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Title: THE INSPECTOR'S REPORT ON THE EARTH INVASION
Post by: Gafrash on February 09, 2009, 09:09:50 AM
Hey, y'lot!
I created this 'manifesto' I imagined the Inspector would have documented and made ready to report to the Council of Thirteen before he met his end in book #37: The Weakness.

Let's discuss anything you guys think should or shouldn't be there.
Also if you guys can think of better way to write any of the statements, like, giving a proper voice to the Garatron-Controller, don't hesitate to fix me up.

The idea is to re-use a thorough version of this in future.

Cheers!
Title: Re: THE INSPECTOR'S REPORT ON THE EARTH INVASION
Post by: Gafrash on February 09, 2009, 09:26:14 AM
I have uncovered a Helmacron incident in which the Visser failed to take possession of an Escafil Blue Cube device; the technology that grants the our rivals the morphing power. Visser Three, supposedly, had a run in with the Helmacron nuisances who uncovered the device for themselves and failed to obtain it.
Visser Three is pursuing investments on a Helmacron trader, as we speak, in order to possess the Helmacron sensors, in an experiment to find the Blue Cube on Earth himself.


Also valid to note, an alarming discovery made by the human-Controllers under Visser Three. Various Controllers have been known to endulge in a human-made drug. The adopted name is what the humans entitled it 'Instant Maple and Ginger Oatmeal'. Ingested, this substance boosts enzymes in our organisms that replace Kandrona nutrients but detrimentally causes psychological damage and a significant loss of host control. I was shown a significant confiscated amount of the drug.
 

I came across the knowledge that Visser Three's renegade lower-twin, Esplin-9466; whom we long ago banished and thought dead; has been uncovered as an active traitor to our cause, commiting cannibal crimes against our Earth-based brothers and sisters.
 

And I have also heard rumors Visser Three personally invested in vain on a plan to lure Elfangor's son in an attempt to disclose something about the Andalite Bandits. However, the information I got was that the son was a human, and that I took it for what it is, a rumor. Complete non sense, in my view.
 

The Visser comes up with ingeneous ways to decept any focus and attention onto his failures. But I have been here for short time and have seen enough evidence to support demotion to the Visser Three.

Further more, I would push for the removal of his host. Leave it for a more competent brother or sister in the Visser hyerarchy who is more fit to do the job.



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Title: Re: THE INSPECTOR'S REPORT ON THE EARTH INVASION
Post by: Gafrash on February 09, 2009, 09:28:08 AM
This is the best list I could come up with of the events that transpired in Animorphs before #37.

As you can see there's a few things that I imagined Visser Three would have managed to have kept under the carpet, such as the David fiasco, the Area 91, the incident with the prototype Bug-fighter etc...
 
Also, I believe, the feudal relationship between the Vissers would have been kept under the blanket by both parties. Much how every Yeek knows it's there, no one puts it on facts for consequential fears of their leaders.

Please don't hesitate to let us know what you guys think!
Title: Re: THE INSPECTOR'S REPORT ON THE EARTH INVASION
Post by: Nateosaurus on February 09, 2009, 09:33:24 AM
Haha, awesome job! I love it! :)

I think its great!
Title: Re: THE INSPECTOR'S REPORT ON THE EARTH INVASION
Post by: esplin on February 09, 2009, 03:18:53 PM
visser 3 still rules!
Title: Re: THE INSPECTOR'S REPORT ON THE EARTH INVASION
Post by: Hunter on February 09, 2009, 03:28:09 PM
it's cool, but i noticed a few little typos in it... when u spell bandits, you have it spelt bandtis

apart from that, i love it!
Title: Re: THE INSPECTOR'S REPORT ON THE EARTH INVASION
Post by: Chad32 on February 09, 2009, 03:36:10 PM
Yeah, and you put spaces in between the words too.  :P

It's nice. I like it.
Title: Re: THE INSPECTOR'S REPORT ON THE EARTH INVASION
Post by: Gafrash on February 09, 2009, 07:03:07 PM
Kinda figured it would affect readability.
We don't know how the Garatrons did any of their stuff, really. We know the Yeerks would communicate through highly-advanced means, so I was picturing this would have been read to an audience of the Council of Thirteen.

Ooooooooooooooooops on the bad spelling. ;D
Title: Re: THE INSPECTOR'S REPORT ON THE EARTH INVASION
Post by: Chad32 on February 11, 2009, 10:15:52 AM
Yeah, I wouldn't really expect you to make one big incomprehensible block of text.

Title: Re: THE INSPECTOR'S REPORT ON THE EARTH INVASION
Post by: Gumby on February 15, 2009, 07:01:22 PM
I love this, very detailed, how long did you work on this?