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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2460 on: July 30, 2013, 04:48:01 PM »
Yep, but unnamed, I think. If he was and it was a different name, let's just call it a CFRSU -- CloakedFigure Royal Screw-Up. ;)


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2461 on: July 30, 2013, 04:57:12 PM »
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2462 on: July 30, 2013, 06:13:49 PM »
Lol, that was excellent!  "Aunt Estelore," that's awesome.  :XD:

Powerful lesson, too.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2463 on: July 30, 2013, 07:15:49 PM »
Too right.

But I think I'm tapped out for tonight.

*stretches and yawns.*


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2464 on: July 30, 2013, 07:30:42 PM »
You did good today. How many...? Three? Chapters. That's awesome!!
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2465 on: July 31, 2013, 08:13:20 AM »
New day, still off.

May be brief.

CHAPTER SIXTEEN:
Yorick and Aloth's Bogus Non-Venture*

Yorick and Aloth were flung into a cell, still unconscious. They stayed sedated much longer than the RAFians as the sedative was more effective apparently.

But eventually they revived, confused and puzzled from their surroundings. They were in one of the nicer cells, but it was crystal clear that they were imprisoned, even to their semisomnolent minds.

"Wh-what happened?" Aloth asked.

"We royally peeved her off, that's what happened," Yorick said, moodily mutinous. "We failed, so she threw us in the pokey."

"It's the nice cell, though," Aloth pointed out. "She must care. Some. A little."

It was true. Queen was not nearly as quick to throw away allies as Malice was. Then again, Queen was several centuries younger than Malice.

There was a loud click, the sound of iron bars withdrawing, and Queen strolled into the cell without a backward glance.

"This was a fruitless endeavor from the beginning," she said without preamble. "The wishing star was a cruel, vicious hoax by a brat star kid."

Then she looked at the two with an indifferent air, disguising and concealing the fact that she had, in actuality, come to marginally care for the two. Though she would vehemently deny this if called on it. Yorick and Aloth got this, but allowed her to be as pompous as she desired, albeit rather grudgingly on Yorick's end, and they knew she liked being in charge.

"We pull out now," she said. "We will return to the Bannedlands. And plan for tomorrow."

"Why?" Aloth asked. "What are we going to do tomorrow?"

"The same thing we do every day, Aloth," she said, rather melodramatically, "try to take over RAF!"

A beat passed.

"And then what?" Yorick asked, arms folded.

"Never mind that now," she said dismissively. "Let's go."

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*Referencing "Bill and Ted's Bogus Adventure"


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Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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RAFians Referenced Specifically: Demos.

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2466 on: July 31, 2013, 08:30:00 AM »
Haha, I liked the schtick in the end. :D

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2467 on: July 31, 2013, 10:19:12 AM »
Yeah, it just seemed to fit.

I also wanted to differentiate Queen from Malice, making her different than a less effectual Malice clone -- Queen can be unpleasant and a nuisance, but she's more like Jessie of Team Rocket, threatening but, in the end, ineffectual in her maliciousness. She may try to act big and heartless, but she really isn't.

Whereas Malice is genuinely evil and disturbed, only malicious doing things for her entertainment. I don't know if this coming across.

Anyway, two more chapters to lay down. The next book will be a Parker-heavy one, I believe.

CHAPTER SEVENTEEN:
Estelore's Burden

"Aunt Estelore?" Saffa said.

"Aunt Estelore? Are you serious?" Dino said.

"You never told us you had a nephew," Gaz said. Then she looked perplexed. "How does the star family tree work though?"

Estelore looked weary and worn. "It's not like your concept of aunts and uncles. Within a single galaxy, all stars -- despite being sentient or not -- are considered to be interrelated. True sentience in stars are rare. You'd have an easier time creating an all-shiny Pokemon team -- without cheating or events or the like."

"It's quite rare, we get it," Underseen said.

"Anyway, Freddie is the only other one of my kind that I had ever met."

He smiled cheekily at this.

"And he's a complete spoiled brat."

"Hey!"

"It is true, and you know it." Estelore said, very sternly. "Just because you can do something doesn't mean you should."

