal or something just waiting to explode from my hands.”

Austin took a few steps backward. “Don’t do anything to me, okay?”

“I’m not going to hurt you. What makes you think that? But this energy, it’s like this is the source of my powers or something. Wait a minute… yes! That’s it!” Saffa banged the newsreel desk with her fist.

“What did you figure out?”

“CSA! Adrian Price had mentioned Miller meeting me again at one CSA in his email. It’s here – see?” she pointed at the giant banner above the desk, “Cricket South Africa. This is where I chased him to – after the Phalaborwa website. It makes sense. He was a sports fanatic. And he didn’t really like it when South Africa toppled England off the number one spot. That was in the email too. And what better country to screw up than South Africa, which already has a history of apartheid and injustice? And is pretty much still hurting? He is psycho, after all…”

“You mentioned that dream…”

“Yeah. I’ve been getting it often now, sometimes a lot clearer. He said the exact same thing in it, about the ‘infamous country’. I fought him here – in my hawk form. That,” she pointed at the portrait of captain AB de Villiers, “that was on the floor, smashed. I saw it.” She paused. “It was a pretty good fight, but I figure I lost in the end. What more can a bird do, anyway?”

“But that doesn’t explain how you ended up in your profile thread,” Austin pointed out.

“That’s the thing. See, he made a deal with the Drode,” Saffa began. “And I know the Drode can create alternate timelines. This must’ve been one. That’s why the Ellimist is involved. He got rid of the timeline and made it out to be like nothing ever happened, and I’m safe and sound. And I got my powers from here – somehow. Which is why I feel so strong. That’s my theory.”

“It’s a damn plausible one, though.”

Saffa grinned. “I know, right? But all this still doesn’t explain one thing. And that is why I had no memory of all this happening in the first place. You got any brilliant ideas?” Austin shook his head.

“Okay, then, hold on. We’re going somewhere where I might get answers,” Saffa said, taking Austin’s hand again. She closed her eyes, and made sure every letter of the address ‘www.animorphsforum.com’ was in the right place. They left the green-and-gold room in an explosion of light.

When they opened their eyes, they found themselves facing the blue-and-white buildings and open grounds, a scene that had now become etched into Saffa’s brain.

“Where on earth are we?” Austin wondered out loud.

Saffa smiled. It sounded totally cliché, but this was the big introduction moment she had been waiting for. “Welcome to RAF.”
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on May 16, 2013, 04:48:52 PM
I can't wait to see Austin meet everyone and be amazed.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on May 17, 2013, 01:23:29 AM
Ya! He's (hopefully) gonna like us. :D
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 17, 2013, 10:26:24 AM
Now who wouldn't?  ;)

Now, this thread will be on hiatus for three or four days, since I'll be out of town for a very good cause - to get my college seat finalized - so I'll put out as many chapters as I can today to make up. Length still being an issue, of course... :P

Chapter Twenty-two

“This is amazing,” Austin said for probably the fourteenth time as the two of them toured the arcade-like Bored Board, having played a few counting games and more to kill time, after Saffa had hitched a ride on the glass ship of the Roleplaying Board to show Austin around.

“Come on, I’ll show you my profile thread,” Saffa said, leading him towards the Social Board. “It’s like my own little RAF-apartment.”

On the way there, they spotted Blaze returning from the General Board. “Hey, Saffa!” he called out. “Killed any monsters lately?”

“Nope, it’s an off day for me,” Saffa replied, grinning.

Blaze noticed Austin coming up behind her. “What the hell? Who is that? Never seen him around here…”

“Oh, jeez. Blaze, this is my friend Austin. He had the misfortune to be around when that kitty monster attacked,” Saffa explained, “so I figured he had a right to know everything. I trust him.”

“Well, seeing as you don’t trust too many people, I’ll take your word on that.”

“Why don’t you do me a favour and show him around? I needed to see Richard about something.”

“Yeah, that would be cool,” Austin agreed.

Blaze raised an eyebrow. “Funny you should want to see him. He himself wanted to see you,” he said. “Didn’t you get his PM?”

“Er, no,” Saffa admitted. “I glitched here from another site.”

“Ah, well, you can go see him now. He’s in the Media Area. You do that, and meanwhile,” Blaze said, looking at Austin and grinning wickedly, “I’ll give your friend a tour of the place.”

Blaze led Austin off towards the Animorphs Board, while Saffa made her way to the Media Area. The huge, amphitheatre-like hall was mostly empty, except for one of the sections of chairs which was occupied by a single person. A tall man with vaguely Caribbean features, who apparently seemed to be very interested in the ceiling. When he looked down and noticed Saffa, he beckoned her over.

Saffa immediately began to feel rather small and unimportant. I mean, come on. This is Richard. THE Richard, the Father of RAF. And she had been around for… how long had it been? A few months? Hardly half a year? And what was she supposed to say to him, anyway? “Good evening, Sir?”

Fortunately, Richard was not one to waste time with small talk. “Didn’t you get my PM?” he began, sounding somewhat surprised.

“Actually, no. I didn’t directly log in, I glitched from another site,” Saffa said for the second time that day.

“Well, anyway, now that you’re here, I’ve been meaning to ask you – how far is Adrian Price from you? From what you’ve said he’s rather near. And he has been on the Net recently. We even reported signatures leaving here close to your school.”

“He might be logging in through a computer in or around the school. Though how he managed to smuggle out a whole CPU and implant the teleporting device inside it, and then replace it, is beyond me,” Saffa said awkwardly.

“Never mind that. But that being said, you need to find that CPU, so that one of us can fly down there and destroy the teleporting device, before it falls into the wrong hands,” Richard said.

“I’ll tell Rose. Oh, and there’s something else as well…”

She related her theory of the Lewis Miller epic to Richard, and also her possible assumptions. “But it still doesn’t explain why I can’t remember a thing,” she finished.
Richard thought for a while. “Hm. You did say it was a pretty bad battle, didn’t you?”

“Yeah.”

“If your theory of the alternate timeline being erased, albeit it being a relatively short one, is true – which I think it is – then there’s only one possibility that makes any sort of sense.”

“And that being?”

“You might not like the answer,” Richard said grimly. “You died a little while before the timeline was erased.”

Saffa felt like she had just been plunged into a bathtub of ice-cold water. “Yeah, that makes sense,” she said shakily. “It’s not like the Sario Rip, like in #11: The Forgotten. There Jake’s death cancelled it out.”

“But the timeline actually happened, while it was in existence, which is why the rest of us remember what happened all the way up to Lewis Miller’s arrest,” Richard finished. “Speaking of Lewis Miller, there’s one more very important thing.”

“Go on.”

“When the Drode visited you… did he mention Adrian Price at all?”

Saffa thought for a while, before saying, “Um, no, actually. He only talked about his deal with Miller and his plans for me. Miller’s, I mean.”

Richard frowned. “Could this mean Adrian Price has no connection with our incident?”

“He could be acting independently in some aspects. Heck, the whole taking-over-the-Internet idea was purely his, he mentioned.”

“Well, that may or may not be the case,” Richard said in a frosty tone. “Anyway, that’s all we know for now. But we definitely need more.”

“I’ll get on it. Thanks, Richard,” she said, getting up to leave.

When she went outside she found Aquilai hanging around the Social Board, and caught hold of him immediately. “Aquilai! Do me and the whole world a favour. Did up everything you can on Adrian Price, will you?”

“But… but then…” Aquilai stammered, taken completely by surprise.

“No buts. You’re the one who said no complacency, aren’t you? So go look him up. I don’t want any surprises from him.”

“What’ll surprise you now? He’s pretty well established.”

“From this angle, yes,” Saffa said darkly. “But there may be many more that we can’t see.”

Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 17, 2013, 10:33:17 AM
Second chapter of the day! Senti chapter (we Indians are very fond of shortening that word :D )... which is why I will definitely try and get a third in. :P ::)

Chapter Twenty-three

Austin sat in an easy chair as he watched Saffa as she fired round after round of diamonds into the target-practice sheets, this time with most of them actually hitting the centre, the chest. She had rolled up the long sleeves of her school-uniform shirt, loosened her collar and stuffed her tie into her skirt pocket. She then moved on from the sheets to a pull-up bar fixed to the ceiling. As he watched her pull herself up, muscles flexing, he couldn’t help thinking she reminded him of an Amazon warrior – beautiful and dangerous.

“Been a while since I worked out here, what with all these damn exams,” Saffa said, dropping down and wiping the sweat off her arms with a towel. Her eyes shone with a mad, warrior-like glint which slightly scared Austin. “Though it always gets me pumped. And I’ll need it if I have to take down that rat Lewis Miller again.”

“I don’t think he’ll stand much of a chance. I mean, look at you. You’re like one of those beautiful female assassins from a movie. Though maybe a little on the shorter side,” Austin said.

Saffa laughed and threw the towel in a chair. “Very funny, but thank you. And thanks for your support, although I certainly can’t do this on my own. RAF is always at its strongest,” she said with a hint of pride, “when it’s united.”

A brief silence. Then Austin said, “I told my mum.”

“Told your mum about what?”

“About you. Your world, your fight, everything. See, I’m in this as much as you are – and I know how dangerous it is. So if it doesn’t quite end well…” He let it hang.

Saffa felt like lead weights had just been tied to her feet, slowing her steps to dull trudges. She had wished it wouldn’t come to this. It had never been fair, putting Austin in danger unnecessarily like this with the potential to cause a nice woman unwanted grief… She sat down in a chair, sighed, and cradled her head in her hands. “I’m sorry.”

Austin said nothing. That made it even harder. Saffa choked down a lump in her throat. She took a deep breath. “I’m sorry. I went all Knight and Day on you, just selfishly putting you in all of this, not even thinking…”

She felt Austin’s warm hand on her shoulder. She didn’t look up.

“I mean, I never even asked you if you wanted to be part of this,” she said, standing up, her head bowed. “Your mum’s already lost her husband. She doesn’t need to lose her only son, too. You can leave, Austin. All you have to do is close your eyes and think the words ‘Log off’. Go on, write your Boards, join the Army, make your mum proud, live your life. I’ll live mine. I’ll fight Miller. I’ll die, the Drode will guarantee that. You don’t have to suffer.”

She looked up to see Austin still standing there in front of her. “Well? What are you waiting for? Go! Leave me here!” she half-yelled. “I’m giving you the permission, to walk away from all of this, pretend you don’t know any of this. At least that way you’ll live.”

Silence.

“You already told the Drode it can’t predict anything,” Austin finally said after what felt like one whole minute.

Saffa looked up. “What?”

“I’ve read the books. And the Drode’s only job, apparently, is to provoke you. Make you believe that unless you take his lead the world follows a certain course of events. His course of events. And he’s bloody good at that,” Austin went on.

Saffa smiled weakly. “You do better English interpretation than Patil.”

“The point is, you already told the Drode it’s wrong. And why is it wrong? Because that little git doesn’t know love, he doesn’t know friendship… just power.”

“That’s Voldemort.”

“Okay, greed, then. It’s all relative. But you’re not alone in this. You’ve got me. You’ve got Rose. And we’ve got you. The Drode can’t break us; it’s as simple as that. And that’s why I’m staying. I ain’t going anywhere, Saffa – neither is Rose. You need us far too much.”

Saffa was standing up now. “I only wish it was that simple.”

“I told my mum because she wanted to know you, she liked you. Better than the girls at my old school, she said.” He grinned, and gave her a hug. “Come on. We need to leave.”
Saffa wasn’t really the hugging type, but she took it anyway. “Thanks,” she said. She closed her eyes and saw the address bar floating in empty space.

“For what? You had the belief already. I just brought it to the surface. Keep it close, Saffa. It’ll keep us alive.”

<Log off.>
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 17, 2013, 10:36:03 AM
Okay, third and final chapter of the day. It's sad that my Galaxy Tab doesn't come with a USB slot, since I have the outlines of the chapters in a Word document on my pen drive and take it from there... but anyway, all I'll have will be my phone, and hopefully these three will make up.

