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Offline NickDaGriff

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Re: Ram The Blade Ship
« Reply #15 on: August 24, 2016, 04:02:25 PM »
It was still a really clunky way of doing it, because there were too many specifics leading into a new story, and that treads on the sense of closure you should have from the end of a story.  Too many sequel hooks with no sequel.

You can have the theme of war never ending, and I approve of them flying off in the end to go save Ax, but dropping so much new junk in clutters it up.
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Re: Ram The Blade Ship
« Reply #16 on: August 24, 2016, 05:13:31 PM »
Indeed. Am I right, or am I right?
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Re: Ram The Blade Ship
« Reply #17 on: August 24, 2016, 11:37:31 PM »
Nobody who ever says "am I right?" is ever right about anything, stop.   :P

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Re: Ram The Blade Ship
« Reply #18 on: August 25, 2016, 01:28:49 AM »
Goose

End your next 10 posts not including the bored board with "Am I right or am I riiiiiight?"



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Re: Ram The Blade Ship
« Reply #19 on: August 25, 2016, 07:05:17 AM »
At least you're called diabeetus now. Am I right, or am I riiiiiight?
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