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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #225 on: December 11, 2008, 09:59:24 PM »
Wow, this whole idea just takes epic to a new level.  To be completely honest, being new, I'm a little hesitant to add comment.  Still, if I never post I don't get anywhere.  Gafrash has some amazing art, and when it comes to a visual novel, or comic, or graphic novel, etc, that is what is showcased.  The story can't take a backseat either, and the animorphs is an epic story.  But we're led to a problem.  The animorphs is rather wordy, lot's of talking, lots of thought processes.  Since the book is from first person it's harder to dwell into what the others are thinking.  To combat this, we(meaning the people doing this) will be forced to edit the text.  when they go over plans, we can just cut to an overhead or something because the readers will see the plan in action.   Other, more relationship based text can just be shown, though with restraint.  It was a long, long time before Jake and Cassie kissed in the books.  But I digress.  During some of the required dialogue, we could use more posed or stills to show off more of the artist talent.  So that the reader doesn't feel cheated with a lot of text.  Moving along to another issue, the webcomic idea is smart, though it requires a lot more work, toward a structured schedule, then people complain when it's not met.  Drawing ahead doesn't guarentee that it will stay ahead.  So a lot will depend on how understanding the readers will be, as well as how much extra time the artist, and writer, have to work on this.  As for a book, maybe do what EGS did, and when a comic set is finished (book 1, book 2, etc) seing if it is possible to publish the comic versions. I've talked to much, but I hope I helped.   Good luck.
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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #226 on: December 12, 2008, 03:26:42 PM »
I really wish I could help with this, I'm not a good writer really, or a great artist :\

But the art I've seen looks great and if there is anything I can do to help let me know.

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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #227 on: December 21, 2008, 06:50:59 PM »
I'm going to go ahead and write part of The Invasion if no one else will. For the record this is going to just be a demo so its not like this is permanent.
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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #228 on: December 22, 2008, 11:24:55 PM »
sounds great, you really should.

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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #229 on: December 23, 2008, 10:05:55 PM »
yeah im looking forward to seeing it
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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #230 on: December 24, 2008, 01:50:15 AM »
Yeah, I am as well...Good luck getting it all done, I can't wait  :)

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« Reply #231 on: December 24, 2008, 02:29:15 PM »
Let me know if u need any advertisements for it I'd be happy to help out with that
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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #232 on: December 31, 2008, 03:25:48 PM »
http://community.livejournal.com/animorphs/440943.html

There's another graphic novel project in the works. :O

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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #233 on: December 31, 2008, 04:07:20 PM »
I don't like that person's drawings. Jake is good, but Tobias is drawn as a twin of Jake - seriously, if they were at the same angle I wouldn't be able to tell them apart, and Marco just looks stupid.

No offense to the person doing the project, but I just don't like those drawings beyond Jake.

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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #234 on: December 31, 2008, 07:24:10 PM »
I like Jake here, but Tobias doesn't seem enough thin (I imagine him quite slim and eyes, full of dreams, looking at the sky). I also don't like Marco ^^'
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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #235 on: December 31, 2008, 10:02:36 PM »
Forget about other projects. I have a draft for The Invasion coming along.
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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #236 on: January 01, 2009, 07:08:37 PM »
Here is some progress with the script for the graphic novel. It hasn't gotten far, but I'm working on it.

The Invasion

Frame 1: Show bloody carnage in a war scene. Suggestions include looking at The Triumph of Death
Box narration: May 25 1996

Frame 2: Big red letters “GAME OVER”

Frame 3: Looking from the carnage outward from inside a screen. Jake and Marco. Marco is looking at Jake with a look of both annoyance and pity for his bad gaming skills. Jake seems mildly put off but otherwise doesn’t mind.
Marco: “We’ll Jake, that’s it. End of the world and its all your fault.”
Jake: “Shut up Marco. Its just a game”

Frame 4: Walking out of arcade to into the mall
Marco: “Just a game!? Jake, thousands of innocent pixels were slaughtered because you can’t take my advice.”
Jake: “Marco you take gaming way to seriously.”

Frame 5: Exiting the Mall
Marco: “Okay, if games are so unimportant then why on Earth do you care about not making The Basketball team?”
Jake: That’s different. Tom was a legend on the team. It’s a legacy thing

Frame 6: They are in the parking lot. Cue Tobias in distant background.
Marco: Legacy my as…
Tobias cuts him off: Hey Jake! Wait up

Frame 7: Jake and Marco’s backs seen facing Tobias.
Jake: Hey… Tobias… What’ up
Tobias: I saw you guys and thought we could go home together.

Frame 8: Close up of Tobias’ face, sad pity look. Eyes downward.
Tobias: Plus I never got to thank you about 2 days ago.

