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Mythica's Poetry <3
« on: September 11, 2010, 11:56:29 PM »
Okay when I get bored, frustrated, happy, or just simply spaz out I sometimes get poems in my head. Then I'll get poems in my head that pound at me until I jot them down and then they quit....until the next one. Well here is where I will share them with yoy guys and you can give your opinions. Now I don't want gramatical critiquing or anything like that. But you can try and figure out what I qas feeling or thinking when I wrote it or even if it helps you. Some are random some are about dreams. All are based off emotions I've had. Probably many will not have titles.....oh well. Enjoy! (Please no copywriting any of these. Be mature.)

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Hear the Moon Sing Her Midnight Song

Hear the moon as she sings her midnight song,
The stars play their twinkling lights.
As the wind swings through the midnight sky,
And leaves the souls in moonlight.
Peering through the window
That our hearts use frequently,
Wondering and wishing
For all that could be.

Like mist I wander through,
Looking for my home.
Looking for the one person
Who will not let me be alone.
I have found many
Who have tried to hold my treasure
But alas they are not the ones
They could never measure.

I look to the path ahead
And wonder what I may find.
Will it hold my destiny?
Will I see my time?
I want to know where I go,
But I remember where I have been.
I start to make my plans,
And reminisce every now and then.

Hear the moon as she sings her midnight song.
As the night now comes to an end.
As maybe soon someone will come
Along to help my heart mend.
The stars are my guidelines,
The Moon, my way back.
I will wander on the wind
And hope I never lack.

I will find my home one day
Be it near or far.
As long as that home is true and is my shining star.
I will travel any distance
Be it sun or rain.
Until I find my home
And become whole again.

Post Merged: September 12, 2010, 02:26:16 PM
Whoa I was moved. O.o lolz
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Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
« Reply #1 on: September 12, 2010, 06:25:33 PM »
Yeah sorry I moved you, just made more sense in this section, hope you don't mind.

I'm not really that into poetry and rarely ever write it myself, but your work is very good.
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« Reply #2 on: September 12, 2010, 06:43:37 PM »
I don't mind. If I put somplace and ir belongs somewhere else its fine. Sometimes I have a reason but I didn't this time. Yeah I just didn't know I had no heads up is all. And thank you very much.
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« Reply #3 on: September 12, 2010, 07:10:37 PM »
No problem. Like I said I don't read that much poetry, but I'll try to comment if you post more.
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« Reply #4 on: September 12, 2010, 07:26:50 PM »
Ill try to at least have one a week depends on urgency and my free time.
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« Reply #5 on: September 13, 2010, 12:47:38 AM »
That was an awesome poem. Very visual, but also your meaning well spoken. Great work. +1
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« Reply #6 on: September 13, 2010, 12:48:43 AM »
Thanks, love. ^_^

Post Merged: September 13, 2010, 04:13:16 PM
A Summer’s Daydream
Warm golden sunshine washes over my face.
Crisp cool breeze blows my hair.
The beautifully colored flowers cover the place.
With a large tree here and there.

There is a soft stream with fish swimming by.
And butterflies and bees in the air.
A bird is startled and takes to the sky.
And a deer's tail perks to show he is aware.

The song of summer is high on the meadow.
The honey thick feeling of light.
The sun shines over and leaves no shadow.
With warmth that's large and bright.

I hear the sounds of summer cleanly in my mind.
As the birds twitter their songs.
I think happily and wish to leave the dark behind.
So I may live happily and long.
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Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
« Reply #7 on: September 14, 2010, 12:46:34 AM »
Very cool. But why would you want to leave the dark? Dark is good, dark is cool. :)
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Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
« Reply #8 on: September 14, 2010, 07:25:57 AM »
Lol I love the dark I just wrote it when I had a good day. I have darker work.
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« Reply #9 on: September 14, 2010, 11:07:55 AM »
Wow! Just read both of them and they are nice. Bravo!!

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« Reply #10 on: September 14, 2010, 11:13:10 AM »
Lol thanks! I said I have darker work and I do. I just did this poem/story bit and will just say now I had no thoughts whatsoever of the Devil wheni wrote it.......

