lol, nice to see you're picking up on the important details. Brain-stealing alien slugs being attacked my kids who can turn into animals? That's fine. A 6 digit phone number? Now that's just unrealistic!
Well I don't know how your phone numbers work, but my home number is 6 digits (not counting the area code). I know that the fic is set in America (albeit a fictional version of America being invaded by alien slugs) but I am English and it's my fic so the characters can have whatever phone number they want.
It's not like it affects the story at all.
So, besides 6 digit phone numbers, what do you think of the story so far?