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Title: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on September 11, 2010, 11:56:29 PM
Okay when I get bored, frustrated, happy, or just simply spaz out I sometimes get poems in my head. Then I'll get poems in my head that pound at me until I jot them down and then they quit....until the next one. Well here is where I will share them with yoy guys and you can give your opinions. Now I don't want gramatical critiquing or anything like that. But you can try and figure out what I qas feeling or thinking when I wrote it or even if it helps you. Some are random some are about dreams. All are based off emotions I've had. Probably many will not have titles.....oh well. Enjoy! (Please no copywriting any of these. Be mature.)
Post Merged: September 12, 2010, 12:14:23 AM
Hear the Moon Sing Her Midnight Song

Hear the moon as she sings her midnight song,
The stars play their twinkling lights.
As the wind swings through the midnight sky,
And leaves the souls in moonlight.
Peering through the window
That our hearts use frequently,
Wondering and wishing
For all that could be.

Like mist I wander through,
Looking for my home.
Looking for the one person
Who will not let me be alone.
I have found many
Who have tried to hold my treasure
But alas they are not the ones
They could never measure.

I look to the path ahead
And wonder what I may find.
Will it hold my destiny?
Will I see my time?
I want to know where I go,
But I remember where I have been.
I start to make my plans,
And reminisce every now and then.

Hear the moon as she sings her midnight song.
As the night now comes to an end.
As maybe soon someone will come
Along to help my heart mend.
The stars are my guidelines,
The Moon, my way back.
I will wander on the wind
And hope I never lack.

I will find my home one day
Be it near or far.
As long as that home is true and is my shining star.
I will travel any distance
Be it sun or rain.
Until I find my home
And become whole again.
Post Merged: September 12, 2010, 02:26:16 PM
Whoa I was moved. O.o lolz
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Phoenix004 on September 12, 2010, 06:25:33 PM
Yeah sorry I moved you, just made more sense in this section, hope you don't mind.

I'm not really that into poetry and rarely ever write it myself, but your work is very good.
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on September 12, 2010, 06:43:37 PM
I don't mind. If I put somplace and ir belongs somewhere else its fine. Sometimes I have a reason but I didn't this time. Yeah I just didn't know I had no heads up is all. And thank you very much.
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Phoenix004 on September 12, 2010, 07:10:37 PM
No problem. Like I said I don't read that much poetry, but I'll try to comment if you post more.
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on September 12, 2010, 07:26:50 PM
Ill try to at least have one a week depends on urgency and my free time.
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Darth Revan on September 13, 2010, 12:47:38 AM
That was an awesome poem. Very visual, but also your meaning well spoken. Great work. +1
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on September 13, 2010, 12:48:43 AM
Thanks, love. ^_^
Post Merged: September 13, 2010, 04:13:16 PM
A Summer’s Daydream
Warm golden sunshine washes over my face.
Crisp cool breeze blows my hair.
The beautifully colored flowers cover the place.
With a large tree here and there.

There is a soft stream with fish swimming by.
And butterflies and bees in the air.
A bird is startled and takes to the sky.
And a deer's tail perks to show he is aware.

The song of summer is high on the meadow.
The honey thick feeling of light.
The sun shines over and leaves no shadow.
With warmth that's large and bright.

I hear the sounds of summer cleanly in my mind.
As the birds twitter their songs.
I think happily and wish to leave the dark behind.
So I may live happily and long.
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Darth Revan on September 14, 2010, 12:46:34 AM
Very cool. But why would you want to leave the dark? Dark is good, dark is cool. :)
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on September 14, 2010, 07:25:57 AM
Lol I love the dark I just wrote it when I had a good day. I have darker work.
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: HiImshort on September 14, 2010, 11:07:55 AM
Wow! Just read both of them and they are nice. Bravo!!
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on September 14, 2010, 11:13:10 AM
Lol thanks! I said I have darker work and I do. I just did this poem/story bit and will just say now I had no thoughts whatsoever of the Devil wheni wrote it.......

Will post it shortly
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: HiImshort on September 14, 2010, 11:45:41 AM
Oh ok. Sounds um.....dark.......*waits*
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on September 14, 2010, 12:23:08 PM
Okay here it is...........Again I repeat it had nothing to ddo with the devil...I was thinking of that stupid skeleton king from the cartoon the black coldron....but the story came out different. It was one of those that beat at me until I wrote it down...anyway here it is...
 and yes it is long...


