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General Category => General Fan Fiction & Art => Topic started by: Toominator Z on August 04, 2010, 07:04:33 AM

Title: Original Song: "Too Long"
Post by: Toominator Z on August 04, 2010, 07:04:33 AM

Update
New link doesn't require download. Keeping up the download link in case anyone wants it. And thanks, Esty.

http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/proddetail.php?prod=56993-2-672

Collaboration by two of my crew members and myself. Lethal made the beat and the first verse, I'm on the second verse, Doc T on the last. Feedback is appreciated.

http://www.sendspace.com/file/ierqwd

Title: Re: Original Song: "Too Long"
Post by: Estelore on August 04, 2010, 12:16:33 PM

Feedback:

1. This is fexcellent. *high fives*
2. Lethal can afford to add a little gentle bassline without messing up the feel overall.
3. Cut back on some of the echo, and it will be easier to enjoy as a whole.
4. Toomin, enunciate a bit more sharply, please. There were a few tiny moments that were hard to understand. Your timing is perfect, however.
5. The other way around for Doc T; fix the timing, but great clarity for each word.
6. The laugh at the end made me giggle. :) I like it.


There y'go. :D!