Chapter Twenty-four

Rose sat at the computer at the very back of the Computer lab, waiting for the damn thing to boot up. It was good that there was no one else around; for one thing, she could work at her French in peace – that cranky old man thought nothing of giving them the most complicated assignments right before the Board finals – and on the other hand, she could think in peace. She could reflect a bit, on the conversation she had with Saffa at lunch earlier that day.

Aside from the fact that her Computer Science exam was so easy it made English look hard, Saffa had mentioned details of her visit to the Cricket South Africa website and her conversation with Richard on the origin of her strange, yet highly effective, abilities, and her selective amnesia. That was when Rose had decided to put her bit in.

“You know, I logged off right after the seniors chased him to Google,” Rose had said.

“Smart move. We need an offline monitor, too,” Saffa had replied, “but did you actually see anything?”

“Yes, I did,” Rose had said, causing Saffa to abruptly put down her spoon. “I was at your laptop, looking at Google Chrome, when background tabs started to open. I figured that was happening as a result of people moving around on the Net, at least on a RAFian’s system.”

“Makes sense. So which tabs opened?”

“Well, there was Google, of course. And Lewis Miller’s Facebook profile, for some strange reason – “

“That would’ve been Aquilai. He had to get there for Miller’s details, so they could track him down. And eventually arrest him.” She paused. “But that wasn’t all, was it?”

“No, it wasn’t,” Rose had admitted. “First it was an Indian business blog called Capital Mind. That was on for a while, then a website for a wildlife reserve in, uh, in, uh – “

“Phalaborwa.”

“Yeah. I can never get it right. Anyway, he was there for nearly a couple of minutes before Cricket South Africa popped up. And, like, stayed there.”

“Would’ve been on for a good while. We were tearing up the place.”

“Yeah, well, I figured that you had gotten over there, too, since you’re pretty much the only person there who knows the site. So I tried to get it, I hit Alt+L, but I couldn’t get through.”

“You couldn’t get through?”

“Nope. I was like halfway in, and I could close my eyes and see the address bar, but otherwise just blank white, blinding, almost, not what I had expected. Then the Ellimist spoke, you know, with that big, booming voice he always uses. He mentioned a timeline being erased. And that I should leave immediately. So I did.”

“Guess you can control things like that in Internet limbo. But anyway, it proves me right.”

“Well, I didn’t understand what the hell he meant until you came and told me all this.”

And then Saffa had mentioned the fact that Adrian Price could be operating close by, even within the school, so she had to keep her eyes peeled. Rose didn’t quite know how this could help – she couldn’t be patrolling the Computer lab day and night. But while she was here, she might as well sniff around. So far, she hadn’t found anything suspicious.

She opened Mozilla Firefox and went to Google Translate, selected English to French as the translate option and began to type out her passage on the French Revolution in the English box. Normally, she would’ve done it the honest-learning way with a French dictionary and the book of verb conjugations, but she was just too lazy today and the deadline was tomorrow morning.

Once she’d finished typing, she looked around, double-checked that no one was around, and regarded the screen. She hit Alt+L for the hell of it. It didn’t do anything on a normal browser – so nothing would happen, right?

Wrong.

Immediately, the keyboard began to glow, and the Computer lab began fragmenting into pixels as Rose felt herself being sucked in – not what she had expected at all! “Holy crap. Oh, no, no!” she yelled to nobody.

But she was dropped through anyway, and finally, the sucking sensation ceased, and Rose opened her eyes to find herself in a library.

At least, she assumed it was a library because of the many massive shelves of thick, bulging, hard-bound books – the majority of which, Rose realized, were multilingual dictionaries! Apart from the usual English to French and English to Spanish, she found guides to Latin, Japanese, Traditional Chinese, Croatian, Swedish, Arabic, Afrikaans, Yiddish, Tamil, Telugu, Gujarati, and a host of other weird languages she never knew existed. There were shelves for each language, to which a small computer-like screen was attached. Rose went over to the French one and found her passage in the computer screen – with its French translation right below it. Some of the books in the shelf were glowing, which Rose found out were volumes on the French Revolution and related events. Ah, Google.

This was all very cool, but she needed to get out of her before someone entered the Computer lab and got suspicious. <Log off,> she instructed. Instantly the sucking sensation was back, and Rose whooshed through a blast of pixels and got thrown back in her chair in the lab.

She hurriedly looked around. Had anyone noticed? No – the shutters were still down, the door still closed and no one in the auxiliary lab next door. She heaved a sigh of relief – then took it back. Her sense of rational thinking had just kicked in, and what it told her wasn’t good.

Rose had certainly learnt something from the little episode, and that was not French. She now knew that Adrian Price had infiltrated the school itself.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on May 17, 2013, 02:43:37 PM
Interesting chapters! This is getting really good. ;);)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 21, 2013, 10:25:29 AM
Thanks, Abby!

I'm baaaack! And, to commemorate the occasion, we shall have a new chapter.

Chapter Twenty-five

“The half-life of a radioactive substance is 100 days. If originally 100 mg of the substance was present, what will be the activity of the substance after 5 days?” Saffa groaned. This was precisely why she hated Physics problems. They’d give you two completely unrelated quantities, and expect you to use them to find a third, even more unrelated quantity. There was now only one way to solve this problem, Saffa declared, the tried and tested method: Use your imagination. Ha. That should work. It always does. Why am I looking at Physics, anyway? I have Maths tomorrow.

Saffa put the sample paper away and went over to her bag, lying on her bed in her dorm, to rummage for her Maths guide. She chucked out half a dozen random papers – when will I ever learn to file these – when she caught a movement in the corner of the room, behind the bedpost.

Saffa froze stiff. Was it the Drode? If it was, it was going to be really sorry it entered without knocking again…

A movement under the bed! Saffa swiftly moved to the end of the bed, heat pulsating from her fingers, poised and ready for an attack. She had definitely seen something: something like a dark, black shadowy string, slinking away underneath the bed.

“Get outta there!” she yelled, making her voice as threatening as possible.

Suddenly, the shadow flung itself from under the bed, and like a mechanical arm, caught hold of Saffa’s right ankle, sending her flat down to the floor and taking her completely by surprise. Saffa hit her head and shoulder while landing – but not before catching a glimpse of the thing that had grabbed her. It was under the bed and seemed to be composed of nothing but a black, shadowy substance, with two cold, grey slits for eyes and no other defining feature. Saffa kicked at the arm holding her – with surprising strength for a shadow – and tried to wriggle free.

Bad move. The shadow-thing now had her other ankle as well – and Saffa was now wriggling on the floor like a worm in the rain.

“Aaaargh! Get off me!” Saffa yelled.

She made a swing, a desperate dive, with her arms for the bedpost – and got a handhold, and tried to pull herself free. But the creature held on even tighter, and this manoeuvre only caused her sides to burn with pain – so she let go of a hand and fired a largish piece of charcoal at the thing, symbolic of the perennial South African love for outdoor barbecue parties or braais, and quite handy in a fight.

Nothing! The piece of hot carbon passed right through the shadow like it had absorbed it. Instead, it only infuriated it, and it jerked Saffa’s leg even harder, causing her to lose her grip and fall down to the floor. “Oh, no… what do I do now?”

Saffa had to think of an answer fast, because the creature was dragging her underneath the bed, and now a shadowy tentacle grabbed her right arm. She struggled, kicked and strained, but to no avail.

Morph! she thought. But what morph? Hawk talons and tiger claws wouldn’t be of much help to something that seemed to be made out of, well, nothing. And going fly might mean she risked being lost in the thing. That meant she only had one morph left. It seemed a rather ridiculous choice, given the circumstances, but it was better that the alternative. Heck, it could serve better as a mode of escape, rather than one of attack.

Suddenly, the thing lashed out at her! A dark tentacle whipped at her head and wrapped itself around it. “Oww! Leggo!” she screamed as it pulled at her hair. Saffa punched at it, a large diamond in hand – but it did nothing to improve her situation. In fact, it only worsened it – she felt her previously free hand get stuck in the shadow. Right in the thing!

The grey slits were positively glowing now, perhaps with glee. Saffa watched in horror as one tentacle holding her right leg began to seep into her skin. What in hell – was it trying to absorb her or something?

She kicked and screamed, even though she knew no one could possibly hear her. “Rose! ROSE!” She was just a floor below; maybe there was a chance she could hear…

In her struggle, she hit the roof of her bed, nearly passing out. This is nice... no need to kick... no need to scream... It’s all over. I’ll sleep now. No need to morph...

The word ‘morph’ suddenly jolted Saffa back to reality. Though groggy, she somehow remembered her morphing power. A totally ridiculous alternative... but it’s all I’ve got now.

Saffa began to focus... and the shadowy creature reared its huge, black head, its cold, slit-like eyes staring menacingly at her.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 21, 2013, 10:27:07 AM
How 'bout another one, then? ;) Short one.

Chapter Twenty-six

Saffa began to focus, trying hard to ignore the wall of blackness looming all around her. She pictured the neighbour’s Lab, Jackie, the dog that seemed to take pleasure in driving her nuts – from running off with the ball while she played cricket to howling in the middle of the night when she desperately needed sleep. Hopefully the creature’s absorbing abilities had no effect on the morphing...

To her utter relief, fur began to sprout in various places on her body. Her face bulged outwards till it formed a snout, her ears popping up on the top of her rapidly changing head. She felt her backbone stretch and elongate as a tail began to curl out from her back.

The shadow was slowly losing grip on her hand and legs as they shrank – and she wriggled free, all the while shrinking, no longer feeling the shadow’s seeping effect on her skin. Finally, the morph was complete, and a Labrador now crouched under the bed, blinking at the shadow in front of it, free of its iron grip. <Yes!>

The perennially happy dog mind kicked in all of a sudden. The dog was happy to be free – but it did not like being trapped under a bed, and with some effort, Saffa wriggled out from under it, and backed straight into the study table. Saffa’s water bottle, lying open on the table, wobbled at the sudden impact, and crashed to the floor.

Water fell everywhere – on Saffa, on the bed, on the floor, and on the shadow, which was slowly moving out from under the bed and coming for the dog. The creature suddenly recoiled as the droplets hit its shadowy form, and Saffa noticed that parts of it were actually dissolving as the water hit them.

Like how it was dissolving into her skin a few minutes earlier – only this time, it was dissolving into nothingness. And this fact was clearly not amusing it.

<What the – it’s lyophobic!> she realised with immense relief. At least something could stop this creature! <All right then – one good dose of liquid coming right up!>

Saffa demorphed with shocking speed, and, fully human and a complete mess, grabbed her empty bottle and aimed it at the retreating shadow.

“Y’know, I’d have never in my life thought this wine thing would actually be this useful, and certainly not in a fight,” she said to herself as she focused on her hands.

Out of the bottle came a blast of white wine, hitting the creature right in the middle, which flailed and writhed madly – then, like a balloon losing its air (and farting around the room), it twisted, withered, and finally disappeared in a whiff of black smoke, which caught the breeze and escaped through the open window of the dorm.

Saffa collapsed on the ground by the study table, utterly bushed. She looked around her. The whole floor, not to overlook her bedspread, was covered in wine – she’d have to tell Rose to smuggle a mop from the store-cupboard now, unless she wanted to invent a bestselling piece of fiction for any teacher who noticed. But where in the world did that thing come from?

“The unknown signature…” Saffa said slowly, like she had just received enlightenment from the heavens. “Oh, man. That was what it was. And seeing how it got away through that window... I don’t think this is the end of it.”

A knock on the door sent her jumping up nearly a foot into the air. She slowly walked over to the door and opened it just a crack – and heaved a sigh of relief that it was only Rose.

“Oh, thank heaven, it’s only you. Get in quickly before anyone sees this mess.”

“What mess – oh, crap. D’you want me to get a mop for you?” Rose asked, eyes nearly popping out as she noticed the floor.

“That would be lovely. But why are you here?”

“The Computer lab has been bugged,” Rose said dramatically. “By an insect named Adrian Price.”

Saffa listened as Rose related how she found the guilty computer in the lab. “So now what? Do we check on it tonight?”

