Richard's Animorphs Forum

General Category => General Fan Fiction & Art => Topic started by: Slushie Man on December 04, 2008, 08:27:29 PM

Title: School Day 3 - Now Complete
Post by: Slushie Man on December 04, 2008, 08:27:29 PM
You can read the first two School Days in the Animorphs Fanfic section. For some reason, those ones were not moved with all the other non-Animorphs fics, lol.

Anyway, here is a teaser to advertise the upcoming School Day 3:

Darkness. In the darkness, we hear someone laughing, "Maybe it was the blair witch!"
 
Lightning flashes. In the couple of seconds that the screen is lit up, we see a muddy trail and in the background are some green-painted cabins.

We return to the darkness, and in it, another voice jokingly says, "Maybe it was Jason or Freddy!"

Another lightning flash. The muddy trail seems closer.

Back to darkness, in which we hear a serious voice say, "Worse. It was Dillon."
 
When lightning flashes this time, the following scenes stay lit:
Ryan, now an adult, and a short adult are running down the muddy trail.
Jeff, also now an adult, is walking through some thick white mist.
A group of kids run through a forest, screaming.
A girl cautiously walks around the inside of her dimly-lit cabin.

Back to darkness, and we hear a scream in the dark.

Lightning flashes once more and we see the outline of Grim Reaper with his scythe.
 
Darkness. In the darkness, blood-red lettering slowly starts to appear: SCHOOL DAY 3.

Lightning flashes one last time and in that split second we can see a large group of people running from one end of a giant mess hall to the other, panting and screaming.

Back to darkness on final time, in which the words: Coming Soon slowly appear in red lettering.
Title: Re: School Day 3 - Coming Soon
Post by: Gaz on December 05, 2008, 06:02:48 PM
Can't wait to read this when its ready.  ;D
Title: Re: School Day 3 - Coming Soon
Post by: Slushie Man on December 05, 2008, 06:12:07 PM
If you never finished reading School Day 2, I finally posted the final part of that yesterday, lol. It's in the Animorphs Fanfic section though, cause for some reason it wasn't moved with the rest.
Title: Re: School Day 3 - Coming Soon
Post by: Slushie Man on December 07, 2008, 12:00:43 AM
AUTHOR’S NOTE:

Hello once more faithful reader! I just want to take this time to inform you of some changes and explain to you a brief history of this story. You may discover that this story is written FAR better then stories that have come after. Well that’s because the original version was written in 2000, but just recently, at the end of 2008, I updated the writing in it. I didn’t add or remove a single scene, or changed much at all. Unlike my previous School Day updates however, I did change some of the names. I figured School Day used names of Alberta friends, School Day used names of Newfoundland friends, so for my update, I decided to use friends from British Columbia for the source of names for School Day 3. I also fixed up the dialogue and made the writing better. I still want it to be the exact same story, complete with its crappyness, however I wanted to still be able to read it without tearing my hair out at the bad writing. I plan on doing that for all my old original stories, so depending on when you read this, the others may or may not have been updated yet.

Now, here’s a bit of background info on the story. I’ll be doing this with all my re-writes on my older stories, explaining a brief history behind them.

Unlike the first School Day, when I wrote the second I wrote it knowing I wanted to do another entry in the series, to end it as a trilogy, hence the way I ended School Day 2. The characters think Dillon is dead and their lives are safe, but the reader knew better. For the third time around though, I knew I had to change things up – getting trapped in a school just wouldn't do for a third time. I didn't want the reader to get bored with the story, but I still wanted it related to school in some way. That's when I came up with the idea for a Summer School camp, based off of the layout of a camp I used to go to for Music Camp every summer. I then included Jeff and Ryan as teachers teaching at this Summer School Camp as a way to include two of the surviving characters. While I had wanted to also include Allison, I felt that it was more realistic that she went on to go into a separate profession then Jeff and Ryan as she had different classes in University then them, and thus drifted apart from them over the years. I was worried that my readers would miss her character, but to my surprise, most didn't even notice until they were finished reading it, that Allison hadn't even been in it, so I guess I did something right.

Like with most horror trilogies, there are even more characters then in the previous two outings, which means the highest body count so far, and much more carnage. While I don't have any kills that can top the Toilet Seat of Doom from School Day 2, I don't disappoint either. Also like with most horror trilogies, I set the tone very early on that all bets are off this time around, and that anyone can be a victim.

So without any further waiting, I'd like to introduce you to:



SCHOOL DAY 3

By: Jeff Long

   
Deep thunder boomed through the midnight sky as torrential rains pounded the forest trees below. High winds whipped the thick rain right into the face of a mid-thirties Ryan Miller, who ran down a dirt trail through the thick forest, his shirt and pants completely soaked to his skin.

When Ryan reached a fork in the trail – one end going deeper into the thick forest, the other heading out toward the beach, he stopped to decide which way to go and he wiped some of the rushing water from out of his eyes. Two other people around his age – the muscular Aaron Wittcopf and the short Robert Pierce caught up to him, both running low on breath and just as soaked as Ryan.

Lightning lit up the sky, followed by the loudest boom of thunder yet.

"Which way?" Robert yelled above the deafening muffle of the high winds.

"I'm heading back to the camp," Aaron also yelled to be heard. "We've been out here long enough! We're going to catch our deaths if we stay out in this any longer!" The drenched Aaron turned around and ran back down the narrow trail, getting whipped in the face by all the close branches. Within seconds he was out of view.

"What do we do?" Robert asked.

Ryan glanced at the two trails ahead, then back the way they had come. After they finished University, he and Jeff had gone on to become teachers at different schools though they both applied for summer jobs at this one Summer School Camp and had gotten accepted. It was only a few weeks in however, when two students went missing and never returned – hence why the three teachers were out in such crappy weather.

"You go down that path," Ryan pointed to the path leading down to the beach. "I'll go this way. They might be hurt or lost, and if they're stuck out here in this weather, I don't want to leave them stranded."

Robert nodded, lightning lighting up his head movement, and the two teachers rushed down the separate trails.

As Robert got further down his trail and the trees started to thin, he began calling the two teens by name, but realized it was useless as he could hardly hear himself about the wind and thunder, he doubted very much anyone else could.

Robert screeched to a stop when he felt his sock on one foot get instantly soaked. He looked down, and with a moan, noticed he had stepped into a pretty deep mud puddle. Swearing, he took his foot out of the puddle and did his best to shake all the excess water off. 

Just when Robert was about to move again, in the amount of time it took for a flash of lightning to briefly light up the sky, a thick scythe blade swung out from the dark forest and slashed open Robert's side, spilling blood into the deep puddle below him.

Robert's scream was droned out by the boom of thunder, and the scythe blade retracted back into the forest. Robert crumpled to his knees as his hands instantly shot for his side. He looked up at the sky and shut in eyes in pain, letting out another long, loud scream. When he opened his eyes, he saw someone wearing a dark grey Grim Reaper suit, which was still partly burned in spots due to the bomb thrown at it in the previous story, walk out from the shadows of the forest and onto the rain-drenched narrow trail.

"Who the **** are you?" Robert spat blood out of his mouth as tears mixed with the rain water. "What do you want?"

Grim Reaper answered by raising the scythe high in the air and swinging it down during the next lightning blast, slicing open the teacher's chest.

***

Ryan wiped gathering rain water from his eyes and pushed some overhanging branches out of his way as a loud boom of thunder came. This part of the path was so narrow and so overhung with branches from the trees, he made a mental note to suggest the camp caretaker do some work on it.

As more lightning lit up the sky, Ryan instantly forgot about his mental note as a loud scream carried through the air and reached his ears.

"Robert?" he called out as loud as he could, but was made inaudible due to the thunder. He waited for the loud rumble to pass, and shouted out his co-worker's name once more, only to wait in silence for an answer that never came.

When he called out for him one more time and still received no answer, Ryan turned back down the trail and ran as quickly as he could, getting swatted all over his body and face with wet branches. It wasn't long before he reached the fork in the road and he turned on to Robert's trail and quickly made his way down it.

Ryan suddenly stopped in his tracks when a flash of lightning lit up the area in front of him, showing him Robert's dead body with Grim Reaper standing over it.

"No!" Ryan gasped. "Not again!"

Grim Reaper suddenly swung his hooded head up and looked directly at Ryan, but it was too dark to see under the hood. Ryan immediately turned and ran away back down the trail, away from a past he thought was far behind him.

Ryan instantly stopped in his tracks however, when thunder boomed and lightning lit up a second Grim Reaper, this one in the exact same dark gray costume but without the scorch marks on it. Confused, Ryan glanced back behind and saw the first Grim Reaper walking quickly up the trail toward him. He looked back ahead and the second Grim Reaper made a move toward him. He took out a bar hardly taller then his hand. But when he pushed a button, the bottom extended out and the top also extended, releasing a thick scythe blade from inside of it as it swung out from on a hinge. The small bar was now a tall scythe.

In an attempt to dodge around the attacking Grim Reaper, Ryan slipped on a loose wet stone and went flying to the ground, quickly rolling onto his back just in time to get the scythe blade dug deep into his stomach. Ryan's eyes shot open and he gargled up blood, as blood seeped out of his stomach around the embedded blade and rolled down Ryan’s side.

The first Grim Reaper joined the second, and together they raised their scythes and swung them down into Ryan's body over and over.

***

The following morning was the calm after the storm – despite the damp grass, the sun was shining brightly and the birds were singing loudly in the soft breeze.

A group of four teenagers tossed a football back and forth across a large grassy field located next to the long and narrow Dinning Hall building and a couple bench-swing sets. One of the teens, a short, chubby kid with glasses named Karsen Gauthier, caught the football and tossed it high and far toward his taller blond-haired friend Dane Lucas.

"Over to me!" The overweight girl, Melissa Reed, shouted across the field. "Pass it over to me!"

Dane, wanting to be a jerk, acted like he was going to toss it to Melissa, but at the last second changed directions and threw it toward the beautiful Ashley Briltz instead.

"Hey, not fair!" Melissa shouted. Dane smiled as he shrugged and Melissa stuck her tongue out at him. If she hadn't been so preoccupied with complaining to Dane, she would have seen that Ashley instantly threw the football to her, but as it was, she didn't and the ball smacked her right in the head.

Laughing and rubbing her head at the same time, Melissa chased after the football and grabbed it, tossing it back to Karsen. Aaron Wittcopf walked out onto one end of the field and started walking across it to get to one of the many Class Cabins.   

"Good morning," he called out to the students playing catch. "Make sure you're not late for class."

"We won't be, Mr. Wittcopf," Karsen assured him. "Are we ever?"

Aaron glanced at him with a squinted eye look and all of them broke out laughing, including Aaron. The kids resumed their game of catch as Aaron made his way to his Class Cabin.
***

The consisted buzzing of an alarm clock forced a pair of eyes to open and a mouth to let out a tired moan, begging for more sleep. A 30-year old Jeffrey Long yawned and tiredly turned his head to see the time.

As if zapped with an electrical shock, he immediately jumped out of bed upon seeing the time and proceeded to shower, trim his goatee, and get dressed in record time. After brushing his teeth and combing his hair, he grabbed his black leather briefcase and ran out of his small one-bedroom cabin and into the bright sunny morning.

Once outside his green-painted cabin and on one of the rocky trails, he slowed his pace to a quick walk. He made his way down various trails and paths, passing other small cabins and bunkhouses, and various other students along the way, returning the gesture to those that greeted him.

Once he reached the top of one of the hills, he emerged out into the main part of the camp grounds where many of the Class Cabins were located, as well as the Dinning Hall, swings, and giant grassy field where Karsen, Melissa, Dane, and Ashley were playing catch.

As Jeff passed by them quickly, they also greeted him, and he returned the greeting, warning them much like Aaron already had, that they better be on time for class. They gave him the same assurances, despite the fact that they hadn't quite decided yet if they were actually going to go to class at all or not on such a nice day.

