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Title: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Terenia on March 10, 2010, 09:16:03 PM
Summary
Things were already really weird. Fighting aliens. Battling to save Earth. And still trying to be normal. Marco, the other Animorphs, and Ax are almost used to it. Almost. But things are changing. The Yeerk invasion of Earth started out passively. Secretly. But now, everything seems to be stepped up. Even Marco's father is talking about some top secret project at his job. Something about developing Zero-space... Marco doesn't even know whether his father is a Controller. But he does know he's not going to let the Yeerks win this one. They've already got his mother. And Marco will do anything it takes to save his father. Anything...

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Questions
1) This is obviously a major turning point in the series. Do you think that the ‘reveal’ of the Animorphs to Marco’s dad was handled appropriately?

2) Do you think that Marco’s dad’s reaction was a pretty accurate representation of what would actually happen? How would YOUR dad react if you told him you had spent the last three years fighting brain-stealing slugs?

3) What do you think would have happened if the Yeerks attempted to capture Marco and his dad rather than kill them? How would the Chee had reacted? What would have been the long-term affects?

4) This is the book where Visser One is finally destroyed and Eva, Marco’s mom, goes free. Do you think that this mission was handled well?

5) What do you think about the reunion between Marco’s parents?

6) Marco notes that it is possible that Nora was never actually in love with his dad, but was actually a Yeerk plant all along. Do you think this is a viable suggestion, or is he just grasping at straws? Do you think Nora was a Controller all along?

7) The book ended on kind of an odd note. After the Animorphs finally contact the Andalites there is a page break followed by the following words, in bold: "We do know who they are... and we know you, too... What do you think the meaning of this was?

8 )Anything else?

Next Week: #46 The Deception
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: AniDragon on March 10, 2010, 09:33:50 PM
Oh, man, I love this book! One of my favourites!

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1) This is obviously a major turning point in the series. Do you think that the ‘reveal’ of the Animorphs to Marco’s dad was handled appropriately?

I think this is one of the ones that was handled the best, actually, compared to the other characters.

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2) Do you think that Marco’s dad’s reaction was a pretty accurate representation of what would actually happen? How would YOUR dad react if you told him you had spent the last three years fighting brain-stealing slugs?

Very much so, and actually probably pretty close to how my own dad would have reacted.

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3) What do you think would have happened if the Yeerks attempted to capture Marco and his dad rather than kill them? How would the Chee had reacted? What would have been the long-term affects?

If they tried to infest them on the spot, then it clearly wouldn't have worked since the Chee don't have ear cannals. However, if they'd brought them to the Yeerk pool, then they might have been able to pull off something like what Erek did, pretending to be a controller, and trapping the Yeerk.

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4) This is the book where Visser One is finally destroyed and Eva, Marco’s mom, goes free. Do you think that this mission was handled well?

I think the mission was handled well. I think the execution setup was handled pretty poorly, though. Hmm, tie up the host on a platform above the Yeerk pool while starving out the Yeerk... What do you do if the Yeerk leaves the host and makes a mad dash for the pool water? It seemed like the platform she was standing on wasn't very big, the Yeerk would have probably plopped right into the pool had it tried to escape. Not a very smart setup. Probably my only beef with this book.

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5) What do you think about the reunion between Marco’s parents?

Heartwarming and made me glee. ^_^.

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6) Marco notes that it is possible that Nora was never actually in love with his dad, but was actually a Yeerk plant all along. Do you think this is a viable suggestion, or is he just grasping at straws? Do you think Nora was a Controller all along?

I don't think Marco believed it one bit, but was just saying it to try and lessen the blow on his dad. And actually... Didn't the Animorphs watch her for three days before the wedding, just to make sure? I can't remember that The Proposal that well...

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7) Anything else?
Just... Amazing book. I love it. :D
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: anijen21 on March 11, 2010, 12:55:07 AM
1) This is obviously a major turning point in the series. Do you think that the ‘reveal’ of the Animorphs to Marco’s dad was handled appropriately?
Okay, full disclosure: I didn't actually read the end of the series until this year. So my whole opinion is crusted with 10 years of resentment for how dumb I thought the late 30s-early 40s got, two years worth of laughing at spoilers that I heard, and a sprinkle of self-indulgent smugness.

All that said, I was sort of disappointed that the reveal wasn't more...integrated into the plot. I mean, making Marco's dad susceptible to infestation because of his work was definitely possible, and it does kind of branch off of that warning that Eva gave him years ago, like, "don't work for the military" or whatever, but idk it just felt so out-of-left-field. I just kind of wish it had been built up to rather than just "yep about that time," you know?