“No, not tonight,” Saffa said. “I need to sleep, I have Maths to write tomorrow. You know what? We’ll wait till our exams get over, since we’re going to be at school for a week in the holidays anyway. And so is Austin, so I’ll let him know. There’s just Physics and Maths left. Let that pass, and then we take him down.”

“But what do we do till then?”

“Till then? We get prepared,” Saffa said, looking at the mess around her. “We get prepared for whatever else he wants to throw at us.”
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on May 23, 2013, 09:38:37 PM
No computer lab makes Alt+L'ing harder.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 24, 2013, 10:53:45 AM
Well, my life experience tells me it's a convenient world, Underseen.

Sorry for the lack of chapter today - RAFparty will do that to me! The posting is getting so intense I can't even look at my Facebook and Twitter feeds, let alone type a whole chapter. Anyway. I'll probably type it out offline in Word tomorrow morning, they copy+paste it in the evening. It will come. Don't worry. :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on May 24, 2013, 12:18:33 PM
:) have fun with that. Hehe.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 25, 2013, 10:35:08 AM
Well now, it looks like no one else is at the Bored Board for now, and I've posted in practically everything - so looks like we have a chapter coming! :)

Chapter Twenty-seven

Maths was, as predicted, tough. Tough enough to make everyone including Saffa break into nervous sweats with half an hour to go before paper submission, even to the extent of a few girls bursting into tears. Everyone was genuinely relieved when they left the exam halls – at least now all they had to do left was think up more Nobel Prize-worthy (not!) theories to explain every twisted Physics question those ungrateful wretches at the CBSE could think up.

After a few forced spoonfuls of lunch (mind-blowing cauliflower casserole), Saffa went down to the office to confirm that she and Rose would be staying at school for four days into the holidays – thanks to their parents’ commitments with some unknown-yet-apparently-very-close relative’s wedding in Kochi – when she noticed a woman standing in the visitors’ lounge next to the office. She was shorter than Saffa, at roughly five feet, and very pretty, despite her rather pale visage and dark, firm eyes. She had long hair, of the same soft texture as Austin’s – and with a start Saffa realised this must be his mother.

The lady started as soon as she saw Saffa. “You must be Saffa,” Mrs. Connor said. “I’m Austin’s mother. He’s told me a lot about you.”

“Good things, I hope, Aunty,” Saffa said with a nervous laugh.

“Oh, there's not really anything bad, is there?,” Mrs. Connor said, laughing. “I just met him after the Maths exam – just to check on him. Of course the poor boy was embarrassed as anything. But he seemed well, apart from the exam being hard.” She smiled at Saffa. “Do stick with him, will you? You’re doing him a world of good, especially after, you know…”

“Uh, that’s the thing, Aunty,” Saffa began. “See… what I’m doing is rather dangerous. And while I can defend myself to some extent, that’s not the same case with Austin. And… if anything happens, then…”

“It will not be your fault,” Mrs. Connor said, laying a hand on Saffa’s shoulder. “I will understand, beta. He was doing his duty.”

Saffa said nothing, just smiled sadly.

“It is like that in the Army as well,” Mrs. Connor went on. “I felt nothing towards the soldiers who were on duty with my husband when he got shot, because it wasn’t their fault. He was doing his duty, and these things happen in this line of work. There was even the case where…”

But Saffa was only half listening to what Mrs. Connor was saying, because behind her, some distance away amid the potted plants that framed the entrance to the school and office, she had caught sight of a movement – a movement of something black.

“What is it, beta?” Mrs. Connor said, noticing her. “Did you see something?”

“No, no, nothing, Aunty. I thought I did,” Saffa said hastily. “Oh… well… I’ll need to be getting back to class now.”

“Go ahead, then. Maybe I’ll see you when you come back to town,” Mrs. Connor said, waving her off.

Saffa did not head upstairs to her classroom; instead, she went out through the entrance, and past the potted plants. Nothing there.

“OI!” she yelled. No reply of any sort. But then, she didn’t expect one. After all, it hadn’t had a mouth, had it? Not very intelligent, that…

She looked ahead down the road that led to the dormitory blocks and sports grounds. There was not a soul around, and not a movement in sight, not even the slightest blade of grass.

At least, not that human eyes can see. Saffa threw her back to the wall, made sure absolutely no one was around, and began the morph. The feather patterns were just drawing themselves when –

“Who is out here?” Saffa froze in mid-morph. A teacher! She shouldn’t have yelled!

She looked down at herself frantically. It didn’t look too bad; she was slightly shorter and there were feathers on her arms, covered by her long shirt sleeves – but there were some feather patterns running up her neck, and a tickle up her nose that made her want to –

“Ah-ah-ah-CHOOO!”

Damnit.

“Come out from there immediately!” the teacher shouted. Saffa had no choice but to obey. She didn’t recognize the lady – it was probably some unimportant middle-school teacher; and in any case, the teacher didn’t look like she recognized her.

“Which class are you in? 11? 12? Why are you out of class?” The teacher narrowed her eyes and squinted at Saffa. “What – what is wrong with your face? Aha – I knew it. You seniors are down here doing drugs! I’ll tell the principal, see if I don’t! Now give me your name!”

Saffa thought hard – and came up with a distraction. She took a step forward, and feinted a tripping and falling to the ground. Out of Nosey Parker’s view, she pressed her hand firmly to the ground and concentrated.

“Oh! Look at that!” she screamed, pointing to the teacher’s right, who snapped her head in the direction. Her eyes widened as she laid them on a diamond the size of a quail egg (which, incidentally, is a quarter of the size of a hen’s).

“My God! That wasn’t here earlier… I must’ve knocked it over…”

While Nosey Parker was preoccupied with digging the ground below the diamond (which would eventually disappear in a few seconds), Saffa ran as fast as her legs could carry her, turned the corner, rapidly morphed to hawk, and soared into the air, scanning the grounds from a thousand feet up for the slightest movement. The wind was cold, winter air, and she had to work hard to get altitude.

Nothing useful at all – just big, clunky humans. Then – she spotted it! A black tentacle scaling the wall of the boys’ block.

Saffa immediately angled her wings, changed direction, and flapped hard towards the building. If it was going after Austin… well, there was no telling what she’d do with the block’s entire water supply.

There it was – going down the stairs? Saffa tore after it. She was almost at the building now, at the open-air corridors of the second floor, housing the top two grades. She shot into the corridor and past a rather stunned Jason, who was just opening his door.

“What the – a bird!” Jason exclaimed, jaw dropping. He hammered on the door next to his. “Hey – Austin – you’ll want to see this. There’s some mad bird in here!”

As soon as he heard the words “mad bird”, Austin dropped his Physics guide. “What kind of bird?” he yelled through the window.

“Some sort of eagle or hawk, I dunno. But it was pretty big,” Jason replied.

That was all he needed to know. Austin threw his book onto his bed, pulled on his jacket, tucked his shredder under it, and ran out the door and down the stairs.

“Hey, hey, dude, where are you going?” Jason was yelling. “You won’t catch up with it at this rate…”
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 25, 2013, 10:48:50 AM
Okay then. Another one!

Things are heatin' up here.

Chapter Twenty-eight

Meanwhile, Saffa had come to rest on the railing of the ground-floor staircase, scanning the floor intently. The warden was out – what a relief. No need to have him bringing the place down about escaped birds.

<Oh!>

Was that it? In the vegetable garden outside the seventh-grade common dorm? Saffa hopped off the railing and hauled wing towards the garden. <Either this thing is really out there, or I’m just going crazy.>

She found nothing there – except, in the distance, the distinct shape of someone running away. Saffa could only make out the outline, since he had his back turned – assuming it was a he – and he looked too tall to be a student. She flared her wings, swelled them up and got ready to fly when –

“Leave it, Saffa. He’d have gotten too far off by now,” a soft voice behind her said.

She turned around, flapped and landed on Austin’s outstretched arm. <Who the hell do you think that was?>

“Why do you bother asking? You know what I’ll say. It’ll be the same answer you’re thinking of.”

The man has a point. <I was actually chasing after that black shadow thing.>

Austin looked positively baffled. “What black shadow thing?”

<I didn’t tell you? Oh, wait, I told Rose. Sorry. Anyway, I got attacked by this weird black thing in my dorm the day before the Maths exam…> and she went on to describe the entire episode.

“How’d you manage to get away?”

<Oh, it gets destroyed by any kind of liquid. Discovered that after my bottle fell on it. I didn’t have enough water, so I used my wine instead.>

Austin laughed. “More importantly, then, how’d you clean your dorm after that?”

<Oh, Rose and I smuggled a few mops and stayed up taking care of that. The bedsheet was totally destroyed. I had to go to some upholstery website and get a new one – yes, you can do that,> she said smugly. <But the point is, it’s not totally dead, which is kinda annoying, and – >

“Yo, Austin!” Jason yelled, coming running down the stairs. “I have a doubt – what the – holy – ! That – bird – “

“Relax, man. I know this hawk,” Austin said with a laugh. “What happened? Who set their dorm on fire?”

“Uh, no, I – erm – just had this doubt. Semiconductors,” Jason said, waving his Physics textbook about. He looked nervously from Saffa’s talons, to her wicked, curved beak, and back at her talons, and shuddered. “That is one freaky bird you’ve got there, dude. Awesome, yeah. But definitely freaky.”

Austin laughed. “You’ve got that right.”

<I’ll keep my eyes peeled, then,> Saffa said in private thought-speak as she lifted herself into the air. <You might want to do the same.>

Austin gave her the slightest of nods as he watched her fly off and turned to Jason babbling something about a feedback oscillator, while Saffa, once out of earshot, let out a huge groan.

*                     *                    *

Austin stood at the library window that overlooked the entrance and gates, watching some six hundred students run wild and break loose after the end of another school year. He could hear Peter lugging his Quasimodo-sized trunk on the gravel all the way up from the second floor. In the corner he could see Saffa exchanging addresses and phone numbers with Sonal. He smiled. It was good that Saffa had managed to make at least one firm girl friend, if not in her last year of school. Oh well. Better late than never.

He waited till the librarian verified all the reference books he was finally returning – thanks to them he had some chance of passing Physics – and walked downstairs. On his way to the entrance, he ran into Rose.

“Ah, good. Just wanted to check – are we going ahead with the plan?” he asked her discreetly.

“Yep, we are. We’re taking him tonight. Of course, sneaking outta the boys’ block is your headache, since we have it easier. But apart from that, we’ve got it all planned. Well, sorta.”

“How are we going about this again?”

“We get to the Computer lab, log into RAF and Aquilai will tell us his exact location from the school,” Saffa said, coming up to them, realizing what they were on about. “Then Rose will teleport to RAF and sound the alert, and we go off in search of Price, to trick him to coming over to RAF. Hopefully we take him by surprise. Hopefully.”

“I don’t like the sound of your hopefully,” Rose said darkly.

“How will Aquilai know exactly where he is, though?” Austin asked.

Saffa looked at him skeptically. “Uh, duh. Google Earth.”

“Oh. Duh.”

“To answer your doubt, Rose,” Saffa continued, “it’s not a foolproof plan, I agree. But at the moment, it’s all we got.”

Night fell soon enough, and the girls prepared themselves for their encounter. Saffa and Rose were sharing a room while they were staying for the holidays, and right then, they were both standing in the corridor outside Saffa’s dorm, in pitch darkness. Saffa was in her hawk form.

<You ready?>

“Yeah. Ready.” Rose took a deep breath. She clutched her shredder tightly. “You? How’re you feeling?”

<You wanna know exactly how I’m feeling? Angry, scared, nervous, among other things. But yeah. I’m ready.>

Rose looked at the big bird of prey silhouetted against the moonlight. “You know, you scare me sometimes, Saffa.”

<You’re not the only one. I scare me, too.>

Rose laughed. “That there made me think of you and Austin. You’re like Rachel and Tobias, only you switched bodies somewhat.”

