Richard's Animorphs Forum

Animorphs Section => Animorphs Fan Fiction & Art => Topic started by: Adam on July 15, 2013, 06:45:12 PM

Title: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on July 15, 2013, 06:45:12 PM
Yes, already writing again. However, uploads won't be daily this time around, as I'll be busier with other things from now on.

This story comes a few years after the end of the Yeerk war, when Andalite tourism on Earth is on the rise. Detective Nicalor-Garroon-Charod and his bumbling sidekick Ayattil are sent to the big blue planet to investigate Andalite crimes, when a criminal mastermind begins to cause havoc in the city of New York...

And here is Chapter 1!

FanFiction link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/1/The-Main-Course (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/1/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: redtailedsaffa on July 15, 2013, 10:23:13 PM
I haven't read it yet, but here's what first came to mind when I read the blurb - "It's the Andalite Pink Panther!" :XD:

EDIT: Read it. Wow, first chapter and we're already getting down to business. Nice. ;)
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on July 17, 2013, 03:44:05 PM
Chapter 2!

FanFiction link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/2/The-Main-Course (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/2/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on July 20, 2013, 03:02:23 PM
Chapter 3!

FanFiction link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/3/The-Main-Course (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/3/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Mystic Skye on July 20, 2013, 03:05:42 PM
Interesting story, cant wait to read more :):):)
SOOOOOOOOOO get to writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on July 24, 2013, 06:47:24 PM
Chapter 4!

FanFiction link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/4/The-Main-Course (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/4/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: redtailedsaffa on July 25, 2013, 03:33:21 AM
LMAO Spanish soccer player :rofl:
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on July 28, 2013, 03:26:10 PM
Chapter 5!

FanFiction Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/5/The-Main-Course (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/5/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: redtailedsaffa on July 29, 2013, 04:47:02 AM
Oh my, the next chapter is gonna be a riot. :D
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on August 07, 2013, 07:15:13 PM
Chapter 6!

FanFiction Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/6/The-Main-Course (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/6/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Aluminator (Kit) on August 15, 2013, 01:00:52 PM
Finally caught up on this. I am loving the absurd situations you're putting the Andalites in, and the dichotomy and imagery of a bunch of Andalites running around NYC ^_^ You have brilliant comedic timing, and I'm chuckling at a lot of the little subtle jokes you're throwing in as I'm reading this. And there's your ability to write amazing, believable characters that you showed in Twig and haven't let up on here. Excellent work thus far ^_^
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on August 15, 2013, 03:50:43 PM
Cheers Al! =D
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on September 01, 2013, 04:39:41 PM
Chapter 7! Sorry it took so long.

FanFiction link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/7/The-Main-Course (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/7/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: redtailedsaffa on September 02, 2013, 08:51:12 AM
LOL, the last part. Go make us some coffee. :XD:
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on September 23, 2013, 11:45:49 AM
Chapter 8!

FanFiction link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/8/The-Main-Course (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/8/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on October 05, 2013, 05:36:27 PM
Chapter 9!

FanFiction link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/9/The-Main-Course (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/9/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on October 22, 2013, 10:12:27 AM
Chapter 10!

FanFiction Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/10/The-Main-Course (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/10/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on November 06, 2013, 06:59:43 PM
Chapter 11!

FanFiction Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/11/The-Main-Course (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/11/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached!
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on November 27, 2013, 03:43:47 PM
Chapter 12!

FanFiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/12/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/12/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on December 28, 2013, 10:18:46 AM
Chapter 13!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/13/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/13/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on January 14, 2014, 12:05:03 PM
Chapter 14!

FanFiction Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/14/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/14/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Aluminator (Kit) on January 22, 2014, 05:08:33 PM
Ahaha. These bumbling goobers. I love how, even though the plot is starting to get nice and thick, they still can't avoid being sidetracked at every turn ^_^ Mary made me smile.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on January 24, 2014, 02:52:44 PM
Chapter 15!

FanFiction Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/15/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/15/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on January 31, 2014, 08:17:33 PM
Chapter 16!

FanFiction Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/16/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/16/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on March 01, 2014, 08:55:29 AM
Chapter 17!

FanFiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/17/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/17/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached!
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on March 15, 2014, 11:51:07 AM
Chapter 18!

FanFiction Link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/18/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/18/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Aluminator (Kit) on April 11, 2014, 02:39:28 PM
Took me forever to catch up again. Haha. Still loving it, Adam ^_^ I think Nicalor's losing it here... granted, I sympathize entirely.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on April 11, 2014, 07:01:09 PM
Thanks Al! Glad you're still reading it =D

Anyway...

Chapter 19!

FanFiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/19/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/19/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached!
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on May 21, 2014, 05:18:35 PM
Chapter 20!

FanFiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/20/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/20/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on June 04, 2014, 01:09:32 PM
Chapter 21!

FanFiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/21/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/21/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached!
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on June 29, 2014, 04:56:06 PM
Chapter 22!

FanFiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/22/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/22/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on July 11, 2014, 02:41:57 PM
Chapter 23!

FanFiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/23/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/23/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached!
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on July 27, 2014, 04:37:25 PM
Chapter 24!

FanFiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/24/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/24/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached!
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on August 22, 2014, 06:07:33 AM
Chapter 25!

FanFiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/25/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/25/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached!
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: NickDaGriff on August 26, 2014, 12:07:26 PM
Kay, so I finished Twig (I loved how cute and heartbreaking and dramatic and engaging that whole journey was) and just caught up on this one.

Wow, dude.  You're really awesome at writing in general.  The comedy is perfect here, there were points where I honestly couldn't breathe from laughter, and my family thought I was going insane.

Question, does this tie in with Seer at all?  Are your stories canon with each other?  Because it's just really funny seeing a normally quite dignified Toby knock herself out, get completely hammered, and projectile vomit all over a presidential banquet.  XD  Never mind, I went back and looked it up.  You had that scene planned a while in advance, didn't you?  :D  Now I remember reading that line in Seer chapter 12 and thinking, "Wait, why would she ever be getting herself publicly intoxicated?"  It all makes so much horrible sense now.  Poor Toby.  XD
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on August 26, 2014, 01:34:48 PM
Thanks XenoFrobe! I'm glad somebody spotted that. =P

Hope you continue reading!
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: NickDaGriff on August 26, 2014, 02:30:25 PM
Poor girl didn't even get to enjoy the corks.  :( 

As long as you're writing, I'm reading.  :D
Also, Cork-Bajir is fun to say out loud.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on September 19, 2014, 01:38:28 PM
Chapter 26!

FanFiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/26/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/26/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on October 23, 2014, 02:22:20 PM
Chapter 27!

FanFiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/27/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/27/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: NickDaGriff on October 24, 2014, 09:00:51 AM
Quote
But what I noticed most was the central screen of the ensemble.  Ardina's rocky palace, where she sat like a beached whale atop a pile of straw and old soggy boxes, her grotesque body jiggling and wobbling, a ball of blubber like something the universe had never seen.  A body that would put most of America to shame.

Oi!  >:(
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on October 24, 2014, 02:28:25 PM
Quote
But what I noticed most was the central screen of the ensemble.  Ardina's rocky palace, where she sat like a beached whale atop a pile of straw and old soggy boxes, her grotesque body jiggling and wobbling, a ball of blubber like something the universe had never seen.  A body that would put most of America to shame.

Oi!  >:(

:P
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on December 03, 2014, 05:21:52 PM
Chapter 28!

FanFiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/28/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/28/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached!
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: NickDaGriff on December 05, 2014, 01:23:50 PM
The last bit of that chapter absolutely killed me.  XD
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on January 03, 2015, 05:20:23 PM
The Final Chapter!

FanFiction link: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/29/The-Main-Course (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/29/The-Main-Course)

I hope you've enjoyed The Main Course! =)

PDF attached.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: NickDaGriff on January 05, 2015, 10:23:09 PM
Well, that was quite a ride.  XD  Hilarious ending to a hilarious book.  I love it.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on January 06, 2015, 06:40:44 PM
Thanks Xenofrobe! =D
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: SmartGirl333 on March 31, 2015, 06:27:00 PM
Wow! This fic has updated this year and Adam is still active? I haven't read it since the chapter where the female Andalite gets kidnapped.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on April 05, 2015, 02:56:18 PM
Things changed dramatically since then =P The story has a few surprises!
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: SmartGirl333 on April 05, 2015, 10:20:47 PM
Ok! Why aren't you posting on other threads any more?
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on April 06, 2015, 02:40:41 AM
I have two jobs, two YouTube channels to run, an album to record and a fanfic to write. =P I don't get much time for fun anymore!
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: SmartGirl333 on April 07, 2015, 03:31:26 AM
Just so I know, are you or are you not the same Adam from CinnamonBunzuh?
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on April 07, 2015, 11:10:34 AM
No, I don't think so =P
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: SmartGirl333 on April 07, 2015, 07:23:05 PM
Oh, okay.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: NickDaGriff on April 07, 2015, 08:58:34 PM
I'll be honest, that's something I wondered at first, but then I realized that the CinnamonBunzuh Adam has his own collection of fanfics with a pretty different writing style and uses American English.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Tim Bruening on June 19, 2015, 02:20:41 AM
Yes, already writing again. However, uploads won't be daily this time around, as I'll be busier with other things from now on.

This story comes a few years after the end of the Yeerk war, when Andalite tourism on Earth is on the rise. Detective Nicalor-Garroon-Charod and his bumbling sidekick Ayattil are sent to the big blue planet to investigate Andalite crimes, when a criminal mastermind begins to cause havoc in the city of New York...

And here is Chapter 1!

FanFiction link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/1/The-Main-Course (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/1/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.

I expect that morphing will prove very useful in investigating crimes.  Our heroes can morph birds or insects to spy on criminals.
Title: Re: The Main Course
Post by: Adam on June 20, 2015, 06:32:10 PM
Yes, already writing again. However, uploads won't be daily this time around, as I'll be busier with other things from now on.

This story comes a few years after the end of the Yeerk war, when Andalite tourism on Earth is on the rise. Detective Nicalor-Garroon-Charod and his bumbling sidekick Ayattil are sent to the big blue planet to investigate Andalite crimes, when a criminal mastermind begins to cause havoc in the city of New York...

And here is Chapter 1!

FanFiction link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/1/The-Main-Course (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9495277/1/The-Main-Course)

PDF attached.

I expect that morphing will prove very useful in investigating crimes.  Our heroes can morph birds or insects to spy on criminals.

You would think so, but the characters here are a bit special =P