Jeff made his way to one of the Class Cabins and up the wooden stairs, unlocking the door and stepping inside, flipping the lights on. He made his way to his giant desk and laid his briefcase on the floor as he took his seat and straightened his tie.

He let out a long sigh as he stared at the pile of unmarked papers on his desk that he had meant to do the night before, but decided to call it an early night when the storm started.

Well, I better get started, he thought to himself as he took out a pen and began marking the top sheet on the tall pile. Within only a few minutes, he got his first interruption of the morning as his door opened and Aaron walked in.

"Good morning, Jeff," Aaron greeted.

"Mornin'," Jeff greeted back. "Do you know where what cabin Ryan's in this morning for his first class? I have a question about the curriculum to ask him, and I know he does this course all year round."

"Sorry," Aaron asked. "I haven't seen him since last night. I was actually just coming in here to ask if you've seen Robert at all this morning. I can't find him anywhere and I have something to talk to him about."

"I just woke up actually and rushed straight here to get this marking done before class starts and the students start a riot over not having their assignments marked yet," Jeff and Aaron chuckled. "But if I see him, I'll let him know you're looking for him."

"Thanks," Aaron replied. "I'll do likewise with Ryan."

The two teachers said their good-byes, and Aaron left Jeff to his marking.

***

About an hour later, after the Catch students decided that they would go to their classes after all, Ashley and Dane sat in one of the Class Cabins with a room full of other students, all impatient that their teacher, Mr. Pierce, couldn't even be on time yet was always so strict about the students never being late.

"What's taking him so long?" one of the students in the class asked out loud.

"Yeah," another agreed. "With all the **** he gives us if we're late, and here he is taking longer then anyone else has ever taken."

Ashley turned in her seat and leaned in to face Dane, who sat next to her. "First Charlene and Darrell go missing, now Mr. Pierce. Doesn't that seem strange to you? Maybe the same thing that happened to Charlene and Darrell happened to Mr. Pierce."

"Please," Dane shrugged. "Charlene and Darrell just ran away from this Hellhole."

"Yeah, I guess you're right," Ashley agreed, although silently wasn't sure if she bought that.

"Besides," Dane added on. "If Mr. Pierce is much later, it'll mean we can't have class and we'll get to go back outside."

That news put a smile on Ashley's face, but that smile quickly disappeared as the door opened and an old dark-skinned teacher with a gray beard that the students had seen around from time to time, walked in.

"Hello class," he said in a thick Jamaican accent. "I am Mr. Jordeen, and I will be teaching your class today."

The class let out a unified moan, their hopes of getting out early destroyed.

***

Jeff marked some grammar problems on the blackboard, and asked his small English class if anyone could point out the errors in the sentences. A few kids raised their hands, and Jeff pointed at one of them.

"Seth," he called out the student's name and the student got to his feet. While he did his best to point out all the errors, the door quietly opened and a tall balding skinny man with a face that earned him the nickname of 'Birdman' by the students, walked into the cabin and stood by the door, watching Jeff and his class.

When the student finished, Jeff told him he could sit down and then corrected his mistakes, during which he noticed the man standing by the door. The man pointed to the door and Jeff nodded.

"Ok class," Jeff finished. "Turn to page 152 of your text books and read that entire chapter while I take care of some business with Mr. Tilly here."

As his class started opening their text books, Jeff and Eugene Tilly, the Principal of the Summer School Camp, walked outside onto the patio of the cabin and Jeff closed the door behind them.

"What's going on, Eugene?" Jeff asked his boss, squinting his eyes in the bright sunlight.

"Both Ryan and Robert are missing now as well," Eugene said with a sigh. "They never returned from their search last night."

"What?" Jeff asked, shocked. "Where could they have gone? They couldn't have gotten lost – Ryan comes here every summer."

"We don't know," Eugene said regretfully. "We just don't know what happened to them, but that's now two students and two teachers who have gone missing without a trace."

As Eugene said that, Jeff's eyes narrowed as gears turned in his head. He didn't like the sound of this one bit, and it brought horrible past memories to the forefront of his mind.

"If people continue to go missing, we're going to have no choice but to send everyone home and shut the camp down," Eugene informed Jeff with sadness in his voice.

"What would happen to the students' Grades?" Jeff asked, feeling concerned for his class. "This is their only saving grace between going on to the next Grade or staying back another year."

Eugene sighed again and said, "They'll have to end up staying behind a Grade after all."

Jeff nodded his head solemnly and patted Eugene on the shoulder. As Eugene walked down the stairs to make his way to the next teacher, Jeff turned around and headed back to his class, now with much more on his mind then he had when he first went outside. Despite the beautiful day, Jeff had nothing now except very grim thoughts – both for his students and for his own well-being.
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Gaz on December 07, 2008, 01:22:19 PM
Nice start! Look forward to seeing more.  :D
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on December 07, 2008, 02:52:37 PM
After the first story, this one has always been my personal favorite. It was just the one that was most unique and different from the others.
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: morfowt on December 12, 2008, 05:35:33 AM
I haven't even realized you already started school day 3. that's what I get for not visiting this board...

like the first chapter...
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on December 17, 2008, 03:27:58 PM
A tall, but nerdy kid with a face full of pimples and thin glasses that always slid off his face, Ian Turner, sat next to a window back in Mr. Jordeen's class. While the Jamaican teacher droned on in a barely-understandable accent, Ian turned and looked out the window, placing his head on his desk.

Ian suddenly lifted his head quizzically as he watched someone in a grim reaper costume step out from the edge of the forest and start walking through the foliage near the side of the cabin. When Grim Reaper noticed he was being watched, he stopped and turned to look directly at Ian through the window, and pointed his scythe at him.

"Mr. Turner!" Mr. Jordeen called out, causing Ian to quickly look away from the window and up to the front of the class. "Can you answer the Math equation I was produced to the class?"

Ian looked at the blackboard, but saw no equation written down. Ian realized that his substitute teacher must have given the equation verbally, and he sighed. "I'm...I'm sorry, sir. I wasn't paying attention," Ian admitted quietly.

Everyone in the class, including Ashley and Dane, giggled as Mr. Jordeen said, "From now on, I expect you to be paying close attention, and you can count on me coming back to you to answer another question shortly."

As the teacher asked another student, Ian looked out the window once again, but found the mysterious costumed person gone.

***

The Dinning Hall was a sea of bodies as everyone attended Lunch. At one of the many large circular tables, Ashley, Karsen, Melissa, and Dane sat together.

"What do you think happened to them?" Karsen asked between bites of his macaroni and cheese, referring to the four missing people. News had spread like wildfire during the morning, about Ryan and Robert's disappearance as well, and rumours instantly began circulating. It seemed to be all that was being talked about in the Dinning Hall.

"I say it's the ghost that haunts this place," Dane jokingly said with a sneer. "What? You guys haven't heard the tales of the Ghostly Axe Murderer?"

"Be reasonable," Melissa scoffed, secretly not wanting to hear anything about evil spirits if she wanted to get any sleep that night.

"I know what happened." The four teens turned their heads to see Ian standing nearby with a tray of food. The group chuckled, ready for a good laugh.

"Let's hear your bull**** theory," Dane said as he tried not to laugh at the geek. He was sure it would involve space aliens from the Delta Quadrant of Sector Nine, located in the Pegasus Galaxy – Much like Ian's old theory that their Grade 6 teacher had been a robot clone from an area around there.

"The Grim Reaper got them." Ian said with a deadpan expression, and the entire table erupted into fits of hard laughter. Wasn't quite the wild theory Dane had been expecting, but it was damn near close enough for him.

"Maybe Jason helped," Karsen managed to squeeze out in-between laughs. "After all, we are at a summer camp."

"No, no," Dane also managed to stop laughing long enough to speak. "Jason only attacks at Camp Crystal Lake. We're not even in the right country for that."

"Guys, I'm serious," Ian continued. "I saw him spying on me during class this morning."

Nobody at the table had thought it was possible for them to laugh any harder, but they were proven wrong. Ian sighed with frustration and stormed away from their table, their laughing and mocking following him across the room. At the table behind them, the group pretended to kill each other while laughing.

Jeff glanced at the scene from across the room, wondering what the kids found so funny. He turned back to the conversation at the one of many Staff tables in the room, that he currently sat at. Aaron and Eugene sat on either side of him, while Jonathon Jordeen, a younger but tall teacher in her twenties – Ms. Nicole Kupchanko – and an older and shorter teacher – Mrs. Edith Arlett – took up the rest of the table.

"...so I just don't know how I'm going to keep him under control during class," Nicole continued her venting about a student in one of her classes. "We could just kick him out, but I feel students like that need help, but another back to turn on him."

"Is he in any of your classes today, Nikki?" Jeff asked her as he took a forkful of pasta into his mouth.

"Yeah, in my second Block after Lunch," Nikki replied. "After yesterday, I don't even know if he's going to show up though."

"I had a student like that once," Jonathon said in his thick Jamaican accent as he wiped some spaghetti sauce out of his white beard.

Nikki opened her mouth to ask him how he solved the problem, but noticed a student standing nearby, looking directly at them. "Yes?" she asked as she turned to face him.

"I know what happened to the missing people," Ian stated matter-of-factly.

"What?" Eugene Tilly asked, quickly getting to his feet and placing a hand on the boy's shoulder. "Tell us what you know."

"The Grim Reaper got to them..." Upon Ian's answer, Jeff's blood instantly turned cold and a shiver travelled down his spine. He knew it was impossible – after all, he had seen Dillon die and his body go to the morgue all those many years ago.

Eugene sat back down with a sigh. "I'll have you know young man," he stated, "that this is no joking matter. I don't know who put you up to this prank, but it is far from appreciated."

"I'm serious!" Ian shouted, not caring how many heads turned to look at him from nearby tables. "When I was in Mr. Jordeen's class earlier, I glanced out the window and saw someone dressed in a grim reaper costume looking in at me."

It was Jeff's turn to jump to his feet. "Are you positive of what you saw?" he asked with a complete serious attitude about him.

Ian nodded. "I am."

"Show me where," Jeff ordered, wiping his mouth with a napkin and placing it on his plate of unfinished food.

"Jeff, Mr. Turner here is famous for creating tall tales with his wild imagination," Aaron warned. "It's why he's here – he spent more time during the school year inside his imagination then doing his school work."

Ian frowned and looked at the floor sadly upon Aaron's revelation to Jeff.

"Just the same, I want him to bring me to the spot," Jeff stayed firm in his stance. "I don't believe in ruling out any tip. Not when my friend is one of the ones missing." He turned back to Ian, who looked up from the floor with new-found joy in someone willing to give him a chance. "After you."

Ian proudly led Jeff out of the Dinning Hall.

***

Many minutes later, Ian and Jeff reached the edge of the forest right outside the cabin Ian had been in when he had seen Grim Reaper earlier.

"This is where I saw him," Ian explained, pointing to the nearby foliage.

Jeff began searching the immediate area, checking out not only the ground, but the trees as well, and rustling through the low foliage.

"I was in class, bored, when I looked out that window there," Ian pointed and Jeff looked up from the ground to see the window that Ian was pointing at. "I saw him walking by here..." Jeff watched intently as Ian acted out where he saw Grim reaper and in which direction he was moving. "He was around this spot here, when he noticed I was watching him." Jeff made his way to the spot Ian pointed at and bent down to examine the ground. "When I looked back, he was gone," Ian finished.

Jeff squinted as he spotted what may have been the edge of a shoeprint, but was hard to tell due to the grass and horrible impression in the ground – it could have also just been a trick of the light mixed with the formation of some pebbles.

"Was the suit burned at all?" Jeff questioned as he glanced back up at Ian from his spot near the ground.

"I...I'm not sure," Ian answered, confused. "I never noticed."

"This doesn't make any sense," Jeff mumbled to himself so low that Ian didn't even notice. Unlike the last two times, I never made a third story for him to go off of. If this is indeed happening all over again, I have no way of knowing what's going to happen next.