<Maybe. But you do realize, Rachel ended up dead,> Saffa said, in a grim tone.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on May 25, 2013, 11:30:29 AM
I just remembered that you don't have memorial day on Monday.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 26, 2013, 08:19:42 AM
Nope. What is it, actually? :P

Well, no chapter today, seeing as it's Sunday and I have only my phone... Typing a whole chapter through the phone is possible, but there's a greater chance of the whole thing going down the drain, so yes. No Memorial Day tomorrow. :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 28, 2013, 10:54:09 AM
Sorry about the lack of chapter. But here I present you with today's.

Chapter Twenty-nine

Austin pulled his jacket closer to his body as he stepped out of his dorm into the biting cold night air. You wouldn’t normally expect this sort of weather, night or day, in this part of India – but global warming had definitely screwed things up, and set in stone the reputation of weathermen as being guys who lied to make a living.

He tried to keep these rather pointless thoughts on his mind, distracting him from what lay ahead of him, as he very slowly closed his door and locked it, so as not to arouse the two or three boys still there in the rooms downstairs. Slinging his shredder over his shoulder, he started to walk down very cautiously down the stairs, his Nikes making as much noise as a cat would.

There were three boys staying over for the holidays – two ninth-graders and one eleventh-grade Commerce dude – who were all sleeping in the ninth-grade common dorm on the first floor, and Austin had no idea of their sleeping patterns. He’d have to cross this part with utmost care… he had reached the first-floor landing and was about to move on to the ground floor when –

CLANG!

A metal pot, rolling down the stairs and making an unbelievable racket!

Austin cursed. This was a juvenile sixth-grade invention – placing a noisy object, such as this pot, in obscure locations on stairways and in corridors to catch midnight wanderers unawares, especially seniors sneaking girls into their dorms. He quickly shot a glance towards the ninth-grade dorm. Not a sound or stir, no one getting up to turn on the light or look outside. Good. They were all sound sleepers. Now, back to –

“Eh? Whaat? Who is thait? Some boy out of bed!”

“Oh, f***!” The warden! He’d forgotten about the warden! Compared to the matronly, harmless, positively angelic warden of the girls’ block, the boys’ warden was a wheezing, stern old grunt, and came down like a raging bull on any poor fellow he happened to catch out of bed. Fortunately, the monster had one weakness. He was half-blind in pitch darkness.

Austin hid under the railing midway between the ground and first floors, slowly moving downstairs while hugging the railing all the while. Then an unprecedented development occurred. The warden decided to climb the stairs.

“Now I em coming! These boys! Always making such a noo-sance!” the warden wheezed in his thick Malayali accent.

What do I do now? What do I do now?? Austin decided there was only one way out of this mess. He made a break for it, shot out from under the railing and straight passed the stunned warden. Unfortunately this tactic caused a small problem. Just as he reached the ground floor, Austin tripped and fell down the stairs, landing on his butt.

“Oho! So you run yeway from me? You are in beeg beeg trouble!”

Austin groped about in the dark. He had lost his shredder in the fall, and wanted to find it ASAP before –

He turned around – and froze. The warden was standing right in front of him! He didn’t seem to notice Austin – which was good. But he had, however, found a long cylindrical object which he was now closely examining…

“Whaat is thees? A torch?”

Oh, no… Austin heard a sudden movement behind him, and snapped round to see the outline of a bird of prey growing and shifting to a human outline. Thank the Gods.

<What the… is he ho – > Saffa’s thought-speak died as she turned fully human. “Is he holding a shredder?” she hissed.

The warden decided to press a button.

TSEEEWW!! It burned a neat, round hole in the ceiling!

“Thees torch does not work! No – the boy weell be using eet for some other purpose! Hey, boy! Whair are you? You shall go to thee Principal for thees! You…”

“Oh, shut up, shut up, shut up!” Saffa yelled, exasperated, and gave the warden a square punch in the face. He crumpled to the ground. Austin grabbed the shredder, with a stunned look at his firebrand friend.

“You attacked a warden… you attacked a warden…”

“Oh, zip it, Hermione Granger,” Saffa sighed. “I saved your butt, so you should be grateful. Now can we get a move on?”

They walked to the school building, across the football ground, and no sooner had they reached there than Rose greeted them with news.

“We have a minor problem,” she said. “The damn building is locked from the inside.” She frowned. “How come I forgot about that?”

“The same way you forgot to ask Adrian Price his name when you confronted him,” Saffa said, smirking.

Austin looked at the building. They were facing the back section of the school, and the ground floor housed the three sixth-grade classrooms, on either side of which was a locked entrance. The girls’ restrooms were to the right, on this face of the building.

“The ventilators might be open,” he suggested.

“We won’t fit through anyway,” Rose pointed out.

An idea struck Austin. “But you might – in fly morph. See the sixth-grade windows over there?” He pointed at the classroom windows. “They don’t have gratings. A human can easily climb through one.”

“So you get in as a fly through the ‘lators, open the window and we’re in?” Rose summed up. “Brilliant. Ahem. Let’s do it!” she said, ever ready to use Rachel’s famous dialogue.

“Yeah, and this way we won’t have to break anything,” Saffa said, concentrating on the gross image of the fly. “I was considering hurling a diamond through the window, but thffffffff,” she managed as her mouth contorted into a proboscis.

“Oh, man, I so did not need to see that,” Rose said, gagging. “Austin, for the sake of your dinner, do turn away.”

“Nah, dinner was even worse,” Austin countered.

<Hey. The fly morph made even Cassie look gross,> Saffa pointed out. <Okay then. Time to fly.>

Saffa hopped off the ground and took to the air on her crazy fly wings. The girls’ restrooms were, according to public opinion, cleaner than the boys’ most of the time, but it wasn’t hard for Saffa to find the ventilator – just follow the wonderful smell of phenyl.

Once she was in, she realised the door of the restroom might be locked from the outside, as she had sometimes noticed in the mornings – so, trying hard to resist taking a sampling from the grating (oh guh-ross) Saffa buzzed outside, guided by the smell of soap, and looked for a new smell, that of fresh air from the ventilator opening out to the corridor.

She found it soon enough, landed in the corridor, and demorphed. She went over to the sixth-grade classrooms – and found they were locked from the outside. Saffa cursed. Now what?

She sighed. It looked as if she’d have to go through her breaking routine after all. She concentrated, and a large lump of charcoal appeared in her hand. She hurled it at the window of the classroom that opened into the corridor.

CRASH!

Hopefully that hadn’t stirred the principal, who happened to live in a house over the compound wall of the school.

Saffa stuck her hand carefully through the hole and reached for the knob of the window. She opened it, jumped into the classroom, and opened the other window at which Austin and Rose were waiting.

“What are you going to do about that?” Rose said, looking at the broken window, once they were all inside.

Saffa carefully swept up the shards of glass with her shoe into a corner. “Done.”

They climbed out through the broken window and began climbing the stairs to the Computer lab. “Didn’t know it would be that hard getting in,” Austin said.

“Oh, that was just the easy part,” Saffa said dryly. “The hard part, the part where everyone’s running for their lives, is just coming up.”
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on May 28, 2013, 06:39:34 PM
So the warden just tore a hole through the roof and didn't care? Sounds like the norm.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 29, 2013, 10:39:58 AM
Yep, it is. ;D Here in India, when something happens, we consider it tradition to first yell at the people apparently responsible for the damage, then lament to God why people like this are still around, throw out a few more swear words in our language of choice, and the next day - or it can take even longer, e.g. the electric fence - get to actually seeing what the heck happened. :P ;)

So. RAFparty is over. Sad, considering it helped me get to 1000 posts (and several other similar milestones). :( But, however, this thread will be on hiatus again - for this weekend as I have to go to Chennai to write my last entrance exam. It's actually a HIGHLY pointless exam considering I already have a seat in university, but try reasoning with my mother! :P Anyway, I thought the break will be good for Abby to catch up when she does.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on May 31, 2013, 02:23:31 AM
Okay, so change of plan - I'm not going to Chennai, staying right here. The situation is as follows: My grandma, that's my mum's mum, is terribly sick, so my parents have left to take care of her and Rose and I are parked at my dad's parents' house for the week. If all goes well that's how long they'll take over there.

So, anyway, that's my life story right now (which probably should've been posted in my profile thread). But it's just a note that the fic will resume - next chapter will be out this evening IST, not now - I really need some lunch. :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on May 31, 2013, 11:28:38 PM
Thanks for waiting. I got grounded from everything till today.... Now I gotta go catch up with Cloak's Fic.... *sigh*
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 01, 2013, 12:41:02 AM
You got grounded? You bad girl, Abby. What did you do? Drive really badly? ;)

So, new chapter. Between this and the X-Files recaps I really must have the fastest fingers in India. Anyway...

Chapter Thirty

When the three teenagers reached the second floor, they noticed that, yet again, everything was locked. The Biology lab, the twelfth-grade classrooms, the rooms they could see all had a big fat padlock hanging on their doors.

“Oh, great! As if one wasn’t enough!” Rose groaned.

“Yeah, but I just realized – the Comp lab doesn’t have a padlock system, just a regular lock-and-key-type door. So we might have some luck,” Saffa said.

Sure enough, the door to the Computer lab was open, as they found out by simply tugging on the handle. “That was easy,” Rose said.

“Too easy,” Austin said.

“Does anyone else feel like we’re walking onto a trap?” Saffa said. The three of them looked at each other, then cautiously walked into the lab, closing the door behind them.

Austin walked over to the last computer in the row facing the wall of the auxiliary lab, turned it on, and waited for it to boot up, while the girls stood guard.

Saffa turned to Rose, and caught her sister’s eye. Rose caught her sense of urgency. She leaned over to Saffa. “What?” she whispered.

“If anything goes wrong… if anything goes not according to plan… I want you to teleport, and contact RAF immediately,” Saffa said softly. “You’re vulnerable. Save yourself.”

Rose turned pale. “But Austin…”

“Adrian Price knows about Austin. But he doesn’t know about you. He’s not expecting to see you there, and he won’t, because you’ll be invisible. So if anything happens, you can make a run for it. You can escape while we fight him off.”

“But I want to fight!”

“Rose, if you do as I say, you can bring Price over to RAF. Once he’s there, and the RAFians are all ready for battle, he’ll have absolutely no chance. You’ll have then played the most important part in destroying him.”

Rose thought about this. She looked at Saffa, who said, “Trust me.”

“I trust you. But what if you die before he comes to RAF?”

Saffa laughed softly. “Look, I’ve interacted with this guy a lot by now. And I’ve gotten to know he’s got an ego the size of a farmer-prize-winning watermelon. Oh, he won’t kill me here. No – he’ll wait till he gets to RAF for that. That way he can kill me in front of everyone else and then go on to take the forum.” She paused. “Not that I’ll allow that, of course.”

“But what about Austin?”

“When I tell Austin to run, he’ll run,” she said. “He’ll be safer at RAF.”

“Hey, girls, we have a small issue here,” Austin called out. “The Internet is not on.”

“That can be fixed. You turn on the hub in the auxiliary lab.”

“I’ll get it,” Rose said, turning invisible. She crawled under the small door that separated the two labs, turned on the hub, and returned.

“Now what?” she said.

“Now we wait. This place has a crappy connection,” Austin said.

“Yeah,” Saffa agreed. “Now we – what!” She snapped her head round to the other two rows of computers. It was back! The tentacle thing was back… in here… she was sure of it, she had seen it… an arm withdrawing behind a computer at the far wall…

“What do you mean what?” Rose said.

“The tentacle thing – I saw it! It was right there – behind that computer!” Saffa pointed at the concerned monitor.

Austin laid a hand on Saffa’s arm. “Saffa…” he began in a concerned voice.

Saffa shook off the hand. “I am NOT crazy! I saw it!” She went over to the computer, dropped down and moved the CPU. “It was right… here…”

She sat down on the floor, looking defeated.

Austin came up to her. “Look, you know how that thing is. And you saw how much it tortured you that day. It’s playing tricks on your mind, Saffa. Don’t let it get to you.”

Rose gave her bit from the chair. “Yeah, you’re the strongest among the three of us. If you start to lose it, well, we’re all done for. So forget that thing, and come on. We need you to log in. The connection’s coming through now.”

