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Posted by: Artisan219
« on: November 19, 2017, 07:37:45 PM »

Posted by: Artisan219
« on: November 12, 2017, 10:45:50 PM »

Well I guess that works too.
Posted by: skribs
« on: November 12, 2017, 10:32:39 PM »

Naw, I'll just assume you don't like me and take a personal offense.
Posted by: Artisan219
« on: November 12, 2017, 07:41:54 PM »

Chapter 24

Hey, if ever I don't respond to a comment (and I really need to check out RAF more often), hit me up on the Animorphs group on Facebook.
Posted by: skribs
« on: October 28, 2017, 11:39:57 PM »

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Posted by: Artisan219
« on: October 22, 2017, 12:12:51 AM »

Posted by: seasquash
« on: October 12, 2017, 08:47:32 PM »

Just stumbled on your story while trying to find my own fan fiction I posted, and I gotta say, I am HOOKED. Keep going please! I am interested on how it's all going to tie it. You're very good :)
Posted by: skribs
« on: October 05, 2017, 04:36:52 PM »

I'll try and let you know, but it happens a lot.  Too bad if you tried searching for quotation marks it would just assume you were specifying search parameters...

My Dad talks that way all the time (I do a bit, too), where we'll talk about things without providing any frame of reference to the audience.  So it's something I notice, because I'm trying to pay attention to it myself, and I love calling my Dad out when he does it.
Posted by: Artisan219
« on: October 04, 2017, 11:45:24 PM »

Trying to work on the multiple narrator thing. I get it. For the reader, it can be a bit confusing. For me, the author, it's he said, she said, constantly over and over, so it gets a bit tedious identifying the speaker and it's an easy thing for me to drop. Let me know specific areas and I can fix it.

Anyway, thanks for the feedback, sorry it took me so long.

Chapter 22
Posted by: skribs
« on: September 21, 2017, 06:23:25 PM »

Love it so far (around Chapter 20).  I love the twists that you've thrown in, and I'm wondering if certain characters will survive the first book.  Characters that didn't survive the first book in the original, but are still alive at this point.  One criticism I have is that sometimes there's quotes with no name attached, and it's not always easy (for me, anyway) to tell by context who is talking.
Posted by: Artisan219
« on: September 09, 2017, 10:36:30 PM »

Chapter 21

Seriously, does no one comment on this forum? Has anyone posted on AO3 that hasn't posted here?
Posted by: Artisan219
« on: August 17, 2017, 10:33:16 PM »

So now I'm up to just shy of 800 hits and still no comments...

Oh well, here's Chapter 20...
Posted by: Artisan219
« on: August 03, 2017, 09:55:25 AM »

So I'm up to over 500 views and only a handful of comments...

Posted by: Artisan219
« on: August 03, 2017, 09:54:37 AM »

I didn't get Chapter 19 posted till about 2:30AM, EST so I decided to wait till morning to post the link. I'm probably just going to either slide into a Thursday-Sunday schedule for awhile, and that itself may become a Friday-Monday goal by the end of the book, but I'm going to keep aiming for two chapters per week.

Ahh, the joys of killing all my free time.

Chapter Twenty is likely going to be a little late because I want to revisit my outline. I planned this as a roughly thirty-chapter novel, so I want to make sure I'm on point for the last round of chapters.
Posted by: Artisan219
« on: July 30, 2017, 06:56:06 PM »

I had some minor writer's block with Chapter 18 and ended up taking the kids to a minor league baseball game the other night, so I'm a bit behind. Still aiming to have the next chapter on Wednesday.