"Mr. Long?" Jeff snapped out of his thoughts and turned back to Ian. "You believe me, don't you?"

Jeff smiled and got to his feet. "Come on, kid. Let's go back to the Dinning Hall." Ian followed Jeff back with a sad look on his face, thinking that this teacher also didn't believe him. Once back however, Jeff made sure Ian got inside the building with all the other people, but instead of going in himself, he turned around and headed back to the area they had just left.
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: V2113 on December 18, 2008, 04:40:58 PM
Ooooo! This is good! But I'm a bit disappointed that he didn't write another story. ANd what's w/ the other reapers? We all know what happened to Dillion but I doubt His Sickness would have gotten co-murderers, unless they're the Sickos, his loyal followers. *Gasp* or the principal dude!!!!
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on December 18, 2008, 05:14:50 PM
lol, no worries, all is explained by the end.

And I had it so he didn't write another story, so that all bets could be off. In the previous two, he knew some of what was going to happen before it did, becuase of that. This time around, not even Jeff can foresee what's about to hit.
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on January 01, 2009, 12:13:41 PM
During the afternoon classes, Ashley, Dane, and Ian sat in their Math class. Ian furiously scribbled notes down that their teacher – Nikki Kupchanko – was writing on the board.

Ashley sat directly behind Ian, and while he took notes, she leaned forward and whispered in his ear, "Have you seen Jason anymore?"

Ian turned around to face Ashley, letting out a huff. "It was the Grim Reaper, not Jason."

"Oh sorry, my mistake," Ashley snickered. "It's hard to tell one fictional killer from another."

"He's not fictional!" Ian exclaimed angrily, a bit louder then he meant to. "He's real! I saw him!"

"Please," Ashley smiled. "You have to let me know who here is dealing the drugs to you, cause I've been hurting for some ever since I arrived."

"Ashley Briltz!" Nikki shouted from the front of the class. "Please be quiet and pay attention."

"Sorry, Ms. Kupchanko," Ashley mumbled as she leaned back in her seat and Ian turned to face the front again. Once Nikki turned back to continue writing on the board, Ashley stuck her tongue out at her.

***

After all classes ended for the day and everyone had some free time to themselves for awhile, everyone piled into the Dinning Hall for supper.

Dane, Ashley, Karsen, and Melissa gathered some food from the Lunch Line and started making their way across the busy room to find an empty table, laughing and joking about something along the way.

On the way to an empty table, they passed by a table with one lone occupant – Ian Turner. They stopped and surrounded him upon Karsen's head nudge in his direction.

"So Ian," Karsen said, chuckling. "It's going to be dark soon. Night time is when the Reaper comes out to claim his next victim..."

"Yeah, be sure to lock the doors tonight," Ashley said in a high-pitched voice as she made her hands form into claw-shapes.

The group laughed while Ian tried his best to ignore them and read a Star Trek novel while eating his supper. When they never left and instead opted to stick around longer, continuing to make remarks and tease Ian, another girl with raven-black hair spotted the sight from a nearby table and excused herself from her friends.

"Can't you guys just knock it off and leave him alone?" The girl – Danielle Giblak – asked, feeling frustrated at how immature these people were being. "All day long, you've been teasing poor Ian. It's getting old now."

"It's not our fault that he makes up stories to get attention," Melissa stated.

"And it's also not our fault that he watches way too many movies and reads way too many books, then allows them to blur his perception of reality," Ashley added on.

"That's enough!" Ian shouted, getting to his feet angrily. "I'm not making anything up, and I didn't imagine it, alright!?" The sudden burst of anger caused the entire room to quiet down and eavesdrop on the confrontation.

"What if he really is telling the truth?" Danielle asked, which caused the others to scoff. "What if he really did see something?" she went on, despite the reactions she was getting. "I don't know if he really did or not, but four people have disappeared without a trace and unless you have a  better theory, then you shouldn't be so quick to shrug off Ian's."

"They just ran away," Dane informed Danielle with a shrug of his hand.

"And the missing teachers?" Danielle spat at him. "I suppose they just 'ran away' as well, right?"

"Maybe it was the Blair Witch," Karsen snickered quietly, which only caused everyone to moan and roll their eyes.

"And we call Ian far-fetched," Ashley moaned.

"I know what I saw!" Ian shouted, tired of all this teasing. "Forget it. I'm out of here." And with that, Ian picked up his Star Trek book and stormed out of the Dinning Hall, slamming open the door and rushing down the steps, quickly disappearing from view.

As the room returned to its normal noisy atmosphere, Danielle whipped around to face the others again. "Nice going, you jerks," she said, fed-up with them, and rushed after Ian to make sure he was ok.

Dane, Ashley, Karsen, and Melissa just all shrugged and ended up sitting down at that empty table instead of continuing to the one they had spotted before all the commotion.

***

Over at the Teachers' table, they also returned to their food, now that the situation ended itself without any of them having to get involved.

"Someone really should talk to that kid and keep him from shooting his mouth off," Edith Arlett scoffed. "I have a student, Katie Smith, that's now too scared to leave her cabin once classes are over, because she's convinced there's someone in a grim reaper costume going around, killing people."

Aaron chuckled as he took a bite out of his sandwich. "The whole Grim Reaper thing is hogwash started by Ian Turner. I agree that he needs to have a stern talking-to. Edith, just try assuring the girl that the disappearances were a confined incident and nothing bad will happen to her."

"I already tried that," Edith went on. "It didn't work."

"That girl has every right to be scared." All the heads at the table turned and looked at Jeff, confused.

"What do you mean?" Eugene asked.

"Dillon is here," Jeff growled.

"We have many students named Dillon," Aaron informed Jeff.

"This Dillon isn't a student anymore," Jeff continued to talk cryptically.

"Just what the hell is going on?" Eugene asked, feeling his temper rising at being so confused.

"It all started in 1999 in Alberta, when I was 14 years old. Me and some others got stuck in our school during a snowstorm and a kid named Dillon dressed in a Grim Reaper costume and murdered most of us. Only two of us survived, but Dillon go away."

"I remember that," Nikki stated. "The Wainwright High School Murders. I was living in Edmonton, just two hours from there at the time. I remember every school in the area implemented brand new emergency procedures in case something like that happened again. Everyone was freaked because the killer was never caught."

Jeff nodded his head and continued, "Then when we were in University in Newfoundland, Dillon came back for us. He trapped us in the school and took our friends out one by one until we were the last ones left. We killed him finally – with the help of a kid named Ryan Miller..." Jeff noticed everyone's looks. "Yes, the same Ryan Miller that grew up to be a teacher and that is one of the people that disappeared last night."

"But you just said it: The killer is dead," Eugene said.

"I thought he was," Jeff exclaimed. "But I was obviously wrong. Ian's sighting has to be more then just some wild coincidence. He sees someone dressed as a Grim Reaper right when people, one of which is Ryan Miller, start disappearing, at a place where I work. There's just too much going on for it to be a coincidence."

"Where's Allison now?" Nikki asked.

"I haven't talked to her much after we graduated from University," Jeff informed her. "But last I heard she was working in Toronto at a News station."

"If you and Ian are really onto something," Edith said for the sake of argument, "then maybe Dillon isn't back. Did you think it could be Allison?"

"No, that wouldn't make any sense at all," Jeff stated matter-of-factly.

"You said it yourself, Jeff. You haven't talked to her much in the last six years or so. Who knows what kind of lasting mental problems those events could have had on her."

Jeff leaned forward in his seat to hotly argue against that theory, when Aaron pushed his chair back and stood up. "Well, thank-you for the upcoming nightmares I'm going to have," he chuckled, "But I must go mark some test papers before I head to bed." The others said good night to him and Aaron walked out of the Dinning Hall and into the dark blue evening sky.

"Aaron has a point," Jeff said, also getting to his feet and leaving the table before the inevitable witch hunt and finger pointing went from Allison to himself. "I should probably get my marking done as well."

Leaving his tray of unfinished food behind, Jeff left the table. He turned back only to say, "I suggest we all lock our doors tonight." Then he headed for the door and also left.

***

While most of the students and teachers stayed inside the Dinning Hall late into the evening – as it also doubled as a gym with the tables removed and many students found various activities to keep them busy and out of the mosquito-infested night air, Katie Smith opted to stay hiding in her cabin.

She laid on top of the sheets on her bunk and flipped the page in her novel. Her silence was disturbed however, by a low, lingering, creaking noise as if someone was very slowly opening the front door.

"Hello?" Katie called out as she looked up from her book. When nobody answered, Katie put her book down and got to her feet. "Hello?" She called out again, louder this time, and again she received no answer.

She listened intently, but heard no further sounds. Still, she was convinced she had heard someone and now she was starting to 'sense' the presence of someone else in the cabin, so she made her way into the dark main room and called out one last time as she walked slowly around the room, so as not to bump into any furniture, and felt around the walls for the light switch like a blind person.

Half-way through the room, still fumbling for the light switch, she heard a very distinct shuffling noise from some place behind her and she whipped around with a short gasp, eyes wide. She did her best to scan the darkness, but couldn't see more then a foot in front of her. Fighting back raging fear, she turned back around to continue her search for the light switch, knowing it was around that area some place.

A couple seconds later however, all her thoughts on the light switch automatically left her mind and was replaced by pure terror as a hand strongly grabbed her shoulder from behind and whipped her around.

Katie let out a blood-curdling scream as the lights in the room instantly turned on and Ashley stood directly in front of Katie, laughing so hard her side felt like it would explode.

Katie, near tears at being frightened so bad, explodes, "That wasn't funny!" she screeched. "I was scared to death!"

Ashley could hardly contain her laughter. "You should have just seen your face! Oh man, that was classic!"

"You can be such a ****," Katie yelled at her and then pushed her out of the way as she stormed past her and back into her room. Ashley, still laughing slightly, followed Katie into the room and as Katie laid back down on her bunk and picked her book back up, Ashley started rummaging through the drawers.

Catching Katie glaring at her coldly, Ashley explained, "Relax, I'm not going to scare you anymore. I just came back for my contact lenses." She found her small plastic case that held her contact lenses and stationed herself in front of the small mirror on the dresser so she could put them in. "A bunch of us are going to play Spotlight if you want to come out and join us."

"That's alright," Katie declined as she found her spot in her book again.

Ashley turned to look at Katie to try to convince her to come, but instead asked, "What book are you reading?"

Katie held the book up, showing Ashley the front cover, showing her that it was a hardcover edition of 'School Day' by Jeff Long. "It's a horror novel based off of actual events," Katie explained. "Mr. Long, the English teacher, wrote it a few years ago."

"Based off a true story?" Ashley chuckled.

"Yeah," Katie went on. "About some kids that got stuck in their school with a killer dressed as the grim reaper."

Ashley froze upon hearing that, and remembering what Ian Turner had been ranting about earlier. "Grim Reaper?"

"Yeah," Katie confirmed.

Surly it had to be a coincidence, Ashley had to tell herself. Or maybe Ian had read the same book. Still, Ashe couldn't deny that a cold shiver ran down her spine at that moment.

"I have to keep myself occupied in the evenings when everyone else is gone," Katie chuckled.

"Is reading a true horror story really the best thing for that?" Ashley asked, and Katie just shrugged in reply.

Ashley shook her head with a slight smile and turned to leave. "Oh," Katie spoke up one last time, stopping Ashley just as she was walking through the doorway into the main room. "Would you be able to clean your muddy shoeprints you left behind, before you leave? I noticed you left them all over the floor of the main room when you turned the light on."

"Hey, don't look at me," Ashley raised her hands in a defensive motion.

"They weren't there an hour ago and you're the only one to come in during that time."

"I always take my shoes off on the mat. Muddy shoeprints is a pet peeve of mine," Ashley explained with a genuine voice.

"Sure, sure," Katie rolled her eyes. "You're not going to scare me again. Nice try though."