Saffa got up and took her seat in front of the computer. She typed in the address, www.animorphsforum.com (http://www.animorphsforum.com), and logged in.

Once she was on the home page, at the board index, her heart lifted when she saw the online list. There were about fifty people online, including the mods, and the most powerful RAFians of them all – Cloaky and Estelore.

“They’re getting ready, I’m sure,” Saffa said with a hint of pride.

“Guess they’re expecting us,” Austin said. “Is Aquilai online?”

“No idea. I won’t know from this list, since he’s a hidden user, which is proving to be quite inconvenient at the moment,” Saffa said. “I never asked him how he did that. Hm. I should sometime.”

“But surely he should’ve sent you a PM.”

“Nothing there at the moment – hang on.” Saffa hit Refresh. The board index came back, looking the same as it was earlier, except for one difference – the ‘My Messages’ tab was bold with [1] next to it.

“Brilliant. Hopefully that’s the right message,” Saffa said, clicking on it.

The message was indeed from Aquilai. It read:
        Sorry for the late message, but I was caught up in rush-hour traffic on the way back from the firm where Lewis Miller works. I stuck to your request and had asked them a couple of times about Adrian Price, but they kept giving me the same information. They’re not that great in that department. However today when I checked in, I finally got an update.
        You’re not going to like this, Saffa, because Lewis Miller is hell bent on seeing you dead, and he’ll do anything to get to India and make it happen, including taking advantage of someone else’s health. See, Adrian Price was a pretty serious brain cancer patient, undergoing treatment in a London hospital since two months, until he died four days ago.


“You owe me fifty bucks, Rose,” Saffa said, not without an edge of anger in her tone.

“What a creep,” Austin spat. “So just to come here and take over RAF, he steals the identity of his near-dead friend? Even when he knew he was dying?”

“Yes, he does,” a cold voice sneered behind them. “And pretty soon, you’ll be joining him up there.”
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on June 01, 2013, 12:51:18 AM
*plays piano dramatically* Dun dun dun.....
No I didn't drive bad... I didn't wreck anyways... ;P
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 02, 2013, 12:50:29 AM
Ah, well, as long as it's like that then. :)

Okay, people, brace yourselves - we're at the climax here, where everything will be explained - including part of the darkness in Saffa's personality in the present day. Long chapter and be sure to read the note afterwards.

Chapter Thirty-one

Saffa and Austin turned around towards the source of the voice – a tall man in a long black coat. He wasn’t wearing his hat, and the moonlight streaming through the lab window highlighted the outline of his close-cropped hair, as well as two large, linear scars across his left cheek.

The moonlight also illuminated the pistol he was holding, pointed towards them. “Put your hands up. Away from the keyboard, or should I say, AFK,” he ordered.

This guy is so not funny. “Lewis Miller, I presume,” Saffa spat, raising her hands.

“The one and only,” Lewis Miller said in a patronizing tone. “And you are Saffa, of course. What a pleasant surprise.”

Saffa gritted her teeth. She had to be careful with whatever she said – or did – next.

“My, my, you have changed,” Miller continued. “Even though it’s only been a few months. You were an innocent little newbie. And now look at you.”

“Yes, I have changed,” Saffa said carefully. “And, clearly, so have you. You certainly don’t look like what you were when we first met.”

“Of course I don’t. You think I’d want to keep that face, that talon-ravaged mess? You certainly did a fine slice-and-dice back at CSA. It healed, yes. But I couldn’t keep it, unless I wanted to be stared at in the street.”

“And you took Adrian Price’s face.”

“Ah, yes, you found out about Adrian, didn’t you?” he said. “He was so convenient. And so is plastic surgery. When you know the right people, it’s free and easy.”

“Not to mention totally illegal.”

“Do I care about the law? No!” he spat. “The law is useless. It doesn’t govern the world that matters the most, what lies beyond this one and in that.” He made a gesture towards the computer.

Saffa decided to steer him away from the subject until absolutely necessary. “How did you come to India? I thought you didn’t have a passport.”

“No, but I did have the license to roam free,” he went on. “My parole was lifted after a month – I was such a good boy, you see. And I don’t have anybody else, no parents, siblings, nothing; I’m free of them. But getting a new passport takes too much time. Hitching a ride in the cargo deck of a plane is much quicker. And for the record, Heathrow did take some effort getting through, but Chennai? Their security is just plain crap.”

“Brilliant, Mr. Bond. And how did you find me?”

“The traditional way. I Googled you,” he said, half-laughing.  “You were one of the tenth-grade Board exam toppers for the school and they put that up on their website, I recall. The rest I left to my good friend Alice Bennett, who you have managed to overcome.”

“I did, didn’t I? And you’re next in line. You’re alone here,” Saffa said coldly.

“Oh, so you thought I was alone?” Miller laughed. “Meet my little pet from the Bannedlands. I call him Snow. Nice name, eh?”

As he said the word ‘Snow’ the dark, shadowy creature that had been hounding Saffa for the past week rose up next to him, towering over him and even going clean through the ceiling.

“Snow saw you coming,” Miller continued. “He alerted me, at my room in a hotel in the town. He’s pretty fast, you know. I knew you were coming out for the computer. You really should keep all your variables in check,” he said, gazing proudly at the creature.

Enough with the lame computer jokes already. “And the CPU. How did you manage to install the teleporting device inside?”

“I used your modus operandi – working in the middle of the night. Brought my hardware kit when no one was around, stole the lab’s key, and worked on it. I even made a duplicate of the key so I could come back here.”

“That explains why it was open,” Austin whispered.

Miller caught wind of the whisper. “The outerworlder is here too? Ah, I see, you’ve come to protect your dear Saffa. Well, boy, if you’re so willing to die for her, how about tonight?”

He ****ed the pistol and put a finger on the trigger.

“NO!” Saffa yelled. She pushed Austin to the floor – just as Miller pulled the trigger.

BLAM! The bullet missed Saffa’s head by inches and lodged itself in the wall under the window.

Austin pulled out his shredder, and they both scrambled to their feet unsteadily. Saffa could only wonder where Rose was, since she couldn’t see her.

The creature called Snow was helping his master up, who had been rocked backwards from the force of the gun. It was then that Saffa noticed a faint light coming from the computer. She turned around to see a bunch of pixels fading, the light going in through the keyboard…

She turned around quickly. Had Miller or Snow noticed? No – they were too busy, and their view of the computer was obscured by the pillar in the middle of the lab. Saffa heaved a sigh of relief. One small victory, at least.

“You got lucky, boy,” Miller sneered. “But luck isn’t permanent…”

TSEEEWW!! Austin fired at Miller, who ducked backwards and fell on the door. He opened it and ran outside into the corridor with Snow.

“He’s getting away!” Saffa yelled. “Let’s go!”

They burst out of the door and ran down the corridor, looking for any sign of the intruders.

“There!” Austin called. “I saw a tentacle… it was going downstairs…”

Austin, who was a born athlete, took off instantly down the stairs, all the while clutching his shredder. Saffa, not really the fastest runner around, followed him at a much slower pace, eyes darting from left to right all the time.

BLAM! A shot from the ground floor! The two of them peered over from behind the wall beside the stairs. One of the entrances near the sixth-grade classrooms was blown open, the padlock lying on the ground smoking.

“He’s gone outside,” Saffa said. “Let’s catch him while we can.”

They moved slowly and quickly, like Marines on a drill, out onto the football ground, not knowing what to expect.

“This is a bad position,” Austin noted, ever the Army man. “We are so exposed out here.”

“And so you are!” the voice of Lewis Miller called out. He pulled out his pistol.

BLAM! BLAM!

“How many rounds does that thing have, anyway?” Austin said, as the two of them ducked for cover next to the goalpost.

“He’s probably got spare cartridges,” Saffa replied.

Austin shot up. It was his turn, and Miller was at close range now, coming up to them slowly. Snow was nowhere to be seen.

He took careful aim. TSEEEWW!!

“Aaargh!” Miller had ducked, but not before scalding his right arm and nearly dropping the pistol. “You really infuriate me, boy!” With that, he clutched his arm, took aim, and fired.

BLAM!

“Ahhhh!” The shot caught Austin right in the stomach. He fell to the ground, clutching his side and bleeding profusely.

“NO! No, no, no, no, no!” Saffa cried. She rushed over to where Austin had fallen, completely oblivious to the fact that Lewis Miller was right behind her. No problem… let him shoot me. Then I can die, too…

She took his head in her arms. “Oh, God, no…” she kept saying, sobbing uncontrollably.

Austin just smiled. He reached out with one weak arm to wipe a tear from Saffa’s face. “I’m sorry, Saffa. I really am. But you’ll… have to go it alone now.”

“You can’t die,” Saffa said lamely, even though she knew saying it wouldn’t make the situation any better. “You can’t…”

“The Drode was right after all, Saffa,” Austin croaked. “But like I said… he didn’t know… friendship. Or sacrifice. And that’s why… you’ll live.” He took a breath. “You’ll win.”

The last flicker of a pulse in his hand disappeared. Saffa hung her head and wept like she had never wept before – which was, indeed, never before.

And then, once the grief had gone, it was replaced with rage – torrents of wild, unspeakable rage that you could never imagine possessing you, not unless you had lost something and you had felt that rage yourself.

Saffa looked in the direction Lewis Miller had disappeared off to, with pure, utter hatred gleaming in her eyes.

“I’ll kill you!” she screamed at the wind, sounding disturbingly like Rachel. “I’ll kill you!”
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 02, 2013, 12:51:06 AM
Reader note – Yes, I know, how cruel of me, how can you just kill a character like that, especially one that was so important. But I had my reasons for doing so – and it was not just to highlight where the dark side of Saffa comes from. Austin was pretty much the representation of the perfect friend – supportive, open-minded and willing to listen, a friend I have never had in all my 12 years of school. I did try, but apparently no one wants to associate themselves with the weird girl who spends half her time in the library and favours the South African cricket team over the national side. Yep, high school kids are so judgemental it’s stupid.

Honestly, that was the best part about writing this fic – it was so liberating. I’ve always turned to writing as an escape from the idiocies of life – be it fics, diary entries or English assignments – probably because my mom would dismiss high school problems as something that’s “there to be dealt with”. But the thing is, they’re still there! Which is why instead of telling her, I turned to writing to get one over being eyeballed, hated for being WAY cleverer than the rest of the class, and a guy who was so unnecessarily nice to me in final year it left me confused and cursing the universe for being so screwed up. I’ve felt better now that all this is behind me, and I can go on to university with a clean slate and a more awesome, RAF-enchanced personality. :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on June 02, 2013, 08:27:00 AM
So you actually met a guy like Austin?
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 02, 2013, 08:36:21 AM
Well, yeah. After years of being treated like one of the boys - and living with it, because that's who I am - here comes this idiot in final year who (I can't blame him since he was new) treated me - well, differently. And, like I said, it left me confused. Especially since girls who tell me they're my friends get it the way.

Gee whiz, I'm starting to sound all One Tree Hill, eh? :P But then it's probably better it hadn't worked out. If it had I probably wouldn't have been able to write like this. ;) And hey, I have you to 'fess up to. Let those chicks rot in hell. :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on June 02, 2013, 08:39:05 AM
Yesss... I think you're amazing. You know, you would fit right in at my school. :) Everyone's crazy. That and the fact that there's a group that is full of crazy which I'm in. I would like it more if people didn't.... Well... Nevermind I'll tell you later. :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 02, 2013, 08:41:56 AM
Lol I'm sure you will. :D

Two guests viewing the page? Cool! :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on June 02, 2013, 08:45:49 AM
And me, as always. :D
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 04, 2013, 12:44:44 AM
Peeps. Le new chapter is here.

Chapter Thirty-two

“As far as I’m concerned one of you is going to end up dead if you take that route…”

The Drode’s cackling, shrill voice echoed in Saffa’s mind as she walked down the corridor, Austin’s shredder in hand. Indeed, he could predict things… but, then again…

“She was always a strong woman; I looked up to her that way. Kinda like you, I guess.”

