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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #60 on: November 14, 2010, 12:16:03 AM »
So please fix your previous post, Chad.  Thanks :P


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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #61 on: November 14, 2010, 12:17:52 AM »
*grumble...grumble...* Fine.


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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #62 on: November 14, 2010, 12:24:34 AM »
Chad...I doubt it's safe to start rocking a person back and forth who has a gaping hole in his guts.

Not to mention, I don't think Yeerks can fall unconscious.  Not least of which by people glaring at them.

Please try and have a bit more of a sense of realism.  Sorry, I don't mean to pick on you or anything, I'm just trying to give you some advice on how to write a little bit better.

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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #63 on: November 14, 2010, 12:26:15 AM »
Well claxter is a Warrior having kind of a panic attack and is trying to help. Sukohn is faking being unconscious again in the hoped of the others leaving him alone. What isn't realistic?

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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #64 on: November 14, 2010, 12:29:31 AM »
If he is a warrior, he should have been trained to remain calm, or at the very least not to move a fatally injured person.  

If I were Sukohn, I'd be more concerned over my host's injuries than being left vulnerable and "unconscious" amidst my enemies.  And it's semantics, because you said Sukohn pretended to fall unconscious.  Yeerks don't sleep.

Please change it, I'm not going to belabor the point.

EDIT: It's a start...thanks Chad.
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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #65 on: November 14, 2010, 12:00:03 PM »
No transporters. The ship is built of Improved andalite and yeerk technology. I don't think they would have transporters.

What is your ship anyways? An andalite fighter? A terran ship? A hybrid Yeerk blade ship/Scout thingy!? lol, Idk
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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #66 on: November 14, 2010, 02:05:19 PM »
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« Reply #67 on: November 14, 2010, 03:34:36 PM »
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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #68 on: November 14, 2010, 04:26:21 PM »
Lumy - is the drink Al gave Trey alcoholic?

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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #69 on: November 14, 2010, 04:53:22 PM »
No actual alcohol. It contains both a mild stimulant along and a mild depressant similar to alcohol, neither of which is commonly found on Earth. The net effect from a glass that size would be a decent buzz, and, depending on the person, anything from a feeling of invincibility to the sensation that they understand everything to simply an increased feeling of confidence. It doesn't hit as hard as alcohol, though- it's an effect that you just sort of slide into without realizing it.
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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #70 on: November 14, 2010, 05:12:26 PM »
Gaz, Temrash already searched Desmond and removed everying. If you want him to wake up now, that's fine, but he'll be unarmed.


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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #71 on: November 14, 2010, 05:49:41 PM »
Ok, must have missed that. I'll adjust it, but the end results are going to be the same. He'll grab it from a shelf or something.

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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #72 on: November 14, 2010, 05:51:41 PM »
No actual alcohol. It contains both a mild stimulant along and a mild depressant similar to alcohol, neither of which is commonly found on Earth. The net effect from a glass that size would be a decent buzz, and, depending on the person, anything from a feeling of invincibility to the sensation that they understand everything to simply an increased feeling of confidence. It doesn't hit as hard as alcohol, though- it's an effect that you just sort of slide into without realizing it.

Ok cool, thankies.

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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #73 on: November 14, 2010, 06:30:35 PM »
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Re: GESB: OOC Discussion
« Reply #74 on: November 14, 2010, 11:15:29 PM »
No actual alcohol. It contains both a mild stimulant along and a mild depressant similar to alcohol, neither of which is commonly found on Earth. The net effect from a glass that size would be a decent buzz, and, depending on the person, anything from a feeling of invincibility to the sensation that they understand everything to simply an increased feeling of confidence. It doesn't hit as hard as alcohol, though- it's an effect that you just sort of slide into without realizing it.

Ok cool, thankies.
You're thanking him for intoxicating your character? I'm sorry, that just sounds weird...