Ashley sighed, giving up. "Whatever." She left the room an a couple minutes later, Katie heard the door open and close loudly as Ashley left to go play spotlight with some of the others.

Finally back to silence, Katie returned to reading her book and after a few solid minutes of reading, she was distracted by hearing a loud creaking out in the main room once again. "Ashley?" she called out, and like before, there was no answer. "Come on Ashley, you really don't think you're going to scare me again, do you?"

With a sigh, Katie closed her book and got off her bunk once more and made her way into the dark main room, Ashley having turned the lights off when she left. "Knock it off Ashley," Katie called out. "You can't fool me twice."

Katie smiled to herself, finding it funny that Ashley seriously thought she could trick her a second time. Remembering where the light switch was from the last time, Katie made her way to it without trouble, however the second she flipped it, the light bulb blew, only lighting the room for a split second before plunging it into darkness again.

"Great," Katie mumbled out loud. She turned to head back to her room, which still had its light on and shining brightly, but she stopped on the spot and gasped, as the second she turned around, she caught a glimpse of someone rushing out of the darkness of the main room and around the corner into her bunk room. She didn't know who it was, but whoever it was, was definitely taller then Ashley was.

"Hello?" Katie called out, wondering if Ashley had gotten anybody else in on her little prank and it was them that was now in here with her. "Who's there?" she called out as she started taking slow steps toward her room.

Katie called out another two times before she neared her doorway, trying to decide in her mind if she really wanted to go in or if she should just rush out of the cabin. Before she could make up her mind however, the entire cabin is plunged into darkness as the power flickered and then went down. She glanced out a nearby window and saw that the next cabin over still had lights on, so it was only her cabin without power.

Just great, she thought to herself. "This isn't funny!" she shouted out, refusing to move from her spot.

"I know," a chilling whisper said near her ear.

Katie started screaming as she turned frantically from side to side, trying to see through the darkness to who was near her, but by the time her eyes adjusted to the dark, a firm hand grabbed her by the shoulder and whipped her around to face Grim Reaper.

She screamed again, but her scream was cut short when Grim Reaper shoved her to the floor, hard, and within a split second had his scythe pole out, extending it and having the scythe blade swing up from it to form the full scythe. A split second was all it took for him to go from being defenceless to having a sharp weapon swinging down to end Katie's life.

***

Eugene Tilly stood in the main room of one of the cabins a few hours later, clapping his hands. "Ok everyone," he addressed all the male teens in the room. "Light's Out time."

There were moans of disappointed, but nobody argued as they all started heading to their bunk rooms. Fifteen minutes later, when all was ready for bed, Eugene went around and flipped off all the lights before leaving and moving on to the next cabin.
   
Inside one of those bunk rooms, Ian laid on a bottom bunk, while Karsen laid on the top bunk of the same bed.
   
"So Ian," Karsen said slyly with a smirk. "What did you and Danielle do earlier when you two went off on your own like little lovebirds?"

"Mind your own business, Karsen," Ian snapped. Although his tone was snappish, in the dark Ian couldn't help but smile at the sweet memory he'd cherish for the rest of his life. Suddenly his body jerked a little bit though, making his mind leave behind all thoughts of earlier that day and being with Danielle.

"Oh come on, you can tell me, we're buddies, right?" After being ignored by Ian for several minutes and not getting a response, Karsen said in a snappish tone, "Well fine, good night to you too."

As Karsen rolled over and almost instantly fell asleep, on the bunk below, blood trickled from the side of Ian's lifeless face. Laying flat on the floor below the mattress, Grim Reaper removed his scythe blade from the mattress.

Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on January 04, 2009, 01:31:39 PM
Early the following morning, which was thick with damp fog, Jeff made his way quickly up one of the dirt walking trails to a large commotion outside of one of the Girls’ Cabins. All of its occupants, as well as most teachers, stood around in the cold foggy air outside of the building.

"What's going on?" Jeff asked, shivering in the damp early morning cold air.

"Katie Smith was found murdered this morning," Aaron turned and brought his co-worker up to speed. "It happened at some point during the night. She was found this morning under her covers with deep gashes."

"What about the other students? Is everyone ok?"

Aaron nodded. "Eugene is on the phone now, making arrangements for some buses to come pick them up as soon as possible, and he said that the teachers that have their own vehicles are free to go after the students are gone, but to know that police will be in touch with us for questioning."

Suddenly a large group of boys broke through the foliage, out of breath from running so quickly, faces filled with terror. "Help..." one of them managed to breath out in between breaths of air. That caught everyone's attention and students and teachers alike whipped around.

"What's wrong?" Edith Arlett asked as she quickly approached them.

"Ian Turner's been murdered!" another one managed to shout out, causing everyone else to start raising their voices in a panic.

"No..." Jeff whispered as he started backing away from the scene, sweating profusely. "Not again – not after all these years..." Suddenly Jeff felt he had backed up into someone and turned around, seeing Eugene politely moving Jeff out of his way as he made his way to the centre of the large, scared, group.

"Ok everyone, listen up," Eugene said loudly. "Buses are en-route to take everyone home, so please gather your things quickly and meet in the Dining Hall for the buses. It'll take a few hours for them to get here, but the quicker everyone moves, the safer everyone will be. Each cabin will have a teacher escort with them, until everyone is safe inside the Dining Hall."

As the students began breaking apart, albeit in large groups of their own, to go pack up their things, Edith approached Eugene and informed him of Ian.

"Just what the hell is going on here?" Eugene said back to Edith.

"He's back." The two teachers turned to see Jeff still standing a few feet away, an expression of shock still on his face. "Dillon's still alive and he's back..."

***

Three hours later, which was about two and a half hours of sitting in a sweltering hot Dining Hall, everyone was bored out of their minds and wiping sweat from their foreheads. At first, some of the more antsy students tried to organize various games, but even those died down before long, overshadowed by the dread hanging in the air and the urgency everyone felt to just be away from that place.

Suddenly the front doors opened, breaking the monotony of the last couple hours, and teachers and students alike turned their heads to see the Jamaican teacher, Jonathon Jordeen, walk into the building.

Low murmurs arose as he approached one of the faculty tables and whispered in Eugene's ear. A half minute later, the Principal stood up and clapped his hands together to get everyone's attention.

"The buses have arrived," he announced to the room. As the murmurs start turning into louder talking, and the students start picking up their dufflebags and bookbags, Eugene continued, "I want everyone to line up outside the buses and then safely and in an orderly fashion, when the teachers give the say-so, board the buses one-at-a-time in a single-file line. Just as like when you arrived, there will be three teachers per bus."

Everyone stands up and start quickly making their way out of the heatbox of a building and into the damp, dreary air of outside, grey clouds above ready to burst with rain at any minute.

The faculty tables unloaded and the teachers exited the Dining Hall once all the students were out, and followed them across the field and down a dirt trail out in the opened, that led to the parking lot where several large yellow school buses waited for everyone.

 As most of the teachers helped organize the antsy students into single-file line-ups, Edith Arlett made her way to the front of one of the lines to stand with the other three teachers departing on that bus. Eugene tapped her shoulder and she turned around.
   
"Watch over them, Edith. Keep them safe."

Edith nodded her head in reply and turned to face the students, raising her hands in the air to get their attention. "We'll start loading now!" she shouted for everyone in her line to hear.

Twenty minutes later, Eugene, Jeff, Aaron, Nicole, and Jon stood, watching the platoon of school buses pull out of the parking lot and head back toward the highway, bringing the students and many of the teachers back to safety.

"Well, after we do our final inspection of the grounds and the cabins," Eugene said to his remaining teachers, "I guess we can follow suit and leave as..."

He was suddenly cut off by the sounds of teenagers yelling and all the teachers whipped around, shocked, as Karsen, Dane, Ashley, Melissa, and Danielle ran toward them, carrying their dufflebags and bookbags.

"Wait!" Karsen shouted.

"Stop the buses!" Ashley yelled.

Eugene and Jeff whipped around to chase after the busses and wave them back, but they were already disappeared around the corner.

"Why on Earth did you miss the buses?" Eugene shouted at them angrily.

"It was my fault, sir," Danielle said timidly as she sniffled.

"We were in her cabin," Dane explained. "She was a wreck over Ian's murder and we were trying to keep her company and keep her calm, and she didn't want to be around other people, so instead of going into the Dining Hall, we all just stayed in her cabin with her."

"I came out to see if the buses were here yet," Karsen took over. "And when I saw they were, I went back and got the others, but by the time we got back, they were gone."

"Well that was pretty stupid," Eugene scolded. "There was a reason I had everyone converge in the Dining Hall, and this is that exact reason."

"Eugene," Nikki said softly. "It's no big deal. We can give them a ride back to the city when we go."

Eugene sighed. "Stay close," he ordered the kids. "Don't wander off. We'll be leaving soon."

"Mr. Tilly, wait," Ashley called out as Eugene started to walk away. The Principal turned back around, annoyed. "Katie was reading this book last night, before she was murdered."

Ashley handed the hardcover edition of  'School Day' over to Mr. Tilly and he glanced at the cover and then flipped it over to read the back. Eugene glances at Jeff, then back at the student. "Thank you, Miss Briltz. This may help the police."

Jeff picked up on Eugene's look and quickly snatched it from him, looking at it. "This is my book..." Jeff said softly, surprised.

"You can't honestly think Jeff's a suspect!" Nikki gasped.

"Of course I don't," Eugene defended himself. "But he has been in this kind of situation twice before, and now its happening all over again, and one of the murdered people was reading his book. It could all be related."

"This won't be of any help," Jeff said, motioning at the book. "It's almost nothing like what actually happened, beyond the basic premise. I twisted the story and characters around to make it more fictional, such as making Grim Reaper be an evil ghost instead of a real person like in reality, and during the novel I get killed off."

"Can we please just leave?" Danielle asked impatiently, wiping tears of fright and stress away.

"She's right. All this time standing around, chatting, we could be preparing to leave," Aaron reminded them.

"Alright, let's do our inspections and get the hell out of here," Eugene said.

The kids stayed close as the teachers spent the next hour and a half searching the grounds and going through each and every cabin and building, making sure nothing was left behind, no other people were still there, and all their stuff was packed.

After a good hour of that, with the kids having stuck close to them like glue the entire time, they all converged back in the parking lot one final time.

"My car's already packed," Nikki stated, after the other teachers were trying to figure out how long it would take to pack their vehicles. "I have room for two extra people."

Jeff glanced at Danielle, who was trying very hard to keep herself together, but was shaking franticly. Jeff met Nikki's eyes and then looked back at Danielle.

"Danielle, did you want to come with me?" Nikki asked as if talking to a small child. Danielle nodded her head, her arms crossed and hugging her body tightly, and shakily walked over to stand with Ms. Kupchanko.

"We'll let you guys decide," Eugene said to the remaining students.

"Rock, paper, Scissors?" Dane suggested to his friends. "It's the most fair way." After they agreed, Dane suggested they formed their choice behind their back, so nobody could change at the last second upon seeing someone else's choice.

Karsen and Ashley drew scissors, Melissa drew paper, and Dane drew rock. According to their area in their little circle though, Dane's rock destroyed Karsen and Ashley's scissors, but Melissa's paper covered Dane's rock, allowing her to be the winner.

"Yes!" Melissa cheered. "I'm out of this hellhole!"

As Nikki was hugged by the teachers and warned to be careful, Melissa was hugged by her friends. Danielle was already over by Nikki's car, waiting to get in.

"Come on, Melissa, let's get out of here," Nikki said as she and Melissa turned and made their way to her car. Unlocking her doors, the three of them climbed in. The other students and teachers remained together, watching the others until they were out of sight.

Of course, that would require Nikki to actually get her car started first, which she was having problems doing.

"Cut the engine!" Aaron shouted as he and Jeff approached the car. Nikki did and the two men popped the hood to take a look at the engine. From inside the car, Nikki could see Jeff backing away in horror.

"Stay here," she ordered the kids and got out of the car to see what was happening.