“The point is, you already told the Drode it’s wrong. And why is it wrong? Because that little git doesn’t know love, he doesn’t know friendship… just power.”

“And that’s why… you’ll live. You’ll win.”


Saffa tried to prevent a further wave of tears as she raced up the staircase. Austin had just done exactly what Lewis Miller had expected him to do – but hadn’t valued – sacrificed his own life to make sure Saffa kept hers. (Talk about a Harry Potter moment.) No wonder his mother did not hold her responsible if anything happened, as now it had. She had seen the noble streak in her son, as Saffa was seeing it now. He really would’ve made a fine soldier.

“My, my, you have changed… You were an innocent little newbie. And now look at you.”

The very thought of Lewis Miller brought back all the anger back into her brain like a tsunami wave. Saffa tried to force it down, to try and swallow it like it was one of the school’s indigestible lunches. She had to think rationally now, her adversary might be just around the corner – she couldn’t afford to let anger cloud her brain.

She came up to the Computer lab door and opened it a crack. There seemed to be no one inside. She went in very slowly, clutching the shredder. The smell of gunpowder was still in the air, and the last computer was still on. The RAF home page was still on the screen.

Saffa moved to the seat and was just about to log out – when she felt the cold barrel of a pistol against her forehead.

“Oh, no, you can’t do that,” Miller said smoothly. A shuffling sound next to him meant that Snow had showed up.

“Why ever not?” Saffa said in a cool tone, trying to keep her voice calm even though she felt like she was about to explode.

“Because I can’t afford to kill you here,” he said. “I’ve already made a mess in the grounds. Now hit Alt+L like a good girl, or I will make a mess in the lab.” He ran a hand through Saffa’s dark curly hair. “You know, you’re much better-looking as a girl than as a bird.”

“Don’t. Touch. Me,” Saffa said through gritted teeth.

“Ah, yes. That was your outerworlder friend’s job, wasn’t it? But too bad, he’s not here now. Now teleport, please.”

Saffa tried to contain her rage as she placed her shaking fingers on the keyboard. Please, please let Rose have reached soon enough…

She hit Alt+L, and the same sucking-pixelating routine began again.

When it was over, the three figures dropped through onto the green grass of the open field with the buildings of the forum seen in the distance. There didn’t seem to be a soul around, and the only sounds were the wind ruffling the grass and leaves, and the sloshing of the stream.

Saffa was a little unnerved at this – that is, until she saw a flicker of sunlight behind a cloud in the RAFsky. If Estelore was here, the others were bound to be around somewhere…

She turned slightly, and found the barrel of Miller’s gun back at her forehead. “Uh-uh-uh. You’re not going anywhere. Not until you lead me to Richard first.”

“And what if I don’t know where he is?” Saffa said ****ily. Stupid move.

“Then you die right here.” He put his finger on the trigger.

Saffa closed her eyes. Hey, Austin, wait up.

FWOOOOM!

A ball of fire flew hard and fast at Miller and right at his hand, scalding it and causing him to drop his pistol. “AAAAHHH!!”

Saffa ducked out of Miller’s way, then looked up to see Phoenix standing a few metres from her, cradling a fireball and looking pretty pleased with himself.

“Whoa! Unexpected but totally appreciated!” Saffa said, genuinely surprised.

Phoenix laughed. “We got your message – hey, look out, he’s coming back!”

Miller was reaching for the gun – but Saffa got there first, and, quick as lightning, kicked the weapon out of the way and into the air, and into the hands of a waiting, grinning Underseen.

“Thank you very much, sir,” he said cheekily.

At this point, Saffa noticed various RAFians popping up from various places. Parker – and Tyr – were leading a group of eager newbies, armed to the teeth, out from the Roleplaying Board. Seal emerged from the nearby stream, along with a soaking wet Bear. Gaz, Steph and Ash dropped out of the tree Saffa was standing next to. Dino and Noelle came storming in out of nowhere, along with Tony, Nate and a beaming Rose, while Blaze, Blue and Donut dropped down from the sky. But perhaps the most dramatic appearance was put forth by Cloak, his feline Realm Walker form rising up terrakinetically from underground (where he had probably made a little bunker).

Saffa grinned with glee. It was an ambush!

Miller grew pale. “How – how – “ he began.

Rose stepped forward, turning her invisibility off. “That ‘Andalite’ you met in the dark alley a month ago, Miller? That was no Andalite. It was me. As I have always been.”

“You – you – you’re dead, all of you!” Miller raged. He threw off his coat to reveal the Dracon beam concealed underneath. “It’s a good thing I kept this – and worked on it. Snow! After them!” he barked at the shadow-creature. And he fired right at Rose – or where he thought Rose was.

“What – argh!” He turned on Saffa. “You! At least I can have sweet revenge.”

TSEEEWW!!

Saffa wasted no time. She leaped out of the beam’s path, ran and broke away from the masses, and as she ran, she concentrated. Eventually, she had to stop, and let the talons grow out of her feet.

Meanwhile, the RAFians tackled Snow. It was a bit hard at first, what with one person after another discovering it was made of nothing penetrable.

“Now how do we… hey! Heyheyheyheyhey! PUT ME DOWN!” Nate yelled, as one tentacle grabbed his waist and hoisted him into the air.

The next tentacle went for Noelle, but she dodged it, with Andalite grace, leaving it to pick up poor Seal instead.

“Why me! All the time!” she yelled.

Saffa was fully hawk now. With her sharp eyesight she noticed Lewis Miller sprinting towards the Animorphs Board, for some reason.

She looked at his retreating figure. Then back at the battle that was taking place behind her.

Underseen saw the hawk standing uneasily on the ground. “Making the decision again, huh?”

<It didn’t work out quite so well last time when I chose Miller.>

“Yeah, but what if there are no reinforcements back next to the Animorphs Board? Someone has to go after him, right?”

Saffa looked at him with a fierce hawk glare. <So I’m good to go?>

“You’re good to go,” he said in his best airline-security-check-guy impression. “I’m giving you clearance on behalf of the rest of RAF. Besides, this is your fight. And lightning doesn’t strike twice in the same place. Which means you’re not at CSA, and you’ll finish him.”

Saffa hopped into the air and filled up her wings. She grinned inwardly. <He does not know who he’s decided to mess with. Here, take my shredder, I don’t really need it. Oh, and Underseen?>

“Yeah?”

<Water. Use water. Lots of water.>
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on June 04, 2013, 12:50:50 AM
Were. It's plural. :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 04, 2013, 01:09:17 AM
The edit has been made.

EDIT: Okay, y'all, next chapter. We're hurtling towards the end.

Chapter Thirty-three

Saffa angled wing and took off, at top speed, generously aided by a plump thermal, towards the Animorphs Board. The door of the building had been very generously left open, and she bolted through it, to find herself in the meadow – the one that Tobias and Ax called home in the series.

She wondered why Miller had come here. This was the first time she was visiting the Board in person, and she had heard from the others it was basically composed of scenes from various moments in the series, with a different scene showing up each time you entered. That was hardly surprising; with 62 books in total, you could have an average of maybe two hundred scenes, maybe more, to choose from.

Right now, she was hovering further away from the meadow and over the suburbs. Saffa could make out a golden retriever running down a road after a speeding car. She knew instantly which book that had come from...

In the distance, she saw the mall, and then, suddenly, appearing from behind a water tank, a tall figure with a Dracon beam.

<All right, then. Time to launch the missile.>

The ‘missile’ sped towards the mall, towards the roof, hoping she wouldn’t end up having to do a Jake and falling through the skylight in tiger morph. Lewis Miller was indeed scanning the skies – but looking in the wrong direction.

Tseeeeer!” Saffa raked Miller’s head from behind. A crop of hair went flying.

“AAAAHH!”

He fired at the hawk. “So, you’re going to do this again, are you?”

TSEEEWW!! Missed!

<Yes. Yes, I am.>*

The talons brushed across Miller’s face again, right across his old scars, which opened up and caused him to start bleeding again. He was dripping with blood, and it made the Dracon rather slippery.

<Why are you here, Miller?>

“Here? You should know... is this not the heart and soul of your forum? The very foundation of it, a series that has been dead for years? Well, I’m blowing up this place, and then it will be dead for good. And so will all of you.”

<What are you, nuts?>

“This was always my plan. It was all the opening I needed – to get to you, to make you pay for what you did to me. Nothing less, nothing more. And I would finally live in peace.”

TSEEEWW!!

<Ahhh!> Saffa’s left foot was incinerated! She dropped to the ground, flailing and flapping to get some sort of altitude.

“Heh, heh, heh. Did you really think you could stop me in this puny bird form?” Miller cackled. “I’d have thought you’d learned your lesson, after what happened at CSA and all. Anyway, no matter, all the better for me...”

He aimed his Dracon at the helpless, footless hawk lying on the ground.

Then...

It dropped out of the sky like a stone! Dropped right at Miller, right across his aiming hand, and raked across the hand, sending the Dracon clattering to the ground and causing Miller to gasp at his right hand, on which he could now count only up to three.

<What in...>

The new red-tailed hawk – yes, red-tailed hawk – simply gave Saffa a thought-speak command.

<Demorph.>

Saffa gladly obliged. But even otherwise, she had a strange feeling about the hawk – and then, she realised.

<Tobias?!>

<The very same,> Tobias said in her head. <I thought you knew we existed here in the Animorphs Board…>

<No offence, but I kinda forgot.>

Tobias laughed. <That’s all right. But would you do me a favour? Get rid of this guy for me. He’s getting on all our nerves.>

<With pleasure.>

Lewis Miller unsteadily gripped the Dracon beam in his right hand, then switched to his left, which gave him no better a grip. “You infernal… I’ll make you pay for this…”

He began to get up, but was brought back down almost instantly when something struck the hollow of his knee, and sent a searing pain up his entire leg. He looked at his knee – to find a long, sharp diamond embedded in it.

“Holy… what is this?”

He turned around slowly, fear written all over his face, and gave a gasp.

Saffa had just a bit more of the demorph to finish – but she loved playing with this part, and the giant hawk wings were outstretched behind her as she towered over Miller, hair billowing in the wind, diamond in hand, like some terrifying angel. Great. Now all I need is a giant South African flag flying behind me, and the mural will be complete.

She flung the diamond at Miller. It caught him in the side. He fell to the ground, writhing.

“How… this is new!” he gasped.

“You were right. I have changed,” Saffa said indifferently, her wings slowly shrinking into her back. “But you try to mess with any country, Miller – and it will get back at you.”

Miller just stared. “Help me. Forgive me,” he breathed.

“And how am I going to guarantee it won’t happen again? For all you know, you can come after India next. It’s an opportune situation for you; there’s enough controversy flying around to start a war. And when you do – “ Saffa raised her hand, “ – maybe my sister will come after you with a barrage of stinging spices. Maybe even a strangling silk scarf. Either way, you won’t get off lightly.”

“You’re not real,” Miller said, choking and shaking his head. “You’re not real.”

“Oh, I am very real. And so are these diamonds. And they are the hardest substance on Earth, so they hurt.” She swung her hand in a sharp arc, sending an array of diamonds flying towards the ground. This one’s for you, Austin.

Silence. The silence that followed was terribly disturbing. Saffa turned away and closed her eyes. Death was a huge weight on her young head, and she had seen enough of it that night – even worse, she had just contributed to the toll.

What was happening to her? Did her emotions come in her way, her rage over the loss of Austin blind her and force her to do the unthinkable, even giving Miller a seemingly valid reason for her actions? Or was this how it was meant to be – was her destiny at RAF to be that of a calculative assassin, one whose duty is outlined in black and white?

She now understood Cloak’s reluctance to take a life, even his enemy’s. But as the earlier questions crowded back into her head… she just didn’t know what she was any more.