2) Do you think that Marco’s dad’s reaction was a pretty accurate representation of what would actually happen? How would YOUR dad react if you told him you had spent the last three years fighting brain-stealing slugs?
I actually think he took it too lightly, and idk I don't think it was a very...parental reaction:

"When I stopped talking, the first thing he said was that he had to call Nora." 38

"What do you mean you can't tell me? I'm your father. I tell you what to do." 42

tbh out of all the Animorphs, I think Cassie's parents had the most realistic reaction.

3) What do you think would have happened if the Yeerks attempted to capture Marco and his dad rather than kill them? How would the Chee had reacted? What would have been the long-term affects?
Interesting. I hadn't thought about that. The Chee probably would have incapacitated the Yeerks/freed the hosts, and either taken on the responsibility of masquerading as those Controllers or instruct the newly freed hosts to do it. Probably the former. It would be kind of dumb for them not to have four or five Chees around who aren't integrated into society. I mean, even when the Animorphs need Chee decoys--don't those Chee have other lives they're deliberately ignoring? Or are there a few un-hologramized Chee just hanging out in the park all day?

4) This is the book where Visser One is finally destroyed and Eva, Marco’s mom, goes free. Do you think that this mission was handled well?
Again, not really. I just think the pacing of this book is so weird. Like Marco tells his dad really fast, and then they spend like ten pages gaining enough velocity to enter the ocean which is literally the stupidest filler in the ENTIRE SERIES (wouldn't crashing into the ocean at a high velocity be MORE DAMAGING than entering at a low velocity? Did this ghostwriter never fall down before?), and then even Eva's rescue just feels...anticlimact ic, somehow. Visser One was such a well-developed character, I would have at least liked to hear her take on her death.

5) What do you think about the reunion between Marco’s parents?
Cute, but again, somehow underwhelming. And I'm kind of with powertrash that by this point in his life, Peter had actually gotten over Eva and loved Nora.

6) Marco notes that it is possible that Nora was never actually in love with his dad, but was actually a Yeerk plant all along. Do you think this is a viable suggestion, or is he just grasping at straws? Do you think Nora was a Controller all along?
Going again off powertrash's theory, this could very well be the coldest thing Marco ever does. If Peter really loved Nora and was willing to risk his life to say her, Marco making up this lie (it was a lie, come on) to diffuse his responsibility and essentially condemn Nora to lifelong infestation is just...really bad. And it makes you wonder what happened to her after the war. Nora and like, Loren are the two most poorly handled characters in terms of their fates.

7) The book ended on kind of an odd note. After the Animorphs finally contact the Andalites there is a page break followed by the following words, in bold: "We do know who they are... and we know you, too... What do you think the meaning of this was?
I don't know. Nothing really came of it. It was kind of stupid, but it was supposed to be *intense* or whatever to show how big the *stakes* were now. And if the Yeerks did know who they were, why did Jake wait till book 53 to give us his full name? Whatever I thought it was kind of cheap.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Vanish on March 11, 2010, 03:32:07 AM
Great book!

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1) I think it was handled ok, much better than the other characters but I still felt it could have been done better.


2) I thought it was pretty accurate, my father would have most likely acted the same way.


3) The chee might have pretended that he was infested, like how they had been thought of as controllers in the first place. I don't think it would have had too much of long-term effects, they could have had an idle chee continue the hologram of marco and his father and pretend to be a controller.

4) It was handled fine.


5) It was good, I liked(and hated!) how after she returned Marco's father said he had moved on. It definitely seemed realistic.

6) I don't think Nora was a controller all along. In an earlier book Marco's dad even talks about how they were fighting and at one point all of a sudden they were happy and never fought anymore.

7) That they are aware of the the Animorphs, probably mostly from book #19.

8 ) Great book! I had anticipated this for a long time as a child. Finally a parent knows about what was going on, Marco didn't have to lie to his father anymore and he got his mother back.

Marco is so dynamic and in my opinion the most 3 dimensional character in the book, I enjoy his books very much
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Gafrash on March 11, 2010, 07:05:44 AM
1) This is obviously a major turning point in the series. Do you think that the ‘reveal’ of the Animorphs to Marco’s dad was handled appropriately?
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Man, I think this whole book just didn't get the number of pages it deserved. Suspicions of ghostwriters aside, the plot was a very important one and got handled well enough, but I dunno why it felt like it was lacking a bit of detail.


2) Do you think that Marco’s dad’s reaction was a pretty accurate representation of what would actually happen? How would YOUR dad react if you told him you had spent the last three years fighting brain-stealing slugs?
I think it was a genuine father reacting to seeing his baby child turning into an anthropod or a crustacean (out of all the morphs, Marco HAD to pick the less pretty ones.
My father would have been abrupt, while at the same time curious, I think. He wouldn't have been AS disturbed as Marco's dad was. But I think my dad would have clicked on to the situation after that moment, possibly as fast as Peter did.