THE HORNED ONE

Frogs sing and crickets chirp
Snakes flash along the dirt
Bats hang from up above
Demons gamble, push, and shove
The Horned One watches o’er his land
With his mighty magick hand
Red eyes glaring, don’t look back
Or soon you’ll hear the whip crack
Speak not to him, Listen well
Many tried, many fell
Shadows crossing, spirits led
Many now all lay dead
He is mighty, not alone
His Queen is there beside the throne
Together they rule happily
With their mighty sorcery
Never crossed, this is no lie
Don’t even think it, never try
Clouds of black, moon of red
Blood is thick, tears are shed
Lucks run out pay the price
Dungeons made of painful ice
Lava runs thick with heat
All your running, now you’re beat
He never loses only wins
Stick you with a thousand pins
Laughing loudly and so dark
No more angels they can hark
I have warned you, this is true
Make sure you listen, follow through
Should you not heed what I’ve said
You would surely end up dead
Anger him or his Goddess
And your life will be a mess
Clouds of black, moon of red
No more now can be said
The Horned One watches o’er his land
The midnight hour is close at hand
He is mighty, not alone
He will have you bone by bone
Heed my warnings, listen well
All these stories do not tell
Go now and live free
Or cursed forever you will be
I his guardian loyal and dark
Have fallen prey to his dark heart
I’m his worker, friend, and love
I am here he is above
Summer heat, starlit nights
Climbing to the highest heights
Sharing thoughts, feelings, dreams
My life is here it seems
With my Dark Prince, I can’t go wrong
I know that our bond is strong
Again my warning isn’t clear
For the fact that you’re still here
Go! Leave! Away with you!
Vanish, quickly! Begone! Shoo!
Thunder rumbles, lightening strike
It seems too late for you this night
He knows you’re here it is too late
You shall now face your fate
I cannot save you, you will fall
One of many, that is all
As the blade comes rushing down
Your blood spills to the ground
Should not have crossed him, I warned you
He can see clear and through
You meant him harm that is not wise
He will not listen to your lies
I will not speak, you gave no heed
I shall sit whilst you bleed
Cry no more it will not stop
Unless you decide to drop
Join us and you shall be free
The choice was the same for me
Now I rule by his side
And I flow with the moon’s tide
Now I leave you to your choice
Choose well for you may lose your voice.
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: HiImshort on September 14, 2010, 12:33:35 PM
If you didn't say anything I would have thought that was about the devil. It's nice anyways. +1
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on September 14, 2010, 12:36:13 PM
Thanks. Yeah it was beating at me so I wrote it and then I read it twice and mom brough it up.....never once thought about the devil either....O.@
Post Merged: September 14, 2010, 12:39:50 PM
The wind flies high
The sun shines down
The birds all fly
Singing their sounds
Freedom is close
Yet I cannot grasp
I live how I chose
My seal is clasped
I live my choice
Day by day
I let my voice
Light my way
Friends together
Family ties
Honesty forever
Never lies
Stars shine bright
Moon cast glow
All my might
All I show
Live today
Rest the next
Careful way
Do not Hex
Three fold law
Easy spell
Raven’s caw
Water’s well
Shadows cover
Good and bad
Friend and lover
Wish I had
Baby’s laugh
Mother’s word
All by Half
The best I’ve heard
Patience Chosen
Silent words
Pain is frozen
Never heard
Angels’ wings
Softened heat
Fairy sings
Merry meet.
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: HiImshort on September 14, 2010, 01:11:40 PM
Wow. I wish i could write poetry like this. Nice work yet again.
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on September 14, 2010, 01:21:45 PM
Aww thanks.....and not all of my poetry is good....eesh when I was younger it sucked...
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Darth Revan on September 15, 2010, 12:00:35 AM
That last one was cool, It sounds even better when read to the music of Metallica's "Sad but true".