Frame 9: Marco to Jake
Marco What happened 2 days ago

Frame 10: Grabbing Tobias in bathroom

Frame 11: Bullies holding Tobias upside down over toilet. Consider to have toilet look disgusting

Frame 12: Jake enters the bathroom and looks at the bullies as if they are lower life forms.
Jake: Stop it

Frame 13: Back in the present.
Jake: It was nothing (Jake says it in a way as to answer Marco and Tobias at the same time)

Frame 14:
Tobias: So you want to head out?
Jake: Well…

Frame 15: Jake spots Rachel and Cassie in the distance
Jake: Hey Rachel Cassie!

Frame 16: Cassie and Rachel up close. Cassie is squinting with her hand over her forehead as to see who is calling them. Rachel looks a little nervous but still has her Xena ****iness about her. This is most likely do to her recognition of Tobias.
Cassie: Rachel I think that’s Jake and Marco, but who’s the third kid?
Rachel: Marco’s with him, well that kills my perfect night shopping.  Oh…I’ve seen the other kid around. I think his name’s Tobias, but I’m probably wrong though, I barely know him.

Frame 17: The two groups meet up, we come in a few seconds into the conversation
Jake: …So this is Tobias
Cassie: Is shooting Rachel an incredulous look as if to say “Yea, like you didn’t know his name”
Rachel: Hi

Frame 18: Conversation continued
Marco: (Trying his macho man act on Rachel) So you girls aren’t heading home through the construction site are you?
Rachel: We weren’t planning on it, but if think you need an escort Marco…
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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #237 on: January 01, 2009, 10:02:22 PM »
Hey everyone, firstly, a HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL OF YOU!!! I know I don't know any of you personally, but I know there are human beings behind these posts and that you all have hopes, like me, that 09 will be a prosperous year. May we all achieve what we want to achieve this year!!!
 
I've been enjoying my holidays, been beaching it every chance I get, and drawing a bit on the sides still. Some more character-related stuff. For now I'll post my stuff on me Photobucket when I get a chance on the following days.

WOLFEV, THAT'S REAL GREAT STUFF YOU MADE THERE!! Two thumbs up mate!
You are really creative with your dialogues and that scene is just as I pictured Jake and Marco to be talking. I would LOVE to have a go at DRAWING IT!
I tried something similar when I came across that scene, and you did a lot more justice to their character-voices. I really love it!
Where abouts did you get up to in your script?!
I must confess here, that because I have not seen any scripts, I took it upon myself to somewhat make me a script for book 1, too.
And now I understand why it can be hard and overwhelming to actually come up with something. As some of you will find, there's quite a lot to determine and write when you actually sit down and do it. As it is, I've got more than 40 pgs up to the part where Elfangor dies!!
Perhaps I can send it to ya and we can bounce back ideas?! Let us know.
PS: There is the 'slight' problem that file is on my computer back in Melbourne. And I am in holidays in Perth! Nghaaaaaaaaaaarrrrr rgh!!!!!


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There's another graphic novel project in the works. :O
Mirienne, I'd like to jump platforms and post on that Forum for that artist. Or maybe via Deviant Art. If anyone here finds that double-crossing with the Forum... I knew we wouldn't be the only ones, but I didn't even know there were other Forums that were doing this!
Do you think I am wrong to think of a combined effort?!

I think we should encourage die-hard fans to do more stuff like this. If we are all still thinking and dreaming Animorphs, DECADES AFTER IT FINISHED, we should DO SOMETHING!!! A Graphic Novel is just ONE way to keep Animorphs alive!!

I don't like that person's drawings. Jake is good, but Tobias is drawn as a twin of Jake - seriously, if they were at the same angle I wouldn't be able to tell them apart, and Marco just looks stupid.

No offense to the person doing the project, but I just don't like those drawings beyond Jake.
Desperado Newfie, unless one has a methodical style, it's REALLY hard for one to keep consistency in the drawings of characters. Things like hairstyles and skin colour, EVERYTHNG is like codes, which readers, as you showed, look for in identifying a character and etc... they need to be established at the early stages and it's a long-pace before drawing the comic stage. I can relate to this particular stage taking TOO LONG to make and SOMETIMES, you just want to draw the comic and see what you get. But, like Acre Lorraine stated up there, these details and the story itself can't be ignored if you want to have a memmorable product.

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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #238 on: January 02, 2009, 12:08:17 AM »
Send me your info. We'll bounce ideas and this will be fraking perfect
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Re: Animorphs:The Graphic Novel
« Reply #239 on: January 02, 2009, 07:13:37 AM »
Wolfev, I also really like what you wrote ^^
Please, Gafrash, do it!!
And I agree, it's very very hard to imagine what you'll write and draw. I'm drawing another manga but I'm on the same page for many times now ^^' I don't know exactly what I'll draw after, and I need more time to think about the characters' bodies (they're aliens). And I always think "Oh! It's way to long for 1 or 2 chapters! My manga club will have only the beginning of the beginning of the story!"... So I understand your problem, Gafrash... Good luck! Be brave, you can do it! You're far better than me and you draw more quickly too. Think about all the people who are waiting for your webcomic ^^ it'll give you courage ;)
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