Anemore: Colliding Worlds (Comic)

[Damien]

Well, I didn't know where to put this but technically this is fiction so...
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Anemore... Creatures created by an intelligent being's subconscious, personality, and actions. These creatures take on the shape of various animals and mythical creatures. However they are usually buried and locked within the subconscious at birth, never to be disturbed. On rare occasions do the anemores break free of the subconscious, but when they do their owners gain extraordinary powers, usually related to the anemore's chosen form.

Recently however more and more anemore are breaking free. What could be the cause, and why is there a large blue and green star in the sky? Could they be related?

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Chapter 1
Cover - http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/1851/chapter1cover.png
Page 1 - http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/1719/page1h.png

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Well here is my the cover for chapter 1 http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/1851/chapter1cover.png
and here is page one of the series http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/1719/page1h.png

Honestly.... I'm not happy at all with the first page... there is so much that is wrong, panel three especially... and I can't draw hoods... it just looks horrible to me... and it ticks me off because normally I draw a lot better than that...

Oh and I'm intending to put up this on smack jeeves, when I do I'll provide the link.

[Phoenix004]

Not bad for your first attempt, it's certainly a hell of a lot better than I can draw! The buildings in the first pannel have been done well.