3) What do you think would have happened if the Yeerks attempted to capture Marco and his dad rather than kill them? How would the Chee had reacted? What would have been the long-term affects?
I don't think the Yeerks would have been interested in two human rebels at this stage, they'd rather terminate the problem. Plus, the Visser probably would have gotten off on telling the 'currently enprisioned' Visser, that her host had just 'lost' her relatives in a 'trajic accident', for added torture.

Also, a couple of re-reads back I stated that I would have liked to have seen the Chee get more involved, by throwing a hologram masking the Anis morphing or something, and, I now realize, that we kinda get it here.


4) This is the book where Visser One is finally destroyed and Eva, Marco’s mom, goes free. Do you think that this mission was handled well?
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It was a VERY edge-of-your-chair-tight moment, on my first read.  :thumbsup:
There was one bit I remember getting confused, because we were given the estimation that the pool was around 100 ft in diameter, but I always imagined it bigger since The Weakness(where he ran across the sludge!). In my mind, the piers were always at the edge of the pools. It's just a technicality, but I got a bit lost imagining Marco/gorilla and Rachel/grizzly leaping from the end of one pier to another.
Call me pedantic, but this could be attributed to a ghostwriter, as I got the same experience at a final scene in The Ultimate later on. I wonder if it was same ghostwriter.


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5) What do you think about the reunion between Marco’s parents?
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Again, I wasn't satisfied with the amount that was written. Things were so different on both Marco's father and mother, since Eva's 'abduction', it wasn't as simple as a running-down-the-hill-and-meeting-each-other-in-arms moment for me... NOT IN A BOOK THAT HAS ALWAYS BEEN ABOUT WAR, as the author herself always states. :thumbsdown:
It just left me with much to be desired.

...I was sort of disappointed that the reveal wasn't more...integrated into the plot. I mean, making Marco's dad susceptible to infestation because of his work was definitely possible, and it does kind of branch off of that warning that Eva gave him years ago, like, "don't work for the military" or whatever, but idk it just felt so out-of-left-field. I just kind of wish it had been built up to rather than just "yep about that time," you know?...
Yep, this is what I am trying to say, too, anijen21.

6) Marco notes that it is possible that Nora was never actually in love with his dad, but was actually a Yeerk plant all along. Do you think this is a viable suggestion, or is he just grasping at straws? Do you think Nora was a Controller all along?
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Impossible to tell. Hard as it was to engage with the Nora-character, credit where credit is due: it is plausible that Nora was genuine.
This is years after Peter lost Eva. He was showing signs of moving on in previous books. No reason why he couldn't have met a partner. And whether that partner was genuine or not at the moment that they met, it's anybody's guess...
HAVING SAID THAT, I just thought of something... Nora was Marco's teacher, right?! That means she was one of the staff at his school, which happens to have a very important Controller as its assistant principal...

6) I don't think Nora was a controller all along. In an earlier book Marco's dad even talks about how they were fighting and at one point all of a sudden they were happy and never fought anymore.
I recall this, too, actually.


7) The book ended on kind of an odd note. After the Animorphs finally contact the Andalites there is a page break followed by the following words, in bold: "We do know who they are... and we know you, too... What do you think the meaning of this was?
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:o This was a bit bizarre, wasn't it?! :o
We are reading along and suddenly there's this statement from the enemy directed at us!
Why would the writer include that?!?! And then not in the following books?!?!?! Just for 'St.Because's' sake?!


8 )Anything else?
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Overall the book was a good read, but not amongst my favorites, though it clearly had the potential to be so.

Good moments was the way in which they entered the pool this time, the bug-fighter roller-coaster ride and how Jake was seemingly in control and all, but they had overlooked that tiny detail, and then they panicked!!  :rofl2:
...and then they spend like ten pages gaining enough velocity to enter the ocean which is literally the stupidest filler in the ENTIRE SERIES (wouldn't crashing into the ocean at a high velocity be MORE DAMAGING than entering at a low velocity? Did this ghostwriter never fall down before?)...
:rofl2:

...and then even Eva's rescue just feels...anticlimact ic, somehow. Visser One was such a well-developed character, I would have at least liked to hear her take on her death.
EXACTLY! We are no wiser as to HOW Visser One got to be in the circumstances of Visser Three's captive a second time. We can only assume there was failure in the Anati system, ;)?

And just for the record, anyone notice the NO OBJECTIONS from Cassie on the parboiling of Yeerks, this time around?! :o
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Chad32 on March 11, 2010, 08:18:08 AM
1) I think it was alright. Earlier in the books it says he used to be good and all, and Ax accidentally put something into his work that was a MAJOR breakthrough. after making that public, I wouldn't be surprised if the Yeerks were watching him.

