Richard's Animorphs Forum
General Category => General Fan Fiction & Art => Topic started by: Unknown User on April 21, 2011, 11:29:45 PM
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Please post all comments, questions, and Reviews for my poetry in this thread.
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I finally got around to reading your poems, and I have to admit I liked them. Particularly "Fish Food" and "Hear-." I liked the comparison between a fish and an idea, that was quite original.
Just a few things I'd like to point out, though. Not really criticism, just minor spelling errors. Errors which would probably not even register with anyone but me, but I'm just a bit OCD that way. I just thought you should know.
In "Awaken," veiw should be view, and livinging should be living.
In "Fish Food," intriuge should be intrigue, semds should be sends, it's should be its (no apostrophe), and wich should be which.
In "Beach time epiphany," seagulls should be seagull's (with an apostrophe).
In "Hear-" deaths should be death's in both cases.
And in "War poem," ryme should be rhyme.
Anyway, like I said before, these poems are good, so don't be bothered by me pointing out things. :)
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Thanks for the review Dino, I shall fix the errors as soon as possible.
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Sorry I didnt see that at the top I always read from the bottom up in a thread to see where I was. Nice poems though :)
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Obviously, I've posted my ode to Rad, I have two new poems I'm putting up within the minute. That means that my one fan will have something to read *waves to the one guy cheering in the bleachers*.