The Horned One totally sounds like The Devil. Even though it wasn't meant to be, it'd be cool if it were. Though the character you based your poem on may have been based on The Devil. So who knows. Six degrees and all that. ;D
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on September 15, 2010, 12:51:19 AM
Thanks love. Yeah I was thinking....idk I guess story wise and I kept going. I was on microsoft word and at a 12 point font I had almost 2 full pages and had to make myself stop...
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Darth Revan on September 15, 2010, 01:36:45 AM
Yeah, there's a point near the end where you can tell the phrases got away from you. :)
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on September 15, 2010, 01:42:17 AM
^///^ what can I say? I like to write. Lol
Post Merged: October 15, 2010, 12:45:46 AM
Winds blow softly
Summer Breeze
Crisp clean air
Within the trees
Moonlight glows
Upon my home
I know now
I'm not alone
She cares for me
Loves like no other
Some would say
She was my mother
in a way
This is true
With the darkened sky
Of Purple and Blue
She is my watcher
Soft yet Strong
Keeping my heart
And my life strong
I will return
Upon the moonlight
And soon I, too
Will become like the night.
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Darth Revan on October 22, 2010, 12:31:44 AM
That's cool. Odd, but cool visuals.
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on October 22, 2010, 12:35:32 AM
Thanks love. Since autumn is here I get more colorful. Gunna paint a fall scene somwtime as soon as I get canvas.
Post Merged: November 04, 2010, 01:11:37 PM
I would never do it, I'm not you...
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I would never tell my only daughter that I could not wait until her graduation and 18th birthday to kick her out of the house.
I would never smack and tell my own son that he can't do anything because he is too stupid to do so.
I would never go around saying "I hate kids" in a sing song voice.
I would never do it, I'm not you.

I would never go around when my family said "I love you," and give the response "I love ME, too."
I would never hurt someone and then tell them to suck it up.
I would never claim that I am always right and never wrong.
I would never do it, I'm not you.

I would never blame my spouse on things that may be wrong with my children.
I would never get on to someone and say we had plans to do something fun together then decide not to do it just to make them feel worse about getting into trouble and call it punishment.
I would never leave my son outside at 11:00 at night, locked out of the house, for my spouse to let back in after I have gone to bed.

I would never do it.

Thank Goddess, I'm not you.

 
 
((Got into a fight with dad again....))
Post Merged: November 04, 2010, 01:16:06 PM
Skin like ice
Voice like a winter song
Eyes that pierce the Darknees
Colors vivid and dark
Teeth sharp and long
Wit is cunning
Incredibly strong and fast
Beautiful beyond compare
Willing to be there
A thirst like no other
She is a woman of the Night
Love her like no other.
Post Merged: January 26, 2011, 05:56:02 PM
Ack!!!!!!!!!!!!
Its been too long since I had a decent poem!
Post Merged: March 09, 2011, 03:24:59 AM
Where have my poems gone? Its been too long.....
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: RAFrukh on March 18, 2011, 11:03:42 AM
Late post: Very nice work! I'm not really good with rhymes. The only thing I've ever written was an Our House parody about Sloppy Joes. XD. I'm more of a novelist myself, although I've never finished one in my life.

But again, great job! Hope you get inspired soon again! :D
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on March 18, 2011, 12:11:25 PM
Thank you. I was starting to think this forum was doomed to dust on time. I'll have another eventually. I just need the right dream is all. ^_^


Colors bright against the green
And so lives another Spring
Warm summer air with its gentle song
And, oh, how the days are long
I wander off through the trees
Are you there? Do you see me?
Gold with brown greens and blues
Eyes with shifting fusing hues
Voice that giggles laughs and plays
Heart that is big in everyway
Dancing running singing out
How the spring and summer make me shout
Share my wonders speak to me
Tell me what your eyes now see
Feel the sun hear the song
Know with me it will last long
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: RAFrukh on March 24, 2011, 09:13:33 AM
Very nice!

Would've replied earlier, but my email isn't notifying me anymore...  >:(
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on March 24, 2011, 09:19:04 AM
Sorry about the e-mail thing.

I night be starting to get my flow back again, but I'm not gunna push it incase I lose it again.
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: RAFrukh on March 24, 2011, 09:38:51 AM
Take your time, it's worth the wait.  :)
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: Midnight_Huntress on March 25, 2011, 10:51:53 AM
Thanks. This next one I don't remember writing at all but its in my notebook in my hand writing.


Broken spirit
Angel's wing
Lost love
Painful sting
Searching soul
Wandering part
Beating drum
Wounded heart
Reconnection
Forever vow
Needed push
Starting now
Dearest friend
Hurting past
Needed love
Forever last

Heart pounding
Stomach tight
Eyes bright
Beasting sight
Soothing wind
Angel's song
Feeling wild
Lasting long
Lost and found
Def and blind
Promise made
Not left behind
Title: Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
Post by: RAFrukh on March 25, 2011, 12:12:21 PM
Very nice!