2) I think he handled it a bit better than he probably should have, like Anijen said.

3) Never thought about that, but Anijen came up with good ideas. Something would have been done with them.

4) I've read the book recently, but didn't go over it in the last few days like I planned to. It just seemed like Visser One just showed up or something. Like it seemed off. Though I liked the part where Marco is trying to drag eva off, but she resists until she gets her hands on v1 and crushes her. Then she say Ok we can go.

5) Want more details! Not just aww they look sweet kissing. This is one of the major things I was hoping for in the series, and they spend more details on getting the bugfighter into the pool than the reuinion!

6) That was just a wrong and blatant lie. A sign that Marco still felt he wanted his real mother back with his father more than accepting that his dad loves another woman. Probably one of the worst things he ever does.

7) Nothing came of it, so I don't have much to say.

8) I have a busy schedule, but I do want to read the final arc and really have something to say as the series goes to crap. also I've been thinking after finishing, we might just start over with book 1. One book a week with 60 books in the series, and there are only 52 weeks in a year. No reason to not start over.


Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: RYTX on March 11, 2010, 02:56:47 PM
In a rush at the mo so
1)No, but it works dammit
2)Also know. I don't think my parents would ever believe me, even with morphing and violence and all that. They may believe it sure, but not me
7)This is dumb but i like to think it's like pick up from the transmitter. Like if it were a show, you'd just through but the transmitter getting this message after the credit. Just a bit of fun irrelevence.
8)This book makes me reevalutate GW's in general. I'll have to review some of the complainents later, but I love this book. One of the best imo GW or KA. Some I'll leave you all to decide what that means. 
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Terenia on March 11, 2010, 08:01:26 PM
I've been thinking, based on your responses, that this book really would have been better off as two separate books. One dedicated to the fact that Marco had to reveal himself to his dad, and one to rescuing his mom. Yeah, it would shift the rescue back five books (because obviously it would have to be a Marco narration), but it would give each event the amount of page time they deserved.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Vanish on March 11, 2010, 10:21:39 PM
I totally agree teach, both parts of the story could have been made into their own separate book. With all those filler books I don't understand why they didn't do that.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Gafrash on March 12, 2010, 03:40:45 AM
Here's me being anal again, people, but has anyone else noticed this is the THINNEST book in the series?!?! ::)
It does feel like KA could have split it into two, granted, but there was plenty of space to flesh these two plots out into one book. I mean, it's THE REVELATION!!! This had potential to be so much MORE epic!

And, conversely, can anyone tell me if this ghostwriter happens to be the same as the one in The Weakness or The Ultimate?!?!
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Chad32 on March 12, 2010, 08:20:47 AM
It was a thin book, wasn't it? And yes these plot points could have been in their own books. If so, which would you have first? Do you think it would be more interesting to have Peter know Eva is alive first, or for Eva to be rescued and find out Peter has remarried before she and Marco tell him?

There's so much wasted potential like this that it makes me angry at all the mid to late series filler books. Not that the early series didn't have its share of filler.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Aluminator (Kit) on March 12, 2010, 02:23:58 PM
Oh yeah. This is where the series actually starts to resemble something "readable" again in my mind. Up until this point, it's been mostly downhill since the David trilogy.

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1) This is obviously a major turning point in the series. Do you think that the ‘reveal’ of the Animorphs to Marco’s dad was handled appropriately?

I dunno... I mean, I do like the way it was handled... but it seems like we deserved more...

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2) Do you think that Marco’s dad’s reaction was a pretty accurate representation of what would actually happen? How would YOUR dad react if you told him you had spent the last three years fighting brain-stealing slugs?

It totally depends on Peter's personality. As it is, this book is the most we get for his character development, so I guess that is how he would have handled it. Haha... I can't even picture my dad's reaction. I can't imagine he'd take it quite that well.

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3) What do you think would have happened if the Yeerks attempted to capture Marco and his dad rather than kill them? How would the Chee had reacted? What would have been the long-term affects?

*shrug* I guess the Chee would have gone along with it, and been "infested" and kept the Yeerk inside their bodies like they do with their standard Yeerks. That would have led to the issue of "what do we do with them now?" but I don't see it causing any major problems. Maybe another subplot, though, in a later book.

Hey, I have a question. The Chee are obviously capable of projecting holograms beyond themselves... why did Mr. King need to be directly Draconed for this plan to work? Couldn't he have hid in the corner of the room and projected holograms of Marco and his dad?

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4) This is the book where Visser One is finally destroyed and Eva, Marco’s mom, goes free. Do you think that this mission was handled well?

I actually liked this scene a lot. It's a well-written action sequence, and very tough to put down. Like AniDragon's saying, the setup is stupid as all get out (who decided Visser 3 got to preside over this execution anyway?), but once you get past that, I found it to be pretty kickass.