<It’s over,> Tobias said silently in her head, bringing her back to the present. <You can let go now.>

* - Got the reference, Abby? ;)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on June 05, 2013, 06:42:03 PM
I might... if I knew where the star was. ; P
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on June 05, 2013, 07:51:25 PM
Please don't let this be the near end.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 06, 2013, 01:42:24 AM
Well, I've already done a lot of chapter planning, so I'm afraid that may be the case. Don't feel like a chapter now though... plus South Africa's playing India in the evening and I am throwing all patriotism out the window for this fixture. ;) Maybe tomorrow.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on June 06, 2013, 02:34:38 AM
Seriously, though. Where is that star?
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 06, 2013, 03:04:06 AM
Uh... up there. Near the beginning. A thought-speak dialogue.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on June 06, 2013, 03:56:55 AM
Oh, there it is. I found it...

...Of COURSE I know where that came from. How many times have I ever said that since you've met me, Saffa? And for whoever doesn't know what the reference is, it's Phineas and Ferb (or at least that's where I got it from). That and the fact that I say it ALL the time. It's my favorite line. :D Like, ever.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 07, 2013, 07:17:54 AM
All righty then.

We lost. :facepalm: Nearly there, but... that's sport for you. Anyway. New chapter, like I promised. Lots of speeches in this one.

Chapter Thirty-four

Saffa returned to find the rest of RAF gathered in the Social Board. There were quite a few people recuperating from injuries and most of the group looked tired and worn out from the fight, but they were all laughing, chattering among themselves and generally having a good time. She smiled. It always felt good to be back.

She found Rose busy bandaging Aquilai’s leg, and went up to her. “Hey,” she said.

Rose looked up, then, dropped the roll of bandage and hugged her sister. “Is he gone? Did you do it?” she said.

Saffa shirked back – she was not really the hugging type – but returned the hug anyway. “Yeah,” she whispered. “Yeah, it’s over.”

Rose pulled away, then noticed the blank, cold stare in Saffa’s eyes. Not good. “Austin… he didn’t make it, did he? Because he’s not with you.”

Saffa took a breath. “No, he didn’t,” she said slowly. “But he died saving me. He did his duty.”

“Yeah, I guess he did.”

A solemn silence hung in the air, broken by a sudden spurt of guffaws from the group of chairs next to them. Blaze had either said something very funny or did something dumb, which was causing Steph, Parker and Blue to LOL.

Saffa shook her head and turned to Rose, who had resumed with her work on Aquilai’s leg. “So how did you guys deal with Snow?”

“Oh, it was totally crazy at first. We couldn’t get anything through it, and it just kept getting us. And it has an iron grip – “

“That’s what happened to my leg,” Aquilai put in.

“Anyway, that’s when Underseen comes running in like a lunatic yelling ‘Water! Water! Use water!’ And then I remembered your wine trick. Aquilai was epic. He was hanging in mid-air from a tentacle but managed a big lunge and whacked a pipeline – “

“Heck, even I didn’t know I could do that!”

“ – and Seal also did this cool thing where she summoned the water of the stream right onto Snow. Plus, final flourish, Cloaky opened up a geyser in the ground; so altogether, it didn’t really stand much chance after that. We don’t know if it’s totally gone or went back to the Bannedlands, but at least now we know how to get rid of it if it comes back. There, you’re done,” Rose told Aquilai.

“I can’t believe I’m actually saying this,” Saffa told Rose, “but I’m proud of you.”

Rose shrugged. “Hey, it was nothing. I actually listened to you, that’s a first, and it paid off.” She paused. “It won’t bring back Austin though.”

“I’m not expecting it to.”

Saffa went over to a table where Cloak, Gaz and Underseen were discussing the events of the day. There was another girl behind them, a teenage newbie she hadn’t seen before, looking at Saffa with interest. She smiled back.

“It’s over,” Saffa said simply, pulling a chair for herself. The others said nothing, just nodded their approval. Saffa turned to Cloak, and the look of understanding he gave her said enough: there would be time later to talk, to look at the decisions they made over their enemies… and to decide, for themselves, exactly where the line blurred.

“I heard Richard is supposed to make an appearance,” Gaz said, bringing them back to the conversation.

“Wonderful. He’s probably going to take the opportunity to make another Big Inspirational Richard Speech,” Saffa said dryly.

“Maybe this time he’ll start with ‘Friends, RAFians, Countrymen,” Underseen suggested. Then, he added, “I really hope not.”

“Of course, he’d leave out the countrymen bit,” Gaz pointed out.

It was all just pointless, general gabble – but it was so lightening after everything Saffa had just been through. The weight on her soul was reducing, slowly.

Then a tall figure stepped through the doorway and swept into the room, causing everyone to instinctively stand up out of respect – for respect was exactly what the Father of RAF commanded, especially on occasions such as these.

“Sit down, everyone,” Richard commanded in his clear, Caribbean-accented voice. “I don’t know why on Earth you all keep standing up, anyway.”

He looked at the crowd, who stared back at his expectantly. Richard surveyed the tired, battle-worn, yet happy faces of his forum, and could not but help feel proud of how far all of them had come; some more than others – and some finding their place at the right time, he thought, noticing Saffa in the back.

He cleared his throat. “Ahem. Friends, RAFians, everyone…” he began. Underseen began giving everyone around the table smug looks.

Richard continued speaking. "Another fight won... sure, it was relatively an easier trouble to weed than many others we've had in the past, but not entirely pointless. In fact, it's only reminded us even more how terrible this technology can be, if it falls into the wrong hands.

"I will not waste my breath and your time on elaborations. All of you know what you have gotten yourself into by becoming RAFians," he looked hard at the newbies in the front row as he said this, some of whom were giving him dubious looks, "a duty of guarding some of the universe's most powerful secrets, and keeping the rest of the normal world at peace by using them. The world outside isn't always full of nice, normal people who might believe you if you told them you've come into contact with aliens or you have special powers. There are many minds – like Lewis Miller – that will be thrilled to bits knowing what RAF holds, and will take it merely for personal gain."

"But what's wrong with personal gain?" a snarky voice piped up from the front. Saffa realized who it was and groaned. "I mean, hasn't RAF used a lot of alien technology for a lot of stuff? If the rest of the world can't know, then..." he was still saying.

"Shut up, Rotiart," Saffa said on impulse, loud and clear enough for all the newbies to turn around and stare at her. She suddenly felt like Meredith Grey. All these stares were annoying... The teenage girl behind her table wasn't staring, but she smiled at Saffa and gave her a thumbs-up. Fair enough. Let's get this over with.

"Look here, man," Saffa said, still addressing Rotiart though everyone else was listening, "didn't Richard already make it clear? We use technology we have access to, to keep the rest of the world at peace. And it's not like we stole it. The teleporting technology was ours on a compromise with the government, we made our intentions clear. Everything else, ask anybody. We procured it legitimately. And we're not using it to take control. So if you want to, well, the ideas are yours alone, so SHUT UP and keep them to yourself!"

The silence that followed was broken only by a few whimpering noises that came from Rotiart cowering in his chair under Saffa's glare. Then, Cloak stood up.

"She's right," he said. "Whatever else certain other organizations might say, we are not evil. And most of you have joined RAF because you know this, apart from the fact that you know of the existence of many other universes besides this one. If anything, the Miller problem has shown us that now's not the time to be bickering amongst ourselves. There's plenty more coming... and if we need to put a stop to it, we have to work together, newbies, mods, everyone."

"Exactly," Saffa said. "Look... would you all please stop staring? This day hasn't exactly been easy for me. My best friend got shot. I killed a man not knowing whether I did it off my own free will. And now this idiot in the front takes it upon himself to annoy me." She sighed. "It's a jungle out there, and we're all gonna lose something in the course of this battle. I'll move on from it all eventually. But right now, if you can help me heal, it would be very nice." She sat back down. Richard called off order, and everyone resumed what they were doing, though a few stares were thrown in Saffa's direction. She facepalmed.

"That was a nice speech," the teenage girl said. Saffa looked up at her and smiled.

"Thanks, er... ah..."

"Abby. Or Blaster. Call me whatever."

"Thanks, Abby," Saffa said. "And thank you for not staring."

"My pleasure. Heard about what happened... I'm sorry."

Saffa said nothing, but apparently Abby understood, because she turned to everyone at the table and said, "Drinks at the GESB? It's on my tab. Come for the company, Cloak."

"You're underage," Underseen said, grinning. In response, he received a friendly kick under the table. "Ow!"

"I could sure use one," Saffa declared, leaving with the other four. She'd come back to Rose later, and make plans... but right now, as she herself said, she needed time to heal. And friends like these were the best kind of Band-Aid.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on June 07, 2013, 08:52:39 AM
I had a feeling that that was me. :) You're awesome Saffa. ;D
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 07, 2013, 08:53:52 AM
I know, I know. ;)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on June 07, 2013, 09:36:14 AM
So. Is this gonna continue?
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 08, 2013, 01:11:39 AM
Well, there's two more chapters left in this book, and I've already started on my next, which is rather X-Files inspired... okay! Not gonna say any more. ;) Depending on university schedules and how creative I get in the coming months, I'll decide whether I put my fics in a continuous thread like Cloak's or as standalones. The fact that I will soon be a first-year university engineering student may make me resort to doing the latter.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 09, 2013, 03:03:31 AM
*in best airport announcer voice* Good morning everyone, it is my pleasure (not really) to present you with the last actual chapter of First Flight. An epilogue will soon follow. We are happy you enjoyed the book and we thank you for flying with us. *big grin*
...
Sorry, I've always wanted to do that at some point. ;D

Chapter Thirty-five

When Saffa and Rose logged off and got back to the Computer lab, which now heavily reeked of gunpowder, they could hear voices shouting things downstairs.

“No doubt Austin’s been found,” Saffa said tersely.

Rose laid a comforting hand on her sister’s shoulder. “Relax. They’ll probably rule it a mugging or something. That sort of thing always happens here in the holidays.”

They cleared browsing history and cookies, shut down the computer, then took a look at the back of the CPU – and found a device somewhat like one of those Chinese-made portable Wi-Fi transmitters plugged into one of the USB ports. Saffa yanked it out and looked it up and down, and found the initials L.M. on the back.

“What a smart-ass,” Saffa said softly. “Of course... Lewis Miller was in the hardware department. He found a way to make the teleporting device, a little chip, portable. Ah well. I think Richard will know what to do with this,” she said, tucking it into her pocket.

Rose turned invisible and calmly walked down the stairs, out the front entrance and all the way back to the girls’ building, while Saffa morphed to hawk and took off out of the open lab window into the cool night air. She flew over the football ground, but did not look down. But the thing with hawk hearing was – you could still catch conversation clearly even a hundred feet up.

“I know thees boy – Austin Connor,” a voice Saffa recognized as the boys’ warden was saying. “He comes out for football practice sometimes in the early mornings.” Good Lord, was it morning already? Saffa had hardly realized, what with the time flying by in RAF.

“Yes – and then before he could do anything, he got shot,” a female voice said, which Saffa realized was the principal. “Poor boy. And his poor mother. First her husband, and now she has to lose her son too.”

Saffa felt like ramming herself straight into the nearest wall. She felt like such a creep, dragging a completely innocent person into this madness, and now being the one to cause his dear mother so much grief. If she could have kept it all a secret – at that wedding party, if she didn’t tell Austin anything, and fought the monster with only Rose for assistance, if she hadn’t shown him Miller and RAF… he could have lived, gone on to do his duty… she didn’t even get the chance to tell him she loved him. Had he even realized it? She’d never know.

She shook her little hawk head and angled towards the open door of her bedroom. The glowing numbers on her digital clock read 1:13 AM. Rose, she noticed, was already peacefully sleeping, fully clothed, on the mattress they had managed to squish into the dorm. It was definitely not going to be as easy a sleep for her.

Surprisingly enough, she had a sound, dreamless sleep, and awoke the next morning to find Rose pouring hot water into a cup of instant noodles. “Breakfast is served,” she announced. “Slept well, I hope?”

“Actually, I did. No doubt Mum’s gonna be calling?”

“Oh, she’ll call all right; these things don’t need the morning paper to get around fast. Though we can’t possibly go home – there’s no one there. I think I’ll check in with Judy and see if she can put up with me for two days. What’ll you do?”