"I knew it!" Jeff shouted. "I ****ing knew it! I told you all he was back!"

Jane joined Aaron at the front of her car and gasped at what she saw – the engine was completely destroyed – sliced cleanly in several key spots, with a very sharp object. "What the hell...?" she asked, shocked.

"Seems Jeff was right," Aaron mumbled.  "Someone is here, and they don't want us to leave."

"What's going on?" Melissa asked, leaning her head out the backseat window.

"Um, kids..." Nikki Kupchanko stumbled over her words. "I don't think we're going anywhere." From inside the car, Danielle broke down and started crying.

Aaron, Eugene, and Jon rush to check their cars. "It's pointless," Jeff stated in a monotone voice, staying in his spot and leaving his car alone. "They've all been destroyed. We're not going anywhere."

Within a few seconds, all the teachers realized Jeff was right, as every single engine had been destroyed. Panic started to arise in not just the students now, but also the other teachers.

"What the hell is going on?"

"What do we do now?"

"How can we stop this?"

"We need to leave."

And lastly, Jeff finished off with, "I knew Dillon was back. I knew it..." All the while, Danielle still sat in the car, bawling her eyes out.

"We should get inside," Eugene stated, still scared himself. "It won't do us any good to stay out in the open."

"No where is safe..." Jeff mumbled.
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on January 15, 2009, 02:25:53 PM
Anybody still even reading this?
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: V2113 on January 18, 2009, 04:42:17 PM
I am.
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on January 18, 2009, 11:28:29 PM
Sweet. I should have the next part done by the end of the week. Probably on Thursday cause that's my next day off work.
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Gaz on January 18, 2009, 11:48:34 PM
I am! It just takes me a bit to get around to it.

Love the new parts, by the way.
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on January 19, 2009, 01:19:27 AM
Ok, I lied. Here's the next part, lol

***

Eugene slammed a phone receiver down hard.

After they left the parking lot, they immediately went into the two-story reception/office building. First thing they did, was Eugene went over to the phone and tried to call out.

"Phone line's dead," he informed the room of people.

Jon  stood up from where he had been crouching in the corner, holding up a severed cord. "It's been cut. Must have happened while we were out in the parking lot."

"Well we should at least be safe if we all stay together in this cabin," Nikki said.

Jeff suddenly let out a loud laugh. "Nothing we do...nowhere we hide...will be safe from Dillon. It's just a matter of time now."

"We should make a run for it," Aaron suggested. "The highway isn't too far away – should only be about fifteen to twenty minutes on foot. And if this Dillon guy expects us to take the main road, we can go through the forest. We can flag a car down."

"Too dangerous," Jeff stated. "If Dillon were to come after us, a few of the teachers might be able to outrun him, but the kids are ****ed."

"Well maybe we should take that chance."

That caused an uproar from the students and they began shouting bad things at Aaron along the lines of 'Get bent' and 'Go **** yourself.'

After Eugene quieted the kids back down, Jon said, "I agree with Aaron somewhat," and he pressed on when he saw the kids about to start shouting again. "BUT I think we should only send only one or two people out to get help and then send the help back for the others."

"By that time, we'll probably already be dead," Karsen scoffed.

"Nobody is going anywhere alone," Eugene put his foot down. "And we're not leaving the students behind. They’re still in our care."

"Well we have to do something!" Aaron shouted.

Everyone started arguing over what to do, except Jeff, as he stood off to the side, staying out of it. After a moment of raised arguing voices, they are all silenced by a very loud knocking on the front door. Everyone turned and looked at the door in silence.

"Are you sure there were no other kids here?" Eugene asked the teens.

"Positive," Karsen answered in a frightened whisper.

"Who is it?" Eugene shouted out, but received no reply. Behind him, Jeff walked over to the nearby receptionist desk and overturned it, causing some of the others to jump slightly at the loud crashing noise and turn to look. He kicked off one of the long legs, which caused the end to splinter into a near-perfect sharp tip.

The others looked at him as he made his way to the door, turned the handle so the door opened ever-so slightly, and then kicked it wide open, pointing the make-shift weapon out.

They see nothing but the ever-thickening fog that has filled the air the entire day. Jeff let out a sigh of relief, but as he turned to go in, he saw something on the patio in front of the door – whatever it was, it was covered with a dish cloth.

"What is it?" Jon asked, looking over Jeff's shoulder at the object.

"I don't know..." Jeff trailed off as he reached down and whipped the cloth away to reveal a small wooden box with two bloody eyeballs in it. Jeff gagged and jumped back as Melissa whipped around and threw up on the floor of the cabin. Everyone else gasped and covered their mouths or shut their eyes and turned away quickly.

"He's toying with us," Jeff stated as he closed the door, leaving the box of eyeballs outside. "He knows he can come in here at anytime and kill us, and he's just having some fun first."

"The doors to the dining hall can be locked from the inside," Nikki stated. "And they're metal, not wooden like these ones."

Jeff nodded. "Let's go there. It may not do any difference in the end, but it may help a bit until that time comes."

So Jeff, with his table-leg weapon in hand, led Eugene, Jon, Aaron, Nikki, Karsen, Melissa, Ashley, Dane, and Danielle out of the reception cabin and toward the dining hall. Normally they would have been able to see it, but the fog had gotten so thick, they could hardly see three feet in front of themselves.

Despite the thickness of the fog, they all kept their eyes moving in every direction, looking out for any sign of the killer, and kept their ears trained on any noise of the ordinary, no matter how slight.

They managed to make it to the giant dining hall building without any incident, and the second they were all in, Jeff slammed the metal doors shut and locked them multiple times over. When he turned back around, the others were finding some seats at a couple tables, to sit at and he joined them.

"So what now?" Ashley asked.

"Now we bide some time while we think of our next move," Eugene answered. "We're safe in here, so we won't have to worry about being attacked."

"I'm going to the kitchen to get us some food," Aaron stated as he stood up. "I'm sure most of you are as hungry as I am by now." That put a smile on all the students' faces and Aaron walked across the large room and disappeared through a door that led to the area behind the counter that food was served on.

"So what's the new plan?" Nikki asked.

"I don't know," Eugene sighed.

"Dillon won't let us leave until he kills all of us or we kill him," Jeff said. "No point in coming up with a plan that doesn't involve one of..."

He was suddenly cut off by Aaron's loud scream from inside the kitchen. Everyone leaped out of their seats and rushed across the room, through the doors, and into the kitchen where Aaron was back up, face frozen in horror.

"Th...th...there..." he stammered in fear as he pointed a shaking finger at the stove where several pots rested.  Jeff pushed past everyone and moved up to the pots, taking a deep breath before taking the lids off of them, one-by-one.

Inside the first was a stew, long-gone cold. In the second was some vegetables. Jeff never made it to the fourth, as in the third, mixed with the creamy stew, was Ryan's severed head, eye sockets empty. Jeff's eyes widened, but he fought hard to stay in control.

"He's in here..." Jeff whispered.

"What?" Nikki asked, nobody having heard Jeff's whispered.

"He's in here!" Jeff said loudly as he whipped around to face them. "We have to get out!"

"But we're safe in here!" Melissa tried to argue. "He can't get in."

"All we did," Jeff explained, trying not to let panic take over, "Is lock ourselves in with him..."

"What was in that pot?" Eugene asked. Jeff glared at him for a second before stepping aside. As soon as the principal glanced in, he covered his mouth and gagged as he stumbled back. "We have to get out of here, now," he ordered once he regained his composure.

Led by Jeff, everyone marched out of the kitchen and back into the main room, walking quickly across the empty room toward the large metal entrance doors.

Near the entrance doors however, was the hallway leading to the bathrooms. And out of this hallway calmly, scythe gripped tightly in both hands, sideways, stepped Grim Reaper, suit partly burned, blocking their path to the doors.

"Run!" Jeff screamed so loud his voice went hoarse.

"Leave us alone!" Melissa shouted at the killer as the group split apart to run in different directions. When Grim Reaper started taking slow, deliberate steps towards her, Melissa also turned and ran, making her way to the far end of the room, throwing plastic chairs back behind her whenever she came near one.

Danielle slammed opened the door into the kitchen and rushed to the stove, grabbing the giant metal pot filled with soap and Ryan's eyeless head. She grimaced for a second when she saw the head, but quickly looked up from it and ran back out into the main room, throwing the contents of the pot all over Grim Reaper just as he was passing by. Ryan's head slammed hard into the side of Grim Reaper's head, his costume now soaked in the soap liquid.

Grim Reaper stopped his pursuit of Melissa an turned his hooded head to stare directly at his attacker.

"Oh ****..." Danielle whispered. She threw the empty pot at Grim Reaper, who ducked around it and lunged toward her. Danielle shut her eyes, knowing the end was mere seconds away, but Jeff slammed his entire body into Grim Reaper, knocking him away and slamming him hard against a metal food trolley and slammed his head a few times, as hard as he could, into the top metal rack.

By the time Jeff leaped off of the killer and turned back around, the others had all reached the entrance doors, and he quickly joined them while Grim Reaper slowly got back to his feet.
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Gaz on January 19, 2009, 11:31:56 AM
yay new part! Very cool. Heh, I was reading this while watching Paranormal State.

Can't wait to see more.
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on January 22, 2009, 02:15:02 PM
Out in the damp foggy day, the group ran as quickly as they could from the dining hall.

"We have to get out of here!" Dane shouted the obvious.

"This way!" Aaron took point and quickly led them onto a dirt trail that went into the forest.

Following the path for several minutes, never slowing down, they emerged out onto a sandy beach, next to a giant lake. Once out of the forest and onto the beach, they all slowed to a stop to catch their breaths. Jeff never took his eyes off of the trail behind them.

"Now what?" Ashley asked, breathing heavy.

"The fog is really thick today," Nikki said. "I don't think he saw us come down this way."

"So we should be safe as long as we stay quiet, right?"

"No place here is safe," Jeff chimed in.

"There's a pay phone," Nikki explained. "Back at camp, It's hard to spot though. If this Dillon guy doesn't know his way around the grounds, he probably missed it. I'm going to make a run for that phone. It's near the gate entrance."

"No, we all stay together," Jeff said. "Only way to know we're all still alive."

"Jeff, that may be our only hope," Nikki argued with her fellow teacher.

"I can go with her," Aaron offered.

"Fine," Jeff sighed. "But stay close to each other."

"I'll go with them, too." Eugene spoke up.

"You see any sign of Dillon, get your asses back here right away," Jeff said.

The other three teachers nodded and then walked back onto the trail in the woods and was soon swallowed up by the thick, white, fog.

"So what are we going to do?" Jon Jordine asked.

 "Survive."

***

 Nikki, Aaron, and Eugene, emerged from the walking trail back out into the camp grounds. They cautiously made their way past the cabins, eyes peeled, straining to see through the fog for any sign of the killer.

They next past the dining hall building, followed shortly by the reception cabin. When they entered the parking lot, they all stopped and listened intently.

"Seems safe," Eugene stated and the trio moved on again, walking along the gravel road that the buses departed on earlier, quickly going around a corner of trees and leaving view of the camp grounds once again.

After another ten minutes of cautious walking, they reached a small rusting road gate, which was nothing more then a long metal pole that could stretch across the entire road, but was left wide open from when the buses left. Beyond was just more gravel road going through more forest.

"Where's the phone?" Aaron asked, looking around at the trees surrounding them on either side. He could see nothing by the gate itself.

"One of the nearest trees to the gate," Nikki explained. On the back of it should be a glass booth with a pay phone."

While Aaron started examining the trees on one side of the road, Eugene worked on the other. Almost instantly, the principal exclaimed excitedly, "I found it!" Aaron joined Nikki back on the road as Eugene looked at them. "Anyone got a quarter?"

Before either of them had the chance to even think about answering, the glass around Eugene shattered and a scythe blade tore deep into his frail neck, spraying the other side of the glass in a geyser of thick dark blood. Grim Reaper tugged his scythe out of the now-dead body and turned to stare directly at the other two teachers.