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5) What do you think about the reunion between Marco’s parents?

It's cute... but it's so... not what it should have been. I feel like we got gypped out of most of the emotional content that should be present in this book.

Kind of a side note, but does anybody else feel like most of the ghostwriters were pulling their punches? That's kind of the impression I get. It's like KA was willing to write whatever it took to tell the story, but a lot of the ghostwriters were very aware of the fact that they were writing childrens books.

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6) Marco notes that it is possible that Nora was never actually in love with his dad, but was actually a Yeerk plant all along. Do you think this is a viable suggestion, or is he just grasping at straws? Do you think Nora was a Controller all along?

He seemed pretty confident that he was lying. All you guys that see this as a horrible thing Marco did, though... I can't fault him that much for it. At this point, he knows he's not going to be able to rescue Nora; he's saving his father some of the pain of the loss. Marco hates himself for saying it, but it seems to me that it was, at least partly, a selfless thing to do.

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7) The book ended on kind of an odd note. After the Animorphs finally contact the Andalites there is a page break followed by the following words, in bold: "We do know who they are... and we know you, too...  What do you think the meaning of this was?

I kind of wish they would have kept this kind of thing up. It's kinda fun.

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8) Anything else?

Not really off the top of my head. That's why having a discussion thread is nice :P

I've been thinking, based on your responses, that this book really would have been better off as two separate books. One dedicated to the fact that Marco had to reveal himself to his dad, and one to rescuing his mom. Yeah, it would shift the rescue back five books (because obviously it would have to be a Marco narration), but it would give each event the amount of page time they deserved.

That's a great idea. Marco has a lot of ground to cover in his books... he needed fewer of the "filler" books, methinks. They changed up the narration order in the very next book anyway, so we may not have had to wait a full 5 to see the rest of it.

It was a thin book, wasn't it? And yes these plot points could have been in their own books. If so, which would you have first? Do you think it would be more interesting to have Peter know Eva is alive first, or for Eva to be rescued and find out Peter has remarried before she and Marco tell him?

I, personally, would have liked to see Eva freed and hidden away. There would have been the potential for some touching Marco/Eva moments, and I think it would have been cool to see her interacting with the Animorphs. Helping them plan missions or whatever. If you go the other way, I don't see as much that you can do with it.

And, conversely, can anyone tell me if this ghostwriter happens to be the same as the one in The Weakness or The Ultimate?!?!

The Animorphs' Wikipedia page has a complete list of ghostwritten books: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Animorphs#Ghostwriters - The Weakness, The Ultimate and this book were all written by different ghostwriters. They probably did a lot of reading and feeding off of each other's work, though.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Chad32 on March 12, 2010, 06:17:30 PM
Mr. King needed to be directly hit so the dracon beam wouldn't just pass through him. Sure he could make it look like the hologram was desintegrating, but there wouldn't be anything solid to make contact with. Dracon beams have been powered down since the HBC Chronicles, where a beam would just slice right through someone and desintegrate their body after one shot.

Yeah I think they could do more with eva being freed first than with Peter. She could help out on missions, and maybe even be given the power to morph. In fact that's probably what should have happened instead of bringing Loren back. they only brought Loren back as a plot device to get them to start making auxilaries. Eva could have taken her place by being rescued in 45, and there would be at least one less loose end left dangling at the end of the series.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: AniDragon on March 12, 2010, 09:14:29 PM
Also, I just remembered something I would have loved to see in this book, which I've mentioned a few times before and will probably one day write a fanfiction of:

I would have LOVED to see Marco's funeral. I would have loved to see Jake need to pretend to be devistated over his best friend's death, and Marco possibly making funny remarks via thought-speach to the other Animorphs. (Because of course he'd want to watch)
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Gafrash on March 12, 2010, 11:04:42 PM
And, conversely, can anyone tell me if this ghostwriter happens to be the same as the one in The Weakness or The Ultimate?!?!

The Animorphs' Wikipedia page has a complete list of ghostwritten books: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Animorphs#Ghostwriters - The Weakness, The Ultimate and this book were all written by different ghostwriters. They probably did a lot of reading and feeding off of each other's work, though.
That's a funny one, because, according to wikipedia, the ghostwriter was the same one who wrote The Illusion, which is a very fleshed out story, and my favorite Tobias narration. Interestingly enough, The Familiar and The Resistance (both unneventuful books) were also ghostwritten by her.