“I’ll ask Sonal. Gotta make a phone call from the office – see ya,” Saffa said, putting down her cup.

On her way back from the office, she caught up with Sam, the eleventh-grade Commerce student who had been staying back (but was now being called back home by similarly over-anxious parents), and had heard all about last night’s investigation from the warden, who, in a surprisingly kinder tone (miracles would never cease), had also told the three boys to get back home.

The warden had just recovered from a splitting headache – Saffa figured this had been from her punch, but didn’t say anything – when he heard gunshots, screamed, and then rushed upstairs to check if any of the boys were fooling about and that all three were safe. Finding that scene okay, he decided to check the grounds – and that was when he found Austin Connor lying still and bloody against the goalpost.

Naturally, the first thing the warden did was to run to the principal’s house, bang on the door and wake her up and lead her to the shocking scene. The police were called, and they were not too impressed at carrying out an investigation at such a ridiculous hour, but carried on anyway. They found several broken windows, with the glass of a sixth-grade classroom one even swept neatly underneath the cupboard, and a back door that had been shot clean through from the outside. The only other open room they found was the Computer lab, and they did find a bullet in a wall, but nothing further. Quite clearly, the muggers had been after the computers again.

“Again?” Saffa said, cutting Sam off. “You mean this has happened before?”

“Yeah, last year, in the hols. Someone stole a CPU and a monitor one evening. There was a tenth-grader there – Rajesh, he left – who was looking for his Computer notebook in the lab when they attacked him with a kitchen knife. He survived, but they managed to make off with one system. Apparently they got in through a hole in the fence.”

“So they’re finalising it as muggers.”

“Yeah. Of course, nothing’s been stolen, which is good. Just Austin’s bad luck, I guess.”

“Yeah. You could say that.”

Four hours later all five students were on the train back home, Saffa and Rose accompanied by Mrs. Agarwal till their station, who even got them driven to their respective friends’ houses – India was no country for young women roaming around alone. Sonal was more than happy to take Saffa in, since she realised how much she would be hurting.

At about six o’ clock that evening, a group comprising three young boys, an older woman, and a church priest walked through the grass of the town cemetery, the priest leading the group in prayers which Jason, Abhay and Peter duly followed, their voices cracking on a few words.

Mrs. Connor remained silent, instead, gazed at the two tombstones next to each other, one smaller than the other, yet both held in equal pride by the onlooker. For their owners had both played their part in saving the world.

She was lost in her own thoughts while the prayer went on, till she heard the flap of wings overhead, and looked up to see the distinct silhouette of a biggish bird of prey, its broad wings outstretched against the setting sun, clutching something in its talons.

The bird angled downwards, skimming the tops of the trees that dotted the graveyard, and Mrs. Connor could now see clearly its russet-red tail. It flew over the heads of the group and dropped its parcel on the smaller grave, and took off into the air.

They looked at the flowers that had dropped from above – a pale purple bunch of jacarandas, the official flower of Pretoria, South African capital.

Mrs. Connor looked back up at the sky, where the hawk was still lingering. She gave it the smallest nod of her head, and made a gesture of peace with her hand.
That was enough to reassure Saffa.

<Thank you.>
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: Underseen on June 09, 2013, 03:36:11 AM
I got teary eyed this chapter.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 09, 2013, 03:45:33 AM
:o
Holy Crap. I Made Underseen Cry.

Okay.

Achievement of the day! :P ;D
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on June 09, 2013, 10:46:03 AM
I got teary eyed this chapter.
Ya, I did too. Very emotional chapter. :')
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 10, 2013, 02:44:10 AM
Thank you. I had no idea I could write like that. But I guess it's true what they say, experiences make you a better writer.

Not really feeling up to the epilogue today - after running up and down the city for various photocopies needed for my university admission, plus bad posture at the laptop has resulted in an aching shoulder. :facepalm: Need to correct that. Plus, South Africa's playing Pakistan in the evening and we really need to win to stay alive in the tourney. Will be tomorrow for sure. :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 11, 2013, 01:23:56 AM
Morning all! The good news was: we won! South Africa stay in the hunt, and my nails are now green and gold. :P ;D The bad news is: I'm winding this up today :( so here's the epilogue...

Epilogue

“Up in the air – there’s a fielder underneath it – he takes the catch!” the commentator was saying excitedly. “That’s Dale Steyn’s third wicket – he’s on a roll! Pakistan in a spot of bother here, 119 for four…”

Saffa looked at Cricket South Africa’s giant screen, grinning and doing a small whoop. It had actually been quite a satisfying day; apart from this fantastic score, she had also been to see Richard earlier and had gotten rid of Lewis Miller’s wireless teleporter, which she had discovered at the bottom of her suitcase when she had unpacked back home.

Richard had marvelled at the ingenuity of the device, shown it around to every RAFian who had been present at the time, and then taken it to his profile thread.

“You know how dangerous this technology can be…” he had begun.

“Yeah, yeah. I think we went over that one already.”

“Exactly. So I think it’s best I keep it here,” Richard had decided, locking it in a cabinet in his room. “It will be safe here, until we decide if we need to do anything further with it.”

“Like what? Destroy it?”

“Oh, no, no. It can be a useful thing in emergencies,” came the reply. “Now you shove off. There’s been enough melodrama in your life, you might as well go enjoy yourself. And that’s an order, Saffa!”

So Saffa decided to go watch the match in a place she wouldn’t have to fight with Rose over the TV remote. She was enjoying herself, having snagged some cheddar cheese popcorn and a tall glass of cold coffee from a cookery website and lounging in the chair behind the newsreel desk watching the match, when she felt the air shimmer behind her.

She whipped her head round to see that a man had appeared from the direction of the ‘Player Profiles’ area. He was well-built, not very tall, good-looking in spite of his balding crop of brown hair and scruffy beard, with well-set teeth and twinkling eyes. In other words, he looked exactly like the man in the life-size portrait of one of the SA captains on one side of the desk.

Saffa shook her head and grinned. Not AB de Villiers.

“The Ellimist,” she said matter-of-factly.

“Funny you should be back here, Saffa,” the Ellimist said, in a South African marbles-in-the-mouth accent.

“Funny you should be here, and you didn’t fool me. The captain’s on the field, directing his troops,” Saffa shot back, gesturing at the giant screen. AB – the Ellimist – smiled. “I just took a form that would suit this site.”

“Uh-huh. Thanks for making me suit this site. Lookie me! I’m glowing!” Saffa said sardonically. When she got no reply, she turned her attention back to the score, and got a commercial break instead.

“There was a line in Julius Caesar,” she mumbled offhandedly. “Cowards die many times before their death… the valiant taste of death but once.” She turned to the Ellimist. “I was a bloody coward, wasn’t I? Going after him on my own and kicking the bucket here.”

“That depends on how you look at it,” the Ellimist said simply. “In the end, everything worked out, didn’t it?”

“Very funny. I should be counting how many strings you pulled. I’m pretty sure you twisted the investigation appropriately. And when we fought the kitty monster? No one even noticed we were gone.”

“You are quite a bright one, Saffa.”

“Tell me something I don’t know,” Saffa retorted. “Like exactly why you are so enigmatic about everything.”

“The same reason you are so blunt about everything.”

“Ha-ha. Hilarious. Clears up everything.” Saffa paused for breath. “I’d like to know something.”

“Yes.”

“Why did you let me live that day? You could’ve easily left me where I was and not changed anything the Drode did. So why did you do what you had to?”

The Ellimist stepped forward. “You humans are a surprising species,” he said. “You divide your planet into countries. And your countries’ governments fight wars, human against human. It becomes the same everywhere, it spreads to the common people, the idea that people of various nations are meant to dislike each other.”

“And we fight, we win, we lose, and we all live happily ever after. So what?”

“So when one human comes along, and forsakes her own country’s ties to save another, for the common good of the world – there are some I’ve seen thinking that way. And the majority, I’ve seen, are here on RAF. And you had just proved your worth by defending South Africa from a barrage of pro-apartheid posts that would’ve been initiated had it been too late…”

Saffa shuddered. “That just spells chaos.”

“It does. And you stopped it from happening.” The Ellimist turned around to leave. “Does that answer your question?”

“Yeah. Yeah, it does.”

Saffa went back to the chair and took a sip of the coffee, when she stopped herself. She turned around. AB – the Ellimist – was still there. Good. It was the opportune moment.

“May I have his autograph?”

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It's been awesome fun writing this, and huge thanks to everyone who read it and loved it - guests included! I love you guys. :)

Oookay, now this is starting to sound like an Oscar acceptance speech! :P For the record, I'm three chapters down on my next - tentatively titled "The Lake Of Secrets" - which is a slightly X-Files inspired RAFfic set mostly here. (Since alien invaders usually seem to have a liking for the US and south central London, why not bring them to India, eh? ;) ) My plan is to draft out how much ever I can, coping with university schedules, as possible in Word - it's a work in progress as it gets posted, since I am such a bladdy perfectionist with my writing. :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on June 11, 2013, 07:15:01 AM
Wohoo! You go Saf. I really like the last line in the story, and I am so glad you are continuing it. :D
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 11, 2013, 08:55:25 AM
Well, I'm not continuing this book as such, but a different one... but yeah, you get the picture. :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on June 11, 2013, 06:55:02 PM
Ya, you knew what I meant. :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: DinosaurNothlit on June 23, 2013, 12:06:32 AM
I realize I'm a bit late to the party, but I just finished reading this (very nearly all in one sitting, and certainly all in the same day), and I can't really help but comment.

First off, I'm extremely flattered and touched that you drew as much inspiration as you did from my fic.  :-]  Yet, at the same time, managed to take that same 'universe' in such a different direction that you truly made it your own.  Very well done.

Secondly, your RAFself?  Awesome!  It's the weirdest thing, but not more than a couple nights ago I actually had a dream about an Animorph having two 'natural' forms.  Weird, huh, that you had already written the same thing?  And I love the South Africa-based powers, too.  Diamonds, that was brilliant.

Third, I loved reading about life in India!  It was probably the next best thing to actually visiting, the way you describe daily life.  So strange, to look at life from the perspective of someone living in another country (lol, we Americans are so self-centered, we never think about things like that otherwise).

Fourth, the characterization was beautifully compelling.  It was easy to believe that the characters were based on real people because they just felt so believable.  Austin.  :'(

So, yeah, all in all, pretty much an awesome fic.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on June 23, 2013, 03:40:00 AM
Oh wow, thanks a million, Dino - you have no idea how much that means to me, considering you're the one who inspired it all! You've definitely inspired me to write more - and, yes, all with the Indian background and all the quirks that come with it. :) :)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on July 05, 2013, 11:53:58 AM
Sorry 'bout the double post, but I just wanted to put up the PDF of the whole book - for the convenience of anyone who would like to save it for offline reading. I'll be putting it up in my profile thread later as well, along with my other RAFfic-PDF projects (only Cloaky's Memoirs of a RAFian for now, Dino's Enter RAF will be put up when it's completed). NOTE: The PDF contains a deleted scene - a portion I had to edit from a chapter since it made the chapter too large. :P

Keeping college schedules in mind, expect my next, The Truth Is Under Water, next year only. Sorry. ::)
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on July 05, 2013, 12:31:02 PM
Okay! Cool!
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: DinosaurNothlit on July 05, 2013, 09:35:18 PM
Oooh, I'm gonna need to see if I can find that deleted scene!  :D
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on July 05, 2013, 09:38:46 PM
Lol, after deleting it I ended up merging two chapters, so you'll find one chapter extra.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on July 06, 2013, 01:13:12 AM
Ooh, I'm with Dino on this one.
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: redtailedsaffa on July 09, 2013, 11:03:49 AM
3 guests viewing this topic! Wow, amazing, but you can only read the whole thing if you're a member! Perhaps I should attach the PDF to the first message as well?
Title: Re: First Flight
Post by: theyoungphoenix on July 09, 2013, 11:14:09 AM
That may be a good idea for those guests. :)