Will post it shortly
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« Reply #11 on: September 14, 2010, 11:45:41 AM »
Oh ok. Sounds um.....dark.......*waits*

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Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
« Reply #12 on: September 14, 2010, 12:23:08 PM »
Okay here it is...........Again I repeat it had nothing to ddo with the devil...I was thinking of that stupid skeleton king from the cartoon the black coldron....but the story came out different. It was one of those that beat at me until I wrote it down...anyway here it is...
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THE HORNED ONE

Frogs sing and crickets chirp
Snakes flash along the dirt
Bats hang from up above
Demons gamble, push, and shove
The Horned One watches o’er his land
With his mighty magick hand
Red eyes glaring, don’t look back
Or soon you’ll hear the whip crack
Speak not to him, Listen well
Many tried, many fell
Shadows crossing, spirits led
Many now all lay dead
He is mighty, not alone
His Queen is there beside the throne
Together they rule happily
With their mighty sorcery
Never crossed, this is no lie
Don’t even think it, never try
Clouds of black, moon of red
Blood is thick, tears are shed
Lucks run out pay the price
Dungeons made of painful ice
Lava runs thick with heat
All your running, now you’re beat
He never loses only wins
Stick you with a thousand pins
Laughing loudly and so dark
No more angels they can hark
I have warned you, this is true
Make sure you listen, follow through
Should you not heed what I’ve said
You would surely end up dead
Anger him or his Goddess
And your life will be a mess
Clouds of black, moon of red
No more now can be said
The Horned One watches o’er his land
The midnight hour is close at hand
He is mighty, not alone
He will have you bone by bone
Heed my warnings, listen well
All these stories do not tell
Go now and live free
Or cursed forever you will be
I his guardian loyal and dark
Have fallen prey to his dark heart
I’m his worker, friend, and love
I am here he is above
Summer heat, starlit nights
Climbing to the highest heights
Sharing thoughts, feelings, dreams
My life is here it seems
With my Dark Prince, I can’t go wrong
I know that our bond is strong
Again my warning isn’t clear
For the fact that you’re still here
Go! Leave! Away with you!
Vanish, quickly! Begone! Shoo!
Thunder rumbles, lightening strike
It seems too late for you this night
He knows you’re here it is too late
You shall now face your fate
I cannot save you, you will fall
One of many, that is all
As the blade comes rushing down
Your blood spills to the ground
Should not have crossed him, I warned you
He can see clear and through
You meant him harm that is not wise
He will not listen to your lies
I will not speak, you gave no heed
I shall sit whilst you bleed
Cry no more it will not stop
Unless you decide to drop
Join us and you shall be free
The choice was the same for me
Now I rule by his side
And I flow with the moon’s tide
Now I leave you to your choice
Choose well for you may lose your voice.
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« Reply #13 on: September 14, 2010, 12:33:35 PM »
If you didn't say anything I would have thought that was about the devil. It's nice anyways. +1

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Re: Mythica's Poetry <3
« Reply #14 on: September 14, 2010, 12:36:13 PM »
Thanks. Yeah it was beating at me so I wrote it and then I read it twice and mom brough it up.....never once thought about the devil either....O.@

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The wind flies high
The sun shines down
The birds all fly
Singing their sounds
Freedom is close
Yet I cannot grasp
I live how I chose
My seal is clasped
I live my choice
Day by day
I let my voice
Light my way
Friends together
Family ties
Honesty forever
Never lies
Stars shine bright
Moon cast glow
All my might
All I show
Live today
Rest the next
Careful way
Do not Hex
Three fold law
Easy spell
Raven’s caw
Water’s well
Shadows cover
Good and bad
Friend and lover
Wish I had
Baby’s laugh
Mother’s word
All by Half
The best I’ve heard
Patience Chosen
Silent words
Pain is frozen
Never heard
Angels’ wings
Softened heat
Fairy sings
Merry meet.
« Last Edit: September 14, 2010, 12:39:50 PM by Mythica_vampiress319 »
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