"Run!" Aaron yelled and the two of them did so – although in different directions. Nikki instantly ran off the road and into the cover of the forest, getting whipped in the face and legs by many branches that acted as whips, while Aaron stuck to the road and followed it back toward the camp grounds as fast as he could.

***

Back on the beach, Jeff, Jon, Karsen, Dane, Melissa, Ashley, and Danielle walked together in one large group, moving further down the beach, away from the view of the trail in case the killer decided to check the area out.

Out of the fog in front of them, came the stationary life guard tower, the white plastic seat held high in the air.

"Is there someone up there?" Dane asked.

"Don't be foolish," Jon scolded. "There's nobody else here but us."

"I'm pretty sure there is," Dane pursued, squinting his eyes.

"He's right," Jeff agreed. "I can see something up there, but can't tell what."

"Hello?" Dane called up as they neared, but got no answer.

"Maybe it's not a person," Danielle suggested, shivering in the cold fog.

"Stay here," Jeff said to the others as he went to the ladder of the tower and started climbing.

Danielle shivered in the cold once more.

"Are you cold?" Dane asked. Danielle nodded. "Here." Dane removed his jacket and gave it to Danielle, who put it on, which was about two sizes too big for her, and hugged herself for warmth.

"Thanks," she smiled.

"Oh god!"

Everyone whipped their heads up to the source of the noise – Jeff up on top of the life guard tower, and they watched as he climbed half-way back down quickly and then jumped the rest of the way down.

"The beach isn't safe anymore," Jeff informed them.

"Why? What's up there?" Jon asked.

"Robert," he explained, then for the sake of the kids knowing, he added, "Mr. Pierce. He's dead."

"But we don't know how long he's been up there. Could be days."

"Could be, but how sure of that are we? Dillon could be here right now," Jeff said in a slightly-panicked voice.

"It's you he wants!" Karsen suddenly shouted at Mr. Long, fear taking control. "It's because of you this has all happened before, and it's because of you that it's happening again! I'm staying away from you!" Karsen turned and started running up across the beach, heading for the tree line.

"Karsen!" everyone started shouting to get his attention, but he ignored them and soon disappeared into the thickness of the forest.

"Come on," Jeff said. "If he doesn't want to come with us, that's his funeral. We don't have the time to chase after an ungrateful little brat."

"**** you!" Melissa shouted at him. "Karsen's my best friend! I'm going to go get him."

"I'll come with you," Dane suggested, then turned to Jeff. "Strength in numbers, right?"

Jeff sighed. "We're going to go hide in a random cabin – Dillon could guess we would go to the dining hall and reception cabin, but if we pick a sleeping cabin at random, there's no way he can guess. You guys probably won't be able to find us again."

"That's ok," Dane said. "Once we get Karsen we'll find a place to hide out."

Jeff nodded as Ashley moved forward to hug her two friends. "Stay safe guys," she said as she broke apart and wiped tears from her eyes.

Melissa and Dane turned and ran up into the forest close to the area that Karsen did.

"Alright, let's get moving," Jeff said to Jon, Ashley, and Danielle and the four of them made their way back up the beach toward the trail they took coming down.

***

Nikki emerged out of the forest into the middle of a path leading to a nearby low but long and narrow building – the indoor swimming pool. She glanced back behind her, but couldn't see too far back through the fog, so listened intently; she could hear the sound of branches snapping and someone moving quickly through the forest not far behind.

She looked down the path in the opposite direction, but couldn't see how far it went before it reached the camp grounds, so she turned and ran down it toward the swimming pool building.

As soon as she reached the door, she glanced a look back behind her and could see Grim Reaper emerging out onto the path, but looking in the opposite direction. She let out a quick and quiet gasp as she quickly opened the door and ran inside, locking the door behind her.

Nikki glanced around the windowless room for a hiding spot, but didn't see much. The entire building was just one giant room with the still water of the swimming pool taking up 98% of it, and the rest being the concrete around the pool. She spotted a tall metal locker and rushed over to it, opening it.

"****!" she whispered loudly. Her hopes of hiding in it were dashed though as it was filled with shelves of various swimming toys.

A loud splintering noise caused her to whip her head around with a short scream and she spotted the sharp scythe blade leaving the hole it made in the wooden door and then slam back through it again, widening the hole and causing splinters of wood to go flying. When the scythe extracted this time, a fist slammed into the hole, widening it, and the hand started to break apart some of the wood, leaving a hole big enough for Grim Reaper to slide through and into the swimming pool building.

Nikki quickly glanced around the room again, this time looking for another exit, but the only way out was through the door that Grim Reaper was entering through. She looked at the swimming pool, then glanced back at Grim Reaper, who was now fully inside the building. She turned and ran toward the swimming pool, diving off the edge and deep under the water in the deep end.

Under the water, she kicked off her shoes so she could swim easier and turned only to see Grim Reaper also enter the deep end of the pool. She let out a scream under the water, dozens of bubbles exiting her mouth and floating quickly to the surface.

Nikki turned and tried to swim to the surface for air, while also making her way quickly back to the side to get out of the water, as her plan failed. At the same time, however, Grim Reaper was swimming fluently through the water behind her and closing fast.
 
She broke the surface, but before she could even make a gasp for air, Grim reaper gripped her leg tightly and instantly pulled her back down under the water. She started kicking franticly and during her struggle, she floated around so she was face-to-face with Grim Reaper.

They were in a shallower area of the pool by this point and Grim Reaper reached to the bottom of the pool to a hose that was laying there. He brought it up and wrapped it tightly around Nikki's leg and let the struggling young teacher go. She tried swimming to the surface again, but the hose kept her just inches away from it.

Grim Reaper surfaced and exited the pool, dripping water from his suit, as the teacher dived back down to try to free her leg. The killer stood by the edge of the water, watching the teacher below the surface struggle to free herself.

It was less then a minute until the teacher's body went limp as she drowned, and floated toward the surface, being kept just under it once again by the hose.
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Gaz on January 22, 2009, 03:52:48 PM
This keeps gettin better and better! Love it!  ;D
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on January 22, 2009, 11:01:25 PM
So I'm updating all my old stories, but I can't decide which one to update after School Day 3, so I want you guys to let me know which one you'd be most interested in reading.

Terror in the Tunnels - A bunch of cops find out about giant alligators living in the tunnels under New York and must stop them before they reach the surface.

Bugs - A group of friends go camping in the woods one weekend, only to become under attack by a hive of giant killer bugs.

Invisible Killer - A father brings his kid camping and they go to a well-known camp ground area, but while there, people start getting killed off, right in front of others without any sight of the killer. They later find out the area is haunted by a very evil ghost.

Slash - Another teen slasher, similar to School Day but not contained to any one specific are and general, just all over the town. The killer wears a goblin mask and leaves behind cryptic notes.

Crimson Moon - Pretty much a werewolf version of From Dusk Till Dawn. A group of brothers on the run from the law, with hostages in tow, stop at a gas station in the middle of nowhere to get a bite to eat, only to get attacked by an angry biker gang that turns out to be a werewolf pack.

The DinoHunters - A group of people go to a mysterious island virtually unknown to the rest of the world, to hunt dinosaurs that are still alive on it.

I know there are others, but those are the only ones I can think up off the top of my head, and I'm sure that's more then enough to get a good start on, lol
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Gaz on January 22, 2009, 11:06:00 PM
The alligator one sounds cool. And the werewolf one! Those both sound really interesting.
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on January 25, 2009, 12:48:03 PM
Karsen rushed through the thick forest, brushing branches out of his path and leaping over a fallen tree trunk. Shortly after he cleared that, he tripped over a decent-sized rock sticking up out of the ground that was camouflaged by a patch of moss covering it, and Karsen went sprawling to the forest floor. While he was down there, he started hearing twigs snapping behind him, as if someone was running quickly toward him.

"No!" He pushed himself back up, but before he could start running again, a hand grabbed his shoulder and whipped him around.

Facing him were his friends Dane and Melissa. He let out a long sigh of relief.

"What's the matter with you!?" Dane shouted.

"I'm not going back to that camp," Karsen stated, "and I'm not staying on that beach. As long as we're not with Jeff, we should be safe, but even if we aren't, hiding deep in the middle of the forest, far away from any path or buildings, we should be safe."

"He's got a point," Melissa agreed. "We're probably the safest people at this camp right now."

"What about Ashley and Danielle?" Dane asked.

"**** them," Karsen said. "We were never friends with Danielle, and if Ashley is stupid enough to stay with them then that's her own fault. Now come on, we have to get deeper into the woods."

***

Jon Jordine exited the bathroom of one of the many sleeping cabins, the toilet flushing behind him. Danielle and Ashley sat together on the large couch, while Jeff kept peeking out the window, searching for any sign of the killer nearby.

"I wonder if the teachers got a call for help out," Ashley said.

"If they did, they'll return to the beach and find us gone," Jon suddenly realized.

"I thought of that," Jeff stated. "Unfortunately, there's not much we can do about it. Hopefully they can find a safe place to hide out in, like us."

Danielle let out a long yawn. "I'm so tired..." she said after she finished.

"If you want, lay down and try to get some sleep," Jeff said. "We seem to be safe for now, and who knows when we'll be able to rest again after this. I suggest you all get some rest. I'll keep watch."

"We'll take shifts," Jon said. "I'll relieve you in a couple hours."

Jeff nodded as Jon headed off into one room to sleep and Ashley and Danielle headed off into another.

***

Karsen, Dane, and Melissa continued to wander aimlessly through the forest, a few hours having past since they first met up. The fog was starting to thin, however night was quickly approaching as the light of day was passing into dark blue, and soon to be followed by the blackness of night.

"It's going to be dark soon," Dane stated.

"So?" Karsen asked.

"Wolves," Dane answered. "I don't know about you, but coming across a pack of hungry wolves in the middle of the forest at night isn't any better then coming across that Grim Reaper guy."

"I don't want to come across wolves..." Melissa complained.

"Oh my god, shut up!" Karsen shouted at her, annoyed with having to hear her constantly complain for the last several hours, almost non-stop.

"Cut her some slack," Dane defended her. "I think we should try to find out way back to camp."

"Are you insane?!" Karsen yelled.

"Look, at least back at camp, we can find a building to hide out in. Out here, we may be safe from the killer, but we're a buffet waiting to happen for a pack of wolves or a bear or something."

Karsen stepped up into Dane's face, eyes locked on his, not backing down. Suddenly a twig snaps not too far away and everyone turns in that direction.

"What was that?" Karsen asked as a chill went down all their spines. Melissa cowered even more, fighting the urge not to run off from the others.

"Could be just some harmless animal..." Dane tried to suggest as he turned around to stand next to Karsen. A dark shape rose up from a slight decline behind the three of them.

Karsen turned to look around them and instantly stopped when he saw Grim Reaper standing only a few feet away, holding a giant rock in both hands. He let out a blood-curdling scream and the others whipped around.

"Oh ****!" Melissa screamed and the three of them turned to run away, but Grim Reaper swung his foot out and hooked it around Karsen's, making him trip and fall back to the ground again. He rolled over onto his back just in time to have the large rock smash down on his face, caving his head in to a pulpy mess of brains, blood, and bone.

Grim Reaper looked back up, and even though Dane and Melissa were long gone, they were making quite a lot of noise as they ran through the forest.

***

Jeff was still guarding the front door of the cabin that he, Jon, Ashley, and Danielle were hiding in when Danielle came out, yawning. It had been a few hours since they first entered the cabin, and even though Jon was supposed to have taken over watch duty, Jeff knew he needed rest and so he had let him sleep longer.

"How was your nap?" Jeff asked.

"Restless," his student answered. "How are things going out here?"

"No sign of Dillon so far."

Danielle walked over to Jeff and joined him by the window. "So you really went through all this before?"

"Yeah," Jeff answered. "Twice."

"How?"

"Luck."

"Do you think we'll survive this?"