I kinda liked the revelation to Marco's dad and the freeing of Marco's mum ALL DONE IN THIS ONE BOOK. It's good! Only it DID feel like this writer was 'pulling the punches'.
We get a cool action scene within the last few pages, but a quick easy exit, the Visser morphs for the sake of morphing, and we did get a the intro to the blue-bands (Visser Three's elite trooppers) but nothing really picked up from this bad guy.
It's a great and relevant story, but there were just a lot of things missing for this to be the story that it deserved to be, I reckon.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: RYTX on March 13, 2010, 11:32:23 AM
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I would have LOVED to see Marco's funeral. I would have loved to see Jake need to pretend to be devistated over his best friend's death, and Marco possibly making funny remarks via thought-speach to the other Animorphs. (Because of course he'd want to watch)
Agreed.
The fact that this was really never addressed is annoying when you stop and think about it. I can't guess the weeks b/w this book and 53, but it can't have been a lot, and that fact that this never came up, especially with Jake and his family, that's kinda sloppy. But then again, how long can you be expected to grief. Still not sure
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: dolphin4077 on March 13, 2010, 12:19:11 PM
7. What if that end message wasn't from the Yeerks but the Andalites.
I'll try to answer the rest of the questions later.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Gafrash on March 13, 2010, 10:37:59 PM
????

That message guimmick would have been cool if it continued on after this story. But it never did.
Think, in The Deception there was something similar, when they made the first contact with the Andalite Homeworld, but nothing more than that...
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Chad32 on March 13, 2010, 10:46:12 PM
I think I may have believed it was the Andalites saying that instead of the Yeerks when I first read it.

It really had no plot bearing, though.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: dolphin4077 on March 14, 2010, 01:16:26 AM
Yeah, the only use it had was that it was a signal to readers that things were picking up. 
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Aluminator (Kit) on March 15, 2010, 01:07:53 PM
Also, I just remembered something I would have loved to see in this book, which I've mentioned a few times before and will probably one day write a fanfiction of:

I would have LOVED to see Marco's funeral. I would have loved to see Jake need to pretend to be devistated over his best friend's death, and Marco possibly making funny remarks via thought-speach to the other Animorphs. (Because of course he'd want to watch)

Oh, man, that would have the potential to be an absolutely amazing scene... haha... if you wind up writing it out, let me know. That is an awesome idea. It's definitely strange that there was never any reaction to Marco's "death" in the books...

Mr. King needed to be directly hit so the dracon beam wouldn't just pass through him. Sure he could make it look like the hologram was desintegrating, but there wouldn't be anything solid to make contact with. Dracon beams have been powered down since the HBC Chronicles, where a beam would just slice right through someone and desintegrate their body after one shot.

Yeah I think they could do more with eva being freed first than with Peter. She could help out on missions, and maybe even be given the power to morph. In fact that's probably what should have happened instead of bringing Loren back. they only brought Loren back as a plot device to get them to start making auxilaries. Eva could have taken her place by being rescued in 45, and there would be at least one less loose end left dangling at the end of the series.

It would have been cool to see a couple more characters added to the team throughout the series. Eva would be perfect. So would Aftran. David just paralyzed the Animorphs in that regard, I think.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Chad32 on March 15, 2010, 04:49:04 PM
I agree with Eva and Aftran. I would also have liked to see more Auxilary, Free hork, and YPM develoment.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: SuperBlue on July 14, 2010, 02:09:26 PM
LOL was Marco's Orange jacket comment in this book a shout-out to that God awful TV show?
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Chad32 on July 14, 2010, 02:20:57 PM
I don't know, but there have been shout outs. There was one where Marco says "It's not like controllers mess with their ears a lot to let you know it's one of them.", or something to that effect. In the TV show that's a tell that they're the enemy, for those fortunate enough not to watch the TV show.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Terenia on July 14, 2010, 06:19:16 PM
Yeah, Rachel also comments in one of her narrations that morphing isn't the "lame" stuff you see on Nickelodean.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: SuperBlue on July 14, 2010, 06:38:24 PM
Ha Ha! I love how KA loves to the mock the show as much as we do
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Kotetsu1442 on July 15, 2010, 04:08:49 PM
I don't think this book will have as much from me as some others, which isn't to say it wasn't a good book, I thought it was a really cool premise that had to happen at some point (although, I agree with others, a lot more could have been done with it), but simply that there isn't a lot of deep insights to discuss in the way that there are in others.



Questions
1) This is obviously a major turning point in the series. Do you think that the ‘reveal’ of the Animorphs to Marco’s dad was handled appropriately?

The revealing itself was pretty good here and better handled by Marco than some of the other parents, by explaining the whole story carefully, then showing the morphs as proof) rather than assaulting them with wild animals and then explaining. I think that the whole "adults are too stubborn and unimaginative to be able to believe in this sort of thing when confronted with it, isn't it wonderful that we are kids" thing is a bit overdone with the other adults but is held in check pretty well here.



