Hello and welcome to the GESB.
We don't use character sheets per se. Generally a newcomer to the bar begins with an intro post about his/her arrival on the GESB planetoid, all in character. The physical description and visible attributes are generally described upon entering the bar proper, again all in character. Basically you would describe how your character would look to somone who glances at him as he walks through the door. The other attributes of your character including personality, history, etc, should simply come out through the course of conversations, casual or otherwise, with other bar patrons. We write in a third-person narrative style, some of us write in present-tense, some in past-tense. Honestly your tense doesn't matter that much as long as you don't switch back and forth between the two, but
everyone writes in third-person regardless of tense. You may also wish to remove or write over the character sheet you posted on the IC thread as we ask that all OOC content (except that which is absolutely necessary for the IC thread itself) is kept in the OOC thread. The IC thread is meant only for character actions and interactions. For example, if you removed the ref-sheet and modified your intro post to contain a description of your character's visible physical attributes as he walked through the saloon-style swinging doors, that would be spot on.
I would also strongly recommend you read the first posts on both this OOC thread and the IC thread as they contain our rules and helpful examples to describe what they mean. The current thread mods include myself, Myitt, Terenia, Kitsunemarie, and Shenmue, though Shen has been absent of late and a couple of the others have been very busy with RL stuff. If you have any questions or concerns regarding the GESB, you can direct them to any of us and we'll get back to you when we're able. You would probably receive the quickest response from either myself or Terenia if you do have questions. Of course you can also post questions on the OOC thread here and most anyone will try to help you out. Parker and Chad have been around long enough to know the ropes as well.
Other than that, have fun and enjoy your time at the GESB. We'll try to be nice.