Jeff turned to look at her. "Honestly, I don't know, but I'd say our chances are significantly better right now."

"Did you want me to take the next watch?" Danielle asked. "Mr. Jordine is still sleeping, and you've got to be tired."

"You know, maybe I..." the rest of his sentence was drowned out by the noise of glass shattering, followed quickly by a high-pitch scream coming from Ashley.

Jeff and Danielle met Jon in the hall and the three rushed into the other bunk room, flipping on the lights only to find a pile of broken glass form the window on the floor, with Ashley's lifeless body half on the top bunk and half hanging over the edge, her arms severed and laying on the floor in a pool of blood.

"Dillon!" Jeff shouted. "I'm here! Leave the others alone! Come and get me!"

"Gladly." said a muffled whispered voice. The door slammed closed behind them and Grim Reaper was there, his scythe in his hand.

"Take me, Dillon!" Jeff shouted, putting himself between the killer and the others. "I'm the one you want!" With that, Jeff charged forward and slammed his body against the killer's knocking them both back against the door.

"Come on, girl!" Jon shouted to Danielle and they turned toward the shattered window. He hoisted Danielle up, who knocked away some of the loose glass, and then climbed through the window and landed on the ground outside.

Before Jon jumped up, he risked a glance back, and he saw Grim Reaper, having had his scythe knocked out of his hands, in a tussle with Jeff, both of them slamming the other against walls and punching and kicking. Grim Reaper currently had the upperhand, throwing Jeff head-first into the wall.

Jon turned back around and hauled himself up onto the window ledge and then also outside to join Danielle.

Jeff slammed an elbow into the side of Grim Reaper's head, knocking him off of himself, and then grabbed his head and slammed it as hard as he could against the closed door, leaving a dent in it. Then he picked Grim Reaper's head up again and slammed it as hard as he could against the door again. Then again and again and again, until there was a hole in the door and Grim Reaper's head was through it.

Jeff stepped back and waited. After not moving for two minutes, Jeff turned and made his way through the window as well, however once he got to the ground on the other side, Jon and Danielle were already gone.

Where did they go? Jeff wondered to himself. He felt like calling their names, but he knew that the killer was only temporarily unconscious and could wake up any second, and the last thing eh wanted to do was start giving away his position – or theirs when they answer.

As he ran through some foliage behind the cabin and emerged onto a trail leading to the main part of camp from another cabin, he realized where they may have gone. The dining hall was still the most fortified and safe building, and they knew the killer was back in the cabin, thus he couldn't be waiting inside like last time.

Jeff knew Jon was a really smart teacher and must have figured that out when trying to think of a new hiding place. Jeff started jogging up the trail, now with a destination in mind.

***

Dane and Melissa wandered back onto the camp grounds from a random point of the forest. Melissa stopped to catch her breath, breathing very heavily.

"We can't stop now!" Dane shouted at her. "The killer could be right behind us!"

"But..."

"Come on," Dane grabbed Melissa's arm and helped her run again. "We'll go with Mr. Long's plan – we'll find a random cabin and hide out there. With any luck, it may even be the one that the others are hiding in."

Melissa nodded her head and found the energy to keep running.

***

Jon and Danielle sat at a table in the middle of the dining hall, both sets of eyes never leaving the front door. Suddenly it opened and they both jumped to their feet, but let out a sign of relief as Jeff ran in.

"Why the hell isn't this door locked?" Jeff demanded as he closed it behind him.

"Look at it yourself," Jon said back. "The killer must have destroyed it so if we did come back here, we wouldn't be able to lock the door. John walked up to the door and showed Jeff the broken lock.

"****," Jeff swore under his breath.

"I'm guessing Ms. Kupchanko, Mr. Tilly, and Mr. Wittcopf didn't make it to the phone," Danielle said from her spot back at the table. "Otherwise help would have been here by now."

"But he's been after us the entire time," Jeff said. "That doesn't make any sense...unless..."

"What?" Jon asked.

"Unless there's two of them," Jeff replied. "Maybe he has a partner this time."

"That's insane," Jon said. "He's certifiably crazy. Who would he get to help him?"

"I don't know," Jeff admitted. "I was more or less just thinking out loud, but you're probably right. That doesn't seem to make much sense."

All of a sudden, the door slammed opened, knocking Jeff across the floor. Jon's eyes opened wide as Grim Reaper stepped in and immediately turned his scythe upside down and impaled the teacher on it, spraying blood across the floor behind him, and then proceeded to use his weapon to lift him up off the floor. He then flicked his wrist and the teacher's body flew off the blade and half-way across the room, almost hitting the screaming Danielle.

A plate shattered against Grim Reaper's head, making him wince and whip around to see Jeff standing by the utensil cart, which was also filled with plates and bowls. Jeff threw another plate, like a frisbee, and it shattered against Grim Reaper's face, making him stumble back in pain.

"Danielle! The exit, now!" Jeff shouted as he kept tossing plates at the killer, making him back up more and more, distracting him.

Danielle listened to the last remaining teacher and ran for the exit. Once she reached it, Jeff joined her, but not before sliding a knife into his pocket. They exited the building and ran as quickly as they could through the dark night air, hopefully leaving Grim Reaper behind, but Jeff knew better.
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Gaz on January 25, 2009, 01:45:15 PM
Man! That dude pops up everywhere, doesn't he? That's creepy.

lol, attack with plates! Shouldn't he be yelling opa (sp?) or something?  :P

Anyway, love the new part! It's cool.  8)
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on January 25, 2009, 06:19:14 PM
"That dude pops up everywhere, doesn't he?"

Keep in mind, there are two killers this time around, as was revealed in the opening scene  8)
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on January 26, 2009, 01:10:48 PM
Dane and Melissa were hiding inside one of the bunk cabins, much like the others did earlier.  Dane was glancing out the window when he turned back to Melissa who was standing nervously nearby.

"I don't think he saw us come in here," Dane said, in regards to the Grim Reaper that had been chasing them back in the woods.

"How can you be sure?"

"He'd be here by now," Dane said. "I'm sure of it."

"Urg," Melissa moaned. "I probably look like a trainwreck. I'll be right back." Melissa walked out of the main room, into the hall, and then into one of the bedrooms to check herself out in the mirror.

While she was looking at herself in the mirror, squinting her eyes to see herself in the darkness, a bit of red caught her attention from behind her, and she whipped around and screamed. This was the cabin that Ian had been killed in, and his bunk was still covered in his blood.

Dane came running into the room, fists raised, ready for action. "What is it?" he asked as he barged in.

"Nothing," Melissa answered and Dane sighed. "Just I think this is one of the cabins that someone died in, look..." Melissa points and Dane sees the bed. "I don't feel comfortable staying here anymore."

Dane nodded, understanding, but before he could say anything, the front door opened and closed and the two teens looked at each other and exchanged glances.

"Hello?" Dane called out, thinking that maybe it was Mr. Long and the others, but when no answer came, he knew they were stuck in the cabin with the killer.

"There's someone in here..." Melissa whispered.

"I'll go out and see," Dane said.

"No!" Melissa argued in a loud whisper.

"He can't come after both of us," Dane said. "Plus maybe it was just the wind."

"It's not windy..."

But Dane ignored her as he stepped out of the room and made his way down the hall, inch-by-inch, ready to run at any second.

Melissa wanted to glance out the bunk room and look to see if Dane was ok, but she was too scared that Grim Reaper would jump out at her. "Dane?" Melissa whispered loudly from inside the bunk room. "Dane, are you ok?"

Dane didn't answer, but she didn't know if it was because he was dead, or because he just couldn't hear her. She started to move closer to the doorway to try calling again, but a dark shape moved into it, blocking her path. The shape stepped into the room, lit up by the moonlight outside.

As soon as Melissa saw that it was Grim Reaper, she instantly reached for a pair of scissors on the desk right next to her and held them out like a weapon.

"I'm warning you," she warned the killer. Grim Reaper just swung his scythe out and sliced her fist off from her hand, the hand holding the scissors clunked to the floor as Melissa screamed and blood pumped out of her stump. Grim Reaper reached down and picked up the hand that still clutched the scissors and rammed the metal object into Melissa's eyes.

"Melissa! No!" Dane shouted, having popped his head around the corner just in time to see his friend get murdered, the pair of scissors and the severed hand still attached to them, sticking out of her eye sockets as her body fell backwards.

Grim Reaper whipped around, but Dane was already on his way out the main door of the cabin.

***

Jeff and Danielle jogged through the dark camp grounds.

"Where are we going?" Danielle asked.

"My classroom cabin," Jeff replied.

"How far away is it?"

"Just up the path a..." Jeff trailed off as he and Danielle stopped on the spot. Grim Reaper walked toward them out of the darkness.

"****!" Danielle screamed as Jeff gasped.

***

Dane ran into one of the classroom cabins and just as the door opened behind him and Grim Reaper walked in, he ducked down behind the large teacher desk, putting his back up against it, sweat dripping profusely from his head.

Grim Reaper slowly moved his head back and forth, scanning the seemingly-empty classroom. Dane silently started counting in his head, to keep himself somewhat calm. The Grim Reaper would find the room empty and leave any...

Dane's thoughts were interrupted by having the teacher's desk start to tip over on top of him. He made a dash to get out of the way, but was too slow and only managed to get the top half of his body out from behind the teacher's desk as it crashed over and pinned him to the floor.

Dane, in a panic, began to push up to slide out form under the desk, but Grim Reaper put a heavy foot on top of the desk, putting weight on it and keeping Dane trapped. Then he swung his scythe downwards with great force, and the blade crunched right through Dane's spine.

***

"Run!" Jeff shouted and he and Danielle turned and started running back up the trail from the way they had just come. While on the path, they start passing by a couple classroom cabins. A second Grim Reaper walks out from one, blood on his scythe, and blocks their path. Jeff's eyes widen as he looks back, to see one Grim Reaper walking toward them, then back ahead again to see a second blocking their path.

"No!" Jeff gasped. "This isn't possible..."

Once the first Grim Reaper reaches them, both raise their scythes and point them at Jeff and Danielle.

"Walk..." One of the Grim Reapers say in a scratchy and muffled voice. The Reapers, one in front and the other behind, both facing the hostages, lead them down a side-path for a minute until they reach the main two-storied reception cabin.

"Walk inside..." the same Grim Reaper commanded and all four of them entered the building.

The first Grim Reaper flipped on the light switch and Jeff could see the Grim Reapers more clearly now.  One suit was partly burnt while the other was just normal grey, with an almost new look to it.

"Who the **** are you?" Danielle shouted.

Jeff looked at the Grim Reaper with the burnt suit and nodded his head in greeting. "Dillon. Long time, no see."

That Grim Reaper turned around to lock the door, then slice the locking mechanism off with his scythe blade so it couldn't be unlocked. Then eh turned back around and removed his head, showing that it is indeed Dillon. "No escaping this time," he growled.

"Who did you manage to talk into this?" Jeff asked, as Danielle never took her eyes off the second killer. "Who did you find that was as ****ed up as you?"

"Later," Dillon said. "Pay back time for that pipe first,"

"Allison did that," Jeff reminded Dillon.

"Oh, and she'll get hers, trust me."

"Why can't you just leave us alone?" tears started coming from Danielle's eyes.

"Because..." Dillon never got to finish, as the second he turned to look at Danielle, she jumped up and kicked him in the head, catching him off guard and knocking him back several feet. Then she punched him in his gut and slammed her fist into hi head, knocking him down.

At that moment, Jeff turned and rammed into the second Grim Reaper, knocking him backwards, crashing hard into the corner of the desk. Jeff punched his face hard, which knocked the hood off, revealing Aaron under it.

"Aaron!" Jeff gasped.

"Mr. Long, hurry up!" Jeff turned and saw Danielle on the staircase, motioning for him to join her. Jeff punched Aaron again and then turned and ran up the creaking stairs with Danielle.