2) Do you think that Marco’s dad’s reaction was a pretty accurate representation of what would actually happen? How would YOUR dad react if you told him you had spent the last three years fighting brain-stealing slugs?

I think it was a fair enough reaction and that the reaction would depend completely on the individual. I think that some answers to this question, such as that he took it 'too lightly' were unfair, people are really unpredictable when it comes to shocking news and can occasionally handle it in very calm and orderly fashions for quite some time before the shock really sets in and causes a reaction.



3) What do you think would have happened if the Yeerks attempted to capture Marco and his dad rather than kill them? How would the Chee had reacted? What would have been the long-term affects?

Well, there is the whole "catch the Yeerk and have other chee pretend to be Marco and Peter as controllers" theory but at this point in the series that wouldn't work. The problem is, this is one of the biggest unresolved conflicts within the official canon that has been maintained: It was solidly established that Erek allowed a Yeerk to 'infest' into his body, then held it captive and sustains it with Kandrona that he provides while masquerading as a Controller and that this is how the Chee spies infiltrate the Yeerk Empire on Earth, also in the same book (#10, The Android) Mr. King is able to restrain Rachel in bear form, and explains that the Chee are fully capable of restraining anyone who is not powerful enough to overcome them, but cannot actually inflict violence on them; but later the Chee are more restricted, in #26, The Attack Erek is unable to shove a Howler aside in defense of the Anis and in #29 The Sickness he is not even allowed to restrain a delirious Andalite who may be a danger to himself and others because this is somehow 'too violent,' but while the series has ret-conned stronger restrictions on the Chee non-violence programming it never addressed the issue of holding Yeerks captive that allows them to infiltrate the Empire in the first place.

I think that in this case Marco, Erek and Mr. King were simply depending on accurately predicting that the Yeerks being desperate and not wanting to risk another escape and more trouble from Marco and Peter and that they would simply kill them.



4) This is the book where Visser One is finally destroyed and Eva, Marco’s mom, goes free. Do you think that this mission was handled well?

I think that the mission was handled well in a "Visser 1 is almost starved to death and Eva will be killed as soon as Visser 1 does starve, so we have to act fast and rashly because we don't have time for planning and a subtler rescue mission" sort of way.

As far as the actual storyline itself, it was a bit too rushed for verisimilitude, that in all these months (years) of war Marco's dad is on the team that discovers Z-space and he has to be rescued on almost the exact same time that Eva's controller is returned to Earth for execution (not to mention why she was returned to Earth for execution when she could have been starved in the Anati system or elsewhere in the galaxy before the counsel) and she has to be saved, bringing them both to the free colony at the same time is far too much of a stretch when, as others have said they could have happened at completely different times and been fleshed out into two separate books; both more interesting and satisfying, as well as realistic.



6) Marco notes that it is possible that Nora was never actually in love with his dad, but was actually a Yeerk plant all along. Do you think this is a viable suggestion, or is he just grasping at straws? Do you think Nora was a Controller all along?

His inner narration here could be unreliable, but it suggests that he isn't blatantly lying, but is grasping at unlikely straws for his father's sake (as well as his conscious). Yes, in 35, The Proposal they did verify that Nora was not a Controller as well as they could ("She'd never gone near any known Yeerk Pool entrances"), but Marco's voice in this one suggests that this ghost author may have written this book before the others were released and was given the big storyline issues like that Peter had remarried a teacher named Nora who had an annoying poodle that Marco had morphed, but had not been able to read details like the confirmation that Nora was not a Controller; a mistake that should have been picked up in the editing but evidently wasn't.



7) The book ended on kind of an odd note. After the Animorphs finally contact the Andalites there is a page break followed by the following words, in bold: "We do know who they are... and we know you, too... What do you think the meaning of this was?

Yeah... um. Unnecessary. Go ahead and throw in things for added drama and suspense if you want, but only if you intend for it to go somewhere.



8 )Anything else?

I thought it was really powerful seeing Eva finally freed and full of hate at the evil creature that had enslaved her, how even though she is a strong, positive and life-valuing character she was filled with enough hate at after all she had been through and suffered to be ready to kill her enemy when it was completely defenseless.

Kind of a side note, but does anybody else feel like most of the ghostwriters were pulling their punches?
I disagree here. I think a lot of the flak that the ghostwriters get isn't really their due, and that you have to be willing to criticize KA for her problems as well as praise her brilliant strokes. OK, maybe the ghostwriters could have put more power into their emotional scenes and deeper messages, but they'd be just as at risk of being criticized as being too 'over the top' and 'too dramatic' as the criticism you get here. Ultimately, KA did a read-over to make sure it fit in the series and made changes to suit what she wanted to see in it, if she gave it her approval to be a part of the canon of her series then she is responsible for the content.

