Cool fic so far, Mike. I'm really enjoying it. It's one of the few "Fan gets pulled into the Animorphs universe" stories that I actually liked. There are so many of them, sometimes I just feel like I'm reading the same thing over and over again. But this one was different. I like how you added Mike as an addition to the group early in the fic, rather than just having him meet up with the Animorphs later on, like most people do.
I think you did a great job with the writing. You used a lot of voice, which I like. Mike is very realistic and believable. He isn't one of those characters that acts one way, then acts completely different two chapters later. Though it isn't the kind that has me on the edge of my seat begging for more, the writing is gripping. At this point, I'm curious. I want to see what happens next. I'm wondering what little twists and changes you have planned.
So, yeah. Great job, Mike. You are going to continue, right?