"Find them!" Dillon shouted angrily as he got back to his feet and Aaron moaned, getting to his feet. Neither had seen them go up the stairs, and this cabin was one of the larger ones, with multiple rooms.

Aaron and Dillon moved in opposite directions, looking behind every desk, every couch, every door...looking everywhere they possibly could...on the first floor. "So you want to know why I'm doing this, I suppose!" Aaron shouted out.

"What are you doing!?" Dillon snapped at him. "Just find them! Don't give them your life story!"

"They'll think my guard is down," Aaron explained. "And then jump out to attack, but I'll be waiting."

Dillon just rolled his eyes. "Amateur."

"I'll tell you why!" Aaron shouted out as he returned to going room-to-room, searching everywhere. "My last name isn't Wittcopf, it's Tucker! You killed my sister Jolene, my cousin Steven, and countless other innocents, all so you could do research for your damn book! Unfortunately for you, Dillon survived your massacre."

Aaron walked back out into the main room and glance dup the stairs. After a pause, he started to move up them. "I had been looking for answers about that University massacre for years, but the police wouldn't release any details. That is, until Dillon replied to a post I made on the net about it. He told me the true story of what happened."

Just as Aaron neared the top of the stairs, Jeff jumped out from around the corner and rammed right into him with a yell. The two of them tumbled head over heels back down the stairs, coming to a painful stop at the bottom. They both got to their feet around the same time, Aaron retrieving his scythe, which had closed back up. In a split second, he pushed the button to extend the blade back out and swung it, missing Jeff by a mere centimeter. Dillon walked out from around the corner, glanced at the two of them, and then made his way up the stairs.

"What bull**** has Dillon been telling you?" Jeff asked, his eyes following Dillon up the stairs before returning to Aaron. "He was the one killing everyone! And my book is based off the events from the first school he trapped me and my friends in! Not the university!"

"Enough of your lies!" Aaron shouted.

"Ok, then answer me this," Jeff argued. "If he was only in it for revenge against me, why did he have all these innocent people murdered too?"

"Oh please, you'll have to try harder then that," Aaron chuckled. "Darrell and Charlene walked in on me and Dillon talking about it all, so naturally they had to be taken care of. Then we went after Ryan next, as he was one of your accomplices, but stupid little Robert got in the way. Then we had to go after Ian cause he saw Dillon, and Katie because she believed Ian, and we were sure the two of them would catch your attention with all their 'Grim Reaper is here!' nonsense. Their deaths ended up being the perfect way to get all the other people out of here. We planned on only destroying your engine so the others could get away, leaving only you here, but I guess Dillon didn't know which car was yours and just went after all of them to be safe. Everyone else was potential witlessness and had to be taken care of accordingly."

"The fact that Dillon trapped all these innocent people here on purpose didn't throw you off at all?" Jeff asked Aaron.

"Well of course I didn't agree with it, all he had to do was ask me which one was yours, but what was done, was done."

"NOTHING about his story makes any sense!" Jeff shouted.

"I found the damn kid," Dillon said as he walked down the stairs, holding the scythe blade to Danielle's back.

Jeff could see a flicker of doubt flash across Aaron's eyes as he ran through all the events in his head, this time giving Jeff's side of the story some merit.

"Aaron," Jeff said more softly. "Has anything I've done here over the last couple days shout 'serial killer' to you? I've been protecting everyone! Now, what about Dillon? What does his actions over the last few days say?"

Dillon and Danielle reached Aaron and Jeff and Aaron glanced at Dillon. "He's making a bit of sense..." Aaron said a bit weakly.

"He's good at playing mind games!" Dillon explained. "Don't fall for them!"

"But why did..."

"Just shut up and kill him!" Dillon shouted, loosing his patience. "I'll take care of the brat."

Dillon started to walk away with Danielle, but stopped on the spot when he heard Aaron say defiantly, "No."

"What?" Dillon growled as he turned his head back around.

"I said no," Aaron stood his ground, turning to stand next to Jeff and facing Dillon.

Dillon sighed, "Fine," and shoved Danielle out of the way and whipping around, slashing his scythe out at Aaron, but Aaron just blocked with his own scythe.

"I can't believe you manipulated me like that!" Aaron shouted as he swung his scythe overtop for Dillon's and slammed the back of it into Dillon's chest, knocking him back a few feet. Dillon raised his and swung it down hard, but Aaron jumped out of the way, only to have Dillon lift it up and swing again, however Aaron managed to block it once more.

"You were so easy," Dillon sneered, and then they entered another mini-duel with the scythes. Blades swung, and some attacks were blocked and others were dodged. Dillon decided he had had enough, and while Aaron currently held Dillon's scythe down by having his on top, Dillon leaned in and punched Aaron in the face.

Aaron flew back off his feet, his scythe leaving his grasp and flying across the room. Before he had a chance to get back up, Dillon raised his scythe in one fluid motion and swung it down, ramming it down through Aaron's chest, pinning him to the floor. Blood spat up out of Aaron's mouth before his head tilted to the side and he died.

Dillon whipped around to take care of Jeff and Danielle, but they were gone. However, he noticed that the door to one of the other rooms was now opened, when he distinctly remembered closing it.

"Come out, come out, wherever you are," Dillon chanted with a sneer as he approached the opened door.

"Fine," Jeff said as he slid out from the room, picked up Aaron's fallen scythe which had landed hear the area, jumped back to his feet and swung the weapon out, catching Dillon off-guard and sticking the blade deep into Dillon's stomach.

Dillon's eye's widened and blood started to trickle form the edge of his mouth as blood also seeped out around the edge of the scythe blade. "Nothing...I've never...survived... before..." Dillon said while gurgling on his own blood. He raised his own scythe.

Jeff's eyes widened and he turned to run, but Dillon swung the scythe down, striking Jeff and crumpling him to the floor in a scream of pain. Danielle watched from around the corner, eyes going wide.

Dillon hovered above Jeff, removing the scythe from his chest and allowing the blood to flow freely.  Jeff was a bloody heap on the floor, clutching his side in pain, where the scythe had struck him.

A very large sneer crossed Dillon's face as he swung both scythes down on Jeff, ending his life.

"Noooo!" Danielle screamed and jumped out, using her nails to scratch at Dillon's face, which caught him off-guard and caused him to back up and drop one of the scythes. One of Danielle's nails scratched along one of Dillon's eyeball and he screamed, dropping his own scythe and using both hands to shove Danielle back.

She tripped over Jeff's body and fell to the floor, but she scrambled to take the knife from Jeff's pocket that he had grabbed back in the dining hall and leaped back to her feet.

As soon as Dillon pulled his hands away from his eyes, she rammed the knife up, digging into deep into Dillon's neck. He tried to scream, but no sound came out. Both of his hands went up to remove the object from the middle of his neck, blood squirting out from the new wound.

"You'll pay for that, you ****!" he rasped, but Danielle was gone.

Dillon turned around to see if she was behind him, and had turned around just in time to see a scythe blade connecting with his body at the waist and slicing through it as Danielle yelled ferociously.

Dillon's top half fell first, a look of 'oh ****' forever stuck on his face, then a few long seconds after, his legs finally fell too.

"Bastard," Danielle mumbled as she stumbled back and dropped the scythe. After checking to see if Jeff was really dead, she then proceeded to leave the cabin, make her way through the grounds to the parking lot, then up the very long gravel road, to eventually come out onto the highway, where she hoped she could flag someone down to give her a ride into town where she planned on getting the attention of the authorities and getting some people out to the camp to clean up the mess.

But for the time being, she still had a very long walk ahead of her.
 
THE END
Title: Re: School Day 3
Post by: Slushie Man on January 26, 2009, 01:20:45 PM
Praise for School Day 3 from other sites:

"Two and a half skulls out of Four, for new adventures of Jeff the hero, new ways to kill, and several plot twists near the end, including a complete surprise as to who survives. Another gruesome body count and a scene with dueling Grim Reapers! (I won't explain what happens, you'll have to read it for yourself). The end still catches me by surprise, and it makes me wonder how School Day 4 will be, or if there even will be a School Day 4."
- JH of the Horror Fanfiction Archive

"This series is turning into the “Friday the 13th” of the site, with a constant variety of deaths, resourceful gory details, and some excellent action sequences. I enjoyed the references to the story’s two predecessors, and also the setup of the victims—er, characters—having to stay behind at the camp. On the critical side, a few clichés are present. Like any horror story, a couple of the characters were utterly stupid: They run away through the woods, and when it gets dark, instead og going out to the highway to flag down a car, they run back to the camp. I guess I don’t have to tell you what happened to them but they deserved it. The story is pretty on par with SCHOOL DAY 2, and is a fun addition to the series. 3.0 out of 5"
- Screamer009 of the Horror Fanfiction Archive

"You’ve done the original, part two was basically a rehash so when it comes to the third, you have to do something different. So this time an older Jeff and Ryan are now teachers who, along with their students have gone to a summer camp; the set up is complete and the carnage can begin! There is slightly more description than before, something that benefits the story, and the deaths are getting more creative. The Grim Reaper is beginning to become Jason-like in his use of props in order to pull off some creative kills. On the down side, the characters don’t seem as real and aren’t portrayed as well as in the previous two entries and so you don’t care too much for their fates.

Also the Grim Reaper, as most horror killers eventually do, is becoming less human. He survived the battering at the end of Part 2 and here he takes a lot of punishment too. Still its nice to read that his costume is still half burnt from the bomb; the little touches help you enjoy it. In the end this is at least equal to School Day 2 and so deserves its score of Three Hooks out of Five.

Oh and by the way, look out for the really cool bit with dueling Grim Reapers! It rocks!"
- Scarecrow_Cenobite of the Hellbound Web

Title: Re: School Day 3 - Now Complete
Post by: Gaz on January 26, 2009, 01:40:04 PM
Very cool ending! Loved it!  ;D
Title: Re: School Day 3 - Now Complete
Post by: Slushie Man on January 26, 2009, 11:16:50 PM
I needed something big to end the trilogy on, so I had a kick ass scene with two Grim Reapers fighting each other with their scythes, then had myself get killed, then had Dillon get chopped in half so he couldn't possibly come back this time, lol
Title: Re: School Day 3 - Now Complete
Post by: Slushie Man on February 04, 2009, 11:29:18 AM
I've been working for the last 9 days and today is my final day before my days off. Once my days off start, I'll start working on either Crimson Moon or Terror in the Tunnels.
Title: Re: School Day 3 - Now Complete
Post by: Gaz on February 04, 2009, 12:15:50 PM
Sweet! Can't wait to see those.  8)
Title: Re: School Day 3 - Now Complete
Post by: morfowt on February 08, 2009, 02:43:19 AM
I still don't get how he survived the end of part 1 and part 2...
Title: Re: School Day 3 - Now Complete
Post by: Slushie Man on February 08, 2009, 02:45:42 AM
He's a horror villain. It happens.
Title: Re: School Day 3 - Now Complete
Post by: V2113 on February 17, 2009, 05:02:00 PM
Woah.
Title: Re: School Day 3 - Now Complete
Post by: Hunter on February 20, 2009, 08:17:21 AM
oh. my. gawd...

that is all i can say about your latest addition to the School Day trilogy... i especially like the part with the duelling grim reapers... but yeah, the two massive twists at the end, like when you find out who the other reaper is, and then he turns on dillon... as i said in the School Day 2 thread, you really should take this to a publisher...
Title: Re: School Day 3 - Now Complete
Post by: Slushie Man on February 21, 2009, 02:56:34 AM
Thanks for the kind words!

And I actually have been working on a full-length novel version of School Day, which I will post here eventually in the far future when I finish, and I plan on attempting to get that published when the time is right.
Title: Re: School Day 3 - Now Complete
Post by: V2113 on March 04, 2009, 12:51:49 AM
Oh! If you become like a totally awesome author could you put in a good word for the awesome 11 year old with high hopes when she finally gets around to attempting to get one of her books published? (meaning me of course.) PLEEEEAAASSEE!!!