"Sixty-eight thousand, nine hundred." Freddie replied, flippantly. This wasn't a random number, it was an actual one.

"And that was in this century alone, Freddie," Esty snarled. "I'm getting tired of always having to clean up your messes. If you don't knock it off --"

"Cleaning up his messes? What do you mean by that, Esty?" Abby asked.

But Cloak's eyes widened as he understood immediately, having a mischievous neice of his own. "That's why you have been gone from RAF for those long stretches of time. When you told us you were exploring the galaxy."

Estelore stood up straighter, shut her eyes and took a deep breath. "Yes."

"What a burden to bear," Alic said, "alone."

"You ruin my fun!" Freddie whined.

"Your fun is malicious." Estelore snarled quietly. It was clear she was still more powerful than Freddie, but unlike Cloak and Shadow, it was not because of the age differential.

"It was just harmless fun!"

"Hey, when you're hurting people, that ain't harmless." Estelore said, wagging a disapproving finger at him. "What right have you to get people's hopes up and dash them after the first one touches your steller energy dome?"

"I'm not hurting anyone!"

"Giving false hope is hurting someone, boy." Estelore said, coolly. "Especially if that person has a terminal disease or the like that they're hoping to cure."

Now Cloak was starting to understand such a desire for wish-granting, that it was more than simple avarice in some cases.

"Yeah, now I'll never be able to morph again! Stupid tylee metal . . ." Abby complained.

"Shouldn't that reaction have ebbed by now?" Cloak asked, surprised.

"Say what?"


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Chapter 4: "First Attempt"
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2468 on: July 31, 2013, 10:35:21 AM »
Yeah, it, is; I saw the list. Saved a copy of it in Notepad. ;D

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2469 on: July 31, 2013, 11:28:24 AM »
You're probably gonna finish the book today, huh Cloak?
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2470 on: July 31, 2013, 12:21:40 PM »
Uh, no "probably" about it. I will finish this book today.

Here's the last chapter (yeah, I probably could stretch it out for another two chapters, but it would be boring).

CHAPTER EIGHTEEN:
Go the Distance

Abby was elated that her morphing wasn't gone forever. She would eventually grow out of the allergy as well, but that's a tale for a different time. The RAFians sojourned back to the forum sedately, as Estelore, resignedly, had to go chasing after Freddie again in the cosmos.

But yet, Cloak found himself remembering how he came to RAF. . . .

***

Desperate for interaction, he snuck away from his mother's house while she was away. He was tired of being a shut-in, much less a shut-in against his will.

He thought in song:

I have often dreamed of a far-off place
With a great, warm welcome will be waiting for me.
The crowds will cheer when they see my face.
And a voice keeps sayin',
"This is where I'm meant to be."

I will find my way.
I can go the distance.
I'll be there some day,
If I can be strong.
I know every mile
Will be worth my while.
I will go almost anywhere
To feel like I . . . belong.

Cloak travelled to the Prime Universe, searching for a place. A place where he could be free to be himself.

I am on my way.
I can go the distance.
I don't care how far,
Somehow, I'll be strong.
I know every mile
Will be worth my while.
I will go almost anywhere
To find where I belong!

Then he found RAF, having Estelore actually giving him the name "Cloak". His true Realm Walker name was unknown by his fellow RAFians as he prefered the name Estelore had given him in her offhand, flippant manner.

***

Cloak blinked.

Now that he thought of it, he wasn't sure if that was a true memory or some romanticised fantasy his subconscious fabricated.
« Last Edit: October 27, 2014, 06:50:48 PM by CloakedFigure »


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2471 on: July 31, 2013, 12:29:09 PM »
And, hoping my Internet doesn't give in at the last minute, here's the usual:

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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2472 on: July 31, 2013, 12:41:21 PM »
Yay! PDF time!!
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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2473 on: July 31, 2013, 01:09:10 PM »
Right.

As for Book 45, I might start it today, but, uh, it won't be for a while.


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Re: Memoirs of a RAFian
« Reply #2474 on: July 31, 2013, 01:18:11 PM »
Take your time. :)