And yes, while I was reading it I also thought a "Marco's funeral" scene could have been both funny and interesting, Jake trying to fake a serious mourning to avoid any public attention to himself while Marco's thought-speech jokes were in his head would have been great material to work with.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Chad32 on July 15, 2010, 04:39:57 PM
I never really noticed the further restrictions retconned into Chee programming, but I did notice that they never mention Erek having a Yeerk in his head, and can obviously set something up to provide Kandrona radiation to captured Yeerks. I think that would have been a nice thing to explore, and see no reason why they couldn't set up a machine outside of a Chee body to hold captured or defected Yeerks. That might have been something worth getting into, since there are Peace Movement Yeerks who would be safer with the Chee than in the main pool, and who knows how many Yeerks starved to death at the hands of the Free Hork-Bajir.

That thought might be better as it's own topic, though.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Gafrash on July 15, 2010, 11:12:02 PM
Agreed... I always wondered if The Chee were pro-peace and indirectly involved in this war, why wouldn't they offer this kind of alternative, since Erek himself has confirmed they are capable of generating Kandrona rays. It's one of those things that weren't really explored, but would have been ideal material for a 'Chee Chronicles'.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Chad32 on July 16, 2010, 06:30:29 AM
I think they would fit very well into a Peace Movement, but through the series there is no indication that any of them are even connected to it. That's disappointing.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: Kotetsu1442 on July 16, 2010, 05:06:35 PM
Yeah, I when the YPM was first introduced in #29, The Sickness (other than the vague rumors of Yeerks who were against invasion that Aftran had brought up before), I started thinking "Well what the heck are they going to do with Aftran if they do free her?" But it was long before I got to the end of the book even that I had thought "Oh yeah, the Chee have technology to use their energy sources for even more compact and convenient Kandrona feeding than the Yeerks do, so I guess that won't be a problem." Then, I get to the end and they are like "Well, Aftran will probably miss being out of the fight, but becoming a nothlit is the only way for her to survive" and I'm like "NO! THAT IS NOT THE ONLY WAY, STOP IT YOU GUYS!"

I can understand why the Chee undercover agents would mostly want to not let compromise their roles by associating with YPM members in case the YPM Yeerks were caught and might blow their cover, but I agree Chad, some of them getting into contact with the YPM and allowing them to simply leave the Yeerk Empire entirely was always an option. Actually it would be cool if the Chee adopted escaped Yeerks and allowed them to live in their heads, shared their senses but didn't relinquish control and they worked as teams infiltrating the Empire.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: LisaCharly on July 18, 2010, 11:26:46 PM
^I always wondered if the Chee and Yeerk Peace Movement worked together (and if not, why?).

Personally, this is one of the most disappointing books in the series for me. Marco's my favorite character, and this should be really momentous for his character arc, but it never gets followed up on in the other books and many opportunities for character development are shoved aside for ten pages of gathering speed (totally agreeing with Anijen here) and a car chase. I mean, really. I also feel like Edriss' death is poorly executed; for Eva and Marco, pretty much everything that has gone wrong with their lives in the last 5+ years can be traced back to Edriss, and yet Marco seems not to get any satisfaction out it. I believe he should, especially since early-book Marco had some Rachel-ish revenge issues (see: shark in the swimming pool, sharks on Royan Island, the "rage" monologue in #10, the joy he took out of pestering William Roger Tennant). Also, Edriss is a fascinating character and possibly the most interesting villain in the entire series, and yet her death is very anticlimactic.

That said, I do like the actual events of the book, I just think they needed to be given more weight. And I actually really liked the bit about Nora - it's easy to forget that Marco's not only a teenager, but not really the nicest teenager in the world, and the war has made him even more ruthless and desperate. I think it's pretty certain he lies about Nora, effectively writing her off. Maybe it's to save his dad the pain, but more likely it's so Marco can finally get that dream he's been holding onto since book 5 - the reunification of his family. When the option is available to him, he takes it, and that's both harsh and in-character. But I may just like it because it gave me angsty Nora fanfic fodder.
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: SuperBlue on July 18, 2010, 11:37:07 PM
Yeah, I think they shoulda just gone ahead and killed Edriss via Kandrona Starvation, that way it'd be slow and we'd know her thoughts befor death(if KA decided to switch POV's for a little bit)
Title: Re: Group Re-Read: #45 The Revelation
Post by: SkyMorpher on September 25, 2011, 10:03:32 PM
This one is one of my faves...was sooo glad when I got it in a pile of weeded books from the library.

I have very mixed feelings about the ending though...I'm a bit of a romance sucker and liked it that he got to see Eva again and be with her. But I can understand his feelings being so confused, and yes, Marco was trying to soften the blow. I do wish more would have been said about it. And that perhaps